The Adventures Of The Everfree Equestrians Season 1

The Adventures of the Everfree equestrians

                                     A fan based Mlp: fim story with my own characters

On the way to the maze,

   “I think I could use a break from walking” Complains Zach.

    “Why don’t you fly” Asks Willa.

   “I have wings” Notices Zach.

    “You are clueless” Says Blue being carried by Willa.

    “How are you so light” Asks Willa.

     “A change in atmosphere” Answers Blue.

    “What …that doesn’t answer my question.” Says Willa.

   “To me it does” Says Blue.

    “Where is Hunter” Asks Zach.

    “I don’t know, maybe he is right at the start, in any case we should hurry” Says Blue. They make it to the maze entrance, to their surprise, Hunter and Remix were waiting.

    “Why didn’t you use your magic, we have waited forever.” Asks Hunter.

    “Stupid stupid stupid” Says Blue and Zach hitting their head on the ground, which is now made of Bubble gum.

   “And the chaos starts, I thought the chaos would start later” Says Hunter watching things go out of sense. They enter the maze and find that they went into a random castle entrance.

   “This makes no sense.” Says Blue.

    “Nothing makes sense anymore, now that he is back.” Says Hunter. They all turn to see Princess Celestia and Luna chained up near doghouses, and muzzled like dogs.

   “What the rut, is going on” Asks Zach being hoof-slapped by Hunter.

    “Don’t say that kind of sentence” Commands Hunter.

   “Sorry.” Says Zach. They enter a room with the rest chained up (Bradly, Vanity, Amanda, and Thomas) in certain objects (Vanity in a pony straight jacket, Bradly Upside down denying that he is in this position, Thomas in a cell and chained up (evil)Escaping, and Amanda on a sled going through portals down a hill) and the mane 6 stonified.

   “What the buck I happening to the world” Asks Blue also getting hoof-slapped by Hunter.

   “Don’t say that” Says Hunter.

    “Hello, how do you like Canterlot” Asks Discord in a throne.

    “This place is overrated” Answers Zach.

   “Can I borrow those for a moment” Asks Hunter referring to the others.

   “Attract them in your own ways; I have some decorating to do” Answers Discord.

   “Alright, Vanity, hey Vanity, Want a cookie” Asks Hunter to Vanity, treating her like a dog.

    “M-m-mouth… Robot…. Banker” stutters Vanity coming closer to the cookie.

    “Stay, Hey Amanda Lovewind, bet you can’t backflip out of that sled with a double cartwheel wing spin and 360 rotation, with a double sonic boom.” Bets Hunter.

    “Pony please… is that even a challenge” Challenges Amanda Back.

   “… All in reverse” Adds Hunter.

   “Now you are talking” Accepts Amanda. The pony then does a 360 rotation, double cartwheel wing spin, with a backflip, still on the sled.

    “Bet you can’t stay and shut your trap for 80 extreme seconds” Challenges Hunter.

   “Oh yeah” Accepts Amanda Shutting up.

    “Bradly, you really don’t want to come here” Says Hunter.

   “Yes I do” Lies Bradly. “You also don’t want to stay.

  “Yes, I do” Lies Bradly again.

   “Thomas, Try the lock-pick in your mane, use your teeth” Says Hunter giving the stallion a tip.

    “Mph mph……. Thanks” Thanks Thomas.

   “My evil plan…. Is to have you come over here” Commands Hunter. They are all surrounding Hunter in a curious way.

    “Bradly, you are great at construction, and you don’t want to build a device to hold you all down that I can use at once” Says Hunter.

   “Yes I do, and I am terrible at building” Denies the Stallion. He then builds a device to cover all the ponies and stallions at once, with locks too. Hunter covers them all with the device and nails it down, stopping all escape.

    “No…. let the mouse king go to his loyal subjects, the rocks of man land” Begs Vanity making no sense.

    “What are you doing” Asks Discord.

   “You are usually drinking at the moment” Adds Discord.

   “Just a project” Answers Hunter.

     “First the lunatic” Says Hunter. He then walks over to Vanity and starts using his magic, the horn starts glowing and a whole white beam (of purity and remembrance) pulsates out of the aura that is made from the horn. Hunter’s eyes flash white, so does Vanity’s. They both fall unconscious.

   “What the hay” says Blue. For a whole second Blue, Zach, Willa and Remix watch as the two start to awaken.

    “Where am I” Asks Vanity.

   “Sis” Exclaims Blue.

    “Oh my that really sucked, I felt so…… different” Complains Vanity.

   “Next up, the Corrupted one” Says Hunter.

   “What is that stallion doing” asks Discord to himself. Hunter then repeats the same process, only this time him and Thomas Fly to the wall then go unconscious. They both wake up.

     “Daddy” Exclaims Zach as he runs toward Thomas (his father).

   “Hi honey, let us never go into a maze again” Says Vanity to Thomas.

    “Alright” Promises Thomas.

    “What the Buck” says Discord to himself.

