Redemption

by thunder-cloud-86

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance
Length: 961

After several years on the run from equestrian authority, lightning cloud finds what he was looking for in ponyville

Hi my name is lightning cloud, I also go by the name shadow cloud but will get into that later. This is my story of my transition from bad to good, let's begin, on to the next page.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-26 00:19:30 UTC

prologe.

I was flying as fast as I could, my pursuers close behind "dam it won't these guys just give up already" I said to nopony.

"stop right their...or...or ells" one of the roil guards shouted between breaths.

"buck if this keeps up I'll be in the slammers foreshore".

I began to flap my wings as fast as possible without hurting myself but thay wouldn't give up and one of them almost got me. I kicked him in the face but that only pist him off.

that's when it happened, my body went into overdrive as I went into a nosedive, adrenaline pumping, my speed building, the ground getting closer and closer to my face at the last second I pulled up back to the sky and BANG my own sonic rain boom just without the rainbow part.

"yyyyaaaahhhh baby" I shouted as I zipped back toward the clouds "see you around suckers" I laughed as the roil guard faded in the distends behind me. as I was flying I saw a small town in the distends that would be a good place to make a new start I thought as I started in the direction on the town.

***

after a minute or so I was at the outskirts of the town and what I say next was a supersize. a small group of ponies one I instantly recognised.

one unicorn with a white cote with a purple main and tail, a pegasus with a yellow cote and a pink main and tail, a earth pony with a pink cote, main and tail, a earth pony with a light brown cote and a blond main and tail, a cyan blue pegasus with rainbow mane and tail, and prises firkin twilight sparkle herself.

I went over and interested myself an likewise they did the same.

"my name is rarity" the white one. "how do you do".

"my name is flutter shy" the yellow one.

"my name is applejack" the brown one.

"I'm rainbow dash" the blue one.

"my name is pinkie pie" the pink one, of cores it is I thought. "oh I'm going to need to through you a party" she said before running off in a pink blur.

"um is she...

"don't bother I almost went insane trying to figure her out" twilight explained. "oh and my name...

"I know who you are, you are princes twilight sparkle" I said. "do you know where I could find a place to stay until I have my own place"?

they pointed me to the town hall and being me I shoed off a bit when I left.

***

after talking to the mare who just so happens to be a mare, she told me of a place that gives room to the homeless so I went their.

when I walked in and to my surprise their were more homeless than I thought one was a filly with a orange cote and purple mane and tail.

I shrugged it off as a family that lost their home to a fire or something. I talked to the manager and got a room thirteen by ten. After I settled in i decided to heed out for a bight to eat. the town was empty not even one pony in sight, it seemed like I walked into a ghost town celesta I hope they didn't find out I thought as I walked to a building called sugar cub corner, I walked in and it was pitch black. "what the..

"surprise"! the whole room lit up and what seamed to be the whole town was their. "what the... what is this" I asked. "this is your welcome to ponyvile party" pinkie pie said as she was somehow hanging of the celling. I went around and talked to almost everypony in in the room before pinkie pie rolled out the red carpet red velvet cake she called it. it was...words cant describe how good it was, all I can say is that pony can bake.

***

after several hours of having fun one of the ponies pulled me out of the party for a privet conversation. "look I know who you are and what you did, but it seams that you're trying to turn yourself around do to the fact that you haven't been in the paper for the last month, but watch your flank because I'll be watching you" with that he left.

***

when I went I got back to my room I sat down on my bed and thought about the day, the chase I had with the roil guard, the party, the weirdo that threatened me earlier, but the thing that my mind always ran to was the blue Pegasus rainbow dash. "dam she's hot, but what if she knows who I am, what I did, she'll rat me out for shore, she is the element of loyalty" after that I went to bed thinking about her.

a new day

the next day I went out to have a bite to eat and I saw the little orange pegasus running of with two other fillies. I went to sugar cube corner and pinkie pie was their." hi lightning cloud how are you today" she asked.

"I'm good could I have a dasy and mushroom sandwich with a side of frys and a coffee please" I asked.

" coming right up " she said right after she wrote my order down

After I finished my meal and pade  for it I went for a walk all the while thinking about what I dun. I ran into psycho from yesterday and he told me to watch my back because he knows pony's that could... Deal with me witch definitely didn't lighten up my mood