Indestructible

by FireVortex22

Rating: mature
Tags: Science Fiction, Tragedy, Human, Dark, Sad
Length: 3325

When a commander was ambushed by an alien ship, he was unexpectedly sucked into a black hole. Little did he know that the void was a worm hole that transported him into a planet... filled with multicolored talking ponies.

When a commander named Mark Blade was ambushed by aliens then he was sucked into a black hole. Little did he know that the black hole was a worm hole that transported him into a planet… filled with multicolored talking ponies. Yeah this isn't going to end well

In case you are wondering Mark Blade is my Original Character

UNDERGOING MAJOR EDITING!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-14 14:10:02 UTC

Prologue: Ambush

INDESTRUCTIBLE INSIDE

Prologue: Ambush

  I gaze upon the window next to my bed, wondering what else is out there other than the alien terrorist I fought against. Suddenly I was caught off guard as the intercom announced “Mark Blade report to control station as soon as possible.” I groaned in annoyance, knowing that this wouldn’t end well.

Getting up from my bed, I rushed to the door and paced through the halls into the armory. I figured if I were not in uniform, my co-workers would look at me funny.

As soon as I got to the armory, the gunsmith greeted me. “Good evening commander.” He said. “Evening” I replied with a serious tone. The gunsmith then asked me why I needed to retrieve my suite.

I simply replied “well you heard the intercom right?” he then said “Yes but why do you need your suit?” “Do you think I am going to report there like this?” I said while walking in armory.

He then said “Good point. Here, you are going to need this.” He then gave me a key to my armory vault. “Give that back when you’re done.” He said. I nodded in agreement.

He tossed me the key and I walked off to my vault. When I approach my vault, I inserted my key in the lock and the vault opened revealing my personal items. I quickly put on my uniform, loaded my weapons, return my key to the gunsmith, and head straight for my destination.

I was attire in a fully armored suit with ammo compartments on my waist, two mechanical grappling hooks on my right arm that is built in my suit’s right arm, a chiseled and thick torso that resemble somewhat of human’s muscular abdomen and a built in jet pack on my back, two triangular robes, one on each side of my waist that span from my waist to half way to my calf, a helmet with a visor and a mouth guard covering my face while the rest of my head is covered in with metallic armor that is also chiseled in a artificial way, and the entire suit is colored in blue decals with white.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             After a few minutes navigating through the halls, I finally reach my destination. When I got there, I was greeted by my co-workers.

“Good evening commander; we have an urgent transmission coming from galaxy 652.” As I viewed the holographic map zooming in on the galaxy, something was off.

The distress call was a beacon and it was glowing but it was also dim. I snapped back to reality when one of my co-workers asked “Sir what do we do? We are the closest to the distress call, but is it worth the risk?” It took me a minute to answer but after thinking, I respond back.

“Very well, everyone prepare to go to galaxy 652; we got a job to do.” I said still having second thoughts about going to the location.

Soon enough, we were ready for travel. By my command, the ship started to move and accelerate towards its destination.

When we arrived, something felt… off. There was no indication of life and no artificial structures.

That is when an alien star ship came from behind and realization hit me.”IT’S AN AMBU-“Before I could finish, a loud explosion shook the ship and it came from the aliens.”Sir Engine 1 and 3 are dead!!!” One of my co-workers said “Contact for reinforcements.” I said while in frustration.

“I can’t, signal’s dead too!” “Damn it, they planned their attack well!” Then another loud explosion set off but this time it came from the side of the ship.“Prepare the ship for defensive mode, now!” “Yes sir.” The co-worker said while typing. I exited the room, sprinting through the halls as I saw the alien next to our ship at a large distance.

At that moment, the intercom announced “Everyone go to your battle station, this is not a drill!” I arrived at the hanger when I saw the enemy already infiltrated the hanger.

They were completely robotic and they have metallic plating all over them, they are completely dark gray and they had a single red mechanical eye. They weren’t so lucky when a group of 8 marines spotted them and started to attack.

