Cloud and Allissandra's check up

by Charming Melody

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad, Romance, Original Character
Length: 4095

Cloud has to go for her yearly check up so she can go to school.

Cloud goes for her yearly check up to make sure she is healthy enough to go to school. When she gets there, she notices the school brat is there.

Published 2015-05-23 00:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-06-07 21:01:51 UTC

Check up part one

The noise of fluttering wings and crashing roared down the sidewalk that was on the main thoroughfare through this wonderfully charming community. The source of the noise was a pretty filly who when seen from a distance could be mistaken for a tomcolt. She kept hitting things as she flew down the sidewalk. Bandages covered her body, covering the wounds from her many bumps and spills. Her hair was a mop. Sort of old fashioned, but still very much, like what a colt would have.

Her face was still very fillyish despite how much of a tomcolt she was. She hated that everyone called her cute. She considered herself more of a jock and was always working on her flying, not that it did much for her.

Soon she arrived at one of the busiest intersections. Among all of the buildings was her doctor’s office. The office of Dr. Bunder. It was her busiest time of the year. School checkup time. She always hated this every year though he still had to go anyways. She tried to come to a halt in front of the door and instead slammed into it.

She tried to act all casual as she got up and opened the door. Screams and whines assaulted her ears as she entered. “I will have to spend hours here, great,” she whined in a sarcastic tone. She handed the paperwork she had over to the front desk attendant.

“Have a seat and I’ll call you when we’re ready for you.”

“Yeah right,” she says very sarcastically.

“Come on. It’s two to a room today, so things should go pretty fast.”

“With colts?”

“Nah, it’s only fillies today.”

“Oh,” she said deadpan

She moved to a seat in the corner and before sitting down realized who would be sitting next to her. Allissandra was such a huge brat. It wasn’t that she wasn’t beautiful, it is just she never wanted to see her again. She was beautiful, but also blind.

“Not a day went by that she wasn’t called a lez by Allissandra. Worst of all she sang things like ♪ Cloud is gay; makes out in the hay.♪ As much as Cloud went off on her, it did nothing to really stop her.

Cloud avoided looking at her, but heard that annoying voice loud as always. “Huge lez in the room.”

“I am not a lez you huge diva,” Cloud replied.

She sat there, doing her best not to be too vocal with Allissandra.

Allissandra couldn’t help herself though. “Lesbo lesbo such a lesbo.”

“How would you like me to cram parts of me up your nose? I am not gay.”

“Clumsy lesbo too.”

“If you are as annoying as last year, my hoof will beat your ass into next week and the school would thank me.”

“Probably tomcolish as usual.” She touched Cloud as usual “Muscly like a colt too.”

“Shut up shut up shut up.” She snapped as she screamed.

“Can’t stop me.”

Ignoring her was impossible.

“How’d your fur get so soft,” Allissandra said sincerely.

“Brushing it duh,” Cloud said annoyed.

Allissandra kept stroking her legs. “Pretty smooth legs for a tomcolt. Didn’t think you would care that much.”

Cloud did love her legs. She stared at her enemy; no, more studied her enemy and her features.

Soon Cloud realized that the caressing was very sensuous and Allissandra wasn’t hurling insults. Her face was more of amazement. “You are probably ticklish huh,” Allissandra said as she started trying to tickle Cloud.

Cloud felt an odd sensation as she jumped out of her chair with a girly yelp. She blushed red, hoping no one noticed.

Allissandra was pleased with herself. “Ha, made you jump.”

“And?” Cloud was a bit angry with Allissandra, but this somehow pleased her. She grabbed for any magazine and ended up with how to build things monthly. This month’s feature, how to build a birdhouse part 7 of 9. The peace she got didn’t last long as her leg was caressed again.

“Can’t you leave me alone?”

“Nope,” she said giggling.

Finally, as she lowered the magazine, she saw a quizzical look from Allissandra. “Do it to me Cloud.”

Cloud caressed her leg slowly, it not being long till Allissandra’s leg involuntarily kicked as she shrieked.

“Shhhhhh” the attendant said.

The feuding and fondling had caused the time to go by quickly and a nurse called out, “Cloud, Allissandra?” She stood there and waited.

Allissandra rose and walked towards the voice, while Cloud grumbled under her breath. “Both from the same school right?”

“Yup,” Allissandra replied.

“You two know each other then?”

