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Just a Pinch of Magic

by Jenga_Jane
Berries and Cherries were meant for each other

Berry Punch may be the town alcoholic, but it hasn't always been that way. Though she has always seen herself as vulnerable and undesireable, she was once a young mare full of hopes and dreams just like anypony else. This story hilights one of the most difficult and most wonderful periods of her life: the birth of her daughter, as well as her love for the brown stallion who made her life worth living.

But Cherry Cola has some secrets of his own. Will they get in the way of his relationship with the one he is certain is his soulmate, or is Berry truly the pony he trusts she is, ready to forgive and forget and make a life together work out.

I tried to write an adventure story, an exciting slice of life story, and a fun story but of course the first fanfic I feel confident enough in to post is a sappy, cheesy, love story that may not even rival Twilight. And yes, the cover image is original which is why it's so bad. Honestly, I want as much feedback on this as possible - be mean, I can take it. I'd really like to improve.

Everyone
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Slice of Life
 
OOB

8742 words: Estimated 44 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Berries over Cherries 2012-06-28 14:36:26 UTC
    2222
  2. Courageous 2012-05-19 13:18:01 UTC
    2716
  3. PiƱa Colada 2012-06-06 15:40:55 UTC
    1705
  4. Unicorn 2012-06-29 09:33:02 UTC
    2099