(cant have more then one author's note for some reason so pretend this is the first one: I couldn't find a Raditz cut scene where it was just Piccolo killed goku by mistake, so ignore the other parts after 0:33 please.)

[Saiyan Saga: Part 1:A Hulk of a Raditz]

The mane 6, spike and trunks walk to the time vault, it was a white building with a dome on top in a place called the time nest , once inside trunks went to a chest that was on a raised level from the floor and took some kind of scroll out that seemed to be burning with dark energy , he turned to the mane 6 and walked toward them. "This... Is the scroll of Eternity... All of time... all of history. Everything... its all listed in here. but.." he said with a more angary look on his face then shaked his head for a split second. "here... just take a look at this." he said opening the scroll.

The mane 6 and spike all gasped. fluttershy was holding her hands to her mouth in shock shaking. "as you can see... if history... is in any way alterated or distorted... it could change the world as we know it." he said. trunks then turns to the mane 6. "we have no choice. we have to stop it..." he said as he handed the scroll to the mane 6.

"we cant let history change. Right now. Goku is in trouble and he needs help. please!" he said. twilight looked at the scroll then at him. We will do our best" she said. the mane 6 and spike hold hands as twilight holds up the scroll to her chest. then theres a flash of light.

-&&& Age:761: Raditz VS goku and piccolo &&&-

Goku is sent into the ground from Raditz's latest attack. then he jumps back up charging at raditz. "this is your last chance..." Raditz said. but goku didn't listen and piccolo starts charging at raditz too. they start punching him rapidly but raditz blocks them all.

"come on, join your family, kakarot." he said disappearing then reappering behind goku and piccolo hits them both sending them flying then fires a ki blast at goku, couseing him to hit the ground."Gugyu!" goku gasped.

Raditz then stomps on goku's chest with one foot then holding it there. "Ugh!" goku gasped. "look." Raditz said. "i'll do you a favor and spare you both." raditz said. "shut up!' goku said stuggling to get free.

"there is not way i'd ever join you!" goku said. "hmm, then playtime is over." Raditz said. then Raditz's scouter starts beeping, he turns to the crater. "what?!" he says in surprise. all of a sudden gohan(Kid) jumps high up out of the crater breaking the pod he was in. then font flipping on to the ground out side the crater. "Leave my daddy... ALONE!!!" he yells a blue fire like Arora appers around him. he then jumps at raditz while flying at amazing speed.

but as gohan is about to hit him, his eyes glow red while a dark Arora appers around him. he then dodges gohan's attack causeing gohan to hit the ground. Raditz then turns to gohan and charges a ki blast at him. "Yout brat!" he yells. "S-Stop!" goku yells. to late. Raditz fires a ki blast at gohan.

when the kit blast hits it explodes. when the dust clears gohan is nowhere to be seen. just a small crater. Raditz's scouter then beeps. he turns around. he sees twilight standing by gohan turning around to stare at him. "What?!" he said in shock. then the rest of the mane 6 and spike land by her.

"uh..." piccolo grunts. "some people you know goku?" he asks. "N-no.." goku says getting up. "but... heh... iam pretty sure we can trust them." then they all charge at raditz.

"no matter how many trash there still is, its still trash!" raditz said blocking a side kick from spike. "hey, can I get your help?" goku asks the mane 6 and spike. "Sure.. we're here to help anyway" twilight says while dodging a ki blast from raditz. "hmp... just don't be a drag..." piccolo said while punching Raditz multi-times while rarity and pinkie were Distracting Raditz. "don't worry, we wont be a drag" Rainbow said while trying to kick Raditz in the chest but he grabed it and throw her.

"can you hear me?" trunks said over the Radio. "yes, we can hear you trunks" Spike whispered back so Raditz, goku and piccolo didn't hear him. "ok, good... now... I'll be backing you up from the time nest" trunks said. "listen... this Raditz... he is stronger and Crueler then his Historical form... please, I need you defeat Raditz so goku and the others can finish him!" trunks said. "Sure thing partner" AJ replied while firing ki blast at Raditz.

Rainbow kicks Raditz in the back sending him flying into the ground, he then flys back and side kicks RD In the face sending her flying. pinkie pie then fires a ki beam at him but he dodges and punchs pinkie multi-times. "wolf-fang-fist!" Rarity shouts as she hits Raditz in his back, he then turns around he kicks her in the Stomach hard. Rarity gasps then pants holding her Stomach trying to catch her breath. before she can though raditz eblows her in the back sending her into the ground.

"RARITY!!!" spike yells. spike then punchs Raditz rapidly In the face while goku rapidly punchs raditz in the back. piccolo and fluttershy fire ki blast at him. Rd gets up and charges at Raditz and side kicks him into the ground. "EOUGH!!!!!" Raditz yells. his eyes glow red again and the dark arora appears around him again. he starts growing bigger until he is 3 times the size of goku. they all gasp at this. "IT BUUURRRNNNNSSS!!!!! IT BUUUURRRNSSSS!!!!" Raditz yells in exteme pain because he is unable to hold so much power all at once.

