TheTwinsAdventure: The Rainbow Factory Escape

by PegasisterTwinsAdventure

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Tragedy, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad, Original Character, Rainbow Dash
Length: 1999

Flame and her Friend Silverdust are captured in Equestria's most dangerous place, The Rainbow Factory

Flame visits Cloudsdale for the Annual Flying contest. But ends up getting her best unicorn friend and her locked up in Equestria's most dangerous place, The Rainbow Factory.

Published 2015-05-17 21:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-06-15 19:07:20 UTC

The Weather Factory Tour

Author's Note

Please leave a comment for improvement or advice. I really helps! Thanks! -Silverdust
Also this chapter is really short. But enjoy!

The Weather Factory Tour

My hooves touch Cloudsdale's fluffy ground and I turn around to see Silverdust's hot air balloon land on the runway. The sun reflects off her shiny silver mane and blinds a couple of the nearby pegasi, as she bounces onto the cloud. instantly the cloud blends into her white coat. She smiles brightly as she notices me, my red and orange mane and yellow coat stands out on the white land. She quickly trots over to my waiting area,

"This is way more beautiful than you described Flame." She says, as her dark violet eyes scan Cloudsdale.

I laugh, "Well I see it as another cloud. So, do you want to take a tour with some of the pegasi guides?" I ask.

She beams, "Of course, this spell for me to walk on clouds to AGES to learn."

We trot over to a blue and green colt wearing a tour guide badge. "This contest is going to be epic!" I say to Silver as we follow the tour guide through a large crowd.

"Thousands of ponies come here every year." Silverdust says. "Even the four princesses come!" She points to a violet alicorn talking to a pink earth pony.

"And I'M competing in it" I say matter-of-factly. She nudges me in the side.

"Stop being a hot-head Flame." We walk over to the ticket stand to reserve Silver's seat, and head towards our patiently waiting tour guide.

We walk in silence for a few minutes till we reach the Weather Factory. "This is the Weather Factory," Our tour guide explains. "The place we create all the weather for Equestria! It takes training to work here and specific knowledge in different areas for everything to go smoothly." He continues. "Everypony must play their part or everything can collapse." He points at each door and explains what each one is. They move farther into the factory and he points to a Lightning Bolt door. "That's where we store out Lightning Bolts, It is very dangerous. Those bolts can severely injure somepony." He tells us. Silver nod as she scribble down notes. I sigh and look around bored.

I nudge Silver. "He never told us what that door is." I point to a rusty door with a lock on it. Silverdust cocks her head to one side.

"Your right, Hey mister, where does that door lead to?" Silver asks. The guide hesitates, and smiles a little bit.

"I-It's just u-uh where they store the u-um rainbow ingredients. I could tell he was lying.

We reach the exit and he departs with us here. "Have a good day!" I yell. He doesn't reply and only canters back into the Weather Factory. I shrug unconcerned, "Let's get something to eat I'm starving." Silverdust nods in agreement and we trot off to find some muffins.

The tour guide reaches the old rusty door and sighs a breath of relief. The two mares he was showing around Cloudsdale were too curious. I will have to tell Glaze.... The tour guide thinks. A shiver runs down his back as he unlocks the rusty door. He glances around before entering into the dark room.

The Capture

Author's Note

This fanfic does not intercept with the other fanfic Rainbow Factory. It does not help scootaloo, or any pony else "escape". We do not have any relations what so ever with the Rainbow Factory characters. This is only a fanfic for our ponies and maybe Glaze. but it will not crossover into the other rainbow factory. Lets just say this is a year later after scootaloo's er death? maybe? All credit to Rainbow Factory Creator.

The Capture

I could hear the loud voices of waiting ponies while I paced inside the waiting area. A big 12 was taped to my flank over my flaming music note cutiemark. I sighed, Silverdust was supposed to meet me in here 5 minutes before I went out, but where was she? I stared into the mirror at my ruffled hair and turned to the sound of a door opening. "Finally I was starting to-" I turned, It was not Silverdust waiting by the door, it was the announcer.

"Come on twelve we haven't much time." She said impatiently.

"But-" It was no use arguing I trotted over to the door and opened it to the hallway leading towards the the arena.

I trotted slowly to the entrance only to get intercepted by a Weather Factory Guard. "Are you Silverdust's friend?" His voice was deep and stern.

"Y-yes, Why? Is Silverdust alright?" I ask.

He chuckled, "Quiet fine." He signals two other pegasi in white coats and hats. The one on the left kicks out his right leg and kicks me in my side.

I yell, "Hey!" As one of the other pegasi strikes a blow to my head and I buck out my back legs into the third one's face. But I was outnumbered and was soon tackled by the white coated pegasi.

The guard smiles and quietly says, "Pity, I thought this was going to be a real fight." The right pegasi hits me square in the head and the world goes black.

I struggle to open my eyes as I feel something prod my side. I roll over onto my back and slowly rise into a sitting position, I rub my head and groan, it hurt really bad. I open my eyes completely and try to focus on the blob of white in front of me, "Flame? Are you okay? Flame!" Silver's voice echoed in my head and I moan softly in response, and I slowly focused on her.

"Wha-? w-wher am I?" I softly ask, still too tired to say it louder.

"I have no clue." She helps me stand. I slowly walk over to the bars of the small cage. Around us was all pitch black, it was like they were in their own little world.

Silverdust trots up to the lock on the cellar door, "Flame, I've seen this symbol before." She says to me. I slowly approach her and gaze at the lock in her hoof. It was etched into the lock, a thunder cloud with three columns above it, with wings. I blink and look at Silver. She looks up with her dark violet eyes, "I saw this twice before. This was in the Rainbow mixing room." She slowly explains. "But that's not all, this was on the rusty door during the tour." I gasp. I remember seeing it, it was faint but surely it was there. I stagger backwards.

Silverdust's eye were swimming with worry, "Flame... We are in the Rainbow Factory."

The Following of Death

Author's Note

Please leave any advice or suggestive comments below to help me with future chapters! thanks!

The Following of Death

The silence was horrid, I could almost hear Silverdust's brain working. "Well, what if we-"

"Won't work." I say for the hundredth time, "You tried everything and I'm starting to feel creeped out by this silence." It was true, they have been in the gloomy rustic cellar for hours now and no signs of anyone else in here.

"I just don't understand why they locked us up, I mean we didn't do anything wrong did we?" Silverdust looks at me.

"I guess not..." I sigh. I was already starting to get hungry again despite the carrot dog I had before we were captured. Silverdust sat on her haunches and sighed. I know how she felt, not knowing what was going to happen next or worse, to them was the worst feeling in Equestria.

I start pacing so I had something to do than just sit and wait around. I twitch my ear as Silverdust stands, her cutie mark never made sense to me, It was a shiny red heart with earphones over it and music notes playing. It confused me as much as a dictionary did, all Silver did was read and well... write.

She was a part time scientist that worked with her father, GoldenCarat and her mother, EmeraldShard. But her cutiemark doesn't relate to any scientist things at ALL. She never told me what it meant, but I have a strong feeling she likes music as much as I do.

On the other hand, I was all music and dares. I would sing for parties and meetings for my mother and father, Cloudnote and Bluefire. One good look at them and you would know I was their daughter. I look mostly like my mother Cloudnote with her red mane and orange coat, but I still have some of my father there too. I have his blue eyes and yellow coat, and most definitely have his daring personality in me.

As I was thinking about my life, Silverdust prods her hoof into my wing. "Ouch!." I yell. Only to get shushed by her hoof.

"Somepony is coming!" She whispers to me. I look out into the darkness and strain my ears to hear what was coming. I hear the sound of hoof on stone as the pony comes closer. Silver and me back into the farthest corner away form the cellar door as the stranger gets closer. I still could not make out the pony in the darkness, but as soon as the pony steps into the one light, I make a growling noise in the back of my throat and step in front of Silver to protect her.

The pony was a mare with a cream yellow coat and striped, green and yellow mane. She was wearing a white lab coat like the ponies who attacked me. I hold up my chin menacingly, She only laughs. "You do not scare me, you know." She comes up to the bars. I just stare and say nothing. "But... you have a reason to fear me." The mare holds up a remote control looking panel and presses a button on the left.

The cellar started to descend downwards, I try to look over the side but the platform holding us, but it was to big. From what I hear there was a more prisoners down here. The musty scent of death hung in the air like a rat to a hawk, there seemed to be a fear down here stronger than anything anyponys felt before. It was a fear of them.

The ponies who hid in the shadows and watched from the eye of death himself, the slaves of the one in power who even they are afraid of. My wings itch from the looks of the hidden ponies as we descend downwards. When we reach the bottom, me and Silver are shoved into a cell with a number on the side of it. The long rows of cells went left to right and stopped when the light ended. Of course the second no one else was in sight Silverdust hoped up and started investigating the area. I sigh and sit on my haunches in defeat. "Forget it Silver, there's no way out." I look at my hooves as she turns.

"Come see this Flame." She says quietly. I don't budge a bit, she bites her lip in frustration. "Flame FireNote get over here now!" Silver says sternly. I look up, Silver never uses my whole name. I slowly get up and trot over to her. "The cell numbers are strange."

"What about them?" I say. She hesitates, slowly thinking what to say.

"They are odd numbered, only. She was right, no even numbered cell. "I believe its bad luck or just a coincidence, we are in cell 13." I give her a confused look. "And my hotel room number it was number 13. And the ticket to the contest said my seat number was number 13...." She looks at me. "We were being followed. They knew we were here."