Dominant Species: Tales from the Shop Keeper

Author: Annonymouse
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WARNING: This fiction contains sexual content of varying types, differing from chapter too chapter. Make sure you have some thing to clean up the mess handy.
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(Art by AnnonyMouse. Sweet Dreams (oc) AnnonyMouse)
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Dominant Species. Tales From the Shop Keeper
05
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It's been a while since you had been to Trip Elex's XXX shop, and seeing you happen to be in the area (and out of his special enchanted lube), you stop in.

“Greetings.” A cute, very feminine voice calls out.

Stepping into view is a young mare, an alabaster coat, soft pink mane and oddly, a pair of tails. Her eyes are a bright pink and catch the lights of the shop, glimmering like pools of liquid gems.

“Father is out today. I'm Sweet Dreams. How might I help you?” She smiles such a pretty smile. “Or are you here for a story?”

A raised eye from you catches her attention.

“Well let me see... I'm not quite the story teller as my father, but I so know something about somepony, how something tragic became something wonderful. Let me tell you about the origins of a sweet little Muffin.”

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Her name, Bright Eyes. A soft gray coated Pegasus with blond mane, tail, and somewhat odd yellow eyes.

Bright Eyes was out on her morning paper route, hoping one day to became a true mail mare, and this was good experience.

She was open, friendly, and a little airheaded at times, but she wasn't stupid.

As the young mare came to the final house on her delivery route, she noticed the front door was open, and a heavenly smell was coming from inside.

“Is that honey oatmeal muffins?” She grinned and approached the house. From inside, she could hear a set of hooves on the wood floor moving around. She peeked in and called out. “Hello? Is anypony there? Newspaper deliver.”

“Oh, hello.” A deep voice called from within. “Come on in and put the paper on the coffee table.” The voice seemed to come from the kitchen.

Bright Eyes walked in and pulled out the last paper and set it down. As she lifted her head, she came face too face with a large, darker gray Unicorn stallion. His horn was glowing and he was levitating a plate filled with warm muffins, and a bowl of fresh cream butter.

“Oh, hello.” She beamed a bright smile, not startled in the slightest. “I brought you your muffin. Oops, I mean news paper.”

The stallion gave a low chuckle. “Would you like one of my special muffins?”

The mare's eyes lit up and her tongue hung from her open mouth. “Really? They smell and look so yummy. I haven't even had breakfast yet.”

The stallion chuckled again and set out the plate and bowl, then set out a smaller plate and a butter knife. “Feel free to have as many as you like.”

Bright Eyes' eyes lit up and she sat down. She took a muffin and put some of the fresh butter on top, then proceeded to take a big bite. “This is so yummy!” She said after swallowing. She finished off the muffin with a second bite. “May I have another?”

“Eat as much as you like. Making muffins is my special talent.” He pushed the plate forward.

Bright Eyes buttered up another and ate it, a little slower this time. Before she knew it, she had eaten all six that were on the plate. “Oh my, I'm sorry. I ate all your muffins.”

The stallion smiled. “That's alright. Say, would you like to try one of my super secret special muffins?” There was an odd grin on his face, but Bright Eyes failed to notice, her eyesight being less than stellar.

“A super secret special muffin?” Her derped eyes went wide.

“Of course. Let me just go make it really quick. I know it will make you feel wonderful.”

Bright Eyes sat on one of the comfy sofa and waited as this kind stallion headed back into the kitchen. She looked around the living room and noticed that it was quite sparse. Other than the table, the sofa, and a single empty stand, the room was empty. No pictures or paintings, decorations or even plants.

“Maybe he just moved in.” Bright Eyes wondered.

In short time, the stallion returned with a golden brown muffin that smelled strange, but wonderful. “Here you go. Eat up.”

The mare smiled and put some butter on the still hot muffin, watching it melt. She then took a nibble and her eyes went wide. “Oh my. This is... this is the best muffin I've... ever... Why am I feeling sleepy?”

“You must have eaten too much. Maybe you should take a nap.” His horn glowed and the front door closed.

Bright Eyes barely noticed the grin crossing his face as he turned to face her, then everything went dark.
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Strange feelings caused her to somewhat wake up. Bright Eyes felt a moan escape her lips as a wonderful feeling spread through her body, starting from between her legs. She managed to open one of her eyes a crack and realized she was laying on her back, her legs spread wide.

She moaned again and spotted the Unicorn had his face between her hind legs, in a place her mom and dad said not to let anypony touch her. She tried to move, to say something, but she couldn't. She was still so sleepy and her body just refused to move.

“Oh, awake are we?” He looked up, smirking. He licked his lips, then brought his mouth back between her legs.