I rushed towards the battlefield and hid behind cover from the barrage of projectiles firing back and forth. “Commander, would you mind helping us out?!?!” shouted one of the marines hiding in cover “Gladly.” I said before I came out of cover and pulled out my pistol, shooting one of the aliens that came out of cover on the head.

I hid strait into cover after that. “Nice shot.” Another marine said while came out of cover; however he was shot by multiple enemies. I watched as he fell backwards revealing scorch marks all over his torso. As I came to him, more and more of my soldiers fell in the same condition as the first to get shot. I tried firing back but there were so many. Eventually all of the marines died and the reinforcements died as soon as they came.“That’s it; you all are going to die!!!” I said infuriated. I came out of cover charging at them with all my speed.

Before they could react, I tackled one of them and stabbed him with one of my hidden blades under the forehead killing him instantly. Now it is time to kill them all. I immediately got back up to punch one of the alien’s robotic abdomens and he started to flying across the hanger. Another threw a punch but I avoided it and punched his face off. 3 more started charging at me when I used one of my supernatural abilities. I used one of my abilities (force palm: basically a sonic boom in your hand) and forced the 5 to launch backwards into a wall. The remaining 4 were shooting at me but I didn’t care because I dodged all the projectiles and launched my grappling hooks to an alien’s waist and with his arm strength, flung the alien to the left, launching him through the hanger entrance and back into space.

3 were left, but yet I proceeded to charge once more. After a quick glance, I saw two captains (I can tell because of their different metallic structure, not to mention their height difference, both of them carrying strange swords.)

One of the captains lunged at me and attempted to impale me. As soon as he swung his blade, I easily dodge the attack and punched through his gut. When I pulled out my arm, the captain was spewing out neon blue liquid from his chest and the hole I made. ‘Now was my chance’ I thought. While the captain was trying to recover, I grabbed his weapon out of his grasp and sliced his head off, decapitating him and falling to the metal floor shortly after striking him.

The other captain took me by surprise when his sword came into view, trying to cut me in half. Fortunately, I retaliated by swinging the sword to block his attack. He nearly killed me but I acted quickly. With my leg, I jabbed his gut with my knee.

He then grunted and bent over to cover his stomach with his hand. I then sliced his left knee, causing him to kneel down. As soon as he did, I came from behind and with my blade, sliced and snapped his neck. When he fell, I grabbed his blade and store them to both my left and right of my waist.

There was only one enemy left. Desperately, it was shooting at me yet almost missing every time. One managed to hit him but only scraped my shoulder pad. When he ran out of ammo, the last alien stepped back slowly. I then threw my knife into his head. “Finally… I killed… them all.” I said while panting.

I then viewed the enemy ship severely damaged. I smirked thinking ‘We might get out this.’ That thought was soon erased as the ship was shaking uncontrollably.

The ship was then slowly leaning and approaching the enemy ship and the alien ship did this as well. “I need to head back to the control station” I said while sprinting.

As I was running, I saw a black hole forming between my ship and the alien ship. I was then launched towards space by a big explosion behind me.

I was in space, struggling to go back but the explosion damaged my jet pack and the black hole was pulling me towards it. All I could do was watch as my ship collided with the alien ship as they explode at the same time when they collided. I also saw debris of the ship, flying towards me. I tried to avoid but I couldn’t. As I am nearing the void, debris bombarded my suit.

Although the debris didn’t do much, a long and big metal beam hit my visor, causing it to crack severely. That blow to the head caused me to feel weary. The last thing I saw before I entered the void was the two vessels combusted in a huge ball of fire. Afterwards, I slowly lost consciousness.

Chapter 1: Lost

INDESTRUCTIBLE INSIDE

Chapter 1: Lost

3rd person

      It was a glorious day in Ponyville. The sun was up and the residence of Ponyville was happily going about their days, including the mane 6 and Spike. They were between the outskirts of the Everfree forest and Ponyville, having a picnic together. “So twilight darling, what kind of activities was you acknowledging yesterday?” Rarity said. “She is probably doing stuff eggheads would do.” said Rainbow dash with a grin on her face.

