Cupcakes and Suprises

WARNING This is my first story so its a little short.  I will olny accept CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISCM in comments.

Rainbow dash walked up to sugarcube corner,feeling

embarrased that she never had a cupcake before.

Well...She has had a cupcake, but NEVER

one of pinkies cupcakes.

As she walked in, She was greeted with the usual.

"DAAAAASSSSHHHIIIE!" She heard pinkie scream.

Rainbow sighed "Hi, pinkie pie.  Listen, im

not really in the mood for 'happiness' right

now, so ill just get my cupcakes and go."

Pinkie looked at her, confused. "but dashie,

how can you not be happy? these..."

Pinkie leaned in, making rainbow back

away "...Are my special cupcakes."

Rainbow turned from sad to nervous

in one second. "umm...Pinkie pie?

What kind of special cupcakes?"

Rainbow knew that she was

crazy for sweets, but if these were the

same ones she gave fluttershy...

Pinkie replied, "its a suprise! now let me

do something before you eat..."

Pinkie then procedded to put

a bucket under rainbow. WAIT...

"Pinkie..." Pinkie grabbed a cupcake

"Piiinnnkkkiiee..."she moved it closer

"PINKIE, N-"

Don't read next part unless you like to clop!

As soon as the cupcake was in her mouth,

she knew it was the same one.These were

the cupcakes that made people have

major orgasms. Rainbow felt it building

up inside her, as her wings unfurled.

Mumbiling wildily, rainbow felt it drip then splash into the bucket. Rainbow moaned "aaaaahhhhh..." then collapsed from her explosive orgasm.

Rainbow dash just lay there, marehood dripping, for at least 5 minutes before pinkie said "enjoy?" Then rainbow replied "no wonder they paid me 20$ to do this!"

Pinkie looked fuddled now "20$? these cupcakes are free i'll-" "NO!" rainbow interuppted "I didnt pay them, they paid me!"

"oh" pinkie mumbled. her eyes started to fill with tears. Rainbow came closer. "whats wrong?" she asked. "I...Was...olny..wanting to...make* sniffle* everyone happy." Pinkie sobbed "aww, cheer up, pinkie." Rainbow said

"Just get rid of the orgasm part and theyll be fine!"

Pinkie started to sniffle again and said "But thats what makes them SPECIAL"

Rainbow walked up to pinkie and did the unthinkable.  She kissed her. pinkie was so suprised that she fell over.  Rainbow then fell on top of her, whispered "I love you" and continued the kiss. To rainbow, the kiss lasted ages. But after those ages, Rainbow decided to take it to the next level. She stopped kissing pinkie, and moved downward to see that her pussy was already dripping wet. Rainbow smiled as she started to lick it. pinkie moaned "Oh! OH! OOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!" Rainbow licked, up and down until..."RAINBOW IM ABOUT TO...CUM!! AHHHhhhhh..." and she did, she cummed all over rainbows face.

then princess molestia walked in

Then Rainbow woke up.

(They didnt publish it so here is more.)

Rainbow dash flipped open her eyes, hoping that she was still there.  No wonder there were "orgasm" cupcakes. No wonder pinkie didnt resist. That dream was a scene that rainbow had played out a million times.

Her true feelings for pinkie were strong, and she wishes that pinkie feels the same. But in the back of her mind she knew she would have to wait till the perfect moment to tell her.

Her bed felt wet, and it was. Of course she had a wet dream. It was no wonder that she felt the orgasm that pinkie had. She got out of bed, trying to forget about the dream. Rainbow thought maybe she could talk about stopping these dreams with twilight...