The Adventures Of The Everfree Equestrians Season 1

Chapters

Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
Episode 14
Episode 15
Episode 16
Episode 17
Episode 18
Episode 19
Episode 20
Episode 21
Episode 23
Episode 24
Episode 25
Doctor Sparks Part 1?
Doctor Sparks Part 2
Doctor Sparks Part 3
Episode 27
Episode 28
Episode 29 Season 1 Finale part 1
Episode 30 Season 1 Finale part 2
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 6
Episode 22
Episode 26

Episode 3

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

“Um… fact check I am 14 so is he” Corrects Blue. Willa and Remix just stood there in shock, trying to understand what was just said.

“What, how could you not tell I mean we are always fighting while I always rub on his mane while he just starts laughing, He is my favorite Nephew of course?” Adds Blue.

“So He is your Nephew, Who by the way was born on the same day as you” Asks Remix still trying to add it all up here.

“Yeah, it was a competition between our mother and father and Vanity Light and Her lover whose name escapes me at the moment. “ Answers Blue.

“Is Willa alright she is looking a little pale” Asks Remix pointing to a fainted Willa.

“I think it is time we visit Zach.” Answers Blue. They start walking with Willa on Blue’s back to Zach’s new location with Hunter Sparks, Bradly Cool, Amanda Lovewind , And Vanity Light all waiting. Only Hunter has been doing some drinking.

“Hunter quit messing with my wings you aren’t supposed to be touching them” Commands Zach as Hunter Keeps bumping Zach’s Wings with his horn.

“Shhh….. It is okay Zach I will have your pet out of the well in no time.” Replies Hunter with a few hiccups.

“I Thought Hunter was here to fix my wings, not be drunk off his Flank” Asks Zach to Vanity.

“You know he isn’t so hard when he is drunk, in fact I can make him do whatever I want when he is drunk” Answers Vanity with a smirk.

“Hey Hunter I bet you can’t heal Zach’s wings nor Increase the speed of the healing process” Yells Blue to Hunter. When Hunter hears this challenge, He instantly puts his horn to Zach’s Wings, Makes a large flash, And lets Everypony watch as the Holes in Zach’s wings instantly start closing up and make feathers form.

“Blue, I wanted to make Hunter Do what I order him to do” Says Vanity Annoyed.

“Now stay off those wings, they won’t work for a long time or ….. 3 days …… I do not remember” Says Hunter to Zach.

“Do you think I can stand” Asks Zach to Hunter.

“What now are your hooves broken, Yes you can stand.” Answers Hunter. They all watch as Zach hops onto the cloud floor and falls through ending up being caught by Remix.

“I think it is time we return to Earth for a while; I am feeling way to Sober at the moment.” Says Hunter to Everypony who agrees with him. They all then descend to the ground with all the unicorns and the one alicorn in a hot air balloon.

Meanwhile in the hot air balloon,

“Zach, Remix and Willa now know our secret” Whispers Blue to Zach.

“Wait you told them that we’re related” Asks Zach to Blue in a quiet way.

“Yes and now I hope you don’t mind sleeping in the living room with Vanity because Bradly and Amanda are planning to sleep over at Hunter’s place, and they are taking Willa along, And I want to go to so I hope you don’t mind.” Asks Blue to Zach.

“Why can’t I sleep in my room with Willa and you?” Asks Zach to Blue.

“We plan to be alone tonight” Answers Blue.

“Alright, I don’t care what you are planning; just don’t mind the alarm clock.” Says Zach to Blue.

“Thanks man, you’re the best“ says Blue hugging Zach.

Meanwhile with Zach in Remix after the balloon lands,

“So what are you doing tonight Remix” Asks Zach.

“Nothing really, maybe visit my parent’s graves but that’s all I plan to do” Answers Remix.

“Wait, you are an Orphan” Asks Zach.

“Yeah why do you think I live alone” Answers Remix.

“I wanna help, let’s let Hunter Take you in” Offers Zach.

“Alright, I am tired of sleeping in that shed so I will be packing my things now” Accepts Remix. With that planned Zach rushes over to Hunter’s tree where Hunter is looking about frantically for liquor and Alcohol.

“Damn, how can I get drunk tonight when I am out?” Asks Hunter to himself.

“Hunter, Can Remix live here” Asks Zach to Hunter.

“No I don’t need anypony bothering me at the moment.” Answers Hunter.

“Please, I will give you Vanity Lights two bottles of Moonshine.” Offers Zach Holding up the two bottles. Hunter Then turns around and stares in disbelief.

“How did you get those” Asks Hunter.

“Do you really want to know or do you want to drink” Asks Zach.

“No I don’t, now give those to me” Answers Hunter as he tries and fails to take the Bottles.

“No, not until you answer my question; Will you let Remix live here” Asks Zach pulling back.

“I would adopt the filly for Moonshine” Answers Hunter.

“Then make it so” Commands Zach.

“Fine I will make the filly my Daughter, now give me those bottles” Answers Hunter.

“Good to hear” Says Zach as he hands over the bottles.

“They were getting too heavy anyways and my sister can always make more” Says Zach to Hunter.

“Did I Seriously just get adopted for Moonshine” Asks Remix just as she arrives.

“Yes and you can live in the basement that never gets used, and it is soundproof Now let Zach help set up your room I need to get wasted” Answers Hunter as the room gets set up.

“I hope you don’t mind but I am very grateful for what you have done and I would like for you to stay with me tonight.” Asks Remix To Zach.

“Alright no problem” Answers Zach.

To be continued………

Episode 4

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

11:00 P.m.,

“So Remix are you sure beats this loud are safe.” Asks Zach.

“No but they are good for music, now let’s party” Answers Remix now playing Bangarang.

Meanwhile with Blue and Willa,

“Are you sure you wanna get this done now” Asks Blue

“Yes, I want to get this done as soon as possible” Answers Willa.

“Are you sure you don’t want to wait until midnight” Asks Blue.

“No I do not want to wait until midnight at that point tonight would be over.” Answers Willa As she lies down and extends her legs open revealing her untouched fillyhood.

“Remember, we tell Nopony about this night” Demands Willa.

”You got it” Accepts Blue as he pulls out his large member.

“Dang are you sure that will even fit inside me” Asks Willa in a shocked way.

“Positive” answers Blue.

A few seconds later Amanda’s Voice echoes through the room as “OH, YOU WANT TO SEE EXTREME, YOU WANT LOVE, YOU WANT PLEASURE, YOU WANNA SEE ROUGH, THEN I WILL GIVE YOU ROUGH.” as Bradly starts yelling “Oh Shit, Oh fuck, I’m sorry I didn’t mean it, I’m sorry. Oh dear Celestia Somepony please help me. NO, don’t put that gag on m…….. MPHH mph muhuhuhph”.

“Should we go check that out?” Asks Blue.

“No it was Dad’s fault for questioning my mother’s extremeness, they do this every Thursday and I don’t know why but every time I go to check, the door is half open and mother is wearing a black mask and holding a whip.” Answers Willa.

“And every time I try to look in my mother pushes on the door, the closes thing I ever got to see is a hoof strapped down to the bed.” Adds Willa. After she says that Blue pulls out some protection from the drawer’s hidden container.

“I got this each Nightmare Night when Hunter passes them out because he is way too drunk to pass out candy.” Says Blue to Willa.

“Are you sure you want to do this, we could ask to know what they are doing.” Asks Blue.

“After, I want to get this done now or not at all” Answers Willa.

“Alright, I hope I don’t regret this” Mutters Blue as he carefully readies his colthood.

“How many of these have I wasted trying to figure this out, about 43, then I mastered it after Hunter told me how, and this was my last one” Says Blue to himself. Blue pushes his colthood against her fillyhood, feeling the warmth, and he pushes in, but All he does is just stand there staring at her, changing expression from excited to depressed. He then starts shaking his head a little.

“No, I can’t do this, not to you, I’m sorry for doing this to you” Blue says as he pulls out. He then rolls over facing the other direction on the bed.

“Then why did you want it” Asks Willa half confused.

“No, I never wanted it, I only accepted because I knew the two options you would have left, bang forever and marriage, and I know you never wanted any of them, so I stopped you from asking” Answers Blue.

“Then why did you offer it” Asks Willa.

“Because I wanted to make you happy and I thought you were a little jealous so I thought you would want it” Answers Willa.

“Why didn’t you stop me” asks Willa.

“Because you finally broke me” Answers Blue.

“Do you know what it is like to be the most made fun of in your class” asks Blue.

“But you seem so…”says Willa as Blue interrupts her.

“Every day I have to protect you from each beating because I can’t stand to see you get hurt” Says Blue.

“You are the strongest….” Says Willa as Blue interrupts her again.

“Do you know how much I cry at night just to see you in the morning” asks Blue.

“You… cry?” Asks Willa.

“I know everything about you as your favorite color is light blue like your eyes.” Says Blue.

“While your favorite color is a light green…. Like my hair.” Says Willa.

“Do you know how many times I have constantly tried to ask you out, I counted 256 times trying to get you alone for five seconds” Ask Blue beginning to sob.

“How you leave flowers by my door every morning” Whispers Willa.

“Do you know how many times I stared at a noose at my house just trying to resist.” Cries Blue as his hair changes to his color.

“How you always try to impress me and how you keep trying to guard me and how you catch me with my wildest stunts” whispers Willa.

“Don’t you see, I would do anything for you” Asks Blue.

“Even Die” asks Willa.

“Yes, you are the only thing in life that keeps me going.” Answers Blue.

“You really do love me and think of me as a pony and not a tool like the rest of the ponies.” Whispers Willa.

“I now know that you don’t care, and would care less if I died” Says Blue now as dark as grey as his color slowly fades.

“Blue, I care about you more than you think.” Whispers Willa.

“But I now know how much you hate me so… why let live what you hate” Says Blue as he pulls a knife on himself with his magic.

“Blue, Stop I can’t let you do this and I know where this goes” Says Willa as she punts the knife out of his magic reach.

“Look, I’m sorry for pushing you to this and you must know now, I can’t live without you either, if you died I would only blame myself because you are the pony who knows the most about me, and I love this about you. I love how you can do that thing with your hair to make it as if it were fire, I love how you can hide in a fireplace, and I love everything about you. You may be annoying but, you are the most loving person. I love you Blue.” Says Willa on top of Blue pinning him from the knife.

“As a friend” Asks Blue. After he asks that she slowly ends up kissing him.

“As my Coltfriend” Answers Willa after she finishes.

“Are you serious” Ask Blue in a confused voice.

“As serious as my next question, do you want to finish what we’ve started.” Asks Willa.

“What, Are you sure… I mean… now... at this second…” Asks Blue as Willa Interrupts him.

“It’s okay; I will let you this time” Answers Willa.

“But you are too gentle” Implies Blue as a blush invades his whole face turning it red.

“It’s okay; I am named Willa Wylde for a reason you know.” Answers Willa.

“But I don’t think….. I mean I want to….. But… I would… I will… I could…” Stutters Blue as he tries to find the right words. Willa was ignoring him at that time, for she was staring down where he was excited but nervous at the same time, she decides to mount it. At that moment Blue instantly looks down at where he was still wearing the form of protection and Whispers “I wasn’t ready”. Willa then starts bucking him only to stop due to exhaustion.

“I’m feeling a little tired here, mind taking over.” Asks Willa.

“No I … Sure I will” Answers Blue almost excitedly. After hearing his she flips Blue to be on top and switches places with him. He takes a while to move but when he does he goes in a very slow way, not even enough to cum. Willa then gets a little upset as she looks at the clock.

It was 11:53 and if they don’t cum by midnight she will have broken the promise to Blue.

“Blue could you please pick up the pace” Asks Willa.

“No, I don’t wanna hurt or bruise you.” Answers Blue. Hearing this, Willa just giggles and whispers

“I don’t care just please hurry up, I want to keep my promise” into Blue’s ear.

“Fine I guess there is no harm in it” Guesses Blue. He starts going very fast, fast enough to clear a sky in 10 seconds. “Ohh buck yes” exclaims Willa. It doesn’t take long but Blue thinks he isn’t going hard nor fast enough to do anything so he picks up the pace. After this she starts to moan loudly. After a while they both Cum. Willa holds Blue closely and starts licking the coat of Blue’s Chest as in asking for more. After a while they Get up and decide to clean themselves up.

“I think…. That went well… I could use an open window now….” Gasps Blue as he tries to catch his breath.

“I’m surprised…… How little noise we made…..And how you never looked at me as a tool or a win. We also got done at 11:59” Implies Willa as she opens a window.

“I…should dry….off and maybe get some water.” Says Blue to himself. After a While they dry the sweat off each other and regain some energy. Willa then remembers something.

“Now like I said it is time to check on them.” Remembers Willa. They both walk down the hall to the door way where Amanda and Bradly are still awake. They knock on the door. Amanda opens the door halfway only were her head peaks out.

“What do you want Willa…… and Blue” Asks Amanda as she looks at both of them. “What are you doing” Asks Willa.

“I can’t tell you today but maybe when you are older………Wait You two smell of sweat and excitement and of each other.” Answers Amanda as she takes in the Scent.

“That is because we were telling stories under a blanket.” Lies Willa.

“Damn, I can’t tell when you are lying to me, but Blue is terrible at telling a lie.” Says Amanda.

“Oh buck, will see right through me if I Lie” Thinks Blue as he starts to sweat nervously.

“So….Blue” Starts Amanda with a smirk.

“Please don’t see right through me” Thinks Blue.

“Is what Willa says True” Asks Amanda Looking deeply at Blue.

“Please don’t see right through him” Thinks Willa.

“Yes” lies Blue.

“You disappoint me on so many levels” Says Amanda catching the lie.

“So you smell of sweat, excitement, and each other” Mutters Amanda to herself.

“I will be right back” says Amanda as she shuts the door. A loud sniff is heard twice. It then takes a moment to hit her, but Amanda then realizes that is one of the many stenches of Sex. “Oh.. dear Celestia” is What Amanda Shouts as she realizes what it is. She then opens the door and looks at the two in a new way.

“Blue this is not for your ears so go into the room you were in” Demands Amanda forcing Blue to leave and giving a moment to talk to Willa.

“Now, I can understand this at your age, but with HIM, How do you commit such an act” Asks Amanda in a shocked voice.

“Mom, He is not so bad when you get to know him for about his whole life, He isn’t how you think he is, He is Cute, funny, and very lovable.” Answers Willa trying to stick up for blue.

“Hold on, let me explain this to your father” Says Amanda as she shuts the door for a moment then opens it fully revealing Bradly Strapped down and gagged.

“Sorry forgot the gag” Says Amanda as she walks up and removes the gag from Bradly’s mouth.

“Hi My darling little angel filly, your mother and i…” Starts Bradly as Amanda interrupts him.

“She knows exactly what we are doing.” Says Amanda to Bradly.

“Oh….. Anyways I have just heard about you and Blue, and I have to tell you right now that I am Proud of you for showing that Colt a little bit of kindness.” Says Bradly to Willa.

“She had sex with him.” Says Amanda.

“I know, I heard the entire thing while you were holding me down for a silent oral sex round, I think the boy just needed that push to keep him going. Darling it think you made a great choice for him.” Says Bradly to Willa.

“How did you hear, never made a sound.” Asks Willa.

“I could hear the crying ,moaning, and the thumping, oh, and the knife went through my wall” Answers Bradly.

“I think she made the wrong choice.” Adds Amanda.

“Honey, we both knew that the colt was troubled, Willa has done him a kindness that he will never forget.” Says Bradly to Amanda.

“I know, it’s just in my nature at the moment, he is a good colt.” Says Amanda to Bradly.

“Hey Blue, come on, show yourself to us.” Says Bradly. Hearing this made Blue come out of the room only he never heard the conversation so he was a little shy.

“Yes, Sir” says Blue nervously.

“It’s okay I approve in this matter.” Says Bradly trying to calm Blue.

“You don’t care” Asks Blue excitedly.

“Nope” Assures Bradly.

“Can you keep this secret from Zach and the others including Zach.” Asks Blue and Willa together.

“Yes we will” Answers Bradly and Amanda Together. Then they all go to sleep.

Meanwhile with Zach and Remix,

“Good night Remix” Says Zach.

“No, wait Zach; stay here with me for tonight” Begs Remix.

“Alright, no problem” Answers Zach.

“Thanks” Says Remix.

“Sleep right next to me” adds Remix as she curls up into a ball.

“Alright” Answers Zach as he does so. Later, Remix falls asleep leaving Zach Awake. He then finds Remix’s Diary and reads it in his head.

“Dear diary, Today I met a nice alicorn Who goes by the name Zach Darkicorn, He calls me Remix but my real name Is little beat but Remix is a nice stage name for if I ever get an audience, I have taken in Zach as my friend even though he does not know me well but, we will get to know each other over the years, He is my one new friend and I hope he will be my friend forever, Your Friend, Little Beat.” Reads Zach to himself. He then decides to put the diary away and go to sleep.

To be continued………..

Episode 5

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

With Hunter and Vanity light in the morning,

“Hunter wake up you lazy Flank” Commands Vanity Light as she tries to wake the stallion up.

“No I don’t wanna wake up” Replies Hunter.

“Fine I am tired of this; I didn’t get hired as your maid not to take better care of you.” Says Vanity as she walks downstairs and starts removing Hunter’s Drinks from the case and throwing them out. Hunter then hears this and starts demanding that she gives them back.

“No Hunter it is time you Quit” Says Vanity in Reply.

“But I need it” Begs Hunter.

“And Zach has told me that you have a secret stash” Says Vanity.

“I hate that son of yours” Says Hunter Shocking Vanity with his knowledge.

“How do you know he is my son?” Asks Vanity.

“He has the same number of feathers on his wing as you do which is 17 feathers on each wing.

“So that’s how you know” Says Vanity.

“Now give me my whiskeys, wines and other drinks I am not supposed to have at all in my house for a certain filly can reach them.” Demands Hunter.

“No it is time you have gone sober again, You used to be Princess Celestia’s Number 2 Student for you were second best under Princess Twilight Sparkle, You made over 250 spells, and you were a teacher at her school, you were respected, What happened to that you.” Asks Vanity.

“He died along with my dignity” Answers Hunter.

“I knew you better than no other pony, now I don’t know you at all” Whispers Vanity.

“I am retired as who I was” Says Hunter.

“I will not give any of this back to you until you come back to your old ways” Says Vanity to Hunter in an annoyed voice.

“Why do you even drink anyways” Asks Remix as Vanity departs.

“Discord” Answers Hunter in a voice as he has said this before.

“Who is Discord” Ask Remix.

“You are the first to ask that” Answers Hunter.

“I will tell you my story from beginning to end” Adds Hunter.

“I was a major in my classes in Canterlot. I was the second best under Twilight sparkle in magic, but in Spell making she was a real drag at it, I was the best in my Spell making class because I could forge and form magic from the bear elements, she could perform and master my spells but could never make any original spells of her own. That was in her past but now she made a spell to escape discord’s grasp. I have made 250 spells, each one with a sort of wonder,I used chaos to make advanced one , my most popular spell was the Iron coat spell which made it so I couldn’t get cut or bruised, like a form of armor that never wore off until you knew how to use it. The soldiers in Canterlot could use this spell to escape damage for a short amount of time, for the unicorns could never master it themselves, My second spell made me famous for a short time, for I had made the Iron Coat spell evolve into two stronger spells The Titanium Coat spell and the Shield Spell.

Twilight Sparkle Took only a few seconds to master my spells, but it took me years to master the spells I owned, and she only needed two days to learn while it took me weeks or months to finish it, Half my library is a place where all my spells are, I stayed and mastered spell making and eventually got my masters degree in it, I even got my own class to teach every spell I made. But on the day before Discord was let loose, I failed out of no known reason and I was Fired While I was creating my spell for…. Something I don’t remember but it was for Discord, I think it was a spell that could change a pony’s true nature to what they seek most, The day when I was half way through I Don’t know what happened it just did, My spell started going crazy for no apparent reason, I was kicked out of the university.

The day later I decided to go to the festival celebrating Discord’s Defeat, only I went into the maze to cry. Then when I tried to leave, The Exit was covered and I was trapped meeting Discord. “Hello Mister Professor How goes the failure” Is what he asked me.

“Just leave me alone, whatever you are” is what I said in return.

“My name is Discord, and you could use a drink my friend” Is what He added in return.

“No, I don’t drink” is what I told Him.

“Come on you look like you could use it” Is what he told me. He later tried to use a hypnosis spell on me to try to convince me, but I have developed the resistance spell so I could stare at his eyes for hours so I said “That doesn’t work on me, I am not so stupid Discord” And when he heard this he was shocked. So in some remorse he started to warm me up to it.

“Something troubling you friend” Is what he asked. I told him what happened and he said

“Now you don’t want a drink, but you need a drink my friend.” And I responded with “Sorry, I don’t drink”. Then he said “It will make your troubles go away.” But that never convinced me because I said “I have taken a blood pact not to drink, I am sober.” And after some time wasted I decided to accept this act of kindness, but doing so turned me gray.

“Friend, you look a little down” Is what he said when he noticed this.

“I have experienced a tragedy in my life and a goal I will never receive” Is what I said in response.

“How about I make your life better by changing your True nature” Is what he offered to me. I just wanted to have great life, and he was offering it to me and I could not refuse this. I accepted his offer and he changed me to a drinking pony which restored my color until I ran out of Whiskey.

So he told me to go home and live my life, and I did not see him again. A strange day that was for everyone was not acting their true nature, but I didn’t care, I went into banishment for myself and made a certificate to promise how I will remain with this nature, I think I left a note for me on the back, but on the front it says do not read back until you are ready.” Explains Hunter in a whole story.