Bright Eyes felt wave after wave of pleasure wash through her being, right too the tips of her wings. She knew she shouldn't be letting him do this. Mom and Dad said it was bad, but she could barely keep her eye open.

She let out a gasp as she felt the Unicorn's magic spread her vagina wide, and his tongue drove in deeper.

“Oh my.” He smirked, pulling back a moment. “A pure young mare.” His smirk became a not so kind grin. “I knew that by having the paper delivered to this abandoned house you would eventually come to deliver. You know, I have been watching you for quite some time.” He licked her again, pressing his tongue against the symbol of her purity.

“W-why?” Bright Eyes managed to actually say something.

“You want to know why I am doing this?” He chuckled darkly. “Simple. I have a thing for pretty young mares, especially pure ones.” He started massaging her pussy with his magic, causing her to arch her back. “Now, I can't have you recovering from my super secret special muffin.” He levitated over a small bottle. “This is another special ingredient I use in another special muffin. It will make you unable to move, but you will be able to feel everything.” He opened the stopper and forced the contents of the bottle into her mouth. As soon as the fluid hit the back of her mouth, she instinctively swallowed.

Her belly suddenly felt warm and her mind dizzy. She became more aware of the feelings of this stallion's touching and magic. She could only breath heavy, moan and gasp as his magic and tongue went back to work.

She let out a cute cry as her body seemed to surge with electricity, and she felt a spurt of something warm and wet come out of her private area.

“Oh my, just as sweet as I had hoped.” The Stallion grinned and rose too his hooves. “Now that I've gotten you all ready, I think it's time to have some real fun.” He stepped over top of Bright Eyes and brought his lips too hers. His tongue easily invaded her mouth and explored it.

The feelings were so strange to Bright Eyes, but they did not feel bad. Had Mom and Dad been wrong about letting anypony touch her down there? It didn't feel bad at all. It had felt wonderful. This kissing felt strange, but not a bad strange.

Maybe this pony was just being really extra nice and really thanking her for his newspaper, right?

She then felt something hot press against her pussy lips. Her eyes went wide as it pressed harder, starting to slide inside her, stretching her, then stopping as it felt some resistance.

“This part might hurt a little my sweet little Bright Eyes. But I promise the pain will go away and it will begin feeling really good.” With that, the stallion thrust in, tearing through her purity.

Bright Eyes could only shut her eyes tightly and grit her teeth at the sudden pain. It was only a little pain though, and the feeling of that long, hot thing going deep into her, filling and stretching her insides, felt amazing.

The pain increased a little as he started moving, but it was easily drowned out by another really good feeling.

In and out, the stallion was gentle. He grit his own teeth with each push in. “You are so tight. So warm and wet. You feel so wonderful.” He kissed her lips gently for a moment then resumed his motions.

Whatever he was doing, Bright Eyes couldn't stop him. It felt just so good, so intense. The feeling of pain was completely washed away by all the good feelings. Her breathing had increased to match his every thrust.

Her gasps and moans started to increase as he moved faster, and faster. The feelings were causing her to black out, but she couldn't stop feeling them.

Like another bolt of lightening, Bright Eyes cried out as she came for a second time. Her muscles clamping about the object inside her.

He groaned and pushed in deeper than before, thrusting quickly now. He felt his own orgasm and groaned.

Bright Eyes felt it, a hot liquid fire filling her belly. So much of it that she felt it burst out of her and splatter all over the sofa. She actually screamed in pleasure as she was filled.

The stallion finally felt his member soften and Bright Eyes relax. He pulled out, his cock spraying more cum up the mare's belly, chest and all over her face.

“Ooh Luna... That was the best.” He smirked and looked down. Bright Eyes had passed out completely. His smirk widened. “Oh, I'm not done with you my sweet little Bright Eyes. I'm really going to make a muffin in your oven.”

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Sweet Dreams giggled. “It's just a story. A friend of my father's told him that story once, but assured him that it wasn't real. Besides, there's no derpy eyes Pegasus named Bright Eyes in Ponyville, right?”

You wince a little at the derpy eye comment. You proceed to tell this young mare that there is indeed a gray Pegasus with odd eyes in Ponyville. A mare with a little Unicorn filly she affectionately refers too as 'Muffin'.

Sweet Dreams giggles. “Maybe my father's friend just used her as an example for the story. Besides, his special talent is like Father's, making magical pleasure toys.”

You sigh, then decide, perhaps, you should look around the store and make your purchase.

Could you have just learned the story behind how Ponyville's mailmare became a mother? Certain, that can't be true, can it?

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Author's Note:

This was written in response too a comment made by Derpy Hooves in chapter 7 of Dominant Species. "I've never done anything like this before, and was mostly sleeping when I had it done to me.”