Equestria Gets a Visit from Space

by anonpony1

(05) Fifth Chapter - Nice Plot

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Saturday the 19th, 5 p.m.

After her session with Fluttershy at the spa, Rarity didn’t go home. In fact she was walking exactly in the opposite direction. Her destination was Twilight’s castle.

Rarity was sure something wasn’t right with Fluttershy. Why did she have her ear pierced all of a sudden? It wasn’t that it looked bad or anything like that, but why wouldn’t she tell her about it? Normally Fluttershy told Rarity about everything that happened in her life.

In addition Fluttershy also acted weird. It was like she was distracted and didn’t want to talk. Instead of the happenings of last week she was only talking about the weather and asked the same questions twice or more.

There was definitely something off about her. Who knows what terrible things had happened to her? But Rarity was about to find out – and help her. That’s why she was headed for Twilight’s castle. The princess always knew what to do if a friend had a problem.

Her mind with Fluttershy, Rarity didn’t bother looking where she went. After all she knew her way around her hometown. She took a shortcut through a small back alley and didn’t notice that she was now completely alone. Nopony else was around. Normally every street in Ponyville had some life in it even the smallest ones.

Rarity’s quick pace was stopped abruptly. She fell back on her haunches as her face and neck hurt badly. It was like she had just walked straight against a wall. Carefully Rarity felt in front of her. There really was a wall, but she couldn’t see it.

Walking alongside of it she noticed the wall ended inside the buildings to her left and right – no way leading around it. Suspecting some magic prank, Rarity turned around to find another way to her destination. She didn’t have time for such things.

As she was still in a hurry to meet Twilight she mindlessly fell into a quick pace again, only to be quickly stopped with another painful impact. She had almost knocked out her lights by running so fast against this other invisible wall. This simply had to be a mean magic trick! Maybe this Trixie type had returned to try her odds again?

“Let me loose this instant you ruffian!” Rarity’s angered protests didn’t help much though as she had to notice soon after. Her nose got pressed back. The walls were moving closer together. She slowly stepped back until her rump collided with the other wall. Then the force fields stopped their movement. She had only barely enough room to turn around.

Walking along the thin path she had left, she noticed her space was getting less again. Her rectangular cell got shorter and shorter as the last two walls moved towards her. Sensing alongside the invisible perimeter she knew she was trapped inside a square now. She felt like a mime with her hooves pressed against the barricading air.

She still assumed some kind of mischievous trick or prank and so was pretty calm. As her box started moving upwards her calm faded though. At first her confinement moved slowly but it increased its speed rapidly. The panicking fashion mare was rapidly shooting towards the sky like inside a high-speed elevator.

Looking upwards Rarity at first couldn’t see her destination. After a few minutes – the oblivious ponies below weren’t even visible anymore – she saw something behind the clouds. At first it was only a grey something. But as she got closer – and she did so with an enormous speed – it began to gain shape.

The first thing Rarity could take in was its size. It was big. Really big. It was easily ten times the size of Ponyville. It didn’t have a definite shape though. It wasn’t shaped like a saucer or anything one would expect an alien vessel to look like. Instead it was composed of many rectangular shapes merged together. It even had big holes where the pieces didn’t fit.

Every single one of the rectangles of this spacecraft looked like a separate part. It seemed like they didn’t belong together, but were forced into this patchwork of an spaceship. Some even had differing colors, but all were in some shade of grey and definitely metal. It did fit together so bad a few of the shapes even had small windows like one would expect on a submarine.

Taking in this obscure floating thing Rarity hadn’t noticed her elevator had slowed down greatly. She was now directly below one of the rectangles. Like some others this one had huge blinking lights of all colors on its underside.

In the middle of it was a gap about the size of her cell. She slowly was moved through the gap – right into the ship. When the underside of her chamber matched up perfectly with the shiny metal floor of this room the hole below her closed down seamlessly.

Rarity felt a bit of electricity in the air making the hair on her back stand on edge. Then her invisible prison was gone and she could move around the strange room. The room she was in was one of the smaller ones. She already had seen that from the outside.

The inside was completely seamless made out of a shiny silvery metal. There weren’t any doors or windows – not even lights on the ceiling. Instead she saw something else inside the room.

On one end close to a wall was a strange contraption. Protruding from the floor and ending directly into the ceiling were two poles; made from the same material as the walls. About at the height of her shoulders were two long curved metal bands attached to the poles – one on the outside of each pole. These things almost looked like hoof-sized tubes cut in half, strangely resembling crude armrests.

Between the two poles – connecting them – was a big metal ring about the size of a pony’s throat. This ring was cut in half. The lower half was fixed a bit higher than the metal bands. The upper half was way higher and seemed to be able to move down.

The whole thing strangely reminded Rarity of a pillory. That thought gave her a feel of unease. Was she supposed to be restrained in there?! She would never allow that to happen.

Rarity’s thoughts of disgust were interrupted when she heard a strange voice. She couldn’t say where it came from exactly, but it felt like it came from somewhere above her. It sounded like a robot – synthetic without any emotion.

“The female will place its front legs inside the armrests and its head inside the headrest. It will face the wall.”

Rarity was upset. “Who do you think I am? I’m a lady! I would never do that! And how are you talking to me I’m not an ‘it’!” To her dismay she hadn’t much say in the matter as her front hooves already had moved into the armrests. Her head followed shortly.

With a squeal of Rarity the ring around her neck closed down like a guillotine, trapping her where she was. Her hooves were restrained by metal bands – two wrapping around each leg.

She was now forced to stand on her hind legs. Her front was so high it was uncomfortable. She thought that was how a stallion must feel like when mounting a mare. Her head was restrained so she couldn’t look around, the only thing she could see was the wall in front of her.

At the edge of her view Rarity could see something moving above her head. Then she felt something being put on her horn. She couldn’t see it but it was a small silvery ring at the base of her horn. Attached to it was a black, slightly transparent, stretchy foil. This foil covered her whole horn clenching down tightly, highlighting every little groove of it.

The moment Rarity felt this thing grabbing her horn she tried her telekinesis to move it away, but it didn’t work. This instant she knew what had been put on her forehead. It was a magic canceling ring. She could clearly feel her spells being absorbed into the material. For a skilled unicorn those things were easily busted, but Rarity hadn’t really that much of experience. Besides her gem-spell and the standard telekinesis and light spells she didn’t know much more.


Next Rarity felt something cold grabbing the base of her tail. As restrained as she was she couldn’t look back. The cold thing got tighter and tighter until it snugly hugged her tail. When it stopped shrinking Rarity felt a sharp prick like something was forced into her spine.

The pain subsided shortly after, but then her tail moved up slowly. Of course she tried to put it back down. A lady can’t expose herself! Distressed she had to remark it wasn’t obeying to her. It was staying high up exposing her main prize to the empty room behind her.

She was just about to complain and whine about it when something slapped across her rump. All that left her muzzle then was a high pitched “Ow”. A moment later the same whip-like thing hit down on her other cheek.

Before she had time to somehow react, the next smack hit her. The whipping didn’t stop then though. Rarity’s plot was tormented non stop, one hit after another. During this time Rarity was too occupied with holding her cries of pain to complain.

When her backside was feeling flaming hot after being hit in nearly every angle the machine stopped. That was Rarity’s cue to start complaining. “Why ar-” The moment she spoke up, there again was a whip across her rump.

“Sto-” Another slap. “Thi-” Slap. After a few more tries – each slap getting stronger than the one before – Rarity resigned and stopped her attempts at complaining.

As she was just hanging there without anything happening, the machine gave her another slap and then ceased its movement again. Rarity was now aroused considerably. Being dominated that way and unable to move took its toll on her. She got frustrated as nothing more happened and spoke up just to earn another slap.

She received another three slaps that way. The aliens couldn’t allow her to take control though. In front of her opened up a small crevice inside the wall. In it was a robotic arm. Attached on its end was a metal thing. Rarity was reminded at a snaffle while she observed it.

The arm moved forwards and pressed the bit against her muzzle. She didn’t open up her mouth to let it in. A lady couldn’t allow such humiliating things as gags! When she still refused to open up she felt the whip pressing softly onto her marehood. Rarity wasn’t stupid and got the warning. She opened her mouth quickly and was immediately gagged by the snaffle. Its ends got attached to the poles next to her head.

The machine then continued to whip her three more times. Her hindquarters were burning. But her marehood was too – with lust. Then there weren’t any more slaps.

After a short pause Rarity felt a new sensation. Something was being pressed against the edges of her marehood like a big ring – or maybe a cup? It was a cup. She knew it the moment the air was sucked out of it. At first it kinda felt funny but then the feeling changed. The suction was forcefully increased suddenly.

Rarity could feel her lady parts expanding. Her labia was sucked so much she could feel it forming around the inside of the cup. Still the suction was continued.

It again got painful. It was sucking her so hard her marehood felt like exploding. She could feel it throb painfully with every thump of her heart. Her arousal was close to a peak, too. Somehow her abductors must have known that. Because then a new hard smack was ushered onto her flank. This finally pushed Rarity over the edge making her cum.