“Yes mam,” Allissandra said.

“Not by choice,” Cloud said.

“Well, we’re doubling up today to get through as many fillies as possible, so you will have to be together.

“Great” she groaned sarcastically. “Please kill me now.”

Allissandra loved the misery she caused Cloud. “Lez,” she whispered.

Soon enough they were in the exam room. Luckily for Cloud, there were two tables, which meant she wouldn’t have to use the same table as Allissandra. “I’m nurse joy and I will be assisting with your exams today. How have you fillies been?”

“Fine,” Allissandra said as she walked towards what she thought was an exam table.

‘Okay I guess,” said the shy Cloud. “I see that you are a grade or two older Cloud.” The nurse said reading the charts. “This shouldn’t take long, and at least it is only once a year.

“Isn’t long enough,” Cloud said.

“Hey nurse,” Allissandra said. “Can the doctor check cloud to see if she is a lez?”

“Shut up,” cloud said getting or annoyed.

The nurse just rolled her eyes, having seen this quite often.

Cloud stared at the nurse. “Can’t you give her a shot that makes her disappear?

The nurse giggled. “You two are adorable together.” She finished jotting her notes on the clipboard.

“I am not adorable,” Cloud said.

Allissandra quipped,” Hey cloud, since today is girl’s day and you are obviously a stallion you should come back tomorrow.”

Cloud looked really annoyed,” Can’t you sew her mouth shut or something nurse?” This made Allissandra giggle.

They were directed to exam tables, Allissandra being helped up because of her blindness.
Their tails were held out of the way by a clamp, leaving their privates exposed. Moments later, they both saw the thermometers come out. Cloud shrunk down. She hated this part. “Oh come on,” the nurse said. “This doesn’t hurt at all.” Cloud watched as Allissandra was done first.

The same was done to cloud, the tube tickling her rectum.

“There we are.” The nurse said. “Just relax and I’ll be back shortly.”

Cloud was so embarrassed. Allissandra focused on cloud’s body and the thermometer protruding from her rectum. “You don’t want my mouth sewn shut.”

“Why not?”

“Wouldn’t you like to know?”

“Lie still and leave me alone,” Cloud snapped

“Oh come on. This isn’t so bad. I mean I can’t believe I am in the same room with you but…”

“Do you ever shut up,” Cloud interrupted

“You must like the thermometer; especially considering you’re a lez.

“I am not a lez,” Cloud yelled.

“Sure you are. Gay as those stallions on fifth.”

“I am not. They are into stallions and I am into…… wait….”

♪ You are a lez, a dirty dirty lez ♪ Allissandra sort of song chanted.

Cloud refused to come out of the closet. “You seem to be getting off on this, so who’s the lez?” she quipped.

Bet the thermometer is making you wet huh,” Allissandra said.

“Can it now,” Cloud said in a teasing voice.

“I can hear how turned on you are by your voice,” Allissandra said.

Cloud and Allissandra remained quiet for the next few minutes as they both felt good. The nurse came back in, removed the thermometers, and noted the temperature in their charts. “I need you both to come with me and get weighed.

Allissandra was assisted down from the tables.

“Can’t I put something on to go out there,” Cloud said.

“It will only be a second dear.”

But,” Cloud replied. The nurse was already out the door and didn’t hear cloud.

They had to wait by the scale as a filly on it nervously shuffled. Another one walked up and got on, obviously quite a lot older than them. She had more of a teen’s body

Finally, it was their turn and they could get this over with. Not a moment too soon, it was just the three of them in the hallway as they were weighed.

As they were returned to their room, the nurse spoke. “Dr. Bunder will be with you shortly,” and with that the nurse was gone.

They both sat there for a while in silence before Allissandra spoke. “Why is the lez so nervous?”

“Because I have to be here with you, because every year I hate this.”

“So?”Allissandra replied. “It isn’t something I want to do either.”

“It’s cold.” Allissandra said as she did her best to climb onto Clouds table.

“God sake,” Cloud said as Allissandra started to snuggle into her. “But… The doctor could walk in at any minute.” In spite of her protests though, the warmth was nice.

“They are busy today you know,” Allissandra said. “It will be a long wait and it is better to be warm you know.”

“It will only be better once we get out of here.”

After a few minutes, Allissandra got down and started looking for the drawer she had found last year.

“What are you doing Allissandra,” Cloud said.

“Looking for something,” She replied.