"what in the world?!" trunks says on the radio. "girls!, spike! be careful hes becoming more powerful! watch out!" trunks says in almost panic.

Raditz then grabs spike in one hand and starts sqeezing him. "AAAAGGGHHHHH!!!!!" spike screams in pain. "SPIKE!" twilight yelled. twilight then kicks Raditz in the back but he doesn't seem to be effected, then Raditz now massive tail slams into twilight sending her flying. "guh!" she yells. "masko!" fluttershy yells as she fires a yellow ki beam at raditz. "Gugya!" raditz gasps as he lets go of spike. spike drops to the ground weak, unable to move.

"YOUR GOING TO PAY FOR THAT!!!" yelled raditz but before he can do any thing, pinkie side kicks him in the head then Rd does the same. Raditz then grabs them both and slams their heads together knocking them out. "Kaaaamaaa-" both twilight and goku say at the same time.
"haaaaamaaaaa-" they say at the same time again, "HAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!" they yell together as they both fire a kahmahamaha at Raditz.

"AAAUUGGHGHHHH!!!!" Raditz yells in pain. Raditz falls over onto the gound from the impact and starts sinking back to his normal size. he then manages gets up. he fires a ki blast at twilight but she manages to dodge it. "Curse you!!!" He yells.

he charges at goku and twilight but AJ side kicks him in the back sending him into the ground. but he gets back up and punchs AJ in the face sending her flying into a near by tree knocking her out. "Applejack!" twilight yells. twilight rushs over to see if shes ok. Twilight check AJ's heart beat... its at a normal rate. "phew" twilight sighs in relief. Rarity then fires a ki blast at Raditz but he deflects it.

Flutteshy then side kicks him In the back of the head. Then he turns around fast and grabs her leg, then spin her around, then lets go sending her crashing into a hill. Rarity then charges at raditz but he side kicks he side kicks her in the arm. *CRACK!!!!* Rarity's arm is bend in a odd angle. "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" she screamed in pain. "RARITY!!!" Twilight yells as she dashs to her aid. Rarity faints from the pain. Twilight Quikly picks her up before hits the ground.

Flutteshy flys out of the crater she made in the hill and flys toward raditz. goku and piccolo also fly at raditz. Piccolo, goku and fluttershy all start punching and kicking raditz. while Raditz blocks few of the attacks, he gets hit by most of them. he then sides kicks them all sending them flying. they all get back up panting. twilight starts firing ki blasts at Raditz he blocks most of them but again gets hit by a few while goku sneaks up behind him. goku then grabs Raditz from behind.

While fluttershy and twilight Knew this was sopost to happened, but it still uneved them by the gore they had just seen. they knew he would get revived by the dragon balls any way. fluttershy went to pick up pinkie and RD while twilight went to pick up AJ, Rarity and spike. piccolo now having time to ask who they were. "hey, you." he ask twilight. twilight froze, "who are you?" piccolo asked. twilight knew she was not sopost to tell any one In the past who they were but she was not in a postion to run or lie.

"I am Twilight Sparkle." she said. as she picked up Rarity applejack and spike. "strange name" piccolo said to himself. "I know the names of rarity, spike and applejack sense I heard you and you friend their names when they got hurt." Piccolo said. 'oops' twilight thought to her self. "now whats the names of the other saiyan and the two other things." piccolo said.

"the other saiyan's name is rainbow dash, the pink one's name is pinkie pie while the yellow's name is fluttershy." twilight said Quickly. piccolo sensed her nevouseness. 'hmmm, what is she trying to hide?' piccolo though to himself. "why did you help us?" piccolo asked. "because its our job" twilight said.(our as in her and her friends)

before piccolo could ask any more Questions a big pod looking machine appeared next to them. "what?!" piccolo almost whispered. twilight and futtershy run toward it while carrying their injured friends. twilight puts AJ, Rarity and spike down while she typed in the password for it. piccolo saw the words time patrol on the side of it. 'time patrol? whats that?'

' twilight and fluttershy then entered the pod like machine while carrying their injured friends. before piccolo could say anything the pod disappeared in a flash of light. 'where did they go?!' he thought to him self. 'could they really be time travelers?'

-&&& near by &&&-

3 strange beings are standing on top of a hill talking.

"why did you stop me?! I could of destoried them!" a familiar female voice said. she had a purple star shaped assory with a gold out line around the edge of it, she had a light blue skin and white-blueish hair. she also had a cape.

"because there was no need to waste energy" other familiar voice said. she had the same color of skin and hair as the one with the cape. she also had a red and blue suit. "there are more powerful creatures to corrupt any way and Raditz was the weakest of them, image what some one more stronger like vegta or frieza could do to them."

"I guss your right." said the one with the cape.

"now... lets set up for our next mission" the one with the red and light blue suit said.

the 3rd being was a big muscaler man with a red suit with a white chest plate was standing near them. watching out for any signs of danger.

-&&& in the time pod &&&-

Rainbow dash starts to wake up. she looks around to see that she was in a bedroom. "huh? where am I?" RD said. twilight was standing in the door way just walking in, then turns her head at RD "Finaly your awake, are you alright?" twilight asked. "yeah. I think so at lest." Rainbow said. "ok. good." twilight said smiling.

"what happened anyway?" rainbow asked. "well... you and pinkie got knock out by Raditz." twilight said. "I did?! oh cmon!" rainbow sighs. "more training for me I guss. hey what happened to the others?" rainbow asked "well... Raditz throw Aj into a tree and knocked her out but shes alright. spike just has some broken ribs but he'll heal. Raditz had broken Rarity's arm but iam sure she will be ok once we get her a sensu bean." twilight said.

"grrr, curse that Raditz, I wish I could kick him in the face and rip his arms off!......." Rainbow then covered her mouth shocked by what she just said. twilight was shocked too. they were both slinet for a few long minutes. "did I just say that?" rainbow asked. "yes, I think so." rainbow didn't know why she said that. she usaly was not that violent.

"mayby we should ask our masters once we get back." twilight said. RD nodded.

-&&& back in toki toki world &&&-

the pod appear in a flash of light then lands on the landing pad. pinkie pie had awoken on the way. they were all covered in buises and scratchs from the battle they had fought. their masters were waiting for them. twilight was carrying Rairty while RD was carrying AJ and fluttershy was carrying spike.

krillen, tien and yamcha raced toward their Apprentices. "what Happened to them?!" krillen said. "we had a stuff fight with Raditz. AJ got throw into a tree but all she needs is some rest, spike has a few broken ribs but he'll heal. Rarity has a broken arm but all she needs is a sensu bean if we got one." twilight said.

Tien picks up Applejack and carries her to her bed room, while krillen carries spike to spike's bed room. yamcha picks up Rarity "hey, any one got a sensu bean?" yamcha asks. "I do." trunks said. trunks gives it to yamcha. "thanks man" yamcha says. "your welcome."trunks replied. yamcha then feeds it to Rarity. Rarity Arm then returns to a normal postion. "ok all she needs is rest now." trunks says. yamcha carries Rarity to her room.

Rainbow walks up to Vegta. "Vegta, mind if we train some this after noon?' rainbow asks. "I'd never minded a few hours of training." Vegta said. he had watched RD's battle with trunks and he wasn't to happy but he knew RD would want to train some more after a 'humating' defeat.

Piccolo had watch the battle too and he wasn't realy happy with Pinkie's out come. "pinkie its time fore some extra training" piccolo said some what disappointed with his Apprentice's defeat. "Do we have too?" pinkie whinned "but iam hungery!" pinke whinned again. "NO! you need to train more if you want to atuly win a battle!!! I will not tolerate failure! we're training now!" piccolo yelled at pinkie.

"but iam hungery!" pinkie whinned again. but this time her haired glowed alarming piccolo and the other z fighters. a pink ray shot out from her hair hiting the hecule stature turning it to fudge. the Pinkie's eyes seem to sparkle. the Z fighters and pinkie's friends have shocked/surprised looks on their faces. "oh dear" is all trunks could say before Pinkie went on a turning-stuff-into-candy spree.

"PINKIE PIE!!!!!!" twilight yelled. twilight then grabed pinkie's arm and pulling it back hard. "uncle!! UNCLE!!!" pinkie screamed. "you have to turn everything you turned into candy back first!" twilight said annoyed. pinkie's hair glowed and started turning everything she had turned into candy back to turn normal.

Fluttershy, Rainbow, spike and the Z fighters didn't really know what to say or do for a few secs. twilight then let go of pinkie. piccolo was just face palming. 'I should of let her get some thing to eat first' he thought to him self. twilight's stomach rumbled loudly. she blushed. they all laughed. "I guss we all could us some thing to eat" said goku.

-&&& later that after noon &&&-

The mane 6(Expact rarity and apple jack) and the Z fighters just got done eating. krillin, yamcha, tien, gohan and fluttershy had all wen to bed while pinkie, vegta, rainbow, and piccolo went to the training area to train. goku, trunks and twilight were standing in the hall way out side there rooms.

"that sure was a strange battle, some one is deffintly behind this..." trunks said. "I guss we we will have to find out next time." said goku.
"true... nothing much we can do about it right now..." trunks stated. he yawned. "I guss we should head to bed now." they all nodded and went to bed.

Author's Note

sorry if the fight with raditz seemed fast pace or too sort but that's why I am asking for co-writers to help me write this story, I might go back to this chapter some time and add a bit more. if any of the characters seem to act out of character just tell me! would like some fan art for this as well! mayby a new cover art for this? that woube great if I can get a new cover art for this!