Crimson Dawn (you-create-it)

I seriously hope I don't get in trouble for posting this as a chapter but not enough people see my blog...
I am scrapping this story. It will be deleted within the next week or so.
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but
I will be rewriting it as something not so half-assed! start PMing me your suggestions now, keep them relatively short or if it involves visuals include pics or examples.
For you epic fimfiction guys, if this is in direct violation of some of the rules tell me and I'll delete it and transfer it to a blog post instead as soon as I see it.
sorry for getting your hopes up for an update, hope the rewrite news makes up for it