“But you can’t see,” Cloud replied.

“So, why should that matter,” Allissandra said as she went for where she thought the drawer she wanted was.

“Just chill Allissandra.”

“I won’t break anything.”

“Just sit down.”

Allissandra grabbed one of what was in the drawer. “I couldn’t figure out what this was last year. Cloud wasn’t too sure what it was, but thought she could at least put a name to it. “It’s a uh speclicum.”

“A spec….wha?”

“A speclicum.”

“What’s it do?”

“I don’t know, but let me see it.”

Cloud gets it in her hooves.

“What do you guess it is for?”

“I think it is for well you know the doctor to see inside our marehoods perhaps?”
Allissandra laughs, “Really?”

“Put it back before the doctor comes.”

Instead, she took it back and made it quack like a duck. She realized it was beak shaper last year when she played around with it.

Cloud was unhappy. “Put it back, or I will use it to tear you a….”

Allissandra only laughed at that like usual. “Wonder what it would be like to have this stuck in you. Hope it wouldn’t hurt.

“I don’t think it would hurt, but I hate the thought the doctor might use it on us,” Cloud said with a shudder.

“You think it will go in our marehoods,” Allissandra said curiously.

Cloud shrieked “For Celestia’s sake no!”

“Might be fun you know,” Allissandra replied.

“Just put it back,” Cloud barked

Allissandra held it in her hoof. “Someone got our on the grouchy side of the lez bed.”

Clouddasher screamed loud. “Put it back now!!!! You are going to get us into so much trouble and I will deny knowing you!!!!”

“Lez turd,” Allissandra said giggling as she tried to get the device in her marehood.

Clouddasher was still furious. “Blind shit,” she said and immediately regretted it. Get on the floor like the horse you are.

Allissandra stuck her tongue out as she did so.

Cloud moved behind her and worked the speclicum into her moist marehood.

Allissandra flinched

“Hold still will ya?”

“But, It’s cold.”

“Just what a nympho would say.” Cloud hit some form of barrier, stopped, and removed the speculum wetness and all.

She worked her hoof on Allissandra’s marehood. A good deal of moaning went on.

Allissandra's mouth was wide open as the pleasure really got to her mind.

Her body was shaking and Cloud stopped.

“You’re going to get us caught ya doof.”

“Please don’t stop.”

Suddenly all of this came to an end as the exam room door flew open, the doctor and nurse seeing their shameful behavior.

Cloud stopped and curled into a ball on the floor.

“Bound to happen sooner or later, the doctor said.”

Check up part two Allissandra's check up

The fillies were terrified and their eyes were bulging. The nurse was a bit freaked out by what the fillies were doing.

The doctor moved towards them. “Curious fillies eh? Right age for it too,” the doctor said with an Irish accent.

“She came up with the idea,” Allissandra said

“Nu-uh,” Cloud protested her face quite red.

The doctor removed the speculum from the floor and placed it in the sink. “Might just be two future doctors in the both of you, but handling things like that without proper training can hurt you.”

The fillies were back on the exam table sharing warmth. The doctor did the simple procedures first. Heartbeat, lungs, ears, eyes, and throats. “You two look quite healthy so far. I will check the wee little one first, and the colt next,” she said with a wink.

Allissandra lay back on the table as the doctor poked and prodded her stomach region. Ignoring her sex, the doctor felt her bone and muscle structure. “Lay a bit more of the T.V. off and you will be all the better for it.”

The doctor turned her attention now to Cloud. The doctor repeated the same procedure on cloud, taking off the bandages and checking the wounds. “What're ye du'in, to get hurt like thot?”

“Clumsy flyer.”

“You need some protection,” the doctor said very concerned.

“I would look so dorky though.”

Allissandra laughed again. “She is clumsy and always getting hurt.”

“Ya would make amazing highlander fillies. You are quite the spunky bunch.”

“You can sit up now Cloud. Nurse, can we get some new bandages.”

“Yes, doctor,” the nurse replies. She got the bandages and carefully put them on Cloud’s wounds. “Be more careful with your flying little filly.”

“Is she really a filly?” Allissandra said.

“SHUT UP!” Cloud screamed

“You two are like my sisters,” the doctor said. “Fighting all of the time, but at the same time loving it every minute. You do know Cloud that you will soon start in on the heat.

“Huh?”

“I mean that it won’t be long till you start having feelings for another.”

