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Insanity
Chapter 1
Twilight sat in her new castle reading one of her new books she borrowed from the Castle Of The Two Sisters. Spike soon walked into the room.
"Hay Twi i got a new letter from Celestia."
"What's it say spike?"
Spike cleared his throat and began reading.
"My faithful student Twilight, I need one final exam done for you to finish your studies with me. Come to my castle tomorrow afternoon for your test."
"EEEEEEKKKK!!!" Twilight screamed. "One last test! I hope its a report paper!!"
"Well Celestia didn't leave any instructions, so I wouldn't get your hopes up."
"Well I can hope, cant I? Anyway i have needed to get tome supplies anyway."
"Ya ok whatever."
"Now shut up and go clean something. I need to go to the store and then study."
…
Twilight slowly walked out of the castle with maybe the saddest face I've ever seen on her face.
"Holy Celestia what happened twilight"
"I failed. Failure. F. Failure, its all I am, I'm a failure."
Spike couldn't believe his ears!
"I-Is there anything anypony can do?"
"I already asked. Its useless. She did say there was 1 thing I could do, it has to be me though, but she would not say what. No mater what I do I vow I will bring that F up to an A. I swear on my sanity."
…
Ponies screamed and ran away. They scattered in all directions running from twilight.
"SOMEPONY HELP ME!!!" Twilight yelled "I need to find the answer. I need it NOW!!!! Please some pony help me find it!" She ran and tackled a dark blue stallion with a black spiky mane. She shook him, and shook him, screaming for the answer! She stopped shaking him only to slowly pull a knife she'd been hiding in her mane she began slowly carving A's into his chest.
"I need an A how about you give me one, huh. No? Well then I will make you!"
She stabbed the knife into the stallions chest and began to cut out the A she had carved into him. He began writhing in fear and pain screaming for it all to stop! And it all suddenly stoped. He lie there dead.
…
"Aaaaaaahhhh!!!!!" Twilight awoke with a start.
"What? How? It was all a dream. Oh thank Luna. Spike ran over to Twilight.
"What's wrong Twi? Are you ok?"
"Ya just a nightmare." Said twilight.
"Ok well go back to sleep its to early."
Spike walked back to his bed and hoped in and cuddled up with his rarity plushy. Twilight looked over to her clock. It read 6:38.
"Its not early." Twilight whispered because spike had already started snoring. Twilight quietly trotted downstairs and into the kitchen.
"Hmmmmm. What do we have here?"
There was a knock at the door. Twilight trotted over to get the door and opened it.
"Muffins!"
Yelled a very happy derpy.
"Oh hi derpy do you want any muffins?"
"Yes please."
Twilight gestured for derpy to come inside, and together they trotted over to the kitchen, opened up the fridge, and grabbed the ingredients. Twilight and derpy started making muffins.
When Twi and derpy put the muffins into the oven Twilight started to really dizzy. She grabbed the counter and soon she wasn't in the kitchen. Or at least not her kitchen.
There was a green stallion with a black long mane.
"Please n-no. Don't do it! Please! I'll do anything you want!" He begged
"No you can't. The only thing you could do is get me that A. Now can you do that? No. I didn't think so."
She shoved the tied up stallion into the extremely hot oven. He screamed the second his skin touched the metal bars inside the oven. She closed the oven door on him. She could hear his screams vividly through the oven. She watched him be baked alive. His skin started to burn up slowly causing his bones and muscles to be exposed in a gory firework show when his muscles started writhing sending a shower of blood into the insides of the oven. Twilight watched in amusement.
Twilight's vision ended. The muffins were done.
"What was that? Your eyes turned black and you started cowering, what was it?"
"A vision. It was a vision. I had one recently, they are horrifying. it is A-"
Twilight stopped in the middle her sentence.
"Is a what?" asked Derpy.
"Oh nothing just forget it. now how about those muffins?"
"Yay! I love muffins!"
Twilight bent down and took a bite out of one as did Derpy.
"MMMMMMMMMMM." Said Derpy.
"That was delicious."
"I agree."
Twilight and Derpy sat there, eat there muffins and enjoyed them very much.
Twilight thought for just a second when