“So you drink because of Discord” Asks Remix.

“Yes and I don’t regret anything.” Answers Hunter.

“I want to see this Discord” Says Remix.

“Alright we can go there now” Says Hunter enthusiastically. And they depart to Discord’s location.

Meanwhile With Blue and Willa,

Blue wakes up slowly but in a half depressed way.

“What a strange dream I had last night” Remarks Blue to himself. He then notices that Willa is cuddled up to him, very closely as if trying to hold onto him.

“About what” Asks Willa in a confused but happy voice still waking up.

“Damn, I wasn’t dreaming was I?” Asks Blue.

“No it was all real.” Answers Willa still smiling.

“So you were serious about being my fillyfriend.” Asks Blue.

“As serious as I wanted you to be my Coltfriend, I was also serious about what we did and what I think of you.” Answers Willa.

“Can…we do….that… again sometimes…..” Asks Blue nervously.

“Yes, when you want to, but only where we cannot be seen such as a closet, in the shower, in the Everfree forest, In the clubhouse Bradly built us after we put in a door and windows and shades, and maybe in the hot-spring in the middle of the forest” Answers Willa. They both then start getting up and examining the place, which was now a small mess; Knife through the wall, Knotted up condom and wrapper, and some photos removed from the walls. They both start cleaning up for they made the mess together. When they finish, they notice a present in the closet with a note on it.

“Dear Willa and Blue, Enjoy roleplaying” Is what the note says. They then open it up to see a series of whips, costumes, gags, 16 pairs of sweat bands, masks, A box of fresh condoms, Hoof straps and a note saying “And have fun doing it sexually ~ Amanda Lovewind and Bradly Cool.”

“Why would we need these whips, I wouldn’t want to hurt you.” Asks Blue.

“They are just trying to be nice, but we don’t need those” Answers Willa as she throws the whips out a window only leaving one secretly.

“Hurry hide them, someone is coming upstairs, and I think it is Zach.” Implies Blue as hoof-steps could be heard. They both hide the box then open the door to see Zach.

“Hey, I see how my room is okay so I think I will trust you to sleep in here again.” Says Zach examining the room.

“What’s up Zach, you seem like you have a plan.” Asks Blue.

“Remix and Hunter are going somewhere, wanna follow.” Asks Zach.

“Yeah sure” Answers Blue as he gets interrupted by Willa Who starts to kiss him every time he tries to speak.

“Whoa, since when would you let him kiss you Willa” Asks Zach in a few seconds after he realizes what she is doing.

“Since last night, when he became my coltfriend” Answers Willa.

“This is shocking and are you guys coming.” Asks Zach.

“I don’t know I kind of need her approval if I want to go” Says Blue asking Willa.

“I think we can go.” Answers Willa.

“If you three are going then I am going to, Hunter Alone is one thing but with a filly going to show her something, then that spells trouble.” Says Vanity Light as she randomly comes upstairs.

“We are going to, Me, Hunter and Zach’s Father; I know by Zach’s feather count by the way, we used to be all best friends now we need to stop this madness from his drinking.” Says Bradly as both he and Amanda come out of the room.

“Fine and how does Everypony know that Vanity Light is my mother?” Asks Zach.

“Count your wing feathers” Answers the three Adult Ponies.

Meanwhile with Hunter and Remix,

“Are we there yet” Asks Remix.

“We are almost at the center of the maze, which is a good thing” Answers Hunter.

“What are you two even doing here” Asks Vanity Light as she and the others appear from a flash teleport.

“I am just showing her who Discord is” Answers Hunter.

“He is not lying I asked to see him personally.” Defends Remix.

“See now let us continue” Says Hunter as he turns Grey.

“You ok” Asks Remix.

“Yes just a little sober but ok” Answers Hunter as Everypony reaches the center Where a statue Of Discord is located at.

“Zach, quit poking me” Says Blue in an annoyed way as the alicorn starts poking him with his Hoof repeatedly.

“Stop now” Demands Blue as the "Alicorn" continues doing it.

“That’s it” Says Blue as he starts Fighting with Zach. As the fighting starts Hunter starts Drinking, and Vanity Light starts yelling at the two, eventually joining in and making Remix and Willa try to break them up to join the fight in the process.

“Ah, Chaos it is beautiful isn’t it Discord.” Mutters Hunter as the Statue regains the original colors of Discord.

“Yeah it is Beautiful sometimes” Answers Discord shocking Hunter from his state. When they heard Hunter Jump they all stop with Willa on top of Zach Holding a bottle above him and blue on top of Remix about to kick her while Vanity Light is trying to move them away from each other.

“Hello Everypony, I am Discord” Says Discord introducing himself.

To be continued……..

Episode 7

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

On the way to the maze,

“I think I could use a break from walking” Complains Zach.

“Why don’t you fly” Asks Willa.

“I have wings” Notices Zach.

“You are clueless” Says Blue being carried by Willa.

“How are you so light” Asks Willa.

“A change in atmosphere” Answers Blue.

“What …that doesn’t answer my question.” Says Willa.

“To me it does” Says Blue.

“Where is Hunter” Asks Zach.

“I don’t know, maybe he is right at the start, in any case we should hurry” Says Blue. They make it to the maze entrance, to their surprise, Hunter and Remix were waiting.

“Why didn’t you use your magic, we have waited forever.” Asks Hunter.

“Stupid stupid stupid” Says Blue and Zach hitting their head on the ground, which is now made of Bubble gum.

“And the chaos starts, I thought the chaos would start later” Says Hunter watching things go out of sense. They enter the maze and find that they went into a random castle entrance.

“This makes no sense.” Says Blue.

“Nothing makes sense anymore, now that he is back.” Says Hunter. They all turn to see Princess Celestia and Luna chained up near doghouses, and muzzled like dogs.

“What the rut, is going on” Asks Zach being hoof-slapped by Hunter.

“Don’t say that kind of sentence” Commands Hunter.

“Sorry.” Says Zach. They enter a room with the rest chained up (Bradly, Vanity, Amanda, and Thomas) in certain objects (Vanity in a pony straight jacket, Bradly Upside down denying that he is in this position, Thomas in a cell and chained up (evil)Escaping, and Amanda on a sled going through portals down a hill) and the mane 6 stonified.

“What the buck I happening to the world” Asks Blue also getting hoof-slapped by Hunter.

“Don’t say that” Says Hunter.

“Hello, how do you like Canterlot” Asks Discord in a throne.

“This place is overrated” Answers Zach.

“Can I borrow those for a moment” Asks Hunter referring to the others.

“Attract them in your own ways; I have some decorating to do” Answers Discord.

“Alright, Vanity, hey Vanity, Want a cookie” Asks Hunter to Vanity, treating her like a dog.

“M-m-mouth… Robot…. Banker” stutters Vanity coming closer to the cookie.

“Stay, Hey Amanda Lovewind, bet you can’t backflip out of that sled with a double cartwheel wing spin and 360 rotation, with a double sonic boom.” Bets Hunter.

“Pony please… is that even a challenge” Challenges Amanda Back.

“… All in reverse” Adds Hunter.

“Now you are talking” Accepts Amanda. The pony then does a 360 rotation, double cartwheel wing spin, with a backflip, still on the sled.

“Bet you can’t stay and shut your trap for 80 extreme seconds” Challenges Hunter.

“Oh yeah” Accepts Amanda Shutting up.

“Bradly, you really don’t want to come here” Says Hunter.

“Yes I do” Lies Bradly. “You also don’t want to stay.

“Yes, I do” Lies Bradly again.

“Thomas, Try the lock-pick in your mane, use your teeth” Says Hunter giving the stallion a tip.

“Mph mph……. Thanks” Thanks Thomas.

“My evil plan…. Is to have you come over here” Commands Hunter. They are all surrounding Hunter in a curious way.

“Bradly, you are great at construction, and you don’t want to build a device to hold you all down that I can use at once” Says Hunter.

“Yes I do, and I am terrible at building” Denies the Stallion. He then builds a device to cover all the ponies and stallions at once, with locks too. Hunter covers them all with the device and nails it down, stopping all escape.

“No…. let the mouse king go to his loyal subjects, the rocks of man land” Begs Vanity making no sense.

“What are you doing” Asks Discord.

“You are usually drinking at the moment” Adds Discord.

“Just a project” Answers Hunter.

“First the lunatic” Says Hunter. He then walks over to Vanity and starts using his magic, the horn starts glowing and a whole white beam (of purity and remembrance) pulsates out of the aura that is made from the horn. Hunter’s eyes flash white, so does Vanity’s. They both fall unconscious.

“What the hay” says Blue. For a whole second Blue, Zach, Willa and Remix watch as the two start to awaken.

“Where am I” Asks Vanity.

“Sis” Exclaims Blue.

“Oh my that really sucked, I felt so…… different” Complains Vanity.

“Next up, the Corrupted one” Says Hunter.

“What is that stallion doing” asks Discord to himself. Hunter then repeats the same process, only this time him and Thomas Fly to the wall then go unconscious. They both wake up.

“Daddy” Exclaims Zach as he runs toward Thomas (his father).

“Hi honey, let us never go into a maze again” Says Vanity to Thomas.

“Alright” Promises Thomas.

“What the Buck” says Discord to himself.

“Next up the hardcore mode” Says Hunter fixing his glasses. He then repeats the process, only this time a huge beam exerts from his horn, and Hunter explodes to the roof, and only knocking him unconscious. He lands on top of Amanda, who is wide awake, but cannot hear for 2 seconds.

“Oh, Hunter, that didn’t hurt did it, were you gentle, please tell me you were gentle” Asks Amanda. The stallion wakes up once more.

“Mommy” Exclaims Willa.

“Next the denied one” Says Hunter.

“This will be very easy” Says Hunter.

“No it will be hard” Lies Bradly. Hunter repeats the process, only both of them stay awake and a small beam forms.

“I told you so” Claims Hunter.

“And you are oh so right” Says Bradly accepting this.

“What the rut, I know what you did you traitor” Claims Discord.

“Yes, and I will defeat you, only this time stone will not be your prison, the underworld will” Says Hunter.

“You cannot kill a god” Claims Discord.

“You have a heart that makes you killable, my daughter taught me that” Says Hunter looking to Remix. She starts Welling up with tears. She gallops Up to him and hugs him.

“I bucking love you” Says Remix hugging her stepfather.

“I love you too” Says Hunter.

“Blah, Blah, Blah, You think you will win, so woo hoo happy ending….not, you’re in my world now” Reminds Discord.

“I don’t care, I will defeat you, you have caused too much anarchy, and I have to kill you.” Says Hunter.

“Oh right, then how about I make you so you are just a puny pony” Says Discord as he grows increasingly and the room also grows and changes into something bigger.

“Welcome to my kitchen, I hope you enjoy being cut up and killed” Says Discord.

“Son of a Changeling” Says Thomas.

“How much profanity is in the series” Asks Remix.

“Just read the God-damned script” Says the writer. Discord pulls a knife out of a knife holder.

“Now who’s first” Ask Discord.

“Please don’t be me, please don’t be me” Begs Zach.

“Traitor’s first” Says Discord referring to Hunter.

“Oh no even worse” Says Zach as Hunter is pulled magically to the cutting board.

“Think you have a good shot” Asks Hunter as Discord lifts the knife.

“Pretty sure, and if I miss I guess I will take the next best candidate” Answers Discord swinging the knife. Hunter teleports before the knife hits him.

“Miss” Says Hunter who is now on the dishwasher.

“Next candidate, Zach please step up, and Vanity and Thomas, please stand down.” Says Discord pulling Zach to the board and holding Vanity and Thomas (And Bradly and Amanda, and the others but Hunter) Down.

“Oh no” Says Hunter.

“Uhh auhh” Whimpers Zach in awe.

“Zach” Exclaims Everypony else.

“Celestia, Damnit I thought we taught you when to dodge” Screams Hunter galloping towards Zach as Discord swings the blade. Hunter leaps and pushes Zach out of the way, losing his right front hoof and both back hooves (and his legs) to the dicing force of the blade.

“Augh, Damnit” Exclaims Hunter in pain.

“Hunter, oh you damned Monster” Yells Remix.

“Shut up brat, it is your turn” Says Discord starting to pull her towards the bloody cutting board.

“Stop…. You damned…..draconequus, I will …… kill…. You …..You damned……beast…..” Says Hunter coughing blood at each pause.

“Oh how cute, a last speech, do continue on” Says Discord.

“You are …..Insane you damned beast…… and ….this is a damned promise for what I will say” Says Hunter. Hunters Coat starts to form scales on a few areas and the patches increasingly grow. His mane forms into scaled spikes and his horn joins them, he also forms wings of scale. Hunter’s wounds stop bleeding and get covered in scales. His only hoof starts developing dragon like claws/ fingers on them and his joints change.

“And this is one promise I will keep…. I will kill you…..” Continues Hunter as he edges his way to the edge of the counter while his limbs regenerate and how his tail hardens into a scaled tail.

“And I won’t stop…” Says Hunter as he gets to the edge.

“What, until you fall and die, well good bye” Stops Discord as he flicks the Stallion gently off the edge.

“No, noooo don’t” Exclaims Remix being held back by the others.

“It is alright” Says Bradly.

“He was the closest thing to a father figure that I have ever had” Cries Remix, now being held by Zach.

“I know, he is my technical Uncle so to speak” Says Zach to calm Remix.

“Now that he is dead, I see no point in needing you idiots, do I will kill you” Says Discord.

“Oh and Keep these here I don’t need them” Says Discord as he places the mane 6 six (Who are in statue form) in the middle of the crowd.

“I am going to enjoy this” Says Discord as he swings his Knife down for a final kill. As the swing gets close, it is caught by a colossal scaled hand.

“No, until I rip your heart out” Says a colossal Dragon/ Humanoid figure.

“Who the hay are you” Asks Discord

“Someone Who will keep this promise” Answers the Dragon/ Humanoid figure.

“I know who that is” Says Remix.

“Who” Asks Blue and Willa and Zach in unison.

“It’s Hunter” Answers Remix.

To be continued…………….

Episode 8

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

“Impossible” Denies Zach.

“Remember when he fell off, he was also bleeding and changing in some way, none of us noticed he was growing in size” Explains Remix.

“He is Huge” Says Blue.

“Yeah, like your stallionhood in Willa’s….” Says Zach.

“Hey why is Everypony so freaked out, it is only sex, it is not like I gave the colt a blow-job, I would have if you didn’t discover us” Yells Willa.

“Wait a minute, you were going to give me a blow-job” Asks Blue.

“Yeah it’s not like I wouldn’t I mean kindness is much, but I love you and I feel that sometimes a little extra kindness is needed” Answers Willa.

“Would you consider doing it now” Asks Blue.

“Now, in the situation we are in” Asks Willa.

“Oh my Celestia, Blue how could you ask a question like that” Asks Zach.

“Yes, if you can find us an alone spot” Answers Willa.

“Oh my Celestia” Says Remix.

“Cover your ears Remix” warns Zach.

“Wait you did what now” Asks Vanity.

“When would this happen” asks Thomas.

“I know you liked her, but this is too far brother” Says Vanity.

“We also know about this, we tried not to tell you two”. Says Amanda.

“Wait what, how could you not tell us” Asks Thomas.

“He is your bro and we didn’t want to get him in trouble with your parents” Answers Bradly.

“They are dead” Says Vanity.

“We never knew that” Says Amanda.

“They died by one, my mother during the birth of my brother and my son Zach and my father by suicide” says Vanity.

“How about behind the microwave” asks Blue.

“Oh my Celestia” Says Zach.

“Ew, Ewww ewwwwwwwwww” says Remix.

“Remix cover your ears” Yells Zach.

“Nopony is giving Anypony a Blow-job” Says Vanity.

“Not without protection” adds Amanda.

“Now you are telling me how to command my own brother” Questions Vanity.

“You can’t tell my daughter what not to do” Says Amanda.

“I am not afraid to kick a pregnant bitch’s flank” says Vanity.

“You can’t talk to my wife that way” says Bradly.

“Neither you to mine” says Thomas.

”Anytime anywhere, Bitch” challenges Amanda. A loud scream is heard. And they all turn to see the colossal Dragon Hunter with a knife in his arm.

“Want to stop arguing, you are making him stronger with more chaos” says Hunter. He then grabs onto Discord’s lion arm and absorbs the knife into his claws, forging them into large metal claws. He chops off Discord’s arm with an easy swipe.

“Sorry but this Bitch started it” Says Vanity. “How dare you call me a bitch” says Amanda hoof hitting Vanity. Discord’s arm regenerates.

“Stop, you are both best friends, but Amanda is right, you have no control over her kid and your brother should have more freedom, and if you dare get cocky I swear to Celestia that I will kill you two myself.” Says Hunter.

“He is right, I have no control over your daughter or my brother, but how could he just….” Says Vanity.

“Don’t you dare” warns Hunter.

“Alright, just saying” Finishes Vanity.

“Where did they go” Asks Zach referring to Blue and Willa. Hunter kicks Discord back.

“Damned pony dragon, you are a traitor, and you think I am that easily defeated, I am over a 1,000,000 times stronger than you” says Discord.

“So says your arm” Remarks Hunter with a smirk.

“I am holding back my true power” says Discord forcing his muscle mass to increase that larger than Hunter’s. He is now 5 meters taller.

“Damn this reminds me of a TV show or an anime” Says Hunter backing up.

“You think you can be better than me, I am the alpha, the Omega and Beta, and maybe even the master of Chaos, a force stronger than magic” Says Discord.

“But I will defeat you” Says Hunter.

“With what, the elements of harmony frozen over there” asks Discord.

“Great idea” Says Hunter.

“That was a rhetorical question” Says Discord. Discord grabs Hunter’s arm and breaks It.

“Damn” Exclaims Hunter in pain. Discord kicks him in the ribs.

“Aaaaaagh” Screams Hunter. Discord turns him around and hits him in the spine repeatedly.

“Hunter, why are you hitting yourself, why are you hitting yourself, why are you hitting yourself” Asks Discord sarcastically.

“Aaaaagh, you’re the one that is hitting me you intellectual fool” Screams Hunter.

“For that, I’m going to drown you like a sack of puppies” Says Discord turning on the sink.

“Why would you drown puppies” Asks Remix.

“Because they are stupid and cute” Answers Discord putting Hunter’s head into the water and holding it in there.

“Someone has to help him” says Vanity. A loud scream can be heard. Zach cut off his hoof. They all turn to face him.

“Zach, son what have you done to yourself” Asks Vanity in Shock.

“I… have …. To ….help” Answers Zach as his muscles start over growing and his coat turns to scales. He starts limping towards the edge over the counter and jumps off.

“Have anything adorable to say before you drown” asks Discord. A gurgle comes from the sink where Hunter’s head is.

“Adorable” says Discord. A giant, muscular Humanoid Dragon figure that is larger than Hunter and Discord by 15-20 meters (he is also more muscular and can’t speak) appears where Zach jumped. The beast charges at Discord and hits the damned draconequus out of the way and pulls the now severely Damaged Hunter out onto the floor to recover. He then runs into Discord again and rips his horns off.

“Zach” says Hunter. The beast nods.

“Damn you're big” Says Hunter.

“I hate the pecking order cries Discord regrowing his horns. The beast kicks Discord onto his back and breaks it to keep him down. Zach then leans down to Hunter’s level and shoves his claws into him after he breaks them. Hunter then absorbs His muscle mass and absorbs Zach’s form until he now has Zach’s size and former muscle mass. The Alicorn shrinks down to his former size and flies back to the others. Hunter is now fully healed. Discord gets up and wipes the blood off his nose.

“I will not be defeated at half power” says Discord now reaching Hunter’s size and muscle mass. Hunter roars and Discord says “let the games begin”.

“It isn’t enough, if he is at full power than I did nothing to him” says Zach.

“We need to defeat Discord, Hunter needs Help” says Remix.

“But how” asks Zach.

“Hey guys were back, what did we miss” Says Blue with Willa licking cum off her mouth.

“Seriously, what the hay” Says Remix.

“What” asks Blue.

“Never mind, we need to help Hunter, but how” asks Zach.

“Why don’t we wake up the Elements of Harmony” says Blue.

“Good idea, but how” asks Zach.

“Princess Twilight Sparkle is the element of magic so reviving her makes it easy we need magic that is strong” says Blue.

“How do you know that” asks Remix.

“Everyone has heard of Princess Twilight Sparkle, she is awesome” says Willa.

“Like the Blow-job” Says Blue.

“I would do it again in a heartbeat” Giggles Willa.

“You ponies are foul” says Zach.

“Perfect right” says Remix.

“Now to the important topic” Says Zach flashing his horn on Twilight Sparkle. The stonified pony starts regaining color and then starts to move.

“Who what where why when how” Asks Twilight.

“No time to explain you need to revive your friends and help Hunter Sparks kill Discord” says Blue.

“You mean the stallion that once beat me in magic making but can’t do anything to me now , whom I can beat and he is a dragon colossus” Asks Twilight.

“Yes now do what he said” demands Willa. Twilight Sparkle slowly starts to revive the rest of the mane 6.

“It’s a god damned fantasy so don’t judge me” Says the creator.

“You cannot defeat me Hunter Sparks, you don’t have enough power to do so” says Discord.

“Even if that is true you will still die and I will defeat you” says Hunter in a very deep voice.

“So you can talk” says Discord as he kicks Hunter while missing.

“How bout I rip you tongue out, besides I am tired of your damn mouth” asks Hunter putting his claws in Discord’s mouth. He rips out Discord’s tongue and it just regrows.

