Then You Saw Her: Explicit Scenes

by Diddely Doo

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Derpy Hooves, Sex
Length: 2515

Clop based on the featured story "Then You Saw Her".

Explict parts for the featured fanfic "Then You Saw Her" by Possiblydominator. ( http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12814/Then-You-Saw-Her ). Story used with permission from the author. Story not for kids! A non-necessarily canonical continuation of the main story. Do not read if you do not like clop.

Published 2012-05-16 14:04:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-16 14:04:01 UTC

Chapter 9.5

~Chapter Nine and One Half~

~A Very Special Evening, With A Very Special Somepony~

Ditzy released your hoof as you entered her bedroom, causing you to drunkenly fall forward onto her bed while she turned to close the bedroom door. You lifted your head up from Ditzy’s bed sheets to give yourself a moment to admire her from behind. Her grey rump was softly lit by the moonlight shining in from her bedroom window; and her blonde tail waved seductively to the side, giving you a glimpse of her fleshy pink marehood.

Your heart began to flutter when Ditzy turned around. Her hair was covering half of her face, and the other half was bathed in Luna’s light. Your eyes met for a moment, then Ditzy leapt toward you on the bed, locking her lips with yours.

The child play was over, and Ditzy wasn’t holding back her kiss. She came in tongue first, massaging the inside of your mouth. You responded just as anxiously, inserting your own tongue enthusiastically into her mouth. It felt awkward, Ditzy was usually so tame and predictable, but tonight she was very upfront about what it was she wanted. Ditzy began lowering herself onto you more and more as your tongues continued exploring each others lips and mouths.

I can’t believe this is actually happening. You think to yourself. It was absolute bliss, this beautiful mare whom you’d befriended months ago, was now about to be your lover. A smile began to form across your face at the thought, making it difficult for you to continue making out with Ditzy.

“What’s so funny?” Ditzy asked, interrupting your thoughts.

“Nothing is funny, life is just so perfect right now. I can’t think of any other place I’d rather be than here, right now. With you.”

“Ditto.” Ditzy responded. “Now come here!”

Ditzy lifted you up in her embrace, using her wings to drag you up further on to her bed and laying your head on her pillows. She wanted full control of this night, and you had no problem letting her lead the charge, so long as you got your turn.

The back of your head rested gently on the soft pile of pillows Ditzy had arranged at the head of her bed, and the scent of the pillows filled your nostrils with the smell of freshly baked muffins and... cinnamon? You couldn’t put your hoof on it for sure, but the smell was intoxicating.

Ditzy removed her mouth from your lips, and began a slow trek down your neck and chest. She kissed around your neck and nibbled playfully around your earlobe. She moved her face even further south down your body, kissing your chest every few inches to hint at her destination. Her eyes stared straight into yours the whole way down. Your mouth remained agape the whole way, until she paused just above your now throbbing cock.

“What’s the matter?” You asked, your breathing starting to increase.

“Nothing. It’s just, I’ve never done this before.”

“What do you mean? You have a daughter.” You asked, confused what she could mean.

“Oh, no! I have. It’s just, I’ve never done a blowjob before.”

“Well that’s fine.” You chuckleed. “I’ve never had one before if it makes you feel better. But I don’t want to force you into something you’re uncomfortable with.”

“It’s okay. We’ll just see how this goes, tell me if I should stop.”

You nodded your head yes, and Ditzy began the descent. You watched closely, eyes wide, unsure of what to expect. But as soon as Ditzy’s lips kissed the tip of your penis, all of your senses exploded in ecstasy.

“Whoaaaaaa yeesss!”

Ditzy’s eyes raised in your direction at the sudden outburst, but you could feel a smile form across her lips. She moved her mouth lower down onto the shaft of your member, causing even more feelings of bliss. Nothing has ever compared to this moment in your life. Ditzy’s mouth continued even further down your shaft until her lips were touching the base of your penis. She held her head there for what felt like an eternity, using her tongue to lick up and down your cock while her lips massaged the base. Your whole body was shivering from the feeling, and you could barely hold still beneath Ditzy’s head.

“This. Is amazing. You’re amazing.” You managed through breaths.

Ditzy removed herself from your penis to speak, “Just know that I expect a turn after this.” She said with a wink and a sly smile.

