In Which Sunset Shimmer Hypnotizes Her Friends
Applejack
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Fetishes:
Pet Play [Moderate/Major]
Hypnosis [Major]
Mental Conditioning [Moderate/Major]
That should about cover it. Let's get on with the story!
"His name is Sparkle." Sunset said, holding the cat proudly. "He is a clumsy piece of shit. But he is an adorable clumsy piece of shit and he is mine now."
Fluttershy gave the cat an even look, examining its dark blue fur and crossed eyes, before returning her gaze to Sunset.
"You know," Fluttershy said, a small smile breaking the stony mask that was her expression. "When you said you were bringing back a pet, I assumed it'd be either Applejack or Rainbow Dash."
Sunset grinned.
"I found the little dude yesterday, over by the pond." she explained. "He was trying to hop over some random thing; I can't remember what it was. But he kept on falling over the second he started to jump, and he didn't just walk around the thing. So I scooped him up and spent the next day filling out vaccination and adoption forms. Boom; I own a cat."
"That's good to hear." Fluttershy says, an air of forced patience creeping into her voice. "But what about Applejack and Rainbow?"
"You don't understand; I own a cat! This cat belongs to me! I can hug him and I don't have to share him and I can watch him fall over constantly and laugh at how cute he is and-"
"Sunset, please!" Fluttershy cried, exasperated. "Did you or did you not take Applejack or Rainbow Dash today!?"
Sunset sighed, placed Sparkle on the ground, and folded her arms across her chest.
"Look," she said. "I didn't. Rainbow and I are going to be together, but I'm not hypnotizing her during our thing together; it's special and I don't wanna ruin it. I might get around to Applejack, but the important question is..."
Sunset's eyes narrowed.
"Why do you care so much?" she said quietly.
"What do you mean?" Fluttershy asked, eyes widening.
"I mean that ever since our session together you've been pushing at me to get them under. What, are Pinkie and Rarity and your own girlfriend not good enough for you? Are you waiting for the complete set before you open any of your new toys?"
"Why not!? They're right there, why don't you just take them?"
"Because maybe I actually want to spend a few days enjoying what I've already got?" Sunset said, huffing. "Because maybe after a long day of work and college bullshit, maybe I wanna come home and relax and just forget about things, instead of listening to you yelling at me again for not hypno-raping our friends fast enough?"
There was a long silence. Fluttershy sighed, eyes downcast.
"I'm sorry." she said, finally. "I've been getting carried away, and that isn't right of me. I've been pushing you, and I didn't take into account that you have a life outside of... This."
She gestured to the house in general, and Sunset sighed as well.
"I shouldn't have snapped like that." she said, hugging Fluttershy close. "I was frustrated cause my professor sucks, and my job's hard, and I should've been thinking about you. How could you not be excited? We're this close."
They stood there, hugging each other, until Sparkle, with a plaintive meow, interrupted them.
"C'mere, you sack of failure." Sunset crooned, cuddling the cat as it struggled to escape from her arms. "Hugs for everyone!"
Fluttershy let out a giggle, and the two began laughing, sharing a deep kiss before speaking again.
"It's all right if you want to take a break." Fluttershy said. "I figure they won't notice anything for at least a few days. And besides; more time waiting means more time for my..."
She coughed.
"My priming to work."
"Still not 100% sure what your 'priming' is, but it doesn't much matter."
"So, you'll be with Rainbow today?"
"Yeah, for a couple of hours alone. But I already said; it's special. I won't take her. Not then."
"What're you two doing?"
"Fluttershy..." Sunset said, raising an eyebrow. "You know I can't reveal that. It's a secret."
"Sunset," Fluttershy replied, her tone low. "There are no secrets between lovers."
Sunset straightened a bit, and sighed as she relaxed, eyes closing partway.
"There aren't any secrets between lovers..." she murmured.
"Why don't you want to tell me?" Fluttershy asked, voice soothing, relaxing. "You know you can tell me everything, right?"
"Rainbow asked me not to..." Sunset replied, smiling widely. "Said it was embarrassing..."
"Well, she'll be ours soon." Fluttershy said gently. "It doesn't matter if you tell me, does it?"
"...I guess not..."