“Cocky one aren’t you, at least you are a man of half of your word you mean” Says Discord.

“Aww it is cute that you are finally warming up to me” say Hunter Breathing fire all over Discord, burning him.

“Hunter” Yells Zach.

“What, can’t you see that I am busy” says Hunter getting punched.

“We have a way to even this out” Says Blue.

“What is it” asks Hunter.

“Rip his horn off and inject it into your bloodstream then put your new claw anywhere you want and the elements of Harmony will back you up” Says Twilight Sparkle.

“Please tell me that he is a nice dragon” says Fluttershy.

“He is now just help him” says Blue.

“Alright, girls you know what to do” says Twilight Sparkle.

“And we will do it in 10 seconds flat” says Rainbow Dash preparing herself. Hunter rips off Discord’s crystal horn and injects it into his arm and it grows into his claws as the mane six rise up and let their powers start flowing through the air into Hunter’s Body and into his claws. When Hunter feels this new power, her rams his new claws straight into Discord. His claws went straight through Discord and Hunter is holding Discord’s Heart. The world around everyone shrinks down and changes back into Canterlot with Hunter and Discord changing back to normal with Hunter still holding the heart but changing back into his stallion self.

Discord stands there in shock, just looking at Hunter.

“What’s wrong Discord, feeling too “heartless” even to care about your own death” Says Hunter. Hunter Crushes Discord heart and his claws turn back into hooves. He then Bucks the Empty body out the colored glass with Discord on it. As the body lands onto equestrian soil, it explodes. The mane 6 are gone.

“Whoa Hunter, what the buck” says Bradly.

“Yeah, you should have said, “Oh Discord, have a heart” says Blue.

“I was even thinking that too” says Hunter brushing off the last of the scales that didn’t disappear.

“Now what” asks Zach.

“We leave” Answers Hunter.

“But not without your job” says Princess Celestia.

“Oh, Princess, I don’t know what to say, but I am fired, remember that” says Hunter.

“You were never fired, your manager showed up drunk one morning and decided to fire everybody, you didn’t know because you left to early, so I gave you a temporary retirement” Says Princess Celestia.

“So I still am a teacher” asks Hunter.

“One of my best” says Princess Celestia.

“But wouldn’t that require me to move” asks Hunter.

“No you can stay at your current location, only you will have to come in earlier my fair student, and please do not forget to write letters” Answers Princess Celestia.

“You have my word” Promises Hunter.

“What about us.” Asks Remix, Zach, Willa and Blue.

“You can write to me too” says Princess Celestia.

“Huzzah” yells the four.

“And Thomas, I think it is swell that you are back in our ranks, and for the next week you can stay with your family for a while” says Princess Celestia.

“Ma’am yes Ma’am” says Thomas.

“Now dismissed” says Princess Celestia. Hunter teleports everyone home.

“It feels good to be back” says Hunter.

TO be continued………..

Episode 9

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

Nine months after the Discord incident,

“What time is it” Asks Blue to Remix.

“I don’t know I just got here.” answers Remix.

“It does bother me on how long this is taking” Says Zach.

“Where were you the last 2 hours” asks Blue enraged.

“I was picking out a tie, I mean it is complicated how many there were” Answers Zach.

“Well just because we are in a mall doesn’t mean we should get lost in it” says Blue.

“How long has Willa been in there” asks Remix.

“Three damn hours” says Blue.

“Why don’t you check in on her” asks Zach.

“I’m a lover, but not a pervert Zach” answers Blue.

“We don’t normally wear clothes dude” says Zach.

“What if she is up on her two lower legs what will I do then dumbass” Asks Blue.

“Dude you aren’t a pervert if she is only trying on a dress” Says Remix.

“Yes, but I love her and I respect her…” says Blue being interrupted.

“It’s alright Blue, you can check up on me” says Willa calling on Blue.

“Fine I will be right there” says Blue. He walks in through the door.

“Blue I can’t decide at all, and I don’t know why” says Willa.

“Did you try taking off the glasses” Asks Blue.

“But…. How will I see myself” asks Willa. “Use these” says Blue holding up a case of contacts.

“Blue, I do not think those will work for me, those are your brand” says Willa.

“Read the box, it says “Any purpose magical eye adapting contacts” they work for Anypony” says Blue.

“Alright, but I never knew you use contacts, I’ve never even seen you in glasses” Says Willa.

“Alright I will try on your glasses while you put on contacts” Says Blue taking out his contacts.

“It’s a deal, cutie” says Willa.

“Deal, My precious rose, which reminds me, are you hungry you look like you could use a rose” Asks Blue as he tries on the glasses.

“I am hungry, but this is more important” says Willa as she puts in the contacts. They both look at each other.

“How do you feel with them on” asks Willa.

“Not different at all I can see just fine” Answers Blue.

“You mean we have the same type of eyes” asks Willa.

“I guess you could say that is another thing we have in common” Answers Blue.

“One more thing to love you for” says Willa. He hugs her.

“Your coat is sooooo warm” says Willa.

“You can say that I am a burning candle” says Blue.

“I remember the last time we… you know” says Willa.

“I remember, but I want to appreciate you for who you are, so I decided to cut it down, remember” says Blue.

“C’mon, just one more thrill, just for now so I can feel satisfied” begs Willa.

“Maybe, just not now, I need to decide, like you do with an outfit, Hunter’s big celebration is soon and he wants all of us to see him be promoted to top of his branch as a teacher, it also time he graduated some of his students” Says Blue.

“Alright, I understand, but you kind of look sexy in my glasses, but you do need to take them off, I need to smash em’ tomorrow” says Willa.

“I said “maybe later” that doesn’t mean never today, come 9 o’ clock you will see” says Blue kissing Willa.

“Now here are your glasses, don’t break em’ yet just later maybe at 8:59 when we meet up” says Blue.

“Alright” says Willa.

“Now get dressed, I need you do be my date to this one” says Blue putting in his contacts.

“Ok I will find something” says Willa as Blue departs.

With Blue and the others,

“I’m back what did I miss” asks Blue.

“Remember that Idea you had….” Asks Zach.

“Yeah, why” asks Blue.

“I’m dating Remix” Answers Zach unexpectedly.

“And I am totally cool with it” says Remix.

“How, I only said you would look good in a photo together” Explains Blue.

“About that….. Here is a photo” says Zach showing one of 4 photos. It is a pic of Remix kissing his cheek and him blushing.

“What about the others” asks Blue. He shows the rest. After that kiss a photo of Remix looking away shyly while Zach is in shock, the next is Remix looking at him, only he is less shy and more questioning, then next is him and her kissing, with her tongue in his mouth.

“Have anymore” asks Blue.

“No” says Zach nervously.

“Yes” says Remix as he inches away. She shows him 4 more. One of him closing his eyes while enjoying the moment. The next is him on top of her while he is pulling her scare closer to him. The very next is him looking at her blushing. The last is where he looks as if he accepts this.

“I have more, only he blocked off the camera” says Remix.

“That Sly hound, by the way, were did he go” Asks Blue.

“Photo booth, he might be cleaning up the mess” answers Remix.

“How could you do that to him though” Asks Blue.

“I beg your pardon” asks Remix.

“Zach hasn’t been the best person with being outgoing, he is way too shy for a relationship like this he will avoid you until he can look straight, you shouldn’t have done that to him” Answers Blue.

“He is my coltfriend, and I will treat him the way I please, and I don’t think he will avoid me, I love the colt, and I would never do anything to harm him, I will love on him the way I please and I won’t stop until I do, I can work around this, just you see.” Says Remix Storming off to find Zach.

“That was anticlimactic” says Blue. “How do you like it” asks Willa in a new dress. The dress is as green as her bow and her eyes. The dress is curved to match her body like a suit without legs and suits her wonderfully.

“It looks………” says Blue beginning to drool.

“I like the opinion” says Willa.

“I love it, if only I had wings, I sometimes wish I wasn’t a unicorn” says Blue.

“Now it is unlucky to see the brides dress, groom” Teases Willa.

“Now time to buy it” says Blue walking up to the counter.

“99.76 bits” says the cashier.

“Aww, I only got 100 bits, can you keep the change” asks Blue.

“Sure” says the cashier. They both exit the clothing department with a bag.

“Did you know that Zach is dating Remix” Asks Blue.

“No, but I can expect it, Zach is such a sweet colt, and they have had 9 months to know each other, I think it is to say that they work out for each other” says Willa.

“Let’s cut now for later, I am excited for tonight” says Blue.

To be continued…………. Wait WTF BLUE ENDED THE EPISODE, WTF.

Episode 10

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

2 hours later,

“Blue, you are only 14 right” asks Willa.

“Yeah, why” asks Blue.

“How did you get 100 bits” asks Willa.

“I sold all of Hunter’s alcohol products for 1 bit each with Vanity, it was very easy because I found Berry Punch nearby, we split the profit, 200 bottles and 1 bit make a great profit when it is 1 bit by the bottle” answers Blue.

“How do you…” asks Willa.

“You don’t wanna know how I got her there at that moment” answers Blue.

“So, What about Remix and Zach” Asks Willa.

“They, had sex” answers Blue.

“Wow, I never knew how this would happen” says Willa.

“I never knew it either” says Blue.

“So who do you think was dominant” asks Willa.

“You don’t wanna know” answers Zach lying on the grass next to them out of nowhere.

“How the hay did you get here” asks Blue.

“I’m an Alicorn, I have magic, and I am hiding, she would never expect me to hide here” answers Zach.

“Hey Zach” says Remix out of nowhere. When she says this, Zach screams like a little Filly and gallops away.

“Where is he going” asks Willa.

“Playing hard to get is what he is doing, I bet you all five bits that he is in my bedroom under my bed” Bets Remix.

“You are on” Accepts Blue.

“I bet he is in Doctor Whooves Tardis” bets Willa.

Five minutes later,

Zach gallops by screaming like a filly,

Remix comes flying behind him.

“I was right” says Remix.

“He was under your bed” asks Willa.

“Yup, he was crying too, I don’t even know why he is so upset, this time when I approach him, I will knock him out” answers Remix.

“Very subtle” says Blue.

“Shut up, I need him as my date today at the celebration and I want him to be happy” says Remix.

Meanwhile with Zach,

“How does she keep finding me” Asks the dark blue colt to himself. He is in a dark alley.

“I try simple guessing, it isn’t math” answers Remix out of nowhere. She comes up from behind him and holds her hoof over his mouth, gagging him until he blacks out. He wakes up to her kissing him awake. They are in a new location.

“Sorry I saw you stop breathing for one moment and didn’t know if you were alive” says Remix.

“HELP SOMEPONY HELP IM BEING…….. MPH MPmmH MPMH MPHHHHH” Yells Zach as she puts her hoof over his mouth.

“Quiet down dude I ain’t trying to hurt you” says Remix trying to calm him down. She takes her hoof off his mouth when he calms down. She licks the saliva that was on her hoof from Zach’s mouth.

“What do you want from me” asks Zach.

“I want you my cuddly wuddly muffin” answers Remix.

“But why, you never shown me this before” asks Zach.

“When I met you, I did want to be your friend, but after a while thought I should trust you more, I learned more about you , you like the color orange by the way, you changed my hair style to look like Dj Pon3, I started to like you more than needed, then, that moment when I kissed you, it was not on purpose, I never wanted to do it, but I wanted more, you were so cute, and you got on top of me, now we are in this situation” Explains Remix.

“What is the purpose of me being here” asks Zach Nervously.

“I wanted to get some alone time with you” answers Remix.

“Oh no” says Zach.

“Why would you say that” asks Remix. “Because I know what you mean by that” answers Zach.

“You knew I wanted to ask you to Hunter’s celebration, because you weren’t going” asks Remix.

“Oh, that no, I thought you meant…” says Zach.

“Why would I think that, you hopped on me and I only enjoyed the ride” explains Remix.

“Oh” says Zach.

“But that would be a great idea if it weren’t for a problem” says Remix.

“What” asks Zach.

“I can’t seem to feel in the mood at the moment” answers Remix.

“Why am I tied down” asks Zach.

“So you don’t run” answers Remix.

“Oh” says Zach.

“So what about it” asks Remix.

“I …… would be happy to…..go…. with….you” answers Zach.

“Yes” says Remix cutting the rope. Zach gets up and sits down.

“Why didn’t you ask me after we did that” asks Zach.

“I didn’t want to ask, you seemed so nervous at first so I thought it should wait” says Remix disappointedly.

“When do I arrive” asks Zach.

“5:30, don’t you dare be late” says Remix running away with a smile.

“Sometimes I love that filly" says Zach.

“But we aren’t ready” adds Zach to Himself.

To be continued……………

Episode 11

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characterscharacters

“And… that is why I am going now” Explains Zach.

“So, my son has a date” says Vanity.

“Yeah, so I guess I will be attending” says Zach.

“Cute, the last time there was a party you didn’t attend was your own birthday party” says Vanity.

“I was too shy to attend, everyone at school just bows and ponies that know I am not royalty just laugh, I didn’t wanna risk it” Explains Zach.

“I think it is just cute that you have a date, I was once in love at 14, and here you are today” Explains Vanity.

“When was I born” asks Zach.

“When I was 18 years old, I’m 32 now” Answers Vanity.

“But, how do I confront her, she scares me” Asks Zach.

“What do you mean” asks Vanity.

“I’m not ready, mom” answers Zach.

“We need to talk, don’t we” asks Vanity.

5:20 p.m.,

“Oh no, Oh no, I’m gonna be late, I only have 10 minutes left” Exclaims Zach galloping towards Hunter’s tree.

“Zach, use your wings” Says Willa flying above him.

“Or your magic” says Willa.

“Oh, right I am an alicorn” Remembers Zach. He starts Flying up high.

“Only one way to get there in time” says Zach.

“Are you sure you should be doing a sonic boom” asks Willa.

“Positive” Answers Zach. He starts flying down.

“What about magic” asks Willa as he flies past her.

“A SONIC LIGHTBOOM” exclaims Zach as his horn flashes. When he breaks the sound barrier he disappears.

“Where did he go” asks Willa.

Meanwhile at Hunter’s tree,

“How does the red scarf look” Asks Remix.

“How about we try scarlet” asks Hunter. “No, orange-red, like my hair” Says Remix.

“Alright” Says Hunter pulling out the scarf. He puts the scarf on her.

“You look like your father….” Whispers Hunter.

“What” Asks Remix.

“Nothing, just recalling the past” Answers Hunter. They notice a flash of light.

“Somepony broke the sound barrier” exclaims Hunter.

“Whoa, sick” Says Remix. A knock at the door is heard.

“I’ll get it, it may be Willa because Blue is here” says Remix. She opens the door to see Zach panting.

“I made it” Gasps Zach. She kisses him.

“I am so happy that you are here” Says Remix no embracing him in her hooves.

“I finally caught up to you Zach” says Willa behind them.

“Oh, hey Willa, Blue is upstairs, he says he can’t tie it right” Says Remix.

“Thanks, I’ll help him” Says Willa. She walks upstairs.

“You’re early” Says Remix.

“So” Asks Zach.

“You are never early” Says Remix hugging him again.

“I had a reason to show up today” Says Zach.

“I love you” adds Zach.

“I love you too” says Remix.

“Aw, so cute” says Blue coming downstairs.

“Shut up” says Remix.

“So, how do you like my bow tie” Asks Zach.

“It is a dark red, like some of your hair, I positively love it” Answers Remix.

“I made sure that the collar is Dark Blue so it looks like the bow is hanging on nothing” Says Zach.

“You look Sexy in it” Says Remix.

“Sure I shouldn’t make any changes” Asks Zach.

“You look fine, now we have to go in 5 minutes” Answers Remix.

“Lets show up early, for effect” Says Hunter teleporting them to a carriage.

“How can you” asks Zach.

“I make more money than I did now; you know a lot of ponies were invited” Answers Hunter as he interrupts Zach.

At Canterlot,

“Oh my, that place is beautiful Blue” Exclaims Willa.

“Needs to be about 20% cooler” Comments Blue.

Blue gets a mare slap from Willa.

“Ow, hey” Says Blue.

“I told you to be on your best behavior, And to help me find a closet or royal bedroom where we won’t get caught having sex.” Whispers Willa.

“What was that last part” asks Remix.

“Nothing” answers Willa.

“I know you said something about sex spots, but I have plans to do “it” here too with Zach, so don’t be embarrassed by it” Whispers Remix.

“What do you think they are whispering about” asks Blue.

“The castle of Canterlot maybe” asks Zach.

“We will never know” Answers Blue.

In the ball room 5: 30 pm,

“Alright, I would like to thank everyone for coming, Such as Green Bell, Lutarqit and Adrianna Yglesias, I never expected you to come at all really, but you are my friends so I invited you and here you are” Starts Hunter on a megaphone.

“I would also like to thank my friends for coming, the ones I have known for years, Bradly, Amanda, Vanity and their kids, Amanda also has a new kid so everyone be quiet or it will cry, and I would also like to know the blonde-maned, grey guy’s name” Continues Hunter.

“His name is Mavick, he isn’t much now, in fact he is very small and for some reason very durable, he is a runt, but he has grown these last week’s so you have never known he is a runt” Explains Amanda in a megaphone.

“Mavick, meet the little colt, he will bat at your hooves it is adorable, but he also “bites” on your hooves too, without leaving marks, he thinks it is a type of food, curious ain’t he” Asks Hunter with the megaphone.

“Awwwww” Says the crowd.

“But he is not why we are here for, he is wide awake with ear plugs, and he is adorable, but we are here because we are such good friends with me and I have to announce that we are here to hear about my new promotion, I am now head teacher of magic making, and I am proud of I and Celestia is here about this, but not here to speak, just here to observe, and I would also like to welcome, for the first time, Princess Luna” Announces Hunter pointing to Luna. She waves.

“Hey, we see you back there” says Hunter mockingly.

“Now I am now head of the School teacher wise in Magic making, fillies and colts seek originality, Right Marco, my star pupil” Says Hunter pointing in the crowd. He nods.

“I strive to teach Unicorns how to use magic to make magic, we use elements that we know to conjure magical spells that are making magic limitless, with these wise users I will teach my best and own a higher pride, love Everypony and goodnight, and don’t forget to have fun, get drunk or something or even get taken by Slender Mane, you will like where he takes you mares, don’t worry you’ll be back soon, right Slendy My pal” Asks Hunter pointing to Slender Mane. Slender Mane nods.

“Night Everypony” says Hunter Stepping down. He walks up to Remix.

“Remix, do you know Green Bell” Asks Hunter taking her to her.

“She is one of my friends for a while….” Says Hunter as he starts explaining it.

“Boring” says Remix.

“How dare you, she is an artist and a friend, and I will remain loyal to my friend at all times” Says Hunter defending his Friend.

“Next friend please” says Remix. Hunter takes her to Lutarqit.

“This is Lutarqit, a wolf, she is a…” Says Hunter explaining her.

“Boring, but cool, a wolf in Canterlot, where are the Guards” asks Remix.

“I ate them” Answers Lutarqit sarcastically.

“On their lunch break and guarding the Princess” Answers Hunter seriously.

“Next friend please, not boring either” asks Remix.

“Fine, but can I ever explain them” asks Hunter. They walk up to Adrianna Yglesias.

“This is Age, my best friend from school, we are always friends” Explains Hunter.

“Yo dude, how’s it hanging” Asks Age.

“Cool, do you like Dubstep” Asks Remix.

“Dubstep, Anime, gaming, writing, yeah I do a lot of that” Explains Age.

“Cool, I have to go to Zach now, it is eight o’ Clock and time for what we planned” Asks and explains Remix.

“Fine, I will hang out here, but remember, we leave at 9: 00 p.m.” Answers Hunter.

“I remember” says Remix running off.

“You got yourself there a nice filly” says Age.

“Too bad she isn’t mine” says Hunter to himself.

Meanwhile at 7:59,

“I made it” says Blue.

“Then what are we waiting for, let’s do this” says Willa as Blue gets on top of her.

Meanwhile with Zach and Remix 1 minute later,

“Alright Zach, did you find a closet” asks Remix.

“No but I found the Guards bedroom” Answers Zach.

“Alright then, round 1 alone” says Remix as she gets on top of Him.

“Oh my” Says Zach shyly as he reacts to this.

8:21 with Blue and Willa,

“Oh that felt so good” Whispers Willa as she rubs her face against his chest sweating.

8:21 with Zach and Remix,

“Oh that felt so…” Starts Remix as she looks at Zach’s face. It looks like he is depressed with regrets.

“D-did I d-do something wrong” asks Remix.

“No, you did everything right, it’s just that…” Answers Zach.

“Just what, you didn’t enjoy it, I can fix that you know” Asks Remix.

“No I loved every part of that; don’t take it the wrong way but…. I…” Answers Zach.

“What” Asks Remix.

“I-i-i….. I don’t want to be with you, like this” Answers Zach hesitantly.

“Y-you mean y-you don’t” Asks Remix starting to cry.

“Don’t do this, please don’t cry I just” starts Zach.

“No, G-get away from me” says Remix crying and galloping away. He just sits there and says “I have to clear this up with her”.

With Hunter at 8:42,

“And then we found Slendy’s Son and Slendy “Took” me away and then I woke up in a hospital and Everypony was alive again and I had a Note that explained how they don’t remember this incident because the friendly guy made them forget it” Says Hunter Ending a story to Adrianna. He sees Remix running toward him crying.

“Remix, I thought you were with Zach” asks Hunter.

“Please, take me home, and please let me explain what happened” begs Remix Crying. “Alright” Says Hunter.