       “For your information Rainbow, I was helping princes Celestia write a treaty for the Griffins.” She said annoyed at Rainbow dash’s comment. “Calm down sugarcube, let’s just enjoy this picnic.” said Applejack in a western tone. “So what yah do yesterday Fluttershy?” she then asked Fluttershy who was hesitant at first but then she spoke “Oh not much, I was just tending to a raccoon. ” She said in a soft and gentle tone.

       “Hey Rarity, what did you do yesterday?” Twilight asked. “Actually darling, I had an important client that wanted a dress from me!” Rarity said eagerly.

      “And who may that be?” said Spike. “It’s Princes Celestia and Princes Luna!” said Rarity, failing to keep her excitement to herself. “That’s amazing Rarity!” said spike. “Yeah that’s pretty cool, but not as cool as me.” said Rainbow Dash.Rarity just rolled her eyes “Typical Rainbow Dash.” Rarity said. “Oh oh, my turn my turn!” Pinky Pie said in eager tone.

       “I threw a little filly’s party and he said it was the best party ever, then I was helping the cakes make goodies, then I-“she was cut off when she was twitching and thumping on the floor. While this occurred, the 5 ponies and dragon where eying her curiously. Then pinky spoke “Oh no, I’m having another dozy, something is going to fall out of the sky.” she said.

       After she said that, a black hole formed in the sky and shortly after it has formed, multiple projectiles that vary in size where burning up on contact with the atmosphere like meteors.

       The mane 6 and Spike watch as the projectiles hit the outskirts of the Everfree forest, far from them. As soon as the objects touched down, the ground shook and a loud sound emerged. Afterwards, the void vanished then Twilight spoke “Girls, I don’t know about you but I have a feeling that those things aren’t meteors.”

       “So why did you tell us this Twi?” spike said confused. Rainbow Dash then asked her the same thing. “Yeah Twilight, why did you tell us this?” Twilight then responded “Because we are going to the crash site.”  With that, the mane 6 and Spike were heading towards the crash site.

      The mane 6 and Spike were about 50 yards away from the crash site. As the ponies got closer, they realize that Twilight’s theory was becoming more plausible as they get and closer.

       When they arrived, they were shocked, curious, and confused when they notice the meteors were not made of rocks, they were not even meteors. Twilight was the first to speak “It looks like I was right, but what is this?” She said while looking at a large piece of metallic shrapnel.

      “I’m no rock expert but ah think that is some sort of metal.” Applejack replied although she was just as confused as the others “Metal, that couldn’t be possible unless…” Twilight’s observation was interrupted by Rainbow Dash “Hey Twilight, what the buck is that?!?!” Rainbow said pointing at a metallic creature. All of the mane 6 and spike walked towards the creature with fear written in there faces. They know that this is a creature because there was skin exposure everywhere but all in small sizes.

       Twilight took precautions and pokes the creature with a stick, with her magic. Everyone gasped in terror as the creature started to groan and move.

1st person

            As I began to open my eyes, my sight was blurry, all I heard was audible muffles, and I felt pain coming from the left side of my stomach.

I moaned not only the pain but something poking my helmet. When the poking stopped, my senses started to work as I start to stand up. Struggling, I stood up mid way until I herd an audible gasp. Slowly, I gazed at the source of the sound, and then my sight became clear. Needless to say, I was very confused.

      “The fu-“I muttered under my own breath until I saw a group of multicolored horses with a smaller creature besides them, all with shocked expressions.

       I took a glance at the left side of my stomach and saw a chunk of my armor was gone and I was bleeding. ‘Probably from the void’ I thought as I turned to my left and spotted a pistol.

       When the one of the horses started trotting to me, I quickly grabbed the pistol and pointed at the now motionless yellow horse that I assumed to be a Pegasus because it had a pair of wings. “Don’t come closer or I will shoot!”The Pegasus yelped and flew behind the lavender horse instantly. While whispering to each other, I used my healing ability to heal my wound. ‘Were those horses whispering?’ I questioned my thought while healing. When I was done, I felt my weapon being togged away.