She moved back down toward your penis, keeping eye contact to read your reaction. Which was easy enough since this whole experience was like having your whole body being massaged on the softest cloud created by ponies, leaving you with only one expression: closed eyes, an open mouth, and moans of pleasure.

This time though Ditzy used a different strategy, instead of slowly moving down your shaft she assaulted it with her mouth. She moved her lips straight down to the base of the shaft, and immediately moved back towards the tip. She moved back down again, then back up, down, up, down, up. The rhythm she used reminded you of that song you heard at the club that Vinyl Scratch played all those days ago. The day you shared your first kiss. Ditzy continued her rhythm up and down your cock, using her tongue now to massage the shaft as her mouth descended toward the base, and then up again. Her mouth made a sort of sploshing noise when she made her way down, and a sucking sound when she came back up. You penis throbbed between her moist lips. The feeling was beyond anything you’d ever known. Ditzy proceeded to move her hoof towards the bottom of your cock, and she began caressing your balls while continuing her rapid pace up and down your shaft with her mouth. The feeling was too much, you began to feel the edge coming.

“Ditzy, I...” You managed. But before you could finish your sentence, your senses gave in to the feeling and your body was hit with a wave of pleasure in the purest form. Your back arched sharply upward, and your wings folded out, spreading across the sheets of the bed. Your cock throbbed as semen shot out through the tip and into Ditzy’s mouth.

Ditzy froze mid shaft as you ejaculated into her mouth. When you finished she lifted her mouth off of your penis and smiled at you, displaying a mouthful of cum. Before you could manage words she closed her mouth and swallowed.

“Mmm! So tasty!” She said with a smile on her face.

“Oh sweet Celestia.” You sighed. “That was amazing Ditzy. But I think it’s your turn now.”

Ditzy’s smile grew even wider across her face as you switched positions. Ditzy rested her head on her pillows, and found a comfortable place for herself to lie on her back.

Ditzy’s marehood already looked ready for the taking before you even started. Her pink lips were covered in her juices, and were already beginning to open on their own. You moved your arms underneath Ditzy’s rear legs to prop her vagina up closer to your mouth. From here you could feel the heat emanating off of her private area, and it drew you in further toward her pink slits.

Just before your lips made contact you pulled away playfully, “You should know, I’ve never done this before.” You say with a grin on your face. “Just letting you know.”

Ditzy looked at you angrily, but friendly, in a way that simply said ‘That’s great, just get to it!’

You laughed quietly to yourself as you dove face first into Ditzy’s pussy. Her lips were already well lubricated, which allowed you to move your tongue and lips freely up and down her slits and send waves of pleasure coursing through her body. Ditzy began to groan silently to herself from atop the bed, giving you encouragement to delve deeper into her moist vagina. You used your tongue to slowly open her slits fully, then inserted your tongue into her pussy. Your whole mouth seemed to take on a mind of its own to pleasure this grey mare, and you let it take control.

You slowly glided your tongue upwards from the bottom of her vagina, until you reached the warm button hidden beneath her hood. You continued to slowly move the hood out of the way and proceeded to gently caress her clitorous with your lips and the tip of your tongue. The reaction from Ditzy was instantaneous, her mouth opened wide and she let out a loud moan. “Ohhh YES!” She yelled. “Eat my muffin!” Your tongue continued working on Ditzy’s most sensitive place, her vagina growing more moist with every stroke.

You snuck a glance up towards Ditzy’s face, and you caught her eyes staring right back at you, her face displaying a feeling of pure unadulterated bliss. Her pupils were wide open, and her breathing was rapidly increasing as you licked her clit more rapidly. You decided to venture further into her pussy, the tip of your nose continuing to grind against her clit as you moved your lips and tongue deeper and deeper into her marehood, licking the inner walls and nibbling on her lips as you went. Ditzy’s ecstasy started to climax, and you could start to feel her hips bucking gently against your arms. You felt a bit nervous underneath the sudden thrusting of Ditzy’s hips, but you had to give her a strong finish. Your tongue worked its way back up toward her most sensitive spot and began massaging it rapidly in a circular motion, while your lips gently sucked at the small pink button. Your saliva mixed with her feminine juices created the perfect lubrication, and the smell was leaving you intoxicated and light headed. Ditzy’s moaning suddenly got much louder and aggressive, and her hips started bucking more violently around you. Her whole body began to twitch, and her wings popped outwards from her sides, making a ‘pomf’ noise as the feathers rustled against each other. Just when your tongue couldn’t take it any more Ditzy suddenly grabbed your mane and held your mouth tightly to her pussy. “NeeuuuAAAHHH!!” Ditzy’s entire body shook as her vagina orgasmed, spraying feminine juices onto your mouth and nose, leaving your face drenched in her scent.