There was a silence.
"...Tell me, Sunset."
"Violin practice..."
"...Violin practice." Fluttershy echoed, a blank expression on her face.
"Yeah... We help each other out... Rainbow's good at playing, but she can't read music worth a damn."
Sunset gave a dreamy laugh.
"I can read music real well, but my technique needs work. We... Swap notes..."
Fluttershy sighed, relaxing.
"It's all right, Sunset." she said. "I won't tell anyone."
Sunset's trademark slouch returned, and she smiled at Fluttershy.
"Seriously, though." she said, pointing a finger at her girlfriend. "Don't tell anyone. I like my face the way it is."
Fluttershy nodded, and Sunset strode over to a nearby shelf.
"I might be able to do Applejack after." she said. "If your 'primers' work as well as you say they do, it should be easy."
"Actually," Fluttershy said, not meeting Sunset's eyes. "I've only been 'priming' Rainbow; Applejack's normal."
"It doesn't matter much." Sunset said, after a pause. "She might be strong-willed, but I can still get her under."
"You always do." Fluttershy agreed.
"Well, I'm off to practice." Sunset said, picking up a crimson helmet from where it stood on the shelf. "See you later today."
"Drive safe!" Fluttershy called as the other girl left, a wave her only answer.
The sound of an engine slowly sputtering to a stop cut through the soft susurration of rustling leaves. Applejack looked down from the ladder she was standing on as Sunset walked up, a smile on her face.
"Hot out here today, isn't it?" Sunset asked, shading her eyes as she gazed up at her friend.
"Sure is!" Applejack replied. "What can Ah do fer you, Sunset?"
"Well," Sunset said, looking down and adopting a sheepish expression. "I was driving around, and I was thinking about how hot it is out, and then I thought about you, working so hard in the heat..."
"And so you decided to give me a hand with mah chores?" Applejack asked, eyebrow raised.
"Yeah." Sunset finished lamely. "But I know how you are about accepting help; if you don't want me to..."
"No, no." Applejack said, chuckling. "Ah'd actually love the help."
Sunset brightened, rushing over to a nearby stepladder and setting it up under the tree beside Applejack's.
"Thanks!" Sunset said, grinning. "And when we're done, we can head over to my place and eat ice cream and relax."
"Sounds like a plan." Applejack replied, matching her friend's smile.
As they worked, Sunset took the time to admire Applejack's figure; the sleek, smooth form of her friend's muscles rippling as she hefted a barrel of cider, or the way her small, yet pronounced, bust wobbled as she knelt to milk a cow. With every chore, Sunset thanked whoever was up there that all of her friends somehow managed to be hot.
Soon, the work was done, and Applejack hopped into her pickup and followed Sunset, driving down the back roads that led to Sunset's modest house.
A small thing, Applejack and the others had been surprised when Sunset had purchased it. When she'd bought it, it had been beat-up, practically uninhabitable. Then, Sunset had revealed her plan; with a surprising amount of money, she'd hired a crew to completely remodel the house. Now, rather than confined, it was cozy; a one-story, five-room house on the edge of town that suited its occupant just fine, thanks.
As the two entered, Applejack slumped into a large beanbag chair in the center of the front room.
"That thing's pretty comfy, isn't it?" Sunset said, relaxing into a nearby armchair.
"Yeah it is." Applejack replied, pulling her Stetson low over her face as she leaned back. "Ah could just up and take a nap in this thing."
"Well, you certainly deserve one!" Sunset said, chuckling softly. "What with all that hard work you've been doing all day..."
Sunset's foot began tapping a slow, steady rhythm as Applejack relaxed further, the nearly-empty cup of ice cream lowering with her hands.
"Yeah..." she murmured, sighing contentedly.
"You've been working so hard..."
"Ah've been working really hard..."
"It's gotta be nice to just let it all go and relax, huh?"
"Y-Yeah..."
Applejack's eyes began to flutter, and she stared at sunset, a confused look on her face.
"What's with the tappin'?" she asked groggily. Her head felt like it was made of lead.
"It's just something I do when I'm distracted." Sunset said, waving a hand. "It's calming, though, isn't it? The taps, coming in slow... Steady... Repetition..."