During her orgasm Rarity moaned heavily through her gag. One of her hind legs kicked out aimlessly. With that kick the cup fell off of her, because it already had stopped its sucking.

Her marehood was extremely swollen. It perfectly framed her – also enlarged – winking clit. Rarity was still riding her orgasm when she was torn out of it with a punch. She screamed in agony through her gag as the whip slapped down one more time – directly across her swollen lips.

Rarity hadn’t realized it at first but she had been crying for a while already. She only now noticed as one of her tears had found its way inside her nostril making her cough.

Again Rarity heard something moving behind her. With a whimper she readied herself for another slap across her swollen pussy. Instead she was surprised by a not so unpleasant feeling. Something gave a long wet lick across the whole length of her expanded marehood.

It did feel like a pony but it also didn’t. Another lick followed exactly the same path across Rarity’s privates. Due to the suction from before her marehood was highly sensitive. Instead of moans and shrieks of pain Rarity’s muzzle now escaped moans of pleasure.

One lick followed after another. Behind Rarity, what she couldn’t see, was a machine with several artificial tongues attached to a chain. This chain moved like on a chainsaw pressing into Rarity on one end. The lubricant on all of those tongues contained a small amount of aphrodisiac.

Rarity reveled in the sensations she felt. She never was licked so intense before and her arousal grew and grew. The machine behind her slowly increased its speed.

When the licking device was so fast Rarity felt like a whole town was caressing her marehood she let go. Rarity had a long sensual orgasm. She was so absorbed by it her hind legs were no longer able to hold her up. She dropped down until her whole body was only held up by the pillory she was restrained in.

The machine behind her had followed her marehood perfectly and the licking hadn’t stopped or slowed down, instead another slap was issued across both of Rarity’s plump cheeks to get her back up. After the third painfull smash Rarity finally managed to get back on her legs. To her dismay the slaps didn’t stop though.

Forcefully slapped every few seconds and even faster licked than before, Rarity had another orgasm. She was so spent she had to fight not to pass out. As her abductors noticed this the slaps stopped. The licks also slowed down so much that Rarity could again distinguish the different tongues.

When she had regained a bit of her stamina the licks completely ceased and she could hear the machine behind her retract.


Then – with a clack – all of her restraints opened up. Rarity still was hanging inside the opened pillory as she was so worn-out. Before Rarity had a chance to move out of it on her own though the voice from before again spoke to her.

“The female will walk to the middle of the room.”

Rarity’s body forced itself to move out of the stocks. She nearly tipped over when her forehooves hit the ground. Then she managed to slowly shuffle in the direction she was commanded to.

When she was standing there a metal arm moved down from the ceiling. She had no more power to fight it. It grabbed her horn harshly. When it retracted a moment later Rarity’s horn ring was gone. Then she felt electricity in the air around her making the hair of her coat stand on edge.

Looking down Rarity suddenly saw open skies below her. She didn’t fall. She was again inside some kind of forcefield. She also was too exhausted to be scared or protest anymore.

A moment later she was brought back down the same way she came into this strange patchwork alien ship – with an invisible elevator.

When she came down she no longer wanted to go to Twilight. Fluttershy’s earring could wait until tomorrow. Now she just needed to sleep. It also was late already. It wasn’t sunset yet, but Celestia’s light was already pretty low. She could hear the clock tower, it was 8 p.m.

Before she left the back alley she was in, she noticed something else. The aliens had removed her horn ring, but they forgot to take off the ring around her tail. She was still exposing herself to everypony!

Sure, she couldn’t deny she had experienced pleasure while she was abducted, but she couldn’t show off her privates in public. This was unacceptable!

In her tired stupor she tried reaching her tail with her mouth. If somepony could have seen her they probably would have laughed. Rarity looked like a dog chasing its own tail.

Her second attempt was to reach it with magic. But her already weak magic was even more wobbly because of her exhaustion. She had no chance of removing it.

Rarity made up a plan. She would find a way home where nopony could see her. Then she would try to remove it using tools. She had a metal saw and pliers at home after all.

Saturday the 19th, 9 p.m.

Rarity was lying in her bed crying. She had made several fruitless attempts to remove her tail ring for nearly an hour now and it wasn’t even scratched. Even worse: at least three ponies saw her on her way home. Her reputation definitely was ruined!

She didn’t even look for Sweetie Belle – who was staying at Rarity’s for the weekend – when she came home. Rarity went directly into her bedroom locking the door.

Crying in her pillow she made up a new plan. She would now cry herself into sleep in self pity. Then the next morning she would go to Twilight. Twilight always knew how to solve problems. That’s at least what Rarity told herself to cheer her up.

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