So It Was Before, Now It Is No More

by Unstoppable
Charlie finds himself dragged into a conflict by a mysterious entity and only by doing exactly what that entity says will he be able to live in peace wherever he is.

This story is one about a person named Charlie that will find himself in a completely unexpected place. He will have to do whatever a newly found mysterious entity tells him to do or face the consequences. What are the consequences you may ask? We don't know yet. Who is this mysterious entity? Again, we don't know yet. Who is Charlie exactly? If you want the answer to these questions and more, read onward.


This is my first story and, at the moment a test story, to see where things will lead. However, I want you to critique me as hard as you can. Just because I'm new to this does not excuse me from making good stories. Be as strong as you want to be, but intellectual at the same time.

This story is one that I'll be making up as I go along. If this story works out, I hope to use it to build on one universal world. Should I begin work on the major project I will be using this story as a "boarder" for how the universe will be shaped.

(NOTICE: need to spend some time thinking about where this story is going. While that is going on, I'm going to try firing off some quick ones to get a feel for the fimfiction deal).

Everyone
On Hiatus
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
Mystery
Slice of Life
Human
 
PPOPM

2598 words: Estimated 13 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. To Start At Home And Go Afar 2015-05-22 07:24:13 UTC
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