"Slow... Steady..."
Applejack shook her head wildly.
"Sunset, somethin's goin' on here!" she said, trying to rise.
"What?" Sunset said. "Is there something wrong?"
"You're... You're tryin' ta do somethin' ta me!" Applejack said, searching her foggy brain for the word.
"I have no idea what you're talking about."
"Hypnotize!" applejack cried triumphantly. "You're tryin' ta hypnotize me!"
"Applejack, please." Sunset scoffed. "Think for a second. Why would I do that?"
"I..."
Applejack stopped at that, placing a hand on her chin, tapping her foot in time with Sunset's.
"Why don't you just relax into that nice, comfy beanbag chair again?"
"Nice n' comfy..." Applejack said, lying back down, eyes gaining a faraway look.
"Relax, Applejack." Sunset said soothingly. "Deeper and deeper. just relax..."
Applejack rose again, a scowl forming on her face.
"Stop!" she cried. "You're tryin' ta... ta entrance me!"
"Trying?" Sunset said, cocking an eyebrow. "Looks like I'm doing a bit more than that..."
"Ah'm not gonna let you!" Applejack said, struggling to lift her heavy... so heavy... head...
"Let me what?"
"Hypnotize me!"
"I couldn't quite catch that, AJ. could you maybe speak up?"
"Hypnotize me."
"Again, please."
"Hy-Hypnotize... Me..."
"Applejack?"
"Ah... Ah won't let you..."
Applejack struggled to shake the heaviness from her limbs, to move; to do anything, but the words circled around in her brain, muddled up and confused, and only two were clear, and all the while, Sunset's foot was tapping, tapping tapping. Tap. Tap.
"Applejack, can you please tell me what's going on?" Sunset said quietly. Tap. Tap.
"Mah... mah arms are so heavy. They're like weights." Tap. "Hy... Hypnotize me. Mah legs. Mah legs, Ah can't move 'em, they're so limp and-and loose... And relaxed..." Tap. "Hypnotize me..."
"And your head?"
"Mah head..." Tap. "Hypnotize me..." "Mah head feels so heavy, so foggy and slow and nice and warm and relaxed and-" Tap. "Hypnotized..."
"Are you hypnotized?" Sunset said, getting up from her chair and pacing, her feet still tapping out that wonderful, relaxing rhythm.
"No." Applejack said. "Just restin' fer a bit is all." Tap. "Hypnotize me."
"If I do hypnotize you, what'll happen?" Sunset said, glancing Applejack's way. Tap. Tap.
"Ah'll become your slave, and Ah don't want that."
"Want what?"
"Ta become your hypnotized slave."
"My what?" Tap.
"Hypnotize me, your hypnotized slave." Tap. "Hypnotize me."
"Could you repeat that?"
"Your hypnotized slave."
"I see."
All of a sudden, Sunset turned, staring Applejack deep in the eye as she asked a single question.
"What's on your mind, AJ?"
Applejack searched her fading mind, and found her thoughts were like mist, insubstantial and paper-thin, disappearing whenever she tried to focus on them. all except two. Focusing on those thoughts, clinging to them like a sailor to a life raft, Applejack gave in.
"Hypnotize me..." she murmured, eyes closing. "...Your slave..."
"Well, if you insist..." Sunset said, shrugging as if it didn't matter. Then, with a cough, she stood, her voice growing authoritative, commanding; the voice of a proper mistress.
"Applejack, you are mine." she said firmly, gazing down at her newest conquest. "You are mine, to do with as I please. You are completely okay with this; you welcome your servitude, as all good pets should."
With the words came a murmur from Applejack, and Sunset's eyes narrowed.
"Oh, my." she said, voice growing lower. "I haven't stumbled across a fetish of yours, have I?"
Another moan, louder this time.
"Oh, I have." Sunset grinned. "Tell me, Applejack; how'd you like to be my pet?"
At that, Applejack nearly howled, and Sunset decided she was done with teasing. For now.
"Applejack, when I snap my fingers, you will wake up." Sunset said calmly. "However, you won't wake up as Applejack. You'll wake up as Bitch. You'll be a horny little puppy in heat, desperate for anything to sate your needs. Sound good?"
