Breaking Point

by Moon Struck

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Sad, Alternate Universe
Length: 426

We all have our breaking points, where we can take no more. Ponies are the same way. We lose someone, we suffer. We lose someone close, we feel like we die inside. (Inspired by Mic The Microphone's Breaking Point.)

When you lose a friend, it is bad, but when you lose your best friend, someone who has been there for you through thick and thin. It is something completely different. You feel like nothing could go back to the way it was. For some this is the breaking point, for others, this is the start.

When the mane six lose their best friend, how do they cope? How do others cope?

(The following story is inspired by Mic the Microphone's Breaking Point. The link to the song will be right below this.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yyOT7rRiKFk

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-02 20:29:24 UTC

Breaking Point

How could a day that seemed to be beautiful, be so dark and grim at the same time? The sun was out, there was not a cloud in the sky. The weather was absolutely perfect. There was a slight summer breeze, but it could be enjoyed. At the hospital, it seemed like somepony was going to be lost. Somepony who was kind, patient. A good pony. The newest princess of Equestria, was on the line.

One of the doctors ran into the emergency room, carrying a bag of fluids. He nearly tripped, but managed to save the bag of fluids. He hooked up the bag of fluids to the Princess' foreleg. He started the machine to keep her fluids flowing. There was a beep every second. Her pulse was slow, and she was on Death's doorstep. The doctors, however, knew of a way that they could save her. It was risky, but Twilight Sparkle still had a chance.

Outside of the emergency room, sat Spike, Applejack, and Rarity. Rarity chewed on a piece of her mane, Spike was trying to look in the window of the closed door. Applejack was trying to comfort the two, but the task seemed to be too much for the earth pony. Spike was becoming more scared as time went on. Every minute that passed, the more Spike became more nervous.

The beeping of the heart monitor started to become slower. Every beep was growing to be farther apart.

"No, you're not doing this!" One of the doctors yelled.

The beeping became constant, not stopping. Her heart was not beating.

"Come on, stay with us!" The same doctor yelled, receiving the defibrillators. He charged the defibrillators, and carefully, but quickly placed them. The shock went through Twilight's body. She seemed to jump up, but her heart was still not beating.

Spike began to tear up. Twilight had to live. She had to. She was like a mother to Spike. Spike saw Twilight jump up again. He flinched every time she did. She was still unresponsive. The doctor tried one more time.

But it came to no avail. The doctor dropped the defibrillators, he turned off the monitor, stayed still for a moment. A nurse pulled the blanket over Twilight's head.

"NO! Get up Twilight!" Spike yelled while hitting the window. Rarity knew what that meant, what Spike's reaction meant for her, and her friends. She started to bawl. Applejack started to cry as well.

How could such a beautiful day, be so dark? Princess Twilight Sparkle, was dead.

Pinkie Pie

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Fluttershy

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Rainbow Dash

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