    “Next up the hardcore mode” Says Hunter fixing his glasses. He then repeats the process, only this time a huge beam exerts from his horn, and Hunter explodes to the roof, and only knocking him unconscious. He lands on top of Amanda, who is wide awake, but cannot hear for 2 seconds.

   “Oh, Hunter, that didn’t hurt did it, were you gentle, please tell me you were gentle” Asks Amanda. The stallion wakes up once more.

  “Mommy” Exclaims Willa.

   “Next the denied one” Says Hunter.

   “This will be very easy” Says Hunter.

    “No it will be hard” Lies Bradly. Hunter repeats the process, only both of them stay awake and a small beam forms.

    “I told you so” Claims Hunter.

   “And you are oh so right” Says Bradly accepting this.

   “What the rut, I know what you did you traitor” Claims Discord.

    “Yes, and I will defeat you, only this time stone will not be your prison, the underworld will” Says Hunter.

    “You cannot kill a god” Claims Discord.

   “You have a heart that makes you killable, my daughter taught me that” Says Hunter looking to Remix. She starts Welling up with tears. She gallops Up to him and hugs him.

   “I bucking love you” Says Remix hugging her stepfather.

    “I love you too” Says Hunter.

   “Blah, Blah, Blah, You think you will win, so woo hoo happy ending….not, you’re in my world now” Reminds Discord.

    “I don’t care, I will defeat you, you have caused too much anarchy, and I have to kill you.” Says Hunter.

    “Oh right, then how about I make you so you are just a puny pony” Says Discord as he grows increasingly and the room also grows and changes into something bigger.

   “Welcome to my kitchen, I hope you enjoy being cut up and killed” Says Discord.

    “Son of a Changeling” Says Thomas.

  “How much profanity is in the series” Asks Remix.

  “Just read the God-damned script” Says the writer. Discord pulls a knife out of a knife holder.

   “Now who’s first” Ask Discord.

   “Please don’t be me, please don’t be me” Begs Zach.

   “Traitor’s first” Says Discord referring to Hunter.

  “Oh no even worse” Says Zach as Hunter is pulled magically to the cutting board.

   “Think you have a good shot” Asks Hunter as Discord lifts the knife.

   “Pretty sure, and if I miss I guess I will take the next best candidate” Answers Discord swinging the knife. Hunter teleports before the knife hits him.

   “Miss” Says Hunter who is now on the dishwasher.

   “Next candidate, Zach please step up, and Vanity and Thomas, please stand down.” Says Discord pulling Zach to the board and holding Vanity and Thomas (And Bradly and Amanda, and the others but Hunter) Down.

    “Oh no” Says Hunter.

    “Uhh auhh” Whimpers Zach in awe.

   “Zach” Exclaims Everypony else.

    “Celestia, Damnit I thought we taught you when to dodge” Screams Hunter galloping towards Zach as Discord swings the blade. Hunter leaps and pushes Zach out of the way, losing his right front hoof and both back hooves (and his legs) to the dicing force of the blade.

    “Augh, Damnit” Exclaims Hunter in pain.

  “Hunter, oh you damned Monster” Yells Remix.

   “Shut up brat, it is your turn” Says Discord starting to pull her towards the bloody cutting board.

    “Stop…. You damned…..draconequus, I will …… kill…. You …..You damned……beast…..” Says Hunter coughing blood at each pause.

   “Oh how cute, a last speech, do continue on” Says Discord.

   “You are …..Insane you damned beast…… and ….this is a damned promise for what I will say” Says Hunter. Hunters Coat starts to form scales on a few areas and the patches increasingly grow. His mane forms into scaled spikes and his horn joins them, he also forms wings of scale. Hunter’s wounds stop bleeding and get covered in scales. His only hoof starts developing dragon like claws/ fingers on them and his joints change.

    “And this is one promise I will keep…. I will kill you…..” Continues Hunter as he edges his way to the edge of the counter while his limbs regenerate and how his tail hardens into a scaled tail.

   “And I won’t stop…” Says Hunter as he gets to the edge.

   “What, until you fall and die, well good bye” Stops Discord as he flicks the Stallion gently off the edge.

    “No, noooo don’t” Exclaims Remix being held back by the others.

    “It is alright” Says Bradly.

   “He was the closest thing to a father figure that I have ever had” Cries Remix, now being held by Zach.

   “I know, he is my technical Uncle so to speak” Says Zach to calm Remix.

    “Now that he is dead, I see no point in needing you idiots, do I will kill you” Says Discord.

   “Oh and Keep these here I don’t need them” Says Discord as he places the mane 6 six (Who are in statue form) in the middle of the crowd.

  “I am going to enjoy this” Says Discord as he swings his Knife down for a final kill. As the swing gets close, it is caught by a colossal scaled hand.

   “No, until I rip your heart out” Says a colossal Dragon/ Humanoid figure.

    “Who the hay are you” Asks Discord

   “Someone Who will keep this promise” Answers the Dragon/ Humanoid figure.

    “I know who that is” Says Remix.

   “Who” Asks Blue and Willa and Zach in unison.

  “It’s Hunter” Answers Remix.

To be continued…………….