The Visit

by joshua212

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Celestia, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Nightmare Moon, Romance, Spike, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure
Length: 4025

Spike and the CMC have to stay together for a 3weeks.

Twilight and the mane 6 leave to take care of busines but.AppleJack,Rainbow Dash and Rarity need to someone to babysit leaving Spike with the CMC.

Published 2015-06-16 23:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-05-12 20:14:54 UTC

Home wrecker

Author's Note

Thanks for all the support for this story and i hope you enjoy this chapter!

Home wrecker

Chapter 2: Home wrecker
Apple Bloom slowly closed the door of Spike's room and began to walk down the huge, empty hallways of the castle.

'I don't know how Twilight and Spike live in this here castle-- it looks like it can get lonely,' Apple Bloom thought to herself. She kept walking and paused at the end of the hallway to hear Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo singing with the TV volume turned all the way up. They were so loud that the castle was vibrating. "What the heck?!"Apple Bloom yelled over the noise.

"Mysteries abound made of deep energy,
"Foes all around, well now we'll go fearless and free! I'll give you strength and you'll give me love; that's how we'll live!" Sweetie Belle sang.

"Your courage won't fade, if you're with me, my enemies will never win,
"We will fight for love and glory, we will love to tell a story!" Scootaloo joined in.

"Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle, what do you think you're doing?!"Apple Bloom yelled. Scootaloo saw her friend in a rage and ran towards the TV and quickly turned it off.

"Sorry, Apple Bloom. DragonPony Z: KIA was on and I guess Scootaloo and I got caught up in the moment," Sweetie Belle said, blushing hard.

"Well, don't let it happen again! Spike's sleeping and I don't want you idiots waking him up!"Apple Bloom yelled, still angry.

Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle looked at each other and smiled. "Apple Bloom and Spike sitting in a tree," they both started to sing.

"Oh God, not this again!" Apple Bloom exclaimed, blushing.

"K-I-S-S-I-N-G!" Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle yelled.

"SHUT UP!" a voice coming from behind Apple Bloom yelled, and that voice came from a grumpy Spike.

"What the hell are you guys doing down here?" Spike asked.

"Nothing, we were just bored and waiting for you to wake up...... and by the way, hi," Apple Bloom said with a huge grin.

"Well, I'm up!" Spike yelled.

Once Spike said that an awkward silence fell over the room. Spike quickly thought of something for them to do.

"You guys like chemistry?" Spike asked.

"What's that?" Sweetie Belle asked, tilting her head sideways. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo facehoofed.

"Goddamnit, Sweetie Belle," Scootaloo said in a annoyed tone.

Spike waved his hand, telling them to follow him, and walked down to castle laboratory. While they all walked down, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were telling jokes and Apple Bloom was staring at Spike. He kind of blushed and then tripped over his feet again.

"Oh Spike, are you ok!?" Apple Bloom said as she rushed over to him tried to help. However, Spike didn't need any help, and he got right back up and continued to get ready.

Spike finished setting up the lab to make it look like classroom. He took a large table, gave it to the girls and he took a smaller wooden desk.

"Ok, everypony, what we are about to do can cause death, so I need you to not play around," Spike said.

"If it can cause death why are we doing it?" Scootaloo asked.

"Yeah, I don't want to die!" Sweetie Bell panicked.

"Yeah we're only kids!" Apple Bloom joined in.

".......... You'll get your cutie marks," Spike said.

"Ok, what do we have to do?" Scootaloo asked with a grin.

15 minutes later

"You guys are the worst students ever!" Spike yelled as they walked up the stairs.

"We're sorry Spike, but it's all Scootaloo's fault! She mixed the red one and not the blue one!" Apple Bloom exclaimed, following Spike up the stairs.

"It's not my fault that I'm color blind," Scootaloo said.

"Oh. ......my bad, Scoots you never told us," Apple Bloom said, feeling like a jerk

"Nah, I'm kidding. I just wanted to see what they'd do when I mixed it!" Scootaloo said with smirk.

"Well, you found out-- it blew up and destroyed the lab! You could have killed us!" Spike yelled.

"Well, maybe we can fix it up. Rarity told me that they might be gone for three weeks," Sweetie Bell said.

"THREE GODDAMN WEEKS?! I HAVE DEAL WITH YOU GUYS FOR THREE WEEKS?!" Spike yelled.

"Woah, Spike, have a Snickers. You get a little jerkish when you're hungry," Scootaloo said, and other two couldn't help but laugh.

Spike walked over to couch and sat down. He tried figure out what he was going to do, but nothing came up. He was doomed and it was their fault-- no, it was TWILIGHT'S fault for leaving him here. 'Damn you, Twilight,' Spike thought.

"I hope Spike and the girls are ok. He did seem kind of mad when I left," Twilight said worriedly.

"I am sure he's fine, darling, and it's too late to turn back now. We ARE already on the train," Rarity pointed out.

"Wait Twilight, can explain to me again why the princess wants us?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Well, Princess Luna discovered something strange in somepony's dream, and she wants us to help her find out what it is," Twilight replied.

"So no party?" Pinkie Pie asked.

"No," Applejack responded.

"I hope it's not dangerous," Fluttershy said, with a hint of fear.

"Don't worry about it. This is a quick mission and we'll be home fast," Twilight said, trying comfort Fluttershy.

The train kept rolling down the tracks and into the sunset.

"Ok, everypony sit on the couch and watch a movie. I'm going to try to clean up down stairs," Spike said.

"What about lunch?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"I'll make something when I'm done," Spike replied.

He got a broom and a mop and tried his best to clean up the lab, but it wasn't working. He knew what he had to do: a full remodel. He had no choice-- the floor and walls were burnt and scratched up, and the counter tops were cracked.

"Hey, Spike. You need help down here?" Apple Bloom asked as she walked down the stairs.

"There's nothing I can do. It's a wreck down here," Spike sighed.

"You ok? "Apple Bloom asked.

"I don't know and I don't care" Spike responded, not looking at her. She said nothing and walked up the stairs, looking back at the disheartened purple dragon.

"Look y'all, we messed up. We NEED to help Spike," Apple Bloom said.

"But it looks like he's got it under control," Sweetie Belle said.

"Get your flanks up! We're going to Zecora's," Apple Bloom said.

"But Apple-" Sweetie was cut off by Apple Bloom dragging them to the castle door.

"This is going to be a lousy adventure," Scootaloo sighed.

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Author's Note

Sorry for the wait i kind of busy uploades might be slow but enjoy the chapter
Also check out my other story. Dark Moon

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The girls made it into the Everfree Forest, and of course, it didn't take a long time to reach Zecora's hut, but they had to be very careful walking through the forest because of the blood thirsty creatures. However, Scootaloo wasn't doing a very good job at being careful. She kept going on about how much she hