The Adventures Of The Everfree Equestrians Season 1

by Sparkycoolpikachu

Episode 11

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  The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

  A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characterscharacters

  “And… that is why I am going now” Explains Zach.

  “So, my son has a date” says Vanity.

  “Yeah, so I guess I will be attending” says Zach.

  “Cute, the last time there was a party you didn’t attend was your own birthday party” says Vanity.

  “I was too shy to attend, everyone at school just bows and ponies that know I am not royalty just laugh, I didn’t wanna risk it” Explains Zach.

  “I think it is just cute that you have a date, I was once in love at 14, and here you are today” Explains Vanity.

  “When was I born” asks Zach.

  “When I was 18 years old, I’m 32 now” Answers Vanity.

  “But, how do I confront her, she scares me” Asks Zach.

   “What do you mean” asks Vanity.

  “I’m not ready, mom” answers Zach.

  “We need to talk, don’t we” asks Vanity.

5:20 p.m.,

   “Oh no, Oh no, I’m gonna be late, I only have 10 minutes left” Exclaims Zach galloping towards Hunter’s tree.

  “Zach, use your wings” Says Willa flying above him.

  “Or your magic” says Willa.

  “Oh, right I am an alicorn” Remembers Zach. He starts Flying up high.

   “Only one way to get there in time” says Zach.

  “Are you sure you should be doing a sonic boom” asks Willa.

  “Positive” Answers Zach. He starts flying down.

  “What about magic” asks Willa as he flies past her.

  “A SONIC LIGHTBOOM” exclaims Zach as his horn flashes. When he breaks the sound barrier he disappears.

   “Where did he go” asks Willa.

Meanwhile at Hunter’s tree,

   “How does the red scarf look” Asks Remix.

   “How about we try scarlet” asks Hunter. “No, orange-red, like my hair” Says Remix.

  “Alright” Says Hunter pulling out the scarf. He puts the scarf on her.

   “You look like your father….” Whispers Hunter.

  “What” Asks Remix.

   “Nothing, just recalling the past” Answers Hunter. They notice a flash of light.

  “Somepony broke the sound barrier” exclaims Hunter.

   “Whoa, sick” Says Remix. A knock at the door is heard.

   “I’ll get it, it may be Willa because Blue is here” says Remix. She opens the door to see Zach panting.

   “I made it” Gasps Zach. She kisses him.

   “I am so happy that you are here” Says Remix no embracing him in her hooves.

  “I finally caught up to you Zach” says Willa behind them.

  “Oh, hey Willa, Blue is upstairs, he says he can’t tie it right” Says Remix.

“Thanks, I’ll help him” Says Willa. She walks upstairs.

  “You’re early” Says Remix.

  “So” Asks Zach.

  “You are never early” Says Remix hugging him again.

  “I had a reason to show up today” Says Zach.

  “I love you” adds Zach.

  “I love you too” says Remix.

“Aw, so cute” says Blue coming downstairs.

“Shut up” says Remix.

“So, how do you like my bow tie” Asks Zach.

  “It is a dark red, like some of your hair, I positively love it” Answers Remix.

  “I made sure that the collar is Dark Blue so it looks like the bow is hanging on nothing” Says Zach.

   “You look Sexy in it” Says Remix.

  “Sure I shouldn’t make any changes” Asks Zach.

  “You look fine, now we have to go in 5 minutes” Answers Remix.

   “Lets show up early, for effect” Says Hunter teleporting them to a carriage.

   “How can you” asks Zach.

  “I make more money than I did now; you know a lot of ponies were invited” Answers Hunter as he interrupts Zach.

  At Canterlot,

“Oh my, that place is beautiful Blue” Exclaims Willa.

  “Needs to be about 20% cooler” Comments Blue.

Blue gets a mare slap from Willa.

  “Ow, hey” Says Blue.

  “I told you to be on your best behavior, And to help me find a closet or royal bedroom where we won’t get caught having sex.” Whispers Willa.

  “What was that last part” asks Remix.

   “Nothing” answers Willa.

  “I know you said something about sex spots, but I have plans to do “it” here too with Zach, so don’t be embarrassed by it” Whispers Remix.

  “What do you think they are whispering about” asks Blue.

  “The castle of Canterlot maybe” asks Zach.

  “We will never know” Answers Blue.

In the ball room 5: 30 pm,

  “Alright, I would like to thank everyone for coming, Such as Green Bell, Lutarqit and Adrianna Yglesias, I never expected you to come at all really, but you are my friends so I invited you and here you are” Starts Hunter on a megaphone.

