
Staying Warm
Twilight is desperately in love with Rarity.
Twilight has been nursing a crush on Rarity for a while now, and she can't contain it any more. She's going to tell her. How will she react? Will their friendship ever be the same?
I wrote this almost seven months ago, and I hated it. Then, two months ago, I tried to revise it and didn't really get anywhere and still hated it, but a little bit less. Today I tried to revise it again and didn't get anywhere (though I did cut out like 1000 words that didn't add anything) but honestly I'm pretty ambivalent now so I figured I might as well post it. There are still parts I hate but I don't really have any ideas to replace them so whatever, right?



5954 words: Estimated 30 minutes to read
1 Chapter:
- Staying Warm 2015-06-05 04:33:27 UTC5954