Applejack nodded, face flushed, and Sunset gave her head a quick pat.
"Good girl." she murmured. "Now, whenever I call you Bitch, or say the words 'good girl', or touch you anywhere, you'll feel a sudden spike of arousal, and it won't fade until we've both cum. Understand?"
A second nod.
"Now, Bitch or not, if I snap my fingers and I - only I - tell you to sleep, you'll fall back into this place, this super-relaxed, comfy place, and you'll be mine again. Understand?"
Yet another nod, and it was time. Sunset closed her eyes, took a deep breath and snapped her fingers.
Her new pet's eyes grew clear, the fog of trance gone from them as Applejack glanced to and fro, taking in the room around her. After a tense second, the farmer's tongue lolled out of her mouth, and a series of rapid, breathy pants began streaming from her lips as she gazed intently at Sunset.
"Hello, Bitch."
At once, Applejack leapt for the other girl, knocking her over, straddling her, tongue caressing her face, her neck, her ears, everywhere in the loving kind of bath only a dog could give.
Giggling at the sensation, Sunset struggled to shove the girl away, but Applejack was at once both stubborn and heavy, and Sunset gave in, accepting the tickles and the feeling of her new pet's tongue on her body. Then, with a grunt of effort, Sunset sat up and snapped her fingers.
"Sleep." she said, and Applejack slumped over, her head resting on Sunset's bosom.
"That was a thing." Sunset panted, finally shoving the prone farmer away. "I don't know what I expected, but I should've expected that..."
With a cough, Sunset stood.
"Stand, Applejack." she said, and the farmer stood, eyes blank and glassy.
"Now what are you?"
"Ah am Bitch." Applejack said evenly, her country accent a pleasant monotone. "Ah am a horny puppy in heat."
"Exactly." Sunset said. "But there's something wrong about this. Can you guess what it is?"
Applejack shook her head slowly, and Sunset sighed, rolling her eyes.
"You're clothed." Sunset said, with a tone one might have when speaking to a small child. "And do puppies wear clothes?"
"No."
"No what?"
Applejack's face screwed up in confusion, and Sunset sighed again.
"This is what I get for rushing the induction." she mumbled. Then, clearing her throat, she spoke again.
"I am your owner, Bitch." she said calmly. "When you are in trance, or when you're Bitch, you'll know me only as your Owner. And as your Owner, I'm perfect."
Applejack let out a small moan, and Sunset raised an eyebrow.
"You're slipping." she mumbled, smacking her forehead with a palm. "First you leave out the mistress clause, and now she's not completely under."
Gazing at Applejack again, Sunset scowled.
"Well, the mood's gone." she grumbled. "All right, Applejack, I'm going to snap my fingers. when I do, you'll wake up. You'll be Applejack again, but you'll know I hypnotized you, and you'll know I'm your Owner and that I'm perfect in every way. I can do no wrong, I am the pinnacle of sexual amazingness, the whole nine yards. Whatever I tell you to do, you'll do it. Got all that?"
"Yes, Owner."
"No harm in one sexless hypnosis session." Sunset sighed, getting to her feet. "I'll just check and see what I did, make sure I got everything down..."
With the latest in a fast-growing list of sighs, Sunset snapped her fingers, the sounds reverberating through the room.
"Oh Mah stars!" Applejack cried, gazing at Sunset with rapt devotion. "Owner! Ah am so sorry!"
Before Sunset could say anything, Applejack was naked, her bra and panties flung to the sides.
"What kinda obedient pet stays clothed around their Owner?" Applejack snorted. "Ah am really sorry, Owner, it won't happen again."
"You're forgiven." Sunset said, dismissing the matter with a wave of a hand. "AJ, I need you to do something for me."
"Anythin'!"
Taking a deep breath, Sunset began.
"I'm thirsty. Can you get me some water from the kitchen?"
"Sure thing, Owner!" Applejack chirped as she rushed to the kitchen. "Ah exist to serve!"
"First I underdo it, now I overdo it." Sunset groaned. "Get it together, Shimmer! What is with you today!?"
Applejack returned, bearing a glass of water, several ice cubes clinking against the sides, and Sunset took the drink, sipping it as she sighed for the nth time.