  “I would also like to thank my friends for coming, the ones I have known for years, Bradly, Amanda, Vanity and their kids, Amanda also has a new kid so everyone be quiet or it will cry, and I would also like to know the blonde-maned, grey guy’s name” Continues Hunter.

  “His name is Mavick, he isn’t much now, in fact he is very small and for some reason very durable, he is a runt, but he has grown these last week’s so you have never known he is a runt” Explains Amanda in a megaphone.

  “Mavick, meet the little colt, he will bat at your hooves it is adorable, but he also “bites” on your hooves too, without leaving marks, he thinks it is a type of food, curious ain’t he” Asks Hunter with the megaphone.

  “Awwwww” Says the crowd.

   “But he is not why we are here for, he is wide awake with ear plugs, and he is adorable, but we are here because we are such good friends with me and I have to announce that we are here to hear about my new promotion, I am now head teacher of magic making, and I am proud of I and Celestia is here about this, but not here to speak, just here to observe, and I would also like to welcome, for the first time, Princess Luna” Announces Hunter pointing to Luna. She waves.

  “Hey, we see you back there” says Hunter mockingly.

  “Now I am now head of the School teacher wise in Magic making, fillies and colts seek originality, Right Marco, my star pupil” Says Hunter pointing in the crowd. He nods.

  “I strive to teach Unicorns how to use magic to make magic, we use elements that we know to conjure magical spells that are making magic limitless, with these wise users I will teach my best and own a higher pride, love Everypony and goodnight, and don’t forget to have fun, get drunk or something or even get taken by Slender Mane, you will like where he takes you mares, don’t worry you’ll be back soon, right Slendy My pal” Asks Hunter pointing to Slender Mane. Slender Mane nods.

   “Night Everypony” says Hunter Stepping down. He walks up to Remix.

  “Remix, do you know Green Bell” Asks Hunter taking her to her.

   “She is one of my friends for a while….” Says Hunter as he starts explaining it.

  “Boring” says Remix.

  “How dare you, she is an artist and a friend, and I will remain loyal to my friend at all times” Says Hunter defending his Friend.

  “Next friend please” says Remix. Hunter takes her to Lutarqit.

   “This is Lutarqit, a wolf, she is a…” Says Hunter explaining her.

  “Boring, but cool, a wolf in Canterlot, where are the Guards” asks Remix.

  “I ate them” Answers Lutarqit sarcastically.

  “On their lunch break and guarding the Princess” Answers Hunter seriously.

  “Next friend please, not boring either” asks Remix.

  “Fine, but can I ever explain them” asks Hunter. They walk up to Adrianna Yglesias.

  “This is Age, my best friend from school, we are always friends” Explains Hunter.

  “Yo dude, how’s it hanging” Asks Age.

“Cool, do you like Dubstep” Asks Remix.

  “Dubstep, Anime, gaming, writing, yeah I do a lot of that” Explains Age.

   “Cool, I have to go to Zach now, it is eight o’ Clock and time for what we planned” Asks and explains Remix.

  “Fine, I will hang out here, but remember, we leave at 9: 00 p.m.” Answers Hunter.

  “I remember” says Remix running off.

  “You got yourself there a nice filly” says Age.

   “Too bad she isn’t mine” says Hunter to himself.

Meanwhile at 7:59,

“I made it” says Blue.

  “Then what are we waiting for, let’s do this” says Willa as Blue gets on top of her.

Meanwhile with Zach and Remix 1 minute later,

“Alright Zach, did you find a closet” asks Remix.

“No but I found the Guards bedroom” Answers Zach.

  “Alright then, round 1 alone” says Remix as she gets on top of Him.

  “Oh my” Says Zach shyly as he reacts to this.

8:21 with Blue and Willa,

  “Oh that felt so good” Whispers Willa as she rubs her face against his chest sweating.

8:21 with Zach and Remix,

“Oh that felt so…” Starts Remix as she looks at Zach’s face. It looks like he is depressed with regrets.

“D-did I d-do something wrong” asks Remix.

  “No, you did everything right, it’s just that…” Answers Zach.

  “Just what, you didn’t enjoy it, I can fix that you know” Asks Remix.

  “No I loved every part of that; don’t take it the wrong way but…. I…” Answers Zach.

  “What” Asks Remix.

  “I-i-i….. I don’t want to be with you, like this” Answers Zach hesitantly.

  “Y-you mean y-you don’t” Asks Remix starting to cry.

  “Don’t do this, please don’t cry I just” starts Zach.

“No, G-get away from me” says Remix crying and galloping away. He just sits there and says “I have to clear this up with her”.

