An Ember In The Ashes

by dragonfan810

First published

The story of a Pegasus judged his whole life and cast out for his cutie mark.
When Brimstone finally gets his cutie mark, it is not what he expected and gets him attacked and chased away everywhere he goes. He becomes an outcast and completely separates himself from pony kind. That is until his travels bring him to a small town. He wears a cloak to conceal his mark and is adamant about staying aloof. After all, that's all Brimstone is right? At least that's what everyone thinks he is, a regular aloof Pegasus. When a group of six ponies, and one dragon, (most of them reluctantly) gives him their trust, he finally feels at home after a while and decides it is finally time to tell them his true name... To finally show something he has never showed to anypony before... His cutie mark. But what happens when his past catches up to him... And Brimstone finds out that his first friends may have not trusted him much in the first place. He realizes that he might never gain their trust again, especially when they do nothing in his one time of need.

(This is my first real story so please give me tips and if you see something wrong please let me know nicely, thank you.)