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Order of Shadows

by PaulAsaran
Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.


On temporary hiatus while I work on other projects.


Equestria is not what it was meant to be. It is cruel, cold, angry and divided, which is fine by Celestia. She made it that way, after all. Now she has chosen Fine Crime to be her dark right hoof: the Mane Archon, whose name makes little ponies tremble for fear of being secreted away in the dark of the night.

But Fine has ambitions that go far beyond that of his predecessors. He has power now, power that comes with being the assigned leader of Equestria's secret police. He won't let it go to waste. Though limits have been imposed and the task is great, Fine will set the wheels in motion for the end of Celestia's dark reign.

But to do that, he's going to need some help.


Book I: Fine Crime
Fine Crime has been chosen to lead Celestia's secret order, the Archons. But before he can have the full job, she's going to test him. These tests will challenge his morality, his perseverance and his compassion. It will be the most brutal time of his life. If he succeeds, he will become the second most powerful pony in the world. But Celestia wants more than loyalty from Fine: she wants his hate, and she'll push every button he has to get it.

Book II: Vinyl Scratch
Vinyl knows Equestria's foster system. She's lived it her whole life, and the experience has toughened her up. But now she finds herself sharing a room with Amethyst Star, a filly who has been through far worse than Vinyl can imagine. As their bond grows, so to does Vinyl's sense of responsibility, and that tough exterior begins showing cracks. What she doesn't know is that Amethyst is being watched by some dangerous ponies. To protect her, she'll have to make some tough decisions... and maybe a few sacrifices.

Book III: Gulfstream
Recently orphaned Gulfstream Dust just had his hopes come true: his cousin Lightning has taken him in. But not all is well with the little pegasus with a talent for flying. Gulfstream feels a certain anger within him, a fire that refuses to go out and which threatens to burn anypony who comes near. With Lightning's help, perhaps he can tame the rage that constantly stirs within him. If she can't, Gulfstream fears what he may become...

Book IV: Fleur de Lis
Fleur Purpurnyj only wants to be a good filly. Good fillies don't speak unless spoken to, don't argue, don't look their father in the eye, does what they're told, never complains. She must be a good filly, to make up for what she did. But then, a Shadow Pony arrives in her life, and Fleur finds herself before a door leading to a whole world of new possibilities and freedoms. Fleur has the chance to do something she never thought possible: live.

Book V: Cruelles Caballeron
Archeologist and college professor Cruelles Caballeron and his best friend Silty have discovered the architectural find of a lifetime. But when tragedy strikes, Caballeron soon finds his career, his dreams, and his love life wiped away. With nothing left to live for, he devotes everything to taking down the young upstart A.K. Yearling, whom he blames for all his losses. Unknown to him, Caballeron's activities have caught the attention of a group of ponies he'd rather not get involved with...


A thank you to SorenPixels, FabulouslyCynical, Snowybee and Foals Errand for their pre-reading and editing assistance.

Cover art commissioned from the ever-awesome Eosphorite.

The TvE Series
Chronologically from Top to Bottom
Order of Shadows
Twilight's Inferno
Trixie vs. Equestria

On Hiatus
Sex
Non-consensual
Adventure
Violence
Death
Anthology
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
 
OODFO

357587 words: Estimated 1 day to read

49 Chapters:

  1. Book I — Fine Crime: The Face of Evil 2015-06-06 19:43:35 UTC
    6904
  2. Book I — Fine Crime: The Mane Archon 2015-06-13 23:09:33 UTC
    6826
  3. Book I — Fine Crime: Celestia's Test 2015-06-20 16:40:40 UTC
    8336
  4. Book I — Fine Crime: My Little Monster 2015-06-27 13:42:42 UTC
    8821
  5. Book I — Fine Crime: Lawn Ornament 2015-07-04 14:20:46 UTC
    3224
  6. Book I — Fine Crime: When Truth Becomes Deception 2015-07-11 13:21:45 UTC
    9763
  7. Book I — Fine Crime: Government Health Care 2015-07-19 13:54:00 UTC
    7999
  8. Intermission I – Prodigy 2015-07-26 13:57:57 UTC
    4671
  9. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Guardian 2015-08-02 19:26:45 UTC
    6407
  10. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Little Dreams 2015-08-09 14:04:41 UTC
    5184
  11. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: A New Friend 2015-08-17 01:15:42 UTC
    5258
  12. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Slice of Life 2015-08-23 22:40:54 UTC
    7690
  13. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Opportunity Outside the Community 2015-09-06 22:23:55 UTC
    5537
  14. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Crossfire 2015-09-13 22:34:57 UTC
    7411
  15. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: In The Hooves of Strangers 2015-09-20 23:28:50 UTC
    7188
  16. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: Scars 2015-09-26 18:06:44 UTC
    6165
  17. Book II — Vinyl Scratch: The Antidote 2015-10-03 22:47:43 UTC
    10523
  18. Intermission II — From the Sky 2015-10-10 23:11:09 UTC
    5622
  19. Book III – Gulfstream: Making a Mark 2015-10-17 22:05:20 UTC
    3635
  20. Book III – Gulfstream: Competition 2015-10-24 19:31:50 UTC
    8484
  21. Book III – Gulfstream: Building with Broken Glass 2015-11-07 20:42:27 UTC
    4596
  22. Book III – Gulfstream: Successes and Failures 2015-11-14 21:51:43 UTC
    5351
  23. Book III – Gulfstream: Effort 2015-11-21 18:53:08 UTC
    6563
  24. Book III – Gulfstream: The Gears Turn 2015-11-28 21:40:35 UTC
    5922
  25. Book III – Gulfstream: Competition, Part II 2015-12-11 17:06:22 UTC
    9297
  26. Book III – Gulfstream: Sunstroke 2015-12-22 20:53:20 UTC
    6747
  27. Book III – Gulfstream: Blood on the Wing 2016-01-04 03:19:18 UTC
    7186
  28. Book III - Gulfstream: A New Avenue 2016-01-14 00:52:21 UTC
    8226
  29. Intermission III — Between a Moon and a Nightmare 2016-02-07 23:50:34 UTC
    10921
  30. Book IV – Fleur de Lis: Shadow Pony 2016-02-29 03:38:32 UTC
    11239
  31. Book IV – Fleur de Lis: Walking with a Stranger 2016-04-03 20:22:46 UTC
    8095
  32. Book IV – Fleur de Lis: Into One's Own? 2016-04-24 15:18:20 UTC
    9863
  33. Book IV - Fleur de Lis: Tending to a Demon 2016-06-07 00:50:20 UTC
    13866
  34. Book IV - Fleur de Lis: Pretty Pony 2016-06-15 01:54:59 UTC
    5933
  35. Book IV – Fleur de Lis: The Other Filly 2016-06-22 21:21:11 UTC
    5253
  36. Book IV – Fleur de Lis: Frustration 2016-07-08 00:54:57 UTC
    5944
  37. Book IV - Fleur de Lis: Into One's Own 2016-07-22 23:12:13 UTC
    9119
  38. Intermission IV — The Two 2016-07-31 20:29:49 UTC
    8010
  39. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Find of a Lifetime 2017-01-29 02:51:23 UTC
    5215
  40. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Blows 2017-03-12 19:10:10 UTC
    7485
  41. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: A New Life 2017-03-26 21:51:20 UTC
    6860
  42. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Under New Management 2017-05-17 00:32:48 UTC
    4479
  43. Book V - Cruelles Caballeron: Ghosts 2017-06-26 02:11:16 UTC
    6091
  44. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Giulgiul's Shame 2017-07-23 19:12:56 UTC
    11435
  45. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Chasing the Amulet 2017-08-28 02:35:44 UTC
    10015
  46. Book V - Cruelles Caballeron: The Long Wait 2017-09-18 01:03:29 UTC
    12735
  47. Book V – Cruelles Caballeron: Consequences 2017-10-29 02:19:04 UTC
    11127
  48. Intermission V – Hope from Tartarus 2017-12-03 21:28:30 UTC
    3216
  49. Chapter Timeline (Here There Be Spoilers!) 2016-07-22 23:53:16 UTC
    1150