With Blue and Willa out in the party Slow Dancing with Willa, Zach sees them and gallops up.

“Have you seen Remix” asks Zach.

“Yeah, they left 3 minutes ago” says Blue. Zach teleports to Hunter’s Tree. He knocks on the door. Hunter opens the door.

“Oh, what do you want” Asks Hunter almost enraged at the sight of Zach.

“I came to see your daughter” Explains Zach.

“No deal, and I noticed how you “Came” inside her, you are only lucky that I don’t ask Slendy to get you after what you did to her and with her” says Hunter.

“Sorry about that Second part, but I need to talk to her” begs Zach.

“Like I said, No deal and she doesn’t want to see you at the moment” Answers Hunter.

“Please, I have to apologize for what I did” begs Zach.

“No, I don’t care how you feel now, it is what you felt then that bothers me, and now if you think you can hurt that Amazing filly for any more than what she is…..”Answers Hunter.

“Look, I know how she is, I know I hurt her, and I know I broke her heart, but I have to fix this, I beg of you, let me in there, give me at least 10 minutes with her” Begs Zach.

“Alright, but you have 5 minutes to do so, and if I don’t see forgiveness, then you will stay out of my tree and away from her, do I make myself clear” Asks Hunter.

“Crystal” Answers Zach. He walks into Hunter’s Tree and then Downstairs. He sees Remix crying on her bed and her glasses smashed on the floor.

“Remix, I came here to…” Starts Zach. At the sound of this she throws a pillow at him.

“Go away…. I don’t wanna hear your voice anymore” Says Remix.

“Look, I’m sorry for what I did to you” Starts Zach.

“Go away…. You made your point already, you don’t love me” Says Remix crying.

“I never said that” says Zach coming closer to her.

“D-do you mean you still…” Asks Remix Hopefully. He kisses her, she puts her tongue into his mouth and he accepts it by doing the same.

“I never stopped” Says Zach nuzzling her.

“Then, why did you break up with me” asks Remix.

“I’m not ready, I love you, so very much, but I am not ready for a relationship with you” Answers Zach.

“So you really do love me” asks Remix. “I will always Love you” Answers Zach.

“But, why can’t we be together, why aren’t you ready” asks Remix.

“Because we only met a few months ago and I barely know you as a friend, I don’t even know your favorite color, I love you I do, I would even consider a foal, but not now, I am too young for this” Answers Zach.

“I understand, I rushed you too quickly and I should have not, we should have waited, but you did look cute in that tie, I should have waited” Says Remix.

“I know that it is a nice bow tie, and that scarf suits you too well, and I do love you, but I can’t, not yet, not while I just met you, and I will just leave, this feels too awkward” Says Zach as he gets up and starts exiting.

“Wait Zach” Says Remix stopping him.

“What is it” Asks Zach.

“Can you ride me just one more night” Asks Remix.

“I don’t see a reason to…” answers Zach Blushing.

“Please, just one more time will calm me” Begs Remix.

“Alright, One more Thrill” Answers Zach.

“But you are gonna need these” Says Hunter throwing a box of condoms downstairs at Zach.

“Alright sir” Says Zach.

9:59 p.m.,

“Oh, I loved that, so very much” Says Remix Cuddling Zach.

“I know you did, and I will really miss that” says Zach.

“I love how warm you are right now” Says Remix.

“Hey I am going to do something and make you forget it now” Warns Zach.

“Alright what” Asks Remix. He (French) kisses her. She just enjoys this. He pulls his mouth away and starts his horn up.

“Wait please Zach, I want to remember this” Begs Remix.

“You will just not for today, maybe when I am ready will I show you this memory and then pull this relationship back together” Explains Zach.

“Alright, but just that kiss, I want to remember this for a while” Says Remix.

“Don’t worry, that is all that I am removing” Says Zach. His Horn flashes and she forgets the kiss.

“Good night Remix” Says Zach.

“I will miss you” Says Remix.

“I will too, more than you think” Says Zach as he walks out and goes upstairs to his room, because he remembers that he still live there.

To be continued…….

Episode 12

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

The next morning,

Zach wakes up and Yawns.

“What a good dream, strange it was about kites, I don’t like them much” Says Zach to himself.

“I wonder what is going on downstairs” says Zach.

Downstairs,

“So, you two are no longer a couple, I thought you said he was just perfect for you” Asks Blue.

“He was, only he isn’t ready, I don’t blame him, we couldn’t have been together now, we only met about nine months ago” Answers Remix.

“You know Vanity still lives here right” Asks Willa.

“Yeah I know that” Answers Remix.

“So, how did he feel, you know…. On the inside” ask Blue. She Blushes and Smiles.

“His warmth felt so good, he was like a teddy bear when we cuddled, I loved it so much” Answers Remix imagining it in her head.

“I wanna know how it felt for Zach, I will ask later” says Blue.

“He may say different than I did, but if he says something good about it, tell me and I will, do some thinking” Says Remix.

“I didn’t know your eyes are orange” Says Willa.

“They are like a fiery orange right” Asks Remix.

“Yeah, like Blue’s hair, weird” Answers Willa.

“I know, they match his hair, only he is very different from me, and tell me, how did he feel inside you” asks Remix. Now Willa Blushes.

“He was like a warm fire, like his hair, and he is so strong, I loved his muscles up against me, he is so furry and I love his cute little ears” Answers Willa Smiling.

“What about you Blue, how do you feel inside her” Asks Remix.

“I feel like I can hold her forever, like I am a guardian, I feel so happy, I made the right choice, she is my little cupcake, and I am her Blue Candle” Answers Blue.

“But, your name is Blue Candle” Says Remix.

“I know” Says Blue.

“Cute, Zach would never say that, I wish he was ready, but I can’t rush him, I will wait as long as he needs, and I will wait forever” Says Remix.

“Here he comes” says Blue.

“Hey how is it going…..hey Remix” says Zach Blushing.

“Hey” Says Remix Blushing.

“I am gonna go outside for a minute” Says Zach.

“I have a question for you” Says Blue as they come outside.

“Be back in a minute” Says Willa following Blue.

“So how did she feel when you were inside her” Asks Blue.

“I-i-I don’t know how to answer that” says Zach.

“Just tell us” says Willa.

“It was like …. She was so warm, she cuddled me like a teddy bear, and it felt so right” Answers Zach.

“Hold on for a second” says Willa going inside to tell Remix.

“So what do you plan on doing later nephew” Asks Blue.

“I am going to school later” answers Zach.

“Oh hay I forgot” Says Blue.

“How could you forget, 7 more days of school until summer” asks Zach.

“I never focus” Answers Blue.

“Do you think today will be nice” asks Zach.

“Yeah, even if I receive another beating to keep Willa safe” answers Blue.

9:00 at school,

“Alright, remember we leave at 3:00 pm” says Zach.

“Don’t worry we will remember” says Everypony.

1:15 recess time,

They start walking outside.

“Hey Blue, where are you going” asks 3 colts.

“Nowhere, just to Willa” Answers Blue.

“We had a deal remember” Asks the three.

“Please, I don’t wanna do this anymore” Answers Blue.

“But we agreed, her safety for your Bruises, which we will make you do remember that right” Asks the middle Colt.

“Russal, Jackle, Chute, you know I am a colt of my word” Answers Blue.

“On the ground, now” demands Russal.

“But I don’t want to” Says Blue. Russal throws Blue up against the wall.

“Do I look like I am in for games” asks Russal.

“Shut up, freak” says Blue.

“Freak, why you little” says Russal lifting his hoof up. Willa grabs onto it to stop it.

“Leave him alone” warns Willa.

“Make me” says Russal bucking Willa in her Ribs.

“Deals over, Chute, hold him down” Says Russal.

“No Damn you, I won’t let you lay a hoof on her” Yells Blue.

“You should have thought about that before you mocked me” Says Russal. He starts kicking Willa in her ribs until they break. Then he hoof punches her until she bleeds and she darkens in area on her face. Then they break her Hind legs.

“I think she had enough show Bluey here what we did” says Russal. Chute gets out of Blues Line of vision. He sees what they have done to Willa. He starts twitching. His eyes turn red. His coat turns orange, and his mane and tail burst into flames.

“You, I will kill you” Warns Blue.

“Yeah, like I will fall for that trick” says Russal. He breaks Both of Chutes Hooves and rips one of his hind legs off in the process, leaving Chute to bleed.

“I got this, Russal” says Jackle. He just hoof smacks Jackle into a tree, breaking his bones.

“S-shit” says Russal. Blue holds the Grey colt against a tree.

“I’m going to break you, like a toothpick” Says Blue. He hits the colt repeatedly. He breaks the colt’s legs and hooves. Then he breaks the colt’s spine. He holds the broken colt up to see that he is still awake.

“The next time you touch her, I will have your head, do I make myself clear” asks Blue.

“Crystal” says the colt with broken teeth. Blue throws the colt away and changes back to normal. He picks the Filly up.

“Don’t worry” starts Blue as she wakes up.

“You are going to be alright, you just need to see Hunter” says Blue.

“That….. Was…..not….you…. back…. There….. You…never….snap…. like that” says Willa.

“Yes I do, but only when you get hurt is when I do” says Blue.

3:00 pm at Hunter’s Tree,

“She will be alright, just let her sleep for a while” says Hunter.

“Thank you, I couldn’t have a better friend than you Hunter” Says Blue.

“You helped her survive a terrible beating, but how did you get out of it unharmed” asks Hunter.

“I beat the hay out of them” answers Blue.

“You did huh” asks Hunter.

“I even tore off somepony’s hind leg” says Hunter.

“The equestrian unicorn help will fix that, but how and why” asks Hunter.

“I just bursted into flames dude, I literally had my mane and tail on fire” Answers Blue.

“But why” asks Hunter.

“When I saw what they did to Willa, I just couldn’t help myself to injure them, I had to do something” answers Blue.

“That was very unwise, you could have killed them” says Hunter.

“I know, and I am disappointed in myself” says Blue.

“You should have got to an adult, they would have solved the problem, you didn’t have to harm them” says Hunter.

“I know, but they hurt what I love, and I couldn’t control it” says Blue.

“I understand I was young once” says Hunter.

“Alright, but I feel bad” says Blue.

“Can you show me it” Asks Hunter.

“What that form” asks Blue.

“Yes, I want to see it” answers Hunter.

“I don’t know how to do it” says Blue.

“All you have to do is feel like it when you saw Willa Hurt” says Hunter.

“Alright” says Blue. He starts thinking on how Willa was Hurt. His coat turns orange; His mane bursts into Flames, and his eyes turn flame orange.

“Amazing, do you feel stronger by it” asks Hunter.

“Yes, I don’t know how or why” Answers Blue.

“That is a form due to your hair, since it is fire, you have powers” Says Hunter.

“Can you teach me to control it” asks Blue.

“Follow me to the Omnyticon” Says Hunter.

“What is that” asks Blue.

“A magical dimension made by me into a book, all you have to do is use magic to enter, it is where I keep my books, and a training area for me in magic, but you can use it in this form” says Hunter as they enter it. It is a star area with a library, training room, and more.

“It is so big” says Blue.

“I know, now let’s go back” says Hunter re-entering the real world.

“Use it when you need to, now go home” says Hunter.

“Alright, I will take Willa home too” says Blue picking her up and teleporting away.

“Bye” says Hunter.

To be continued………

Episode 13

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

The next day,

Zach walks to Hunter’s tree with the rest of them.

“So you did what now” asks Zach.

“He turned into a fiery enraged pony at the sight of me being broken” Answers Willa.

“I don’t know what came over me, it was so powerful” says Blue.

“We are all glad it is over” Says Remix. They get to Hunter’s tree.

“Let us go in” says Zach. They Enter.

“Hunter, we are Home” Yells Remix.

“No, just go” says Hunter.

“Why” asks Zach.

“You don’t want to see me” Answers Hunter in a deep but almost feminine voice.

“Is something wrong Hunter, you don’t sound like yourself” Asks Blue.

“Yes something is wrong, terribly wrong” Answers Hunter in a crying way.

“Hunter….. Is something wrong with your gender” Asks Willa.

“Yeah, is your stallionhood at stake here” Asks Remix.

“Just leave me alone” answers Hunter from under a blanket.

“That’s it I need to know” Says Blue lifting the blanket. They all see Hunter as a mare.

“Why the hay would you do this to me” Cries Hunter. She puts the blanket back on.

“Dude….. Dudette you have to calm down” Says Blue.

“Yeah, what is so bad about being a mare” asks Remix.

“When you are a stallion, being a mare is terrible news” Answers Hunter quietly.

“How did this happen” Asks Zach.

“I was walking to this Zebra named Zecora, I was trying to learn what element I could use for a love spell, this one could change the heart to what it really wants, I also wanted a new change spell to fool changelings, when I got there, she noticed something was wrong with me, she put me in front of a mirror, turns out I walked through poison joke, as soon as I found out I ran home, and here we are now” Explains Hunter.

“What is wrong with being a mare now, you look pretty decent” Asks Willa.

“You’re lying to me, I’m hideous” Cries Hunter.

“Hey she isn’t lying to you, you look pretty” says Remix.

“You’re lying, I’m just so fat and ugly that you are all here to make fun of me” Says Hunter with her hooves on her face.

“C’mon, let’s try a new spell of yours” says Remix pulling him to the library.

“I suppose this will get the whole mare thing off of my mind, I would love to try the time portal spell” says Hunter.

“Let’s see Mavick from the future, I would love to see my brother, and I hope to see a lovely filly by his side as his fillyfriend” Says Willa.

“Alright” says Hunter opening a portal.

In the future at Mavick’s 14th birthday,

“Mavick can you go grab your gifts from the closet” asks Willa (Full grown Mare).

“Sure sis” says Mavick.

“Be careful, you don’t want to come out of the closet twice dude” Teases his bestfriend, who is a Fillyfooler.

“Ha ha ha, very funny Pearl Flyheart, but I don’t care if I “Trot that way” I am just fine with the puns, besides you don’t Trot The same way either, last time I checked you have a crush on a cute girl in our class” Teases Mavick back.

“And you on a very popular Dj” Says Pearl.

“Yeah, yeah I know but you don’t have to tell Everypony who, thankfully everyone knows I am a Coltcuddler by now” says Mavick walking towards the closet.

“Good luck, my fun friend” says Pearl. He opens the closet to see a portal.

“Little dude, wrong closet, try the other one my step bro” Says Blue (Stallion).

“Um, I’ll be back, and Pearl, and just to let you know, I stopped crushing on him, because now we're dating” says Mavick.

“Oh my Celestia, I’m so happy for you, and are you seriously gonna go into the closet” Asks Pearl.

“Yeah, I will explain later why I am doing this” Answers Mavick walking into the portal.

“Ok, bye best friend” says Pearl.

“Where is he going” asks Remix (Mare).

“I don’t know, honey” Answers Zach (Full grown Alicorn Stallion, He is not royalty like I said so he is about the size of Big Macintosh).

On the other side of the portal,

“Why is he taking so long” asks Willa.

“It has only been 3 minutes” Says Hunter (mare).

“Hey I see Somepony” says Zach. Future Mavick Comes out of the portal.

“Oh my Celestia, wait until Dj Felix Clyde, hears about this” Says Mavick.

“Are you my brother” asks Willa.

“Depends, are you Willa Wylde my older sister” asks Mavick.

“OMC you are my brother” Says Willa hugging him.

“Funny, normally you never hug me, only my step Brother” says Mavick.

“You don’t mean….” Asks Willa. “Yeah, hey Blue, you are getting married in 4 years, just to let you know, and you also hug your three foals, Red Flyer, Happy Flame, and you won’t believe this but Blue Wylde, she looks like Willa, only younger and Blue flame in color, she has some of your personalities” Says Mavick.

“OMC” Says Willa as she jumps on Blue.

“Call me for excited, but that is the best news so far” says Blue as he kisses Willa.

“Cute, I see nothing really changes between you two” Says Mavick.

“So, how is your future, do you have a fillyfriend” asks Willa.

“Wow, I really can’t believe you all don’t know, I am a daddy's boy, and what the hay happened to Hunter Sparks” asks Mavick.

“Poison joke happened” Answers Hunter (mare).

“Wow, it is so good to finally meet you, an alive too” Says Mavick.

“You haven’t met your Uncle, and what do you mean by alive, am I dead in the future” asks Hunter.

“To be honest with you, and right now you are my aunt, yes you are officially dead, and in 4 years, in my timeline, you will be 50, but I have to tell you all something” says Mavick.

“What” asks Hunter.

“Okay first, Remix, Zach I would like to congratulate you two in 4 years on the twins and your marriage” starts Mavick making Zach Blush at remix while she smiles at him.

“And I would also like to say how good Hunter Sparks Jr. is as a nice 10 year old” says Mavick.

“Wait, Hunter Sparks Jr.” Asks Hunter.

“Yeah, and wow, he is way more powerful in magic than you, every time I go near him I can feel his magical aura, he has a magic power you can’t even achieve, and he is only 10” Answers Mavick.

“A Unicorn more powerful than me, and is Zach’s son, Zach has potential but with my blood that would make him even more powerful than Twilight, and I will be back in 5 minutes” says Hunter as he walks upstairs to a bathing room.

“Hey, what did you mean by we all don’t know” asks Remix.

“Yeah, what do you mean” asks Zach.

“I was just getting to that” says Mavick.

“But let us wait for Hunter” adds Mavick. They all wait 5 minutes. Hunter enters the room as a stallion again.

“I’m back, learn anything you wanted to know” asks Hunter.

“I was just going to tell them something” says Mavick.

“What is it you were gonna tell us” Asks Blue.

“Yeah what do we not know” asks Willa.

“To better explain this, I don’t have a fillyfriend, in fact I don’t even trot that way” Answers Mavick.

“W-what” asks Willa.

“I am a Coltcuddler” says Mavick.

“You don’t sound like one, you actually sound like the average colt” says Hunter.

“But, even as that is true, I only discovered this when I was 12, I learned that I was physically attracted to colts, other than fillies, I recently just got a coltfriend, he’s nice” says Mavick drooling at the thought of him.

“Hello, equestria to Mavick” says Willa.

“Sorry force of habit, he was the Dj I was muttering about when I came here, he is very kind, and knows how to treat a colt right, I never knew that he was a Coltcuddler, otherwise I would have kissed him sooner” says Mavick.

“Okay, I can understand this, but I don’t think Willa will” says Blue.

“Oh no, everypony here will accept this about me soon, you all are really the most understanding ponies here” says Mavick.

“Mavick, when would you decide to go into portals….” Says Willa (Full grown Mare). The two Willas make Eye contact.

“Oh, a time portal” says Willa (Full grown Mare).

“Oh, hey how are you” asks Willa.

“Hey, me and Blue are just fine” answers Willa (Full grown Mare).

“You look different, darker, and with a newer hairstyle, and with the same bow, I see we never change style of bow do we” ask Willa.

“No not really” answers Willa (Mare).

“I wonder” Says Willa.

“What” asks Willa (mare).

“How does Blue feel inside you now” asks Willa.

“He feels……good, and is as sweet as usual” Answers Willa (Mare).

“Ok, Zach is worried about his step aunt” says Remix (Mare).

“Oh my” Says Remix.

“Oh, hey it’s me, good to see me again” says Remix (mare).

“I must leave, Blue needs me” says Willa (Mare) leaving.

“Tell Zach that I am just talking to my past self” Says Remix.

“Alright, I will” says Willa walking into the portal again.

“I might need to leave too, I invited Somepony special to my party” says Mavick following her.

“So how is the future like” ask Remix.

“I know for both of us that we mean about Zach” Answers Remix (Mare).

“Wait, you are talking to yourself from the past” Asks Zach (Stallion).

“Yeah, she is right here asking about our future” Answers Remix (mare).

“I want to have a chat with myself that I got the last time the portal opened” says Zach (stallion) taking Zach (Colt) upstairs into his room.

“I wonder what they are talking about” asks Remix.

“Who cares after a month you two will be back together” Answers Remix (mare).

“What, No way” says Remix. “Calm down, when you two are back together, you will need to take it slow, but after 4 years you two will be married and it will be worth it” says Remix (Mare).

“Damn he is so cute now, why did he quit loving me” asks Remix.

“He needs a good month, just take him on a ride on a Ferris wheel, don’t worry he will ask at the end of the day, even if you aren’t being so subtle” Answers Remix (mare). The Two Zachs come back downstairs.

“Remix, I’m done talking to my past self, let’s go home” Says Zach (Stallion).

“Nice talking to you” says Remix (Mare).

“And me to you” says Remix.

“Enjoy your future, it is full of promises” says Remix (mare) as she leaves. The portal shuts. Then the portal reopens.

“Sorry I couldn’t just let the others meet themselves” says Blue (Stallion).

“Hey what’s up” asks Blue.

“Nothing much, but I recommend this right now, never let a symbiote take over your mind twice” Says Blue (Stallion).

“What’s a symbiote” asks Blue.

“One gains, the other is unaffected” Answers Blue (stallion) as he leaves and the portal shuts again.

“Alright” says Blue.

“That was fun” says Remix.

“Bye Everypony, me and Blue are going home, see you later” Says Blue and Willa.

“Bye” Says Zach and Remix.

To be continued………

Episode 14

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

Two hours later with Blue and Willa,

“I have a question” Says Willa.

“What is it” asks Blue.

“Two questions really” Answers Willa.

“Ask Away” says Blue.

“Be honest, do you love, and ever catch yourself staring at my flank” Asks Willa. He blushes.

“N-n-no……..M-m-maybe” Answers Blue.

“Tell me the truth” says Willa.