Enough messing around; time to get to business.
"Do you remember your trance?" she finally said.
"Why, of course Ah do, Owner! Ya don't forget somethin' like that. well, unless ya told me to."
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. Look, I want you to list all the commands you've been given in order. Start from the first and go until the latest. Think you can do that?"
"Of course. anythin' for you, Owner!"
Clearing her throat, Applejack stood to attention, eyes angled off somewhere in the distance as she rattled off from memory.
"Ah am sexually attracted to Fluttershy."
Applejack was coated with liquid as Sunset spluttered, water flying from her lips. Undaunted, she continued her litany.
"Whenever Fluttershy walks into view, she's the only thing Ah notice. The way her hair flows with every movement, the way her eyes shine when she smiles; Fluttershy is the most beautiful girl in the world."
Sunset continued coughing, doubled over in her chair.
"A-A..." she choked out, reaching for her unseeing slave.
"Ah've been in love with Fluttershy for months now. We've dated on an' off, and when she confesses her love for me, Ah'll realize how amazing she is and we'll start goin' steady."
"Applejack." Sunset said, her throat cleared.
Taking a breath, the hypnotized farmer continued.
"Fluttershy and Ah have broken up. Ah can't talk to anyone about our dates, but Ah'll still remember 'em.
"Applejack!"
Tears were streaking down the other girl's face now, glittering among her freckles as she spoke.
"Ah... Ah don't need to be sad no more. Fluttershy and Ah never dated. We've always been really, really good friends. Ah don't find her sexually attractive, and Ah've never had any thoughts about lovin' her."
"Applejack, shut up!"
Panting, Sunset stood, spilled water forgotten as she stared at the farmer.
"Ah'm mighty sorry, Owner." Applejack said calmly. "Ah don't know what came over me; one minute I was obeyin' ya, and the next Ah was bawlin' my eyes out. Now why would Ah go an' do a silly lil' thing like that?"
Struggling to keep her voice even, Sunset spoke.
"Applejack, when I'm done talking you're going to get dressed. You're going to forget about everything that happened starting from the second you walked through my door earlier up until you leave here. Whenever you think back on it, you'll remember that we had a pleasant afternoon talking about all the work you had to do, all while eating some ice cream. You had a great time, and you resolved to come back in a few days to do it again. Once you're fully dressed, you're going to walk through the front door, car keys in hand, and wake up."
Silently, Applejack obeyed, and within a few minutes Sunset stood alone in a growing puddle, still holding a now-empty glass of water.
Minutes passed.
Then an hour.
Finally, Sunset swallowed nervously, set the cup down, slumped into the wet armchair, and spoke.
"Well, fuck."
Author's Note
The triumphant second coming of Qiscord has arrived! Having battled sickness and jobs and Salt Lake Comicon, I have returned!
And what a way to return, eh?
Oh, who am I kidding, you all probably saw this coming.
Here's the thing. I have a confession to make:
The reason it took so long to write this wasn't that my job leaves me with like 5 hours of free time a day. It wasn't because, a day after I told you all this thing'd be up soon, I fell ill.
And it wasn't because, the very day I was fully recovered, I ended up going to SLCC.
The reason this took so long was because I had absolutely no idea what to do with this chapter.
Seriously.
I had two concepts - Applejack and Pet Play - but I hadn't the foggiest as to how to make them work.
The twist at the end was actually supposed to be at the end of RD's chapter. Sunset was going to hypnotise her with an induction method I'm not gonna reveal cause I might end up using it later, then RD would repeat all the commands she'd been given, and the scene would've played out nearly the same as it does here, the core difference being that it was after sexytimes with Dash.
So, rather than slog through a chapter I didn't know if I could write, and make you guys suffer through it, I decided to cut out the RD chapter for now and introduce the twist early.
Sorry, RD, but you'll have to wait a while; things are heating up.
Also, you might have noticed some sudden shifts in tone and/or style throughout this chapter. That's because this is the first chapter I've written piecemeal rather than all at once; I was in different moods and thinking about different things and playing with different ideas. If it seems like a mishmash, I sincerely apologize.
Hopefully, I'll be able to write in larger chunks so it won't happen again.