“I’m a tomcolt, so I don’t get the heat.”

“Sorry to burst you little bubble of innocence, but the only way to not to go into heat is to be born a colt. Since you seemed curious how the tool worked, this will hopefully answer your questions. “Please lube the speculum nurse.”

“Okay doctor.” She lubed the speculum up good.

“Allissandra dear, I need you to get situated on the table so we can look inside you.” She did just that and found a pillow to rest her head on. “Just relax,” the doctor said. “Nurse, please get the EKG

“Yes, doctor,” the nurse said as she left the room.

The doctor turned on a light that lit up Allissandra’s crotch and made it feel warm. “Want to see how this works cloud? Come here and be my helper.

Cloud walked over, very anxious about all of this. Her eyes showed longing as the doctor got her gloves on. She wasn’t sure if it was just in her imagination, but she swore Allissandra’s marehood twitched in anticipation of what was coming shortly. Slowly, the closed blades came into contact with the slit.

“Oooh my,” Allissandra moaned.

“Relax my dear,” the doctor said. “If it hurts tell me immediately.”

“Okay,” Allissandra said.

The doctor parted those lips very gently before pushing the speculum into place. The gentle push caused Allissandra to moan again and shake slightly. “Did that hurt?”

“No.,” Allissandra said trying to reassure the doctor.

The speculum was pushed in a little further, before the noise of it opening could be heard. Look right here Cloud. “This is what is known as a hymen. Most fillies are born with one. To actually get pregnant from a stallion, they would have to rupture it with their penis. However, things such as sports and flying accidents. It was supposed to signify innocence in the past, but today most know better.

“My my.” Cloud said as she wondered how long Allissandra would have hers.

“Many girls self-explore with thing that tear the hymen. “The tearing can be painful and cause a bit of bleeding, but afterwards one can go deeper. I try to preserve it unless the family has stated they want me to remove it.

Cloud realized she was rubbing herself. She moved her hoof away, but her marehood needed attention.

“I am going to do a pap smear. I will take a sample of fluid and sent it to the lab. She quickly collected a bit and Allissandra shook again. “That hurt,” the doctor said sounding worried.

“No.”

“Good.”

The nurse returned with the machine and started putting the electrodes on Alissandra. “Don’t worry, this won’t hurt a bit.”

“Allissandra, is it okay that I check your response to sexual stimuli? I am checking for anything that might be wrong.” The machine powered up and lines went across the screen.

“I don’t mind.”

The doctor took some lube and rubbed it over her clit.

Allissandra moaned as she twitched

“Aye, a wee bit sensitive aren’t we lass,” the doctor said as she brushed the clit gently. “When a mare gets excited, this will start to wink.”
Danni just moaned as her marehood dripped.

“As you can hear from the monitor, you heart beats faster as you are excited,” the doctor said as she continued to rub Allissandra’s bud. Her moans got louder and she was squirming. The doctor started lubing up her mare lips and inside her virginal canal. “Just about right for arousal,” she noted. “It would seem you are plateauing”

“Plawoahing? What that mean?” she said as her squirming continued.

“It means that your pleasure will stay like this until it spikes.” the doctor said. With that, the speculum was removed. “With the state she’s in, shouldn’t take long till her first blossoming.” With that, a hoof went back into her while another rubbed at her clit. “As her arousal escalates, her contractions will become faster and stronger,” the doctor continued.

The moaning and squirming intensified. Her eyes closed and her hooves pushed hard into the exam table. Between her now heavy breaths, she moaned quite loudly. “This feels amazing.”

“Of course. What did you think that part of your body was really for?” the doctor replied.

Her head now flung side to side as her hooves must have dented the table by now.

“Very close,” the doctor noted. “I will let you put a hoof in to feel the contractions,” the doctor said as she removed hers.

Cloud looked excited and attempted to get her hoof in.

“Careful now.”

“Yes mam.” Cloud slid her hoof in that hole and immediately felt it being squeezed quite tightly as the doctor was still rubbing Allissandra’s clit. “Wow, never knew someone so annoying could be strong.”

“You mean healthy dear,” the doctor said. “Do it for us honey. Cum.”

“Keep doing it,” Allissandra said.

“Cloud, I want you to move your hoof upwards to look for a nub. That will be the G-spot.

“Okay,” Cloud replied

Allissandra moaned again very loudly.