“Y-y-yes…… about all the time actually and” Answers Blue. He spanks her flank seductively.

“Your flank is one of my favorite parts of you” Says Blue. Her wings Pomf and she blushes.

“T-t-thanks B-b-blue” Says Willa still blushing.

“Oooh, looks like someone is a little excited, I guess we can fool around, but that can wait” says Blue.

“W-what do you want to do until then” asks Willa.

“How about we talk to your mother, I want to know how she and you father met” Answers Blue.

“O-ok Honey Muffin” Says Willa.

“No problem Sweetie cakes” Says Blue.

“I noticed that my brother is also a Pegasus” says Willa.

“Yeah, so” says Blue.

“Notice anything going on with his wings when he mentioned his coltfriend” ask Willa.

“They….. Pomfed” Answers Blue.

“Yeah, so that means he is telling the truth” Says Willa. They get to Willa’s house.

“No, there is no need to knock” Says Willa opening the door and stopping Blue from knocking.

“Oh” says Blue. The two walk in to a couch (living room) with Bradly, who is sore from working, and Amanda who is coming out of Mavick’s room.

“I think he is asleep still, he never makes any noise” Says Amanda.

“Hey, Willa is home, and she brought Blue over” Says Bradly noticing the two.

“Oh, hey Blue, and my loving daughter” Says Amanda greeting them.

“I hope to be your step son one day” says Blue.

“I can bet that you are right, now let’s sit down” says Amanda sitting next to Bradly on the couch. The two sit next to them.

“Now one question” says Amanda.

“What is it honey” asks Amanda.

“How did you two meet” asks Willa.

“Oh we met, fell in love, ya da yada yada, here we are today” Lies Amanda.

“Now we both know that’s not true, they are now old enough to know how we really met, I will tell them if you won’t” Says Bradly.

“Fine, I will tell you the real story, so pay attention” says Amanda.

“We will” says Blue.

“Now, when I was young, and you don’t know this but is was the most extreme filly ever, I was so heard of that even my parents were afraid of me” Starts Amanda.

“So that’s where I get it from” Says Willa.

“Well, duh did you expect to get it from your father, you inherited his controlled side you can control when you want to be extreme, you do a lot of stunts” Says Amanda.

“Hey” Says Bradly.

“But that’s why I love you honey” Says Amanda kissing his forehead.

“Thanks honey” Says Bradly.

“Now back to the story, When I was a filly, all I cared about was stunts, and how I met your father, that’s a stunt I can relive, when I was 15, I had the best stunt ever, a Double backflip, spin flip with a half Pinter, going 100 mph, and landing with a hoofstand, it was the most deadly stunt ever, I had my sled ready and I hit that thing as far off my mountain as possible, and I did two backflips, spin flips and one half pinter, all was going well when, well, I was sliding down to safety at a dangerous speed and I hit this Pegasus pony, who was gray, and my sled broke and when we both hit the ground we were both knocked out.

We were unconscious for hours, only he was fatally damaged, When I woke up I still had the bow you were wearing now on, and I was strapped down, I looked around, and saw that he was broken up badly, then I saw his name on his bed “Bradly Cool? Is that who I hit” is what I asked myself.

Then two doctors and my parents came in.

“Honey, can you believe what our daughter has done to this poor colt” is what my father said to my mother.

“She has committed a crime, and will spend the rest of her life in a cell if this colt dies” is what a Canterlot guard said.

“The colt has internal bleeding, broken ribs, broken hooves and legs, and worst of all a skull fracture, he only has 4 hours left to live” is what the doctor said.

“While your daughter broke her hoof” is what the other doctor said.

“She has four hours until we lock her up, better leave now” is what a guard said. You see, I never wanted to go to prison so what I did was, I grabbed the bow off my head and turned on its lock picking feature, that was because I was strapped down, I broke the locks but still couldn’t move, the thing I was on had a pressure plate on it, I needed Somepony to take my place, that’s when two friends of Bradly’s, A red unicorn with a blonde mane and tail with gold glasses, who now reminds me of Hunter, and a filly Pegasus who looked a lot like Vanity came in and looked at Bradly, the unicorn tried to do something, but still couldn’t, I needed to get off this so what I did was, I whistled, that got her attention and she walked up to me, I grabbed her and did a switch flip, that puts me on top, I gagged her and strapped her down, then I walked up behind the unicorn and bashed his head into the bars, knocking him unconscious and I switched him out for the colt named Bradly, and thankfully he was on pain killers, otherwise that would have hurt.

I ran and limped my way to the Everfree forest as fast as I could, because the forest had a magical spring that could heal wounds, how do you think I could recover so quickly after every stunt, it was enchanted by a very magical Alicorn who, once she drunk out of it, dipped her horn in it, and it magically transformed it into a healing spring, and it still works too, she cursed the water so it stays this way forever.

When I got there, I threw him in there, but had to save him from drowning, but my work was still not done, he was bleeding internally, I had to make him drink the water, or he would die, I opened his mouth and made him drink and swallow it, he was still broken but my jobs was sort of done, I saved him. A few weeks had passed and he was awake once again, but still broken, and I had to take care of him.

“W-who are….. You” is what he asked me.

“My name is Amanda Lovewind, I hit you with a sled breaking all you bones, you are lucky that I don’t want a death on my hands” is what I told him.

“Y-y-you saved me” is what he asked.

“Technically yes, I did” is what I said with a smirk.

“Thanks, I don’t know how to repay you” is hat he said when he passed out again. A few weeks later I grew a little fond of taking care of him, our talks got longer, his wounds got better, and one day, he accidentally kissed me when i tried to help him walk again, he fell on top of me, that made me blush and I got a little comfortable around him.

After a month he was restored to normal, and he could fly again, but for some reason he never went home, like he grew attached to me, I told him it is time to go home, so I took him home and explained what happened, only to get guards surrounding me, he saw this and came to my defense.

“Hey, let her go, she saved me” is what he said when he went into the guard circle.

“But she also injured you, almost to death” is what his mother said.

“I don’t care, she saved me from dying, and I owe her my life now” is what he said to defy her.

“Bradly you are coming with me and leaving this filly to the guards” is what she said. “No, I would rather go into banishment than to live with you” is what he said to her.

“No, you don’t mean that” is what she said with tears in her eyes.

“Yes I do, this pony treats me like a real colt, you always wanted a damn filly, you never wanted me, I’m also not a damn young colt anymore, and I am leaving, with her” is what he said. When he said that his father pointed to the Everfree forest and said “Go, but you will come back to us in a week with an apology”.

“No, I won’t, I never want to see any of you again” is what he said when me and him flew away to the forest. After a few weeks, I knew something, I had a crush on him, and when I told him this, he kissed me in return, after a few years we built a house, and after we did, we made love for the first time together, I cried, but he held me close, he cuddled me like I have never felt before, and I loved it, I was 18 at the time, and two months later he asked me to marry him, when I said yes I tackled him, I loved him so much, in fact, I felt like I owed him something, and so I gave him you, and here we are today” Says Amanda.

“Wow, that was long and interesting, did you ever see your parents again Bradly” asks Blue.

“No, and I never want to” Answers Bradly.

“I want to make out with your daughter, if you don’t mind” Asks Blue.

“We don’t mind” Answers Bradly. Willa and Blue put each other’s tongues in their mouths, and they breathe after a few seconds. They both end up staring at each other still drooling.

“You don’t mind if I stay the night do you” ask Blue.

“No not really, just get a room you two” Answers Bradly.

“Alright” Says Blue as he exits the rooms with Willa, whose wings just pomfed. He gets on top of her.

“This is how much I love your flank” Says Blue as he pushes her onto the bed, with his member erect.

To be continued……………….

Episode 15

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters.

The next day,

Willa wakes up cuddled up to Blue. She looks at him. She cuddles closer to him. He responds by holding her in a tighter way.

“So you are awake” Asks Willa.

“Eeyup” Answers Blue.

“Now you are quoting Big Macintosh, what am I going to do with you” Asks Willa.

“Love me” Answers Blue.

“I think I should do a little more than that” Says Willa.

“Trust me your love, is all I need to survive” Says Blue.

“Same here” Says Willa.

“Remember when we were young, you know, when I was 7 and you were 6” Asks Blue.

“Yeah, and you gave me that rose, and I thought you were giving me a snack” Answers Willa.

“Yeah, so I gave you a fiery Gem after that” Says Blue.

“Yeah, and I kept it because I said this is the most amazing gift ever” Says Willa holding up a necklace with the gem on it.

“And you kept your word too” Says Blue.

“Every time I look at it, it reminds me of you, My Blue Candle” Says Willa.

“I hope the next thing I will give you is a ring” Says Blue.

“And from me a bride, and maybe a filly or colt” Says Willa.

“You would do all that, for me” Asks Blue.

“I would be honored, to do such a deed” Answers Willa.

“I Wish I wasn’t such a jerk to you in the past, I was always trying to defend you in the meanest ways” Says Blue.

“But if I had never known you were protecting me, I never would have gotten to see the real you, I believe everything happens for a reason” Says Willa.

“You really think so” Asks Blue.

“I know so” Answers Willa.

“Can we be this way forever, never fighting, always happy with each other, without a worry or doubt of the future” Asks Blue.

“Yes, I think we can” Answers Willa. They spend the rest of the morning cuddling.

A month later with Zach,

Zach Wakes up. He sits on his bed thinking.

“I think I’m ready, but I’m unsure about how I will tell her today” Thinks Zach. He walks into the bathroom and pulls out a towel. He gets into a shower. He sits down.

“I love her, oh I love her so much, but I’m not sure that I can do this” Thinks Zach. He starts scrubbing soap into his mane.

“I think Everypony remembers the festival for summer, we celebrate it every year, and on the Ferris wheel I think I will tell her how I truly feel” Thinks Zach now scrubbing his body.

“I hope we make the right choice today, otherwise the future of me, will be at stake” Mutters Zach.

He turns off the water and gets out. He dries off with the towel. He puts the towel on his waist. He walks into his room and combs his mane with magic then brushes his wings. He looks into the mirror and sees Remix behind him, staring at his Flank. He turns around suddenly while blushing.

“Were you staring at my Flank” Asks Zach.

“Uhhh….. y-yes….. n-no……m-m-maybe”” Answers Remix.

“This is embarrassing” Says Zach.

“Well…… I did like what I saw” Says Remix. This just makes Zach Blush.

“Y-you’re not the only pony who usually likes what they see” Says Zach turning red on the ears. This makes Remix Blush.

“You catch yourself staring at my flank” Asks Remix.

“Sometimes” Answers Zach. Zach and Remix’s wings Pomf.

“Damn, why does she have to make me love her even more” Thinks Zach.

“Damn, why does he have to be so cute” Thinks Remix.

“Umm…… I sorry” Says Remix walking out.

“It’s alright” says Zach as she closes the door.

“Damn, why can’t I tell him” asks Remix outside the door quietly.

“How will I tell her” Whispers Zach to himself. Remix walks away from the door.

“But if I tell him about r future after this day, maybe he will ask me to be his fillyfriend again” Thinks Remix.

“Why can’t I just tell her I want to get back together, and that I want to spend the rest of my life with her, why can’t I just say it now” Thinks Zach.

“Why can’t I do it” Asks Zach to himself.

Hours later at noon,

“I only have two hours before the festival and I need to prepare” Says Zach. He eats lunch and runs around looking for something he made for Remix.

“Man, how long has it been since the portal” Asks Zach. He finds a Bracelet he made with a green gem that looks like Remix’s coat.

“She would want this, as a gift to break the ice” Whispers Zach. And he follows Hunter and Remix to the festival.

At the Festival,

“What time is it” asks Zach.

“About six thirty, why” Asks Hunter.

“Because I need to know when the Ferris wheel and the festival are closing” Answers Zach.

“Oh, they close at eight, you have some time so go on it with Remix” Says Hunter.

“Alright, I will” Says Zach

“Hey Zach, you wanna go on the Ferris wheel” Asks Remix.

“Sure, I was just about to ask you the same question” Says Zach.

“Why do I want to kiss her all of sudden” Thinks Zach.

“I think we are having the same thoughts, I feel like I want to kiss him” Thinks Remix. They walk to the Ferris wheel, Nopony is in line. They walk up to see the carts are bigger than normal. And almost Everypony who was in the line was in a cart, but the one they are going in is empty.

“Fillies First” Says Zach bowing to Remix to go in.

“Such a gentlecolt” Says Remix blushing. They both get in the cart. The Wheel starts up. The door closes and it turns on. Zach looks out a window while Remix looks at him.

“Remix” Starts Zach.

“What” Asks Remix.

“Remember when our future selves told us we would be back together someday” Asks Zach.

“Yeah” Answers Remix.

“My Future self told me that you are a good filly, you know that” Asks Zach.

“Yeah, I know that, you are a sweet colt, and I know you understand that” Answers Remix.

“Yeah, and my future self also told me a little of our future” Says Zach.

“Yeah, I my future self told me some too” Says Remix.

“Remix, what I’m trying to say is..... I want to get back together with you” Says Zach. Remix Blushes.

“Are you serious” Asks Remix. He kisses her, passionately.

“I am very serious” Says Zach wiping saliva off his mouth.

“I don’t know what to say” Says Remix.

“Then just say yes, I love you, and I know you love me, only now I see that we belong together, and I was just afraid of love, like it was a game, I was just afraid to lose” Says Zach. She jumps onto him, making him blush.

“Yes, I would be honored to love you” Says Remix.

“Then I will make an oath to you right now” Says Zach holding up the bracelet with a Green Gem. Remix Gasps.

“As long as you own this ring, which I know is forever, even if you lose it, I promise you that I will always love you” Promises Zach putting the Bracelet on her hoof.

“Oh, I’m just so happy I could kiss you” Says Remix.

“Why not” Says Zach.

“Being subtle isn’t your talent my loving coltfriend” Says Remix.

“Hey, you ain’t subtle neither” Says Zach.

“But that’s why I love you” Says Remix.

“Same here” Says Zach.

“So when do you think I can be ridden again” Asks Remix.

“If you play your cards right, maybe later tonight, if you play em’ wrong I could wait a week or two” Answers Zach.

“How do I play em’ right” Asks Remix.

“Well you could start by…..” Starts Zach. “Can we leave now, it’s time to go, it has been over an hour and turns out the operator fell asleep, and I had to stop the Wheel myself, now can we go” Asks Hunter.

“Umm sorry” Says Zach.

Three hours later,

“You didn’t play your cards right, I’m sorry” Says Zach.

“Awww” Says Remix in complaint.

“I have to go to bed now, see you tomorrow” Says Zach tucking her into her bed.

“Wait Zach” Starts Remix.

“What” Asks Zach.

“Stay and Cuddle with me, maybe even to sleep” Begs Remix.

“You aren’t the most Subtle filly, like I said earlier” Says Zach coming back.

“But isn’t that why you love me” Asks Remix.

“You bet” Says Zach Cuddling up to her.

“And you promise we will be together forever” Asks Remix.

“I promise, my cute little Chocolate Cookie, we will be together forever” Promises Zach. They cuddle closer to each other and kiss.

To be continued……………….

Episode 16

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters.

The next day,

“Hunter what are you doing” Asks Remix.

“Waiting for a friend to arrive” Answers Hunter.

“Why are you waiting for somepony” Asks Remix.

“Because I want to, I sent them a letter and I hope they got it, but I think I will just call my friend” Answers Hunter picking up a phone. He dials a number and the phone rings and then is answered.

“Um, Hello Flower Sprouts are you on the line if so answer me” Starts Hunter.

“Yes I can hear you Hunter, why did you call” Asks Flower Sprouts.

“Good, you are on, I’m calling because I sent you an invite, and I don’t know if you got it or not” Answers Hunter.

“No, I didn’t get it, the mailmare is late today, but sure, I will come over, just give me a few hours I need to get on my way there soon, I Will come to your tree near the Everfree forest soon, don’t you worry” Says Flower Sprouts.

“Ok good, it would be good to see an old friend after a while” Says Hunter hanging up the phone.

“You have an old friend, good to see, you still can make friends” Says Remix.

“Good to see you and Zach are back together, I took a picture of you two cuddling, it’s going in the scrap book” Says Hunter.

“No don’t do that” Says Remix.

“I have to you two are so cute” Says Hunter putting it in.

“Alright, you can, I want to remember this forever” Says Remix sighing.

“Ok, but we also need to do something” Says Hunter cutting remix’s Hoof.

“Ow, why did you do that” Asks Remix. He cuts his hoof.

“Put your bloody hoof up to mine” Says Hunter holding it out. She puts her hoof on his. He makes his horn flash and now they are healed.

“Welcome to my blood line” Says Hunter.

“WH-what, you mean I’m now your biological d-daughter” Asks Remix. He hugs her.

“Yes, now you are, you know you make me proud right” Ask Hunter.

“I know, and I bucking love you” Answers Remix.

“I love you too daughter, I love you very much, and I will always be there for you” Says Hunter hugging her tighter as she tears up. He lets go and dries her tears.

“Go have some fun with Zach; I know for a fact he wants to be with you at the moment.” Says Hunter. Remix turns around to see Zach Coming upstairs.

“Um… Hi” Says Remix.

“Good Morning” Says Zach.

“Very good morning” Says Remix. She walks up to him. She embraces him lovingly.

“Do you wanna cuddle again” Asks Remix Quietly.

“Of course I would want to cuddle with you, I can’t really think of a better way to start my day with you” Answers Zach.

“Me neither, but I have something to do first, I will be right down” Says Remix Going upstairs. She comes downstairs wearing black socks.

“I heard a special Somepony likes socks” Says Remix as Zach won’t stop staring or drooling. She looks at his reaction and blushes.

“I love your enthusiasm but we should be cuddling” Says Remix still blushing. Now Zach is Red But still blushing.

“I wanna Buck you now” Says Zach. She kisses Him.

“I know you do, but deserts don’t come early, today you have to earn it” Says Remix.

“Oh please tell me how to earn it” Begs Zach.

“You could start by cuddling me in a nice warm bed, and just let me feel your warmth and then we can.......” Starts Remix Getting interrupted by Flower Sprouts Knocking on the door.

“The rest can wait I guess, now follow me big colt to my room” Say Remix Walking downstairs.

“Yes ma’am” Says Zach following her. Hunter opens the door.

“Oh hey Flower Sprouts, good to see you again” Says Hunter.

“You have changed since we were kids haven’t you, but not by much, just height” Says Flower Sprouts.

“You have changed a lot since I have last seen you, taller, maybe a little stronger, and your hair looks more happy, you have improved” Says Hunter.

“Thanks” Says Flower Sprouts.

“Here, I’m gonna call you Flower for short” Says Hunter.

“Cool with me” Says Flower.

“Remember buttons” Asks Hunter.

“Yes I do, and the funeral we had for her” Answers Flower.

“May we always remember her” Says hunter.

“Agreed” Says Flower.

With Zach and Remix,

“Oh your coat feels sooooo warm” Says Remix.

“I feel like I can hold you forever” Says Zach.

“The second thing I wanted you to do, is lower your hooves while we were cuddling” Says Remix.

“Oh, you naughty filly” Says Zach Lowering his hooves.

“You need to go lower than that” Says Remix whispering into his ear seductively. He lowers his hooves to her flank.

“Now you need to spank me, I’m being very naughty” Says Remix.

“Oh yes very bad” Says Zach spanking her flank.

“Then you put this gag on me, and then we go for a very long ride" Says Remix holding up a gag.

“Oh my” Says Zach.

Three hours later,

“And that’s how I befriended Slendermane” Says Hunter.

“So you think you can get him to not stalk me” Asks Flower.

“Sure, I will put in a good word for you” Answers Hunter. She looks outside at Slendermane and he leaves a note and it says “I’m done here”.

“Ok good, what do you think has happened with Zach and Remix; they have been down there for too long” Says Hunter.

“Ok” Says Flower They walk downstairs to see cum, sex toys and much more on the ground, with Remix and Zach cuddling on the bed.

“Oh what the buck, now I have to clean this, and did he use protection” Asks Hunter as he checks quickly.

“No he did not, now I have to sterilize this, again, I don’t want my daughter pregnant at this age” says Hunter backing up. His horn glows and it removes the fertilized eggs. He looks to Flower Sprouts, who is now in shock.

“How can these children, do any of this” Asks Flower out of pure shock.

“Don’t worry, you get used to it after a while” Answers Hunter. The two exit the room. A knocking on the door is heard.

“I will get it” Says Hunter opening the door.

“Hi Hunter” Says Blue and Willa together.

“Oh hello, Flower this is Blue Candle and Willa Wylde, they are also a couple” Says Hunter.

“Do they do what they do” Asks Flower referring to Zach and Remix.

“Yes but not very often, they prefer love over making love” Answers Hunter.

“You bet, making love too much will get us killed, plus I practice safe sex” Says Blue.

“Yeah, you are way more responsible than Zach, because he never practices that” Says Hunter.

“He will be punished someday for that, But for now, I will fix his mistakes, Vanity would kill me if I didn’t do this” Says Hunter.

“But you have to put up with us, we are just very young” Says Willa.

“Indeed you are” Says Hunter.

“But, right now, I would never change the events that happened, because I have the most beautiful Filly in the world” Says Blue making Willa Blush.

“And I have the biggest strongest colt in my life ever” Says Willa. The two rub noses.

“Cute, young love” Says Flower.

“But this is very true love” Says Hunter.

“And it will last forever” Says Flower.

“I can’t deny it either, we were made for each other” Says Willa.

“True, Very true, I hope to spend the rest of my life with you” Says Blue to Willa.

“And I with you my Snuggly warm fire” Says Willa.