“Oh my sweet muffin!” Ditzy exclaimed, releasing your mane. “That was the most amazing thing I’ve ever felt in my entire life!”

“I’m glad you enjoyed it as much as I did.” You chuckled, your face still drenched from Ditzy’s fluids. You turned your head aside to dry off on her bed sheets, and when you raised your head back up Ditzy caught you by your shoulders and dragged your face towards hers. She perked her lips and brought you in closer and closer until you were nearly connected for the kiss. Your eyes closed in anticipation, but she stopped you just short. You opened your eyes, your face painted with a concerned expression. Ditzy simply smiled and moved her mouth next to your ear and whispered, “Take me.”

The smile on your lips grew wide at Ditzy’s request, and you swiftly pressed your lips to hers in the most passionate kiss you had ever shared. Ditzy wrapped her arms around you, bringing your bodies closer together, and sharing the intense heat that was growing between both of your thighs. You could feel your cock throbbing eagerly against the outside of Ditzy’s pussy, and the pressure from the connection sent your world spinning.

In the middle of your kiss you decided it was time. You and Ditzy became one as your penis penetrated through her tight, moist lips. You grunted as the head of your cock slid through her juicy pussy, gliding along the moist walls of her vagina. Ditzy let out a loud moan in pleasure as your cock plunged deeper into her moist vag.

“Ohhhhhhh yessssssss!” Ditzy shouted as you began to slowly thrust your throbbing member in and out of her hot pussy. Her back legs wrapped around your rear end every time you penetrated deeper and deeper through her succulent pussy lips, and she pulled your face closer to hers to join in another passionate kiss. It was difficult to focus on such a kiss while controlling your hip movement, but the contact of the kiss muffled her cries of pleasure and only turned you on even more, making you increase your pace.

In, out, in, out, don’t forget to breath. Your cock continued penetrating through Ditzy’s ever wettening lips, which created the perfect lubrication for your hard member. The walls of Ditzy’s vagina began to strain against your member as she neared her peak, her moaning growing louder and louder as your cock got harder and faster. The feeling of her walls tightening against your cock brought you ever closer to your climax as well, and your moaning began to match Ditzy’s as the two of you neared your limits.

Ditzy let out one final cry of ecstasy before her vaginal walls constricted your cock mid thrust, sending you over the edge along with her. You’re momentarily paralyzed from the pleasure induced by Ditzy’s hot, wet, pussy trapping your cock inside her as her vaginal walls and lips massage your penis on their own. Your cock throbbed rapidly as your seed ejaculated into her vagina, at the same time the moisture in Ditzy’s pussy became ten times more intense from her own feminine juices releasing at her orgasm. You removed yourself from inside her at the end of the intense experience and rolled next to her on her bed with a sigh of comfort.

“That was wonderful.” Ditzy whispered, turning her body towards you and nestling her face into your chest. “Thank you.”

You raised your arm up to Ditzy’s face and brushed away a strand of her blond hair, revealing her beautiful golden eyes staring lovingly back at you. A smile grew across your face as you leaned in to give her a small kiss on the tip of her nose. “It was meant to be.” You whispered back. “You and I here together, I can’t think of a better moment in my life than this time right here, with you.”

Ditzy nestled her muzzle deeper into your chest, sighing in comfort. The scent of her shampoo wafted into your nostrils, the smell of warm freshly baked muffins. Ditzy fell asleep in your arms, sighing deeply into your chest as she drifted away into her own dreams.

This truly was the greatest moment in your life. Being here, with this beautiful mare asleep in your arms, it was perfect. Your mind slowly began to drift away as sleep began to overtake you, and you accepted its presence gratefully. Ditzy would be with you all night, and she would be there in the morning. And maybe even for years to come after that...