“How will I know when I have found it?” she said as she wiggled her hoof around.

Suddenly Allissandra made a face that was something aweful. “Gaaaaaa-----wwwwwwd,” she almost screamed.

“You found it I think.”

Allissandra’s hooves were beating against the table, and a second later her body forcefully pushed up as if a current was running through it. There was a slight scream before everything went quiet. She was having what could best be called convulsions as fluid shot out of her. The machine went berserk, almost as if it was broken. Her legs all shook and Cloud felt her hoof getting what she swore was a death grip. Slower and slower Allissandra moved until she passed out.

“Good girl,” the doctor said. “Such a strong healthy filly.”

“Healthy indeed,” the nurse agreed.

Cloud pulled her hoof out of the hole to find it very wet. She raised it to her nostrils and smelled a honey like aroma. She tasted it and knew she would be back for more later.

Check up part three Cloud's check up

It took a few minutes, but Allissandra eventually woke up. “You had a lesson in your body, so would you like to be my helper as I give the lesson to Cloud?
Allissandra gave Cloud a wicked smile. “Sure, I would love to help the lez.
“I am not a lez,”Cloud yelled again.
Cloud slowly got on the table, her body forced down til the doctor had easy access.
“Relax dear. Don’t you want the same as Allissandra?”
“I guess,” Cloud said blushing.
“Bet the lez will soak us huh,” Allissandra said with a chuckle.
“Shut up!! I am not a lez!!” she screamed while in her compromising position.
“Relax dear,” the nurse said as she stroked her reassuringly.
Cloud took a deep breath as the speculum blades stretched her open.
“Does it hurt,” the doctor asked.
“Not really,” Cloud replied.
“Does the lez like it,” Allissandra said as she giggled.
Cloud looked ready to tear Allissandra’s head off.
The doctor went on with the hymen speech, not that Allissandra could see it or anything.
“When aroused. The labial lips flush with blood and the vaginal walls lubricate,” the doctor said continuing her speech.
Soon the Pap smear test happened and cloud moaned.
“I see the lez likes it,” Allissandra said.
“Clitoris is erect,” the doctor said. “Nurse get a vitals strip.
With that, the nurse readied the EKG.
“Relax girl. Breathe deeply,” The doctor said.
The gentle rubbing sent pulses through her body as her head fell backwards.
“Let it wash over you dear. That’s it.”
Cloud was raspily breathing as she squirmed.
The doctor removed the speculum. “See if you can find her G-spot Allissandra.”
Allissandra inserted a hoof very apprehensively especially considering all of the teasing.
“Good, wiggle till you feel a nub.”
The hoof sent Cloud into strong convulsions.
“I think you found it dear.”
“Must be her lez switch.”
Cloud was too busy thrashing to respond.
“Rub gently now dear.”
The gentle rubbing sent Cloud to a place she had never been before. She thrashed about wildly as her legs bucked like crazy, hitting Allissandra once and nearly knocking her over.
Her body went still in an arch for a second as a jet of juice came forcefully out of her and onto Allissandra.
“My god,” the doctor said sounding surprised. “This is stronger than I expected.”
The nurse tried her best to hold Cloud down, hoping the orgasm would subside soon.
It did, and Cloud looked like a real mess. Her fur was soaked with sweat and she was panting quite hard.
“Wow Cloud,” the nurse said. “Most grown mares can’t cum like that.”
The doctor and nurse cleaned the instruments and looked back at the two fillies. “I would like to see you two in six months for a checkup,” the doctor said before she and the nurse left.
Allissandra spoke to cloud, “You love me, admit it.”
“You’re such a brat.”
“But, you do love me,” Allissandra said.
“Not here.”
“I know you love me, don’t try to deny it,” Allissandra said with a hint of hopefulness.
Cloud could only blush. It wasn’t something she could deny, but she did have some form of pride considering how many colts wanted her to be theirs. “I think of you as my favorite toy okay?”
The nurse came back in holding something. “Doctor wants me to catch you up on vaccines.”
Allissandra heard the sound of the syringe being uncapped and freaked out. Before she could try to run away, cloud had her in the most loving and comforting embrace
The nurse jabbed her quickly to get the shot over with.
Cloud tried to put up a brace exterior for Allissandra’s sake when she got the shot, but once the needle went in she was crying.
“Lez isn’t so brave after all huh?” Allissandra said as she hugged Cloud.