“And to you my favorite tulip” Says Blue in response.

“Oh you, stop it, I’m blushing” Says Willa.

“Oh it’s true, and I could just kiss you up” Says Blue. The two exchange a kiss.

“Hopeless romantics” Says Hunter.

“But woah, love this powerful is dangerous” Says Flower.

“But uncontrollable” Says Hunter.

“Yeah, It is funny really, they are just so cute together” Says Flower.

“We have a date, and we just came here to check on you all” Says Blue.

“Yeah, we don’t know what you will do next, you are a weird stallion” Says Willa.

“Indeed I am but I just invited a friend over to spend the day, she will leave you know, this is one of my old school friends” Says Hunter.

“Cool, but we have some news from, my mother too” Says Willa.

“What” Asks Hunter.

“Well, your marefriend is in town” Says Willa.

“Oh that’s good, Wait …… WHAT” says Hunter.

TO be continued…..

Episode 17

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

“You mean Christine, oh I missed her” Says Flower.

“But she said she will come back when I’m ready, but I’m not ready” Says Hunter.

“She only left because you drank too much” Says Flower.

“But I’m not ready, yet” says Hunter.

“Yes you are, you are ready for your Mare, you made a promise that you would marry her someday” Says Flower.

“But I am not ready, I’m just not ready, Willa tell her to go and move away, I only cause destruction” Says Hunter.

“Hunter, you and I both know that you are ready for that mare, why can’t you accept that” Asks Blue.

“Because I’m a monster, I hurt her don’t you understand, I can’t be with her” Says Hunter.

“Hey, I’m ready for my filly, if I can realize that at an early age, but how can you not be ready for this mare” Asks Blue.

“I can’t I’m too scared, I can’t face her anymore, She scares me” Says Hunter.

“You can do it I believe in you” Says Flower.

“I can’t” Says Hunter.

“You can” Says Blue.

“I won’t” Says Hunter.

“You will” Says Flower.

“But i-i-I, I can’t do it” Says Hunter.

“You can do it” says Willa.

“Fine, I will, I will go talk to her again” Says Hunter.

“Good, she is here” Says Willa.

“WHAT” Exclaims Hunter in shock as she walks behind them not too far away.

“Hey Hunter” says Christine from a distance.

“BUCK BUCK BUCK BUCK NOT NOW, why is she here now” Asks Hunter to Himself.

“We told her to follow but she said she knew where you live” Says Willa.

“She came to see you again” Says Blue.

“C’mon, just give her a chance” says Flower.

“Fine alright I will talk to her again” Says Hunter. He walks out closer to her. She gets very close to him. And then they stop. She kisses him out of nowhere, and he accepted her tongue almost instantly. He stops.

“Good to see you too” Says Hunter.

“Wow, you don’t taste like alcohol, in fact I could kiss you again and not get drunk” Says Christine.

“That was it, instant kiss, he didn’t freak out, woah this guy is good” Says Blue to himself.

“Still a good kisser” Asks Hunter.

“Kiss me and find out” Says Christine. He kisses her this time, more passionately and longer too.

“Tell me you haven’t moved on”’ Says Christine.

“I haven’t I never left home to get out there” says Hunter.

“Good, still a virgi -” asks Christine getting stopped by Hunter.

“Not in public” says Hunter.

“I will take that as a yes” Says Christine.

“When do you think we can fix that” Asks Hunter.

“Later” says Christine.

“Good to see you after all these years” Says Hunter.

“Is it me or does Christine kind of look like Hunter” Asks Blue to Willa.

“Yeah, kind of like a mare version of Hunter” Answers Willa.

“And it is great to see you again” Says Christine.

“I forgot about you to be honest, because I was drinking” Says Hunter.

“And we know that is a problem, Hey is that Flower Sprouts” Asks Christine. Flower Sprouts comes running up.

“Hi Flower Sprouts, it’s great to see you after all these years” Says Christine.

“And you me the same” Says Flower.

“You haven’t changed a bit” Says Christine.

“You haven’t either” Says Flower.

“I missed seeing both of you” Says Christine.

“We haven’t seen you in ten years” Says Flower.

“I missed you too” Says Flower.

“I never thought I would see you again” Says Hunter.

“Me neither” Says Flower.

“But here I am” Says Christine.

“Sorry to cut the reunion short but, I have to go home” Says Flower.

“Alright, see you later” Says Hunter. Flower Sprouts goes home.

“So how are you” Asks Hunter.

“Good, I got a job now; it requires me being up early” Answers Christine.

“My job requires me to be early too” Says Hunter.

“Cool, what time” Asks Christine.

“6 a.m.” Answers Hunter.

“I guess we have the same times” Says Christine.

“Say how about we go to the Omnyticon for a while and talk, maybe date” Says Hunter.

“Oh what’s that” Asks Christine.

“I will show you” Says Hunter. They walk into Hunter’s tree.

“That was, nice” Says Blue.

“Good to see Hunter happy” Says Willa. They walk away.

Two hours later,

Zach and Remix are walking upstairs.

“Oh good you to are up” Says Hunter.

“Who is that” Asks Remix.

“This is Christine, My marefriend” Answers Hunter.

“She looks like a female version of you” Says Zach.

“I know that, but her personality is far different” Says Hunter.

“Can i tell them” Asks Christine.

“Sure” Answers Hunter.

“Alright, I am getting married to Hunter” Says Christine.

“Wait what, but you just met her again” Says Zach.

“But we spent 2 months in the Omnyticon” Says Hunter.

“It has only been 2 hours” Says Zach.

“No in the Omnyticon, time is faster” Says Hunter.

“But how can you….” Asks Zach getting stopped by Remix.

“I think he has enough information given out, stop questioning him, and that is actually pretty cool, I will have a mother” Says Remix.

“I know it is pretty good” Says Christine.

“I trust you now know that Christine will be around, so just take the time to get to know her” Says Hunter.

“Alright, we will” Says Remix.

“Now, Hunter, don’t we have a problem to fix” Asks Christine.

“Alright, meet me upstairs” Says Hunter.

To be continued………………

Episode 18

An mlp parody using my original characters while not following the original TV story line, I own all my Characters, but not the show or canon characters.

A few days after, Bradly and Amanda wake up at home.

“This is unusual…” Said Bradly.

“What is?” Asked Amanda.

“Mavick hasn’t cried to wake us up. Nor has Willa, and if I know that Filly, she usually wakes us up on Sunday mornings”

“Well, admitted that is unusual, it’s finally nice to wake up on our own terms, we have stayed up all night to make sure Mavick sleeps well”

“Yeah, that is true, I haven’t slept like that since we had her, and Mavick”

“We could relax today, but we have a schedule, it is cleaning day after all”

The couple rise up and out of the bed, and go downstairs to find a clean house and Willa watching Mavick Sleep, showing signs that she took care of him all the while. The couple looks over to her then at each other, then her, questioning this entire good deed. Bradly decides to ask first.

“Willa, did you clean the house for us.”

“Mhm, and took care of my little brother.”

“This is…. Surprising… how did you do it without making a noise?”

“I had help from Blue.”

The couple is surprised to see Blue chopping wood outside, being that the chore is hard for anypony. He isn’t using his horn, which is shocking because he is a unicorn, normally somepony would use their horn if they were a unicorn, but he is using his hooves. Being that this is a hard task, Blue manages to lift the axe steadily and perfectly, and swinging without any trouble.

“That is not possible. No pony is able to do that, how does he do that?!?”

“He’s strong dad, very strong. He can probably beat you.”

“No there is no way he can beat your father, he’s a construction Stallion, and you know he lifts heavy things every day.”

“It’s true; he can beat just about anypony with his strength”

“I’ll be the Judge of that.”

Bradly walks outside, where Blue is still chopping wood, without any trouble.

“Oh, hi Bradly, What are you doing out here?”

“You seem strong colt”

“Yeah, I am”

“Willa seems to think you can beat me in strength”

“I’m sure she’s right, I don’t wanna toot my own whistle, but I’ve beaten Big Mac in an iron pony competition”

“I find that hard to believe”

“It’s true, I have, if you ask him he’d say “Eeyup”, I beat him fair and square”

“There is no way you’re that strong”

“Oh yeah, C’mere, let’s have a hoof-wrestling competition”

“You’re on colt”

Bradly and Blue put their hooves on the cutting log and lock their hooves in position.

“I hope you’re ready to lose colt”

“I’ll go easy on you, you’re a beginner”

Bradly starts pushing down, while Blue’s hoof sits, unmoving, not even budging at Bradly’s pushing, and within a second, Blue puts Bradly’s hoof down, barely trying, causing Bradly to wince.

“Lucky shot, this time I’m bringing my all”

Bradly pushes as hard as possible, and still Blue‘s hoof isn’t moving. And Blue simply puts his hoof down again, causing Bradly to lose, again. Over the course of 3 hours, Bradly repetitively loses to Blue, with the same results, even cheating couldn’t help. Blue barely puts in effort each time.

“How is this even possible, I’m a fully grown Stallion, how are you this strong?!?!”

“Two methods, but the first one is inappropriate, the second reason is because I’ve lifted loads for years, it made me strong, I’ve lifted even the heaviest of loads, this is no challenge to me, I’ve even been blessed with my normal body, I don’t even have to look strong. I’ve had to move buildings, my work is good”

Blue goes inside, leaving Bradly with a jaw drop moment. Meanwhile, Willa tackles and pins Blue.

“So how’d you do my snuggly fire muffin?”

“I won my favorite cuddly filly”

“Good job honey”

“It was kinda embarrassing, he lost way too much”

“Did you go easy?”

“Yeah”

The two get up on their hooves and walk outside, over the hour, the couple walk through ponyville, and take a left down the hill Near Fluttershy’s cottage, eventually making it to Hunter’s House, where Zach and Remix were waiting. Only they were making out with each other, while they were waiting. When Remix Catches sight of them they stop, acting innocent.

“Hi Blue, hi Willa, You’re early today”

“We know Zach; we decided to come over sooner, because Bradly Might need time to recover from the constant losing”

“Sounds fun, what’ll we do today?”

“Well, we’ll have to help my father Willa, it is time to clean”

“True, true, let’s get started” Said Blue, They all decide to go in and properly start the day.

To be continued……

Episode 19

An Mlp Fan-based story in which I own all of the Original characters, all canon characters are used for the parody’s story.

When the group walks inside, they go onto their usual activities, but Hunter has something different. He is mixing chaos elements with friendship elements to make advanced spells, and writing the progress down in a new spell book.

“So if I add hatred and control and just a bit of kindness, it can build a sword, I better continue my research, these spells don’t make themselves.”

“Or do they?” Said a mysterious voice. Alarmed, The Red unicorn turns to see the unwanted return of his, “Enemy”, Discord.

“Oh hello Mr. Sparks, Surprised to see me, you shouldn’t, you know you did wrong when you “Killed” me”

“H-how the buck are you not dead?!?”

“You cannot kill a God silly, but it’s funny that you think you did, anyways, I’m here t-“

“Get the hay out of my tree”

“Oh, sorry, did I interrupt you before, or curse you out of my home, no I didn’t, that was rude and you should feel bad, say you’re sorry!” Said Discord, turning away from him.

“Wh-what?”

“Say you’re sorry, or I’ll get Fluttershy to teach you some manners”

“I-I I’m sorry?”

“Much better, I forgive you, anyways, like I was saying before you rudely interrupted me, I am here to cover the past and build bridges, like Fluttershy would do for little animals to cross a river”

“Build bridges, I don’t understand”

“I am here to start over; I put all of that evil nonsense behind me and found out how to use my powers for good”

“This has gotta be a trick”

“And you’re a unicorn using chaos with friendship, but then again, we both know who to tell if we catch somepony doing something wrong”

“Uggh, fair point”

“Anyways, I’ll start from where I should’ve started, I am Sorry for causing any and all wrong to you, and I sincerely wish to be your friend, if you’d let me, and please accept, or else I’ll have to sing that song the genie sung to that Arabian pony”

“Alright, fine, first we start by apologizing to my Family and friends”

“I can round em’ up, just leave it to me”

Within a few seconds, Discord manages to make a stage with a magician costume on him.

“And for my next trick, I’m gonna make a bunch of ponies appear then disappear.”

He then makes everypony appear onto a blanket, and then disappear into the Audience. The ponies stare in complete outrage, because they hate Discord at the moment, but after a long explanation, he apologizes to them. They don’t buy it at first, but He Spends an entire hour trying to convince them, and eventually, they do, and he also allows them to leave and go back to their lives, but He isn’t done.

“So Hunter, what do you think?”

“I guess this is an unusual break from insanity”

“And?”

“Alright, I guess I can trust you”

“Really?”

“Sure, why not, you seem friendly enough”

“Great, you can continue your life, but remember, I’ll pop in now and then, even around your fiancée”

And with That, The Chaos lord leaves the house, and Hunter continues his research.

To be continued…..

Episode 20

An mlp Fan-Based parody with my original characters.

During a later time Hunter experimented alone in the dark, deciding to use Anger, lust, Power and kindness into a spell to make a new material for guards to wear. The pony is left struggling, pushing every ounce of magic into this spell. After a process that seems like decades, a medium sized mass appears, and a set of this “armor” appears. Before Hunter has time to pick it up and try it, the entire piece dissolves into a smallish amount of black sludge.

“Oh no, another failure, might as well dispose of it, again.” And with that, The unicorn forces the sludge to dispose of itself, so he tries again, but without his knowledge, big drops seep through the cracks, and expand slowly going down under the floor. The ooze drips under the room, into the next one. Zach comes into the room and this ooze drips onto his flank.

“Huh?” Said the now confused Pegicorn (Hybrid of Unicorn and Pegasus, not to be confused as alicorn, which has all pony types).

“What’s this?” Asked Zach. He scooped it off and began playing with it, eventually taking it to his room. He then bounced it and tested everything about it, until it started moving, freaking the Pegicorn out, but while he was scared, he got curious, because the sludge moved with him, almost as if it were sentient. Zach proceeded to pick it up, and when he did, the sludge started expanding onto his body, this action started to freak him out and when he tried to take it off, it spread onto the area he touched until he finally passed out.

The body jumped and flew out the window, causing alarm to Remix, and Hunter. The daughter and father then galloped into his room, not bothering to knock. The two notice that the room is a mess.

“What happened here?” Asked the young filly. The father investigated until he spotted a small amount of the black sludge on the ground.

“That.” Said the father, pointing at it with his hoof. He picked it up with paper and a jar.

“I’ll need to investigate this, I’ll do it upstairs, in my room, C’mon Remix” Said the Father again. The two went upstairs, and started three hours of research.

Meanwhile, Zach woke up in the clouds, managing to stay upside down on it with his wings, which was astonishing, and he fell, and that fall turned into a glide. Which turned into a dive-bomb, then a safe landing. While these tricks weren’t impressive, they were all executed perfectly. And Zach flew into ponyville.

“What is this…..it feels… good... This power…. It’s great!” Said the Pegicorn, now feeling the energy and skill the, “Suit” has. This astonishment does not last long, as a balcony falls off and looks to crush Zach under it. Right before it hit, it stopped, his magic stopped it, and without trouble either, so he pushed it away and slowly put it down.

“How did I do that, I can barely lift a pony with magic, is it this… stuff... what is this?” Said the confused colt. Zach gallops to sugar cube corner and looks into the window. He sees a reflection of him; a longer maned and white eyed colt, with a black but shiny/Spandex-like coat.

“Wh-what…“ Said the Pegicorn. The colt flies up to the roof tops with a high speed. Something in him forces him to jump, only to glide up at an accelerated pace, he screams in excitement and lands on town square, laughing and removing this “mask”.

“This is… pfft this is really astonishing” Said the excited colt. He jumps off and continues his joy ride with the mask back on.

Meanwhile,

Remix contacted Zach’s mother. Who came over, along with Blue and Willa, all come worried.

“What happened?” Asked Blue, who is now in fear. Remix, in tears, is confused and afraid, finding herself unable to answer him.

“Remix, I need to know what’s happened to my son, so what happened?” Asked Vanity light, being the worried mother she is today.

“I…. don’t know, Zach… something happened and he left somehow…” Said Remix, leaving all to that as Willa noticed a Black Figure flying at the home at a lightning speed.

The black figure Flies straight through the window, which breaks, and lands safely in a magic bubble, blocking the glass from harming anypony. After the pony stops, he removes the mask to reveal to be Zach. Remix, upon seeing him, jumps at him, trying to tackle hug him, but Zach catches and holds her in his hooves.

“Zach… Where did you go, I got worried and I-“Asked Remix, who is interrupted by her coltfriend.

“I have no idea, I woke up on a cloud with this… suit on me, and it’s amazing… I have skills now...” Answered the Rushed Pegicorn. Before Hunter came downstairs, the suit turns into a black band on his hoof. When Hunter Came down he looked at Zach and made him follow him. The two walk up to the lab and Hunter sits him down.

“After examining the sludge, I’ve learned many things, you found it, played with it and something happened. Right?” Asked Hunter. Zach nodded.

“After the examination, I found that this sludge has the traits of a symbiote, which needs a host to survive and take form, this one will latch onto others and manifest, it also seems to be weak to water, it also reacts violently in it, then dies and becomes paint... Zach….Where is it?” Asked the unamused Unicorn.

“I don’t know.” Said Zach honestly.

“You didn’t get any on you did you?” Asked Hunter.

“No” lied The Pegicorn.

“Alright, just dump it out in water if you have it somewhere, and don’t break my windows again” Commanded Hunter.

“Yes sir” Said Zach, who trots away.

The Unicorn sits and worries, for he knew Zach lied.

To be continued………

Episode 21

This is an Mlp Fan-based parody with characters that belong to me.

Several days later, Zach has shown many signs of change, his coat is black, his eyes are red, and his anger has become a problem, his mane has become vibrant in red and black, and his tail is following. Hunter is hoping he can fix him, and make him give it up willingly, but the Symbiotic relationship has grown between Zach and the “suit”. Hunter spent days trying to create an anti-symbiote, but each time he tried, it destroyed itself. The unicorn promises to fix him, before it’s too late.

Downstairs, Zach returns home, his muscles, Bulky, and his body, darker. The suit has changed into clothing, a black polo, black jeans and white vest. And the suit made a design of fire and electricity on itself, hoping to make Zach a hero-type, but Zach has done nothing, but let the symbiote control him.

“Zach… why… you look… I just can’t…” Muttered Remix, utterly afraid and confused. Zach overlooked her, and then away, as if she were a common house plant. He shows so signs of emotion, or love, as if he never cared in the first place.

“Zach… I don’t... I don’t want this…. Please… take it off” Begged Remix, trying to reach out to him. Zach stared at her, and looked away.

“No, I do not want to, now leave me alone” Answered the Darkened Pegicorn.

“But Zach-“begged Remix, Unable to finish. She couldn’t finish, because Zach struck her to the ground.

“I said “leave me alone”!” Growled the now enraged colt, who struck her. When he saw her eyes, he saw fear, and stumbled back. The guilt of hitting his special somepony made him become stunned at what he is today.

“I’m…. sorry” Said Zach, feeling the heavy guilt fill him, and tear him up. He left in a rush. And flew up to the center of the Everfree forest.

“Wh-why did I do that” Asked the upset Pegicorn. As he asked, he was answered by the new voice in his head.

“She was trying to tear us apart” Answered the Symbiote.

“She just wanted to talk, and help, we didn’t have to do that.” Objected Zach.

“She would’ve taken me away, you’d never get to see me again, you’ll see someday, she’ll want this” Answered the symbiote again.

“No she doesn’t, she just wants love, stop this, I warn you once, we can’t let this happen again” warned Zach.

“Alright, we’ll keep our cool, but we are much better together” Said the Symbiote, turning into the suit again, looking more stable.

“Good” Said the pegicorn, now stable.

Zach flew off, and tried to be his own hero, while Blue sits with Remix, trying to help her cover her eye in ice.

“Now I’ve seen Zach do strange things, but this has gone too far.” Said Blue.

“No… it’s fine Blue, it wasn’t him who did it, it was that… thing on him, it’s changed him” Said Remix.

“I don’t care, I’m going after him” Said Blue, becoming angry. He stood up on his hooves, and transitioned into his Fire form and galloped outside, spotting Zach in the Sky. With a mighty jump, Blue tackled Zach to the ground. Blue took the chance to repeatedly punch Zach with his hooves. And the Pegicorn bucked him off, then he looked at him, and Blue watched as Zach’s new wounds healed over and his teeth returned to their places. While Zach didn’t want to fight, the Symbiote took the challenge, and started to react violently to this.

“He hurt us, I told you they’d try, you should’ve listened!” Screamed the symbiote in his head. Zach ignored it.

“Blue, I don’t want to fight you” Warned Zach.

“You shouldn’t have hit her” Said Blue. And with that, the Symbiote took Zach over, changing him into a black, dripping mass. The Symbiote is in control now.

“You cannot stop us, we are inseparable, and Zach is mine now” screamed the Symbiotic mass. The mass became stable and it electrified Blue. Blue took severe nerve damage, and kept trying to get up, but every time he tried, he fell back down.

“Since you want to take me away, and destroy me, I might as well erase you, all of you.” Screamed the mass. Before Blue could try to escape, the mass crushed him, taking away Blue’s breath.

“One down, many more to go” Said the Symbiote triumphantly. It walked away, and Blue, took his last breath.

To be continued……….

Episode 23

An mlp fan-based parody with my characters.