       When I saw my pistol enveloped in a pink aura, it was floating towards the lavender horse until it stopped next to it. Then it started to speak “We don’t mean no harm, we can all be friends.” ‘I guess that answers my question’ I answered in my head but I cringed at the attempted of a negotiation.

       She then put on a nervous smile and chuckle. “Twilight, are you insane! He’s going to kill us!” said the cyan Pegasus that was whispering to the lavender horse who I now know that it’s name was twilight and it was a female (Now that I think about it, these horses do look somewhat similar, so they all might be female. Except the small creature, I still don’t have a clue about its gender).

      “It’s ok Rainbow, he won’t harm us. He’s just… lost.” I replied to her comment “Hey, I’m not lost!” then walked slowly towards Twilight “Just give me my pistol.”

       She was then pondering about whether or not she trusts me from the looks of it, then she spoke “Ok, I trust you, but don’t try to harm us.” She said.

       I simply said “I don’t make promises.” “Not even a pinky promise?” a pink mare with a frizzled mane said with a sad expression. “The fuck is that?” I said with confusion.

       Then the mare’s mane then started to deflate and her pink colored body became slightly less vibrant which caused the remaining mares and small purple creature (who were staring at me in aw) were surrounding and what I assume comforting her.

      Looking back, what I think was rainbow, staring at the saddened pink mare then soon become furious when she glared at me. “THAT’S IT, NOPONY OR CREATURE MAKES FUN OF MY FUN OF MY FRIEND!!!” She said angrily.

      “I didn’t-“I was cut off when Rainbow flew at me with tremendous speed, followed by a battle cry. Quickly, I side-stepped to the right and avoided her assault. “HEY, I thought we weren’t going to approach this into hostility!”

       I raised my voice while clenching my fists. “Rainbow Dash, don’t hurt it!” Twilight said. “I’m done taking the easy way after it treated pinky like bucking dirt. This time, I’m doing it my way!” “But Rainbow-“Rainbow ignored her and proceeds to do the same attack she did, but only this time, I retaliate forcefully.

       When she charged at me once more, I pulled my right arm to a striking posture. When we were nearly inches away from each other, a mysterious force caused my right arm to stop my counter attack.

       When I looked at my arm, it was enveloped in… well a pink aura. In fact it was the same aura that engulfed my pistol. I turned back around only to see Rainbow Dash, inches away from me, enveloped in the same aura. She clearly looks pissed.

       “Hey, what gives? Let go of me so I can buck his face off!” she said aggressively. “Rainbow Dash, Calm down and don’t try to kill… well it.” Twilight said “Now, as I was saying, welcome to Equestria. My name is Twilight Sparkle.” She then directs a hoof to herself. “The one who decided it was ok to attack such a specimen is called Rainbow Dash.” She said, glaring at Rainbow Dash, clearly mad at her. “This is Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Spike, and, Pinky Pie” She does the same motion with her hoof to introduce her friends, no longer comforting there pink companion, reverting to her original appearance. “If you would so kindly walk with us back to Ponyville so we can ask you questions.”

       She then was motioning her hoof to me to follow. As the other ponies and the little creature followed Twilight, the pink aura released its grip on my arm but yet to do so both Rainbow and my weapon.

       At first, I hesitate on the offer but soon enough, I came to an agreement. ‘Well, it’s my only hope for civilization. Besides were else am I going to sleep?’ Afterwards, I rushed to keep up to the group heading towards civilization.

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3rd Person

Character: unknown

            As the new creature left the crash site, something lurking in the bushes stepped out and headed towards the Everfree forest. It was hard to explain what it looked like but all I could say is that it was black and it has a body of a pony. Anyway, it was rushing past trees and bushes until it reached a cave and proceeded to go in. As it entered, it spoke to what looks like nobody because of how dark it is.

       “Your majesty, I found a creature that crashed into the outskirts of the Everfree. But this creature is different. He can talk and he went with the ponies.” The other mysterious creature then spoke.  “Excellent, observe this new creature and report to me for new information.” It said in a mischievous tone.  “As you wish Queen Chrysalis.” It said while leaving the cave into the forest. Chrysalis saw her subject plunged into the woods; a smirk appeared on her face at the site of accomplishment.