Rarity, Ponyville's greatest dress maker, has been working day and night (literally) to finish her latest creation. With it finally done, she decides to let sleep take her and enters the dream world of her mind

Too bad somepony else has decided to pay her a visit as well...

This is my first story, I am open to criticism but not hate

It is a repost of a story of the same name on pastebin.com by myself
http://pastebin.com/MF0uGH5a