Zach no longer has any control of himself, he can’t think or fight back, he can only let it happen, and Black Death, looks like an assassin type, he has tendrils that stick out like slender, and he has a covered snout, that, when uncovered, conceals a secret weakness, a pulp, covering his mouth, that can damage him severely. Black Death can speak, but he looks grim. Hunter continues his work after Blue is revived, and he used the dead blood cells of Blue this time.

“I have no idea what this will do.” Said Hunter, mixing the dead blood cells with a living anti-symbiote. The Symbiote starts reacting violently, but eventually, it survives and becomes a white ooze, that can kill the symbiotic bond between Zach and his symbiote.

While all this has happened, Willa was happy to see Blue again, even if he still needs to heal from his broken body. And even though he was in pain, he still smiled when he saw that his fillyfriend was safe.

“Remix… I can’t believe it… he’s okay again… He’s back” Remarked Willa.

“It’s good to see that you’re happy again. But he needs to heal, leave him be” Said Remix.

“Hopefully, if I’m right, this anti-symbiote can repair him at an accelerated rate, a host needs to live at all times.” Said Hunter. He drops the white sludge onto blue, and it forms into a cast-type suit, that repairs Blue as he breathes. Before long, Blue could walk again and even run. And when the Anti-symbiote was finished, it went back to its creator.

“This works well… we need to get this onto Zach, it can kill the symbiote…. But we’ll need a host to do so… and I have wasted all of my magic and time trying to create this, so that means one of you must take it.” Said Hunter, laying back into a chair.

“I’ll do it.” Said Blue, making Willa scared.

“No, you can’t, not this time, he has proven to be too much for you already Blue, I think you should rest” Objected Willa.

“No I can do it this time. I know I can. Just give it to me” Ordered Blue.

“He’s right.” Said Hunter before Willa can object again.

“What…” Asked Willa.

“In his fire form, he couldn’t defeat him, but if we add this Symbiote, he can have the power to take the symbiote down.” Said Hunter.

While they debated about the Anti-Symbiote, Black Death sets fire to the town. And not only could he hear them, he knew that he could successfully attack them. And since he knew he could, he did. When Blue Finally won the debate, Black Death broke through the wall, and injured Blue. He became an alien-like rock creature and started on Willa, who he leaves in a Blood puddle. Hunter fought hard, but he couldn’t win, for he had been broken, by the horn and hooves. Blue fell unconscious. Leaving Remix to try. She only did what she could try, which is attempting to reach Zach.

“Zach! Please…. Stop!” Pleaded Remix. Black Death simply stared gruesomely.

“Zach is dead, there is only Black Death” Said the symbiotic pegicorn.

“Zach…. I know you’re in there, please… come back to me.” Begged Remix.

“Good try little filly, now I’m gonna finish what I started when I hit you” Said the villain. When he tried to it her he started Coughing, for Zach woke up. The suit started dripping and screeching, until it melted to reveal Zach’s blue eyes, which begged for freedom and help. The Symbiote rose up and ran off screeching, leaving Remix and the Anti-symbiote.

“I… I can fix this…” Said Remix, who pushed the anti-symbiote onto Blue, who awaken and starts heating up beyond his fire form, to where his fire turned Blue, like him. The Anti-Symbiote removed itself, and Blue now seems to have an ascended for of his fire form. And the Anti-Symbiote slowly and carefully fixed the damage to the family, but when it did, it took itself away, and it even died out. But Hunter still couldn’t wake up.

"Blue….. Get Zach, we have to stop this…. I’ll stay and wake Hunter up… go do what you need to...” Whispered Remix. Blue nodded and followed the Symbiotic Colt, ready to battle.

To be continued……..

Episode 24

An Mlp Fan-based parody with my characters.

Willa and Remix picked up Hunter and put him onto the couch. And they slowly treated his wounds, while Blue followed Zach, and a battle awaits. But Zach’s inner conflict forced him to hide, and stay hidden, but the suit reformed onto him and became Black Death again. And this time, it became a monster with many mouths and teeth. And it screeched, while dubbing itself “Plague”,And Zach felt tendrils push into him and take over his mind. While Blue came close to him, Plague tackled him while screeching like an animal.

It started to lash out everything at Blue, but this time, Blue has the advantage. Blue bucked him off, and pinned him, causing deadly wounds to Zach and the creature.

“So you have changed. This means that this time, I’ll kill you for good!” Screamed The Plague, who shot lightning at him again, only this time, Blue simply hoof slapped the lightning away. Plague decided to try turning his hooves into blades, while he stood on two hooves. This action didn’t affect Blue, for he managed to dodge every strike type, and when he got close, he simply hit the Plague once, and it flew around like a disaster.

While this battle went on. Hunter woke up and moved to the outside, and he started to set up a river, with Remix and Willa’s help.

“Why are we doing this?” Asked Remix.

“The Symbiote is weak to water, maybe we can kill it if Blue can get it to water” Answered Hunter, Digging harder.

While they dug, Blue simply slapped the creature around, like he was playing a game. He stopped when the symbiote was weak, and he mocked it.

“You haven’t won, this isn’t even the final formation, and I can kill you.” Said Plague, activating the unstable magic in Zach’s horn, which makes the Symbiote grow more powerful, and it even looks stable, without eyes, and five mouths stable, it begins to talk with five voices.

“This is my Final form, and I guarantee that you will die” Warned the Plague. Blue simple teleported in front of him and grabbed his hoof.

“I’m going to break you… like cardboard boxes” said Blue, crushing his hoof.

“But you don’t see the important thing; I now get better with each blow.” Warned Plague, who simply hoof Slapped Blue, causing his nose to bleed a little. This didn’t upset him, because he simply giggles and wiped it off.

“This is gonna be fun.” Said Blue.

The two begin a battle, with fast dodging, tough blows and larger wounds. The other three dug a hole. And filled it with water, forming a new lake system.

“Do you think Blue can win?” Asked Remix. And for the first time, Willa was unsure if he would.

“Let’s just say that if he wins, I’ll settle all of his tensions” Answered Willa.

“Innuendo!” Said Remix.

“More like ‘In your endo’” Joked Willa.

“Stop or you won’t be able to leave your houses for two months” Warned Hunter, who was unamused.

“Say what happened to your fiancée?” asked Willa.

“Nothing, she left again. Somepony else found her, just focus on what we’re doing” Answered the Grumpy Unicorn.

The three finish the lake, and wait again for Blue to Finish. But now Plague has him on the ropes, because now he makes the hard hits. Hunter thinks of something to try to help, but he has trouble doing so, until he remembered the Anti –Symbiote. When he remembered it, he went back upstairs to create it again. The fight gets worse as Plague isn’t trying to fight anymore, he’s just having fun with the pain he is causing.

“I guess it’s over with your fight, you won’t be able to take anymore, so I’ll give you a deal, give up, and I will make your death as quick as possible, you won’t even feel it” offers Plague tauntingly.

“Never” Declines Blue as he burns a bit of the symbiote, which doesn’t do anything to it.

“So be it” Said Plague. And he continues to hurt and break Blue, but Hunter, now has the Anti-Symbiote, so he teleports to Blue.

“Blue, how are you holding up?” Asked Hunter.

“I can take a little more, why” Asked Blue.

“I need you to make “Plague” plummet into that lake I dug.” Answered Hunter.

“I don’t think I can do that.” Says Blue.

“Then take the Anti-Symbiote, it’ll give you the power to finish this” Offered Hunter. Blue accepted the offer, and the Anti-symbiote became his suit, and it gave him an edge, so he went back to his battle.

“Back again, I’ll have to wait next time” Mocked Plague.

“No, not now, I’m finishing this!” Screamed Blue, throwing Plague into the air. And he jumped with him, pushing down on him like a meteor, and he drove him and it into the lake. When the Symbiotes felt the water, they started Screeching and coming off the hosts, and Blue took the liberty to pull Zach out. The symbiotes escaped Zach’s body and the Two Symbiotes fought in the water, killing each other in the end. Leaving Blue and the gang to relax. For the madness was all over; the symbiotes are dead. And Zach is returning to normal.

To be continued…

Episode 25

This is an Mlp Fan-based Parody with my characters.

The Symbiote Nightmare was almost over, it may have been just a day ago, but Zach’s body is almost ruined, he has fallen ill, and must recover nutrients, this illness looks to be terminal, but Hunter says it isn’t and has already started Zach’s recovery. Remix has kept a vigil, even when Zach asked to leave, and even past his assurance that he’ll be fine. But Remix Doesn’t have too much faith due to his condition, he is thin, with faded eyes, main, coat and tail, Zach looked weak and feeble, unable to get up or move beyond the couch. He hasn’t eaten much, but Hunter doesn’t mind, for he is slowly getting the vitamins and nutrients inside him. Remix kept a diary from the end of the symbiote.

It reads on from day one. “Dear Diary, Zach has been recovered from the Symbiote, but he looks weak, and pathetic, his coat is still darkened, like the rest of him, but I can see his ribs, dear Celestia, what did the Symbiote do to him? Hunter is analyzing him, I hope he’s okay. I’ll talk later.”

“Dear Diary, this is day two of Zach’s recovery and he looks worse than before, he is thin, and almost pale white, I… I don’t know what to do…. He… I... I only hope he survives this, Hunter had to wipe the symbiote out from the inside, he had to remove Zach’s nutrients to do it… he looks so weak… I... I just can’t… goodbye!”

“Dear Diary, it is now day eight of his recovery, Hunter says he will be fine, but he’s, not moving much, I…. I can only see his stare…. It’s so blank yet…. He’s smiling at me…… Sure his color is returning, but he….. Looks horrifyingly messed up…. I think he’s…. gonna die! I can’t take this…- recorded message stops here”

“Dear Diary, Day fourteen, he looks like a bright Blue, and he’s looking around again, but Hunter says he’s blind, and deaf, but he’s moving around like he can hear me, and see me, Hunter says it’s probably my shadow, but his eyes….. They look so… soulful…. And everytime I’m around, he just… smiles…… See you tomorrow… Diary”

“Dear Diary, it is day fifteen of his recovery….. And I think Zach can remember me, but Hunter says he has no memory, but ….. He said my name…….. And he wanted me to kiss him….. Hunter Says that it’s alright, but…. I don’t think I can…. I still think he’s gonna die….. I’ll be back…. I gotta go…”

Even Zach had a Diary of Day 15.

“…….D-D-day fifteen of recovery, I saw a pretty filly….today… funny... I remember her….. Her name is Remix…. She loves art… but looks up to Music, even though it is not her talent… she watches me… I wanted a kisses… but I don’t think that love works that way though… she talks to you Mr. Diary, so I thought that’s I’d talk to you, but I can only hear mumbling… so I hope this is fine… I have to sleep now, bye”

“Day Sixteen of Zach’s recovery, I listened to his recording and found it to be amazing, I took it to Hunter and showed him how much he can remember, but… he can only remember me… and it seems likely that his vision is returning, as does his sense of sound, I think he’ll be able to eat soon… which makes me very happy… Slowly, my coltfriend is coming back to me…. I’ll report more later.”

“Dear Diary, it is Day twenty of Zach’s recovery, he looks much better than he did days before… and his appetite has returned, because yesterday, he asked for a sandwich, he was yelling of course, but I know he’s a bit deaf, so I forgave him… his memory has not improved though… his grammar has, he looks to be coming along nicely. I’ll report in later.”

“Day twenty two of….. My… recovery, my grammar is coming back to me slowly, and I think I am recognizing faces….. uauugh! “Go on Zach, you can do this, just speak into the recording please” Okay Remix… I think I can remember their names…”Okay, I’ll show you a picture, who is this?” That’s Hunter…Sparks…”Good, and who are these two?” Blue Candle…. Willa Wylde…. “And these two?” Mommy and daddy? “Yes, but do you remember their names?” …. No… “Alright, what about these three?” Mavick Falium, Bradly Cool, Amanda Lovewind. “Good job, you did well on this test Zach, now what is your name, and what am I to you?” I…. am…. Zachary…. Christopher…Darkicorn…. And you are my Fillyfriend. “Good job hun, are you done recording?” Yes… “Hand it to me”…………….. well, Zach is improving; I’ll let him record more tomorrow. “Yay””

“Day 23 of my recovery…. I remember my parent’s names, Thomas, and Vanity Light… I forget his last name though, but I don’t think anypony else remembers it either, so that’s good, it is 11:00 pm, and Remix has fallen asleep, we did well. My tests show that I am able to see again and even hear correctly, my memories are also returning, because I remember Willa, and my Uncle Blue. I find it ironic that Blue is the same age as me. I heard him moan last night upstairs….. I think he was bucking Willa, that or getting…… (Pomf in the background) I am seeing Remix in a whole new way now, I can see her fillyhood, and it makes me… drool… I’ll report more later…….I might wanna tap that… oh crap it’s still o-”

“Dear Diary, it is Day 24 of his recovery…… he is looking better, he’s even sitting up, his memory is…. Refined, but I had to replace his sheets, they were wet for some reason…. But I don’t think he has urinated anytime soon, he’s fast asleep now though, something wore him out.. oh Celestia… I think he… his colthood is at full length…. I think he might of…. Oh my…. I have to report this to Hunter be back later…”

“Day 24 of my recovery, she caught me…. I woke up…. And she saw it…. She’s staring at me….. I have to whisper…. I think she knows my condition…. I may not be in my darkest color of blue, it’s an unblackened Blue… but that’s fine…. She’s…. dripping…. That’s hot”

“Dear Diary, it is day 25 of his recovery….. How do I even say this…… we banged….. and we enjoyed it! Dear Celestia, why would I do that….. Anyways, he’s passed out… he fell out right after, I had to top him… but he still tried…. Which is… impressive.. “Huh?” Nothing Zach, you can go back to Sleep.”…not without CUDDLES!” AAAAAH! His emotional state is fine, he’s even more aggressive at being cute, I’ll talk later.”

“Day 28, my coat looks dark Blue again, but my mane, as it turns out, isn’t yet, I’m still sick, but I’m recovering at an accelerated rate! This time, she’s out cold, three times, and I got she to faint… I’m still about to faint…. I just feel so much better…”What honey?” Nothing, just a diary. Sleep now.., I’ll be able to walk soon!”

“Day 31, I remember everything… even the symbiote…. I’m not able to even look at her…. It came right after I came…. Tonight, I’m running out….I can fend for myself… Goodbye Remix, my love.”

It is day 32, and Remix is on, and she’s out with Hunter… She’s looking for him.

“Dear diary, it is Day 32…… he’s gone…. He left last night….I … I shouldn’t have let him… I’m out here, in the light of Dawn, searching for him, and I think I can see him, he still can’t walk……I have to get him!” Said Remix, talking into the recording device.

“It’s him alright, he’s too tired…. Running in a field isn’t smart… even when you’re sick..” Said Hunter in the background.

“I….. I’ll talk to him…… just give me an hour diary!” Said Remix, Crying.

And so, after an hour, Zach is at home, cuddling with her again, he explained why he left, and she forgave him for everything, because her love for him is too strong, this is their final entry:

“Day 32, of my recovery, I don’t need a Diary…. And she already explained her part…. She told me how much she care, and I guess that’s what matters, love, one bad action…. Won’t ruin everything….. This is Zach logging off for Remix……That’s Zach…. So, this is our last entry, and it’s hard to miss this… but I’m glad I get my Coltfriend back…… goodbye Diary”

And so says a love story, but there still remains the Problem they forgot…. Today is a drought, and they symbiotes will return, but for now…

To be continued…….

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Episode 1

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan-made my little pony story with my own characters

"Blue Candle get off of me, And stop rubbing your hoof in my mane you’re going to get your hoof broken with my horn if you keep that up." Said Zach annoyed.

”You don’t want them in your mane, you don’t want them on your wings, I’ll hurt my hooves if I touch your horn, you are one boring alicorn Dude” Said Blue.

“Well I hope you like being tied down, because I am getting to Willa first.” added Blue as he galloped away. Zach looked at his hooves to see that they were tied down so he decided to call for help. Hours passed until the grass holding him down broke forcing him to roll downhill. He rolled and rolled until he crashed into a small roof of a tiny shack forcing it to break open forcing him in.

He stands up to see a Pegasus Filly with a green coat, strange mane, And Dj Pon3 blue sunglasses playing Bangarang very loudly. He looks around to see Dj pon3 posters and a strange turn table with the name Remix carved into the wood.

“Hey…..Hey… miss pony…DJ…or something” Said Zach loudly, But She never heard him.

“Miss… Stop playing that music so I can speak.” Said Zach Still not making his voice heard. Then, Zach taps her shoulder with his Hoof startling her and making the music stop.

“Who the hay are you?” She asks now holding a knife in her jaws.

“I would love to ask the same, but where are we?” Asks Zach in response to her question.

“We are at Everfree edge, the closes place near The Everfree forest. Now, answer my question.” Says the startled filly.

Zach steps into the light and answers “I am Zach Darkicorn A male alicorn”. As he says this she notices both the horn and the wings and bows.

“Stop bowing, I am not royalty at all just That I was born with the horn, I was an originally a Pegasus”. Zach says Annoyed. After learning this, She rises.

“So then how did you get it?” She asked.

“Well “Remix”, just read the tables by the way, My mother was known to fly low, and that day was a strange day, for on that day my mother took a direct impact from The infamous Sonic rainboom, they can literally cause enough impact to change someone, the magic temporarily turned her into a unicorn while I was still a Pegasus and wings do not deform, as soon as her horn formed mine formed and the day I was born everyone was shocked at what I was, A male alicorn. Nothing special really.” Explains Zach.

“So you are a strange form of a magic speed.” Asks Remix.

“That, and the fact my father was a unicorn but I was originally gonna to end up like my mother, a Pegasus. And I am just the same as every other pony and I also cast the same type of magic” Adds Zach.

“That’s great and all but you like a little pale and you may be staining my floor with red, By the way nice job being half impaled” Remarks Remix as she watches Zach bleed from the wings and with a stake through each.

“What do you know; I must have gotten this when I crashed” Remarks Zach after he looks at his wings.

“You ok” Asks Remix.

“Yeah….. I’m fine…….I……feel ….great….”Says Zach as he blacks out from the bleeding. On instinct Remix Picks up the young alicorn and starts galloping north, Where he fell from. She constantly Starts yelling for help.

To be continued…………………

Episode 2

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp:fim story with my own characters

As Remix carries Zach, The male Alicorn wakes up for a moment to struggle and see Vanity Light standing in shock while raising his hoof to her for help, after that he blacks out.

Meanwhile with Blue and Willa,

“What is your mom even doing with Bradly, he is so boring sometimes”. Says Blue as Willa and him watch the conversation of Bradly Cool and Amanda Lovewind.

“Because they are so cute together” Replies Willa. They then watch as Amanda lies down and lets Bradly get on top of her.

“What are they doing now?” asks Willa In a confused state.

“Oh I know where this leads” Says Blue with a smirk. They continue to watch as Bradly’s lower body repeatedly goes up and down, after discovering what they are doing; Willa looks away While Blue Laughs uncontrollably.

“Oh Celestia that is funny, I mean, you should have seen your face when you figured it out.” Laughs Blue. He stops laughing when he notices Willa is curled up into a ball and crying.

“I…… can’t believe ….. What I just saw ……... I am scarred for life ………” Says Willa still down there.

“Hey calm down ……….. I don’t like seeing you like this……. I’m sorry just…. please stop crying” Says Blue nervously. Noticing how she won’t stop, Blue curls up next to her and slowly calms her down only cuddling her a few amount of times.

“Um…. I know………….what they are doing……….do you……want….to… try it” Says Blue instantly silencing the crying and annoying Willa.

“How can you think about that at this time, The answers is no, and the reason is because I Think you treat Zach way to roughly as if you owned him, I would make an acception for Zach, but you have a long way to go before that could happen.” Says Willa annoyed. Hearing this, Blue gets up and walks away slowly as the fire of his mane turns as blue as his coat. Then, Willa hears a noise coming south as a faint call for help. She turns around to see a young Pegasus carrying Zach on her back. Shocked, she looks around frantically for help.

“Blue we have to find someone Zach is in need of help and we have to do something” Says Willa frantically. Blue hears this but keeps walking because he didn’t care.

“Blue come back we have to do something” says Willa. Blue stops and turns his head so she can only see his snout.

“I can’t help, remember, I will only cause damage to Zach and treat him wrong” Blue says as he looks forward and continues walking turning his mane into a coal black.

“Blue …… I need your help……… You’re the strongest colt I know.” begs Willa after Blue quits responding.

“Blue please I will do anything…………..I will be my coltfriend.” Says Willa desperately. This make Blue stop, But only for a second, after that he starts walking faster.

“Blue………. Fine…. I…. will... let... you...Buck me…. tonight” Says Willa finally giving up. This makes Blue stop and turn around but also makes him have a secret feeling of guilt in his eyes.

“Fine…lets go help Zach ……. And tell nobody I am doing this.” Says Blue finally. They both walk up to the front door of Hunter’s tree where “Remix” is panting With Zach on the ground Almost from dark blue to a lighter blue.

“Ok let’s cut to the chase here miss pony what happened in short.” Says Blue quickly.

“I am Remix and Zach broke through my roof leaving his wings Impaled.” Says The filly frantically.

“I have a friend who can rush him quickly, I will be back” Says blue after he Flashes away with his horn. He flashes back with his Sister Vanity Light, a female blue Pegasus with a red and blue mane and cape that doesn’t cover the wings. She instantly bends down to examine Zach.

“Oh no, my poor dear Zach, we can fix you up quickly now can’t we.” Says Vanity Light picking up Zach.

“I wanna come.” Says Remix.

“Alright but we can’t waist time” Say Vanity.