With Hunter at 8:42,

  “And then we found Slendy’s Son and Slendy “Took” me away and then I woke up in a hospital and Everypony was alive again and I had a Note that explained how they don’t remember this incident because the friendly guy made them forget it” Says Hunter Ending a story to Adrianna. He sees Remix running toward him crying.

  “Remix, I thought you were with Zach” asks Hunter.

  “Please, take me home, and please let me explain what happened” begs Remix Crying. “Alright” Says Hunter.

With Blue and Willa out in the party Slow Dancing with Willa, Zach sees them and gallops up.

  “Have you seen Remix” asks Zach.

  “Yeah, they left 3 minutes ago” says Blue. Zach teleports to Hunter’s Tree. He knocks on the door. Hunter opens the door.

  “Oh, what do you want” Asks Hunter almost enraged at the sight of Zach.

   “I came to see your daughter” Explains Zach.

“No deal, and I noticed how you “Came” inside her, you are only lucky that I don’t ask Slendy to get you after what you did to her and with her” says Hunter.

  “Sorry about that Second part, but I need to talk to her” begs Zach.

“Like I said, No deal and she doesn’t want to see you at the moment” Answers Hunter.

  “Please, I have to apologize for what I did” begs Zach.

  “No, I don’t care how you feel now, it is what you felt then that bothers me, and now if you think you can hurt that Amazing filly for any more than what she is…..”Answers Hunter.

   “Look, I know how she is, I know I hurt her, and I know I broke her heart, but I have to fix this, I beg of you, let me in there, give me at least 10 minutes with her” Begs Zach.

“Alright, but you have 5 minutes to do so, and if I don’t see forgiveness, then you will stay out of my tree and away from her, do I make myself clear” Asks Hunter.

“Crystal” Answers Zach. He walks into Hunter’s Tree and then Downstairs. He sees Remix crying on her bed and her glasses smashed on the floor.

  “Remix, I came here to…” Starts Zach. At the sound of this she throws a pillow at him.

  “Go away…. I don’t wanna hear your voice anymore” Says Remix.

“Look, I’m sorry for what I did to you” Starts Zach.

“Go away…. You made your point already, you don’t love me” Says Remix crying.

  “I never said that” says Zach coming closer to her.

“D-do you mean you still…” Asks Remix Hopefully. He kisses her, she puts her tongue into his mouth and he accepts it by doing the same.

“I never stopped” Says Zach nuzzling her.

“Then, why did you break up with me” asks Remix.

“I’m not ready, I love you, so very much, but I am not ready for a relationship with you” Answers Zach.

“So you really do love me” asks Remix. “I will always Love you” Answers Zach.

  “But, why can’t we be together, why aren’t you ready” asks Remix.

“Because we only met a few months ago and I barely know you as a friend, I don’t even know your favorite color, I love you I do, I would even consider a foal, but not now, I am too young for this” Answers Zach.

  “I understand, I rushed you too quickly and I should have not, we should have waited, but you did look cute in that tie, I should have waited” Says Remix.

  “I know that it is a nice bow tie, and that scarf suits you too well, and I do love you, but I can’t, not yet, not while I just met you, and I will just leave, this feels too awkward” Says Zach as he gets up and starts exiting.

  “Wait Zach” Says Remix stopping him.

“What is it” Asks Zach.

“Can you ride me just one more night” Asks Remix.

“I don’t see a reason to…” answers Zach Blushing.

  “Please, just one more time will calm me” Begs Remix.

  “Alright, One more Thrill” Answers Zach.

“But you are gonna need these” Says Hunter throwing a box of condoms downstairs at Zach.

“Alright sir” Says Zach.

9:59 p.m.,

“Oh, I loved that, so very much” Says Remix Cuddling Zach.

  “I know you did, and I will really miss that” says Zach.

  “I love how warm you are right now” Says Remix.

  “Hey I am going to do something and make you forget it now” Warns Zach.

“Alright what” Asks Remix. He (French) kisses her. She just enjoys this. He pulls his mouth away and starts his horn up.

  “Wait please Zach, I want to remember this” Begs Remix.

  “You will just not for today, maybe when I am ready will I show you this memory and then pull this relationship back together” Explains Zach.

  “Alright, but just that kiss, I want to remember this for a while” Says Remix.

   “Don’t worry, that is all that I am removing” Says Zach. His Horn flashes and she forgets the kiss.

  “Good night Remix” Says Zach.

   “I will miss you” Says Remix.

  “I will too, more than you think” Says Zach as he walks out and goes upstairs to his room, because he remembers that he still live there.

To be continued…….

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