“Willa, you are coming to.” Says Blue. They then all flash to a health bunker in Cloudsdale Only Blue starts falling only to be caught by Willa. When Blue gets back up he casts a cloud walking spell.

“Leave me and Zach here and everyone go have fun.” Says Vanity Light. Blue Remix and Willa all start exploring Cloudsdale and giving Blue a tour of the place. They end their tour off at rainbow making.

“ Cool, I’ve always wanted to taste a rainbow.” Says Blue Candle reaching the rainbow fountain.

“Don’t do that Blue you will regret it.” Warns Willa. Blue Shrugs and rolls his eyes then Drinks from the fountain. Blue takes a normal look then swallows then forcing him to belch fire.

“That’s a one Spicy meatball” Says Blue mockingly.

“How did you just do that without getting burnt.” Asks Remix.

“My name is Blue Candle for a reason” Says Blue. They all then wander into a dark alley of Cloudsdale.

“Alright everyone, it is time I let you all in on a little secret. ”Says Blue forcing everyone into a hole in a Cloudsdale building.

“What is it Blue, And it better not be you telling our plans for later to Remix.” Asks Willa.

“No this is about Zach me and Vanity Light” Answers Blue.

“What are your plans?” Asks Remix.

“You don’t wanna know” answers Blue and Willa together.

“Now the secret is……… My sister, Vanity Light, Is Zach’s mother” Says Blue proudly.

“WHAT!?!?!?” Screams Willa and Remix At the same time.

“SO THAT MAKES YOU HIS UNCLE AND BOTH OF YOU ARE 12 YEARS OF AGE BORN ON THE SAME DAY!!!”Screams Willa.

To be continued.

Episode 6

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

“This looks bad, you wanna leave now with Zach” Whispers Blue to Willa.

“Good idea” Whispers Willa to Blue. They both tap Zach to suggest the idea to him, he nods in agreement. The three depart the maze using Zach’s Horn teleport.

“Discord was the ruler of equestria before, but the princess decided to change that.” Remarks Hunter.

“But of course they did, both night and day wanted to stop me, but they couldn’t kill me.” Adds Discord.

“I know what you are; I was once a part of an element of chaos” Yells Amanda to Discord.

“You are a poor excuse of a ruler you Damned draconequus” Adds Amanda.

“Shut up Amanda I know your elements by heart, you are the elements of extremeness and stubbornness, you use both but cover up that you have them with that low-life shyness excuse, you only act when somebody questions your ability, like every Thursday night where Bradly….” Analyzes Discord ending with Amanda cutting them off.

“No, do not tell anybody about that” Demands Amanda.

“Alright, now you didn’t have to be so trigger happy, I was only analyzing your elements, I mean no offense, but that is your true nature so I can’t harm you or change you like I did with my dear friend, Hunter Sparks, Nor can I hurt Remix, or should I call you Little Beat, It doesn’t matter, for she is the element of Ear busting loudness, Which means she can party to hard and make everyone suffer.” Replies Discord.

“How do you know my name” Asks Remix. “Remix is your stage name; it says so in your diary” Answers Discord.

“For more further explanation, Hunter is one of my worshippers, I treat him as he were my own son, he is in a group that I will call “The sons of Anarchy”, Wait that sounds like a TV title, how about The children of chaos, Perfect” Adds Discord.

“Hunter, is this true” Asks Remix.

“Yes, I hope Discord to be the ruler around here and the plan is set” Answers Hunter.

“How could you just, Trust him like this, He is a…”Questions Remix enraged only to be interrupted by Hunter.

“Remix; don’t say anything you will regret” Stops Hunter.

“I hope you know that another game shall be played in this maze, only you will be attending; only the ones who are an element of Perfect Chaos can leave, and I will change every single one of you.” Adds Discord teleporting everyone to the start including Blue, Willa and Zach. He then removes Bradly’s wings, Zach’s horn and wings, Blue’s Horn, Willa’s Wings, and Vanity’s Wings.

“Here are the rules, no flying or the use of magic, if I change all of you I win and will be able to defeat the Elements of Harmony, And I will use everything you like against you so be on your best guard.” Says Discord to the people he chose.

“No I will not leave my friends Behind” Yells Amanda.

“Alright you can attend too” Says Discord removing her wings and forcing her to the starting in line. He then separates them by the maze walls.

“You two can go home” Says Discord to Hunter and Remix.

“But…” Starts Remix but getting interrupted by Hunter.

“Don’t argue with Discord.” Says Hunter to Remix. Hunter then teleports them home looking for a type of alcohol or whiskey or drink.

“Hunter, how could you do that, how could you just leave our friends which you have known for years?” Questions Remix in a demanding way.

“Simple, with a hope that they will remain alive” Answers Hunter.

“You need to go back and stop this madness” Demands Remix.

“No, I simply can’t question the god” Replies Hunter.

“I thought you would help them and maybe even save them” Implies Remix.

“I have said it before, and I will say it again, That Hunter is dead, I don’t care about other people’s problems” Comments Hunter.

“I can’t believe you” Remarks Remix.

“It is in my nature.” Replies Hunter.

“But our friends need our help” Begs Remix.

“My certificate states that I am not supposed to care.” Says Hunter in reply.

“You know what, buck your Certificate” Says Remix as she bucks the Certificate off the wall, breaking the glass and frame.

“And I am going back to help them” Yells Remix.

“Remix calm down, I’m sure Discord is making everyone feel at home in their own little world” Says Hunter nervously.

“No, I am going back to stop Discord from doing damage to the world.” Yells Remix walking away after stomping on Hunter’s Certificate.

“I thought you would be better than this, I believed in you, but it looks like I was wrong to do so, and by the way Discord doesn’t count as a god as long as he owns a stoppable heart.” Whispers Remix Sadly.

“Remix, Wait…”Says Hunter as Remix gallops away.

“The filly sure knows how to drive guilt into you, and make a mess, that I have to clean up.” Says Hunter now referring to his Certificate of Promise (To keep drinking).

“What’s this” Asks Hunter raising the back up with a note on it. The note says “Dear Future Hunter, This side is just dusty; blow it off with the blow of magical visions.” So Hunter goes through his old books to find that blow, which he does find, and blows the back to see a vision of his past self. The Vision is apparently reading the words as he speaks. “Dear future Hunter, if you have any memory of writing this and have decided to read this, then that means somebody has finally talked some sense into you. I know your life fell apart but you can’t let Discord win.

You are probably in denial about me saying that you want to quit, but I believe that you now own the power to quit this new personality inside you. I want you to go open up your personal chests and read your notes of spells and find the incomplete spell and I want you to remember the basics of magic making, I know you don’t want you but right now you may have no choice due to Vanity. I know you don’t want to do this as a son of Discord vow, but you have to kill Discord, do not turn him to stone because he will return, you must use the ability of CD form. I will no longer want this but you must, it has to end this way” Finishes the spiritual past version.

“Why did I do that” Asks Hunter to himself.

“I know I did just… abandoned my friends but I am not that cruel… am I” Questions Hunter as he Goes upstairs.

“I don’t think Discord would be so cruel as to hurt them, would he” Questions Hunter to himself. He looks to the end table next to his bed; He notices a picture of his friends with a note.

“Happy 36th Birthday Hunter. Love, your Friends Family”. Seeing this picture overwhelms him with tears.

“Oh how low have I sunk, I have abandoned the people who know me best” Sobs Hunter on his bed like Rarity being a drama queen over a small mistake.

“No, I must not be Rarity who is a total Drama Queen, I must go back, but I don’t have enough power to go back, but I used to” Stops Hunter. He then looks to his locked chest of spells and countless books.

“Ideaaa” Says Hunter excitedly. He then starts Studying the speed reader spell for a great reason, to read all the books.

Meanwhile with Discord and the rest,

“No, I will not play your games until I can be with my Willa again” Demands Blue.

“I will not move until I see Bradly too” Demands Amanda.

“Geez, you ponies are so whiney, you won’t do anything I say, and I can’t even reason with you, if I let you be with your loved ones will you just move.” Begs Discord trying to make them move.

“You know it would be nice to see Thomas again” Whispers Vanity to herself.

“Yes, it sounds very reasonable, now make it happen” Demands Blue.

“I can’t” Says Discord.

“Why not” Asks Willa.

“Because then that would leave Zach Alone, and I can’t do that” Answers Discord. A few seconds later Remix makes it and starts demanding that Discord admits her in

“Well, she just solved a problem” Remarks Discord. He put her next to Zach and summons Thomas (Zach’s Gray Unicorn Father and Commandant of a sector of the equestrian soldiers).

“No I will never tell you where my base is…. Wait what” Exclaims Thomas.

“Thomas you’re back, it is so good to see my husband again.” Exclaims Vanity Light out of pure joy while she jumps and hugs him.

“What am I doing here sugar cube, I should be in interrogation at a changeling base.” Asks Thomas.

“It doesn’t matter, I am so happy to see you again.” Answers Vanity.

“Where is our son” Asks Thomas.

“At another part of the maze Dad, and with a friend too” Answers Zach yelling over the hedges.

“What is going on anyways” Asks Thomas.

“You are playing my game and I will succeed” Answers Discord with a Promise. Thomas looks up to Discord.

“Out of all the places I expected to be, I had hoped it wouldn’t be here you damned creature” Exclaims Thomas, insulting Discord.

“Buck you too” Replies Discord.

“If I had wings I would destroy that horn of yours.” Promises Thomas.

“Just begin and good luck finding each other” Finishes Discord. They all separate to the center. With Blue and Willa,

“Dear Celestia this guy is a nut, he is made of a lot of things, including a pony” Inquires Blue.

“He is so weird, yet funny” Says Willa. They both make it to a center with Discord.

“I know nothing about you two don’t I” Asks Discord to himself.

“Now I will change who you really are by showing you what your life will be like in a few years.” Says Discord.

“Mow mah muh mah muh mow mah west of mor lives will be wike” Mocks Blue.

“Why you little Brat.” Implies Discord as he leans down.

“Big mistake Dumb flanked” Says Blue as he climbs onto Discord’s head and breaks Discord’s Horn of magic. Doing so makes everyone’s horn/wings come back.

“You little Brat” Says Discord as he tries to recover from this. Blue teleports away for a moment, only to come back with food, a spell, and 2 pairs of sunglasses.

“You aren’t allowed to remember this, Discord” Says Blue putting the sunglasses on Willa and Him.

“Look right here” orders Blue making his horn glow. Discord stares at it and a flash happens.

“We are free to go, you believe this too, and will let Zach and Remix go when you see them because you already got us, oh and your horn is back to normal.” Says Blue.

“You are free to leave” Repeats Discord. The two exit the arena.

“What just happened, Oh yeah the game” Remembers Discord. With Bradly and Amanda,

“So you know what I have been thinking and I hope you love the idea as much as I do” Asks Amanda.

“I do love the idea, but we aren’t ready for another Filly or colt, I have a hard time as it is being a construction worker” Answers Bradly.

“But don’t you think Willa ever gets a little lonely” Asks Amanda.

“I know that but I am not ready to have another child, which would require moving, and Willa would miss Blue and I can’t break that relationship.” Answers Bradly.

“Amanda, I love a little mystery and love secrets, but I think you should just tell him already.” Says Discord.

“Even I have to agree, you have to know.” Replies Amanda.

“What are you trying to tell me?” Asks Bradly.

“Bradly, I hope you don’t mind expanding the house, because I am indeed pregnant” Answers Amanda.

“What…” Asks Bradly.

“I don’t know how I will take such news” Adds Bradly.

“I know how, you must deny it” Answers Discord.

“No, I was raised to accept any news, good or bad” Implies Bradly.

“Let us forget who you are now and let me tell you the truth, sometimes denial can lead to happiness” Says Discord hypnotizing Bradly into a grayer stallion.

“You are right, this never happened” Denies Bradly.

“You look a little Gray, wanna make this go away” Asks Discord.

“Sure whatever you think bro” Answers Bradly in a chilled voice. Discord then changes his true nature, from acceptance to Denial, while Amanda Watches.

“How could you just Accept this, you don’t deny things” Asks Amanda to Bradly.

“I do not know what you are talking about” Lies Bradly.

“I think you should obey the Discord Dude” Recommends Bradly holding her down so Discord can look into her eyes.

“You should listen to your Husband, for he is always right, my extreme little Pony.” Says Discord.

“I am not your Extreme Little Pony” Corrects Amanda. Discord then changes her so that she is an element of chaos again.

“Now you are” Corrects Discord.

With Vanity and Thomas,

“Oh it is so good to see you back from combat” Remarks Vanity.

“It is good to be back, I almost died too” Says Thomas.

“How many things have you killed, or am I interrupting” Asks Discord.

“Why you little….. 274” Answers Thomas gritting his teeth.

“Don’t you know how many souls you have taken” Asks Discord.

“They fought for the wrong reason, they had to die” Answers Thomas.

“No they didn’t, you couldn’t care less about it anyways” Asks Discord.

“No I didn’t” Answers Thomas turning gray.

“Here have some relief” Offers Discord.

“No I am good” Answers Thomas.

“I can’t believe I killed so many ponies, so many families are lost.” Whispers Thomas.

“Thomas, don’t let Discord Get to you, this is how he will change you” Warns Vanity Light.

“I can’t believe how I could just do that.” Asks Thomas to himself.

“How about I make you feel better” Offers Discord.

“Sure” Accepts Thomas. Discord then looks into his eyes and starts to change his nature with a fiery aura, from good to evil Thomas will go. When it is complete Thomas looks at the ground and starts laughing maniacally.

“Damnit Thomas, I told you not to listen to him” Reminds Vanity now afraid.

“My darling, he is just living his new life, like you will in 25 seconds” States Discord.

“Wait… what” Asks Vanity in shock. He holds her down and changes her. With Zach and Remix,

“This is hopeless; we will never make it out of here.” Says Zach.

“Am I interrupting something” Asks Discord making the two go into panic.

“It is alright, you are free to leave, I don’t need you” Assures Discord. He then kicks the two out.

“What was that” Asks Remix.

“A part of my plan “Answers Blue, who came out of nowhere with Willa.

“The game is over, look I am an alicorn again” Exclaims Zach.

“We have returned to normal, and he thinks he has won.” Says Willa.

“My plan is to take him down, and I know just the spell to use on Zach.” Says Blue with a smirk.

Meanwhile with Hunter,

“The change natures spell; a spell that makes the pony think that whatever is changed is their true nature, forcing them to act their new way, the only way to reverse the spell is a magic reminder of truth and will.” Reads Hunter aloud.

“I can do this; if I can do it on a student then I can do it on me” Guesses Hunter.

“But I still haven’t perfected the change reversal spell only tested, only this time I will use positive energy” Adds Hunter.

“Let’s do this” Says Hunter as he charges a mass amount of magical energy into his horn.

“Dear Celestia please let this work.” Prays Hunter.

Meanwhile with Blue, Willa, Zach and Remix,

“We are here” Says Blue.

“Hunter’s tree?” asks Remix.

“Yeah, it owns Hunter’s spells”.

“Does anyone else feel a mass amount of energy, Magical energy” Asks Zach.

“No not really” Answers Willa. A large light emits from Hunter’s window.

“Somepony look at this” Says Remix.

“He probably just turned on his ultra-light” Guesses Blue. They enter the Tree/house. The place is covered in books. All read books to be exact.

“This place is trashed, metaphorically speaking.” Says Remix. A tremor emits from upstairs, growing enormously.

“We need to check that out” Suggests Zach. The Ceiling starts cracking apart. Then all has stopped and everything is calm.

“Did someone just use my sub woofers” Asks Remix.

“I can no longer deny it, this is the work of Hunter” Says Zach. The four run upstairs to see Hunter knocked out without a drink nearby. He just lies there steaming.

“Hunter, Wake up” Demands Zach.

“C’mon man something is not right, you have to wake up” Begs Blue.

“We need you” Begs Willa.

“Wait, Skrillex can fix this” exclaims Remix as she pulls her audio stereos and turntables.

“Who” asks Blue.

“I will explain later” Answers Remix. She then plays “Kill everybody” by Skrillex.

“What the Buck just happened.” Exclaims Hunter as the song explodes into the room.

“I wanna test a theory” Says Zach.

“Hey Hunter do you want this Moonshine” Asks Zach. Hunter’s hoof extends to what looks like a grab to the bottle, but he swings the damn bottle away breaking it and its contents against the wall.

“No, Dear Celestia no do you know what that stuff will do to you.” Exclaims Hunter with a shiver.

“Oh dear Celestia, Hunter is back.” Exclaims Zach excitedly.

“What, where did I go, I have never left” Says Hunter.

“Hunter We have to stop Discord. You can do it” Says Remix.

“Logically I can do it with the transformation spell.” Says Blue.

“Do I ever get a chance to talk” Asks Willa.

“We can do it” Says Blue.

“Then let’s give Discord a big fun entrance”

TO be continued……………….

Episode 22

An mlp fan-based Parody with my characters.

The Symbiotic mass went into hiding, but with Willa, she had a problem now. She frantically knocked on Hunter’s door. And when Remix answered she ran in crying, and desperate, for she was carrying in Blue, and his condition was the only thing she could think about.

“Willa, what’s wrong!?” Asked Remix, who is not only confused, but a bit scared.

“It’s Blue…..He…he…he…” Answered Willa, who is unable to answer her, for each time she said “he”, her tears got worse. Blue laid there, unmoving, broken, and stricken down.

“Willa…. What’s wrong…?” Asked Remix, with a new fear in her mind.

“He’s dead!” Screamed Willa, who bursts into tears afterwards. And even though she was Serious, Remix still found it all hard to believe, but when she felt his body, she knew Willa was serious.

“What… happened?” Asked the stunned Filly.

“I ….. Found him…. I thought he was fine, but when I felt him….. He didn’t have the heat I know he has…. He was in a crater… I didn’t know what to do…” Whimpered Willa, telling her everything she knows.

“I’ll get help” Said Remix, going upstairs to get Hunter, who couldn’t believe it himself. But he eventually knew she was right.

“Remix, when did you last see Blue?” Asked The Unicorn.

“When he said he was going to……. Take down Zach…” Answered Remix. When she pieced it together, she covered her mouth with her hooves, shocked at what her coltfriend did.

“Zach did this…..” Said Remix. While Hunter knew it already, Willa, only got worse, but only a little hope came to her.

“Can you... could you-“Asked Willa in hope.

“Yes, I can bring him back, I’ll need to be in The Omnyticon, I’ll put him in the healing chamber, and I’ll try to continue from there, I’ll bring him back, don’t worry” Answered Hunter, who took Blue and took him to that dimension. But with Zach, he wakes up.

“Where are we?” Asked the confused Pegicorn.

“Safe, but what we did was shocking” answered this Symbiote.

“What did we do” Asked the Pegicorn, rubbing his eyes.

“We ‘took care’ of blue, but really, it was your fault, you lost control, and you killed him” Answered the symbiote.

“No…. I wouldn’t” said Zach.

“But you did, I’ll have to restrain you next time, now, let me control, I can help us fix this” Said the Symbiote. And Zach accepted, when he did, the suit returned to him, and took over again, with Zach’s permission. It made him into a monster, and the thrill of the kill, made the symbiote and him become something new and take a name; Black Death.

“We are one now, we are Black Death!” Said the Monster.

To be continued…..

Episode 26

An Mlp fan-based parody with my own characters

Zach has healed, Blue is using his new talent and trying to raise it up, but the nightmare has yet to be over, because now, the rogue changeling army is preparing to return. And Hunter has a Changeling enemy, RetraHunter, made to be a Changeling opposite, but he came out as an exact likeness, but not color, and his body is holed, but he is a ruthless leader, who will stop at nothing to beat him. And the army is plotting, and he, is just getting started.

The rogue leader feeds off another pony, and still remains thin.

"You damn changelings are failing me, I am not able to feed, you need to get me more. Replace this one, for he is too weak!" Demanded the hungry leader. The changelings call him a freak, but he does not mind, he knows what form his body is in, it's his enemy's form, only more like a changeling, and with red eyes.

"This infernal form is regretfully, all I am made to be, but I will take him down, he will not beat me this time, I will prevail, and then the queen will see how I do it. I will get him." Muttered the leader.

RetraHunter is not the only bad thing around, the symbiotes are still alive, And the fight is on.

At the end of it, The anti-symbiote is covered and bonded to the normal one.

"Get off me" whispered it, but now, they were one, and the symbiote convinced anger to the anti-symbiote , and the two form a gray pony, with no eyes, tail, mane, or mouth, and it rises out of the water. The symbiote formed a mouth.

"Now we are together, we need enforcement, we need something big, we are gonna kill those four, and make sure they won't come back, for nothing can stop Plague!" Screamed the symbiote.

As if by magic, a scout Changeling went to base, and told his leader about this. And the leader left in pursuit of it. And the two are forced to meet for the first time. And they both knew they had one thing in common, they hate the family.

"So, you and I have similar tastes?" Asked the Changeling leader.

"It seems so." Answered the Plague.

"Maybe we would go good together" suggested the leader.

"Maybe so." Said the Plague.

"Want to help me out, I'll give you a deal, if you help me kill Hunter Sparks, I'll assist you in taking care of the brats" offered the leader.

"And if this is a trick" asked the Plague

"Kid, we both hate that family, we should join, I have an army, so what do you say?" Asked the leader.

"I'll take up your offer, we're a team" answered Plague. The two lock hooves with each other.

And plague seeps onto him, covering his body with a gray sludge, changing him into a body double of Hunter Sparks. The two, now united, are now locked in, and the villain is now born.

"Muahahahaha, I am reborn, I am new, I am The Purge" screamed the new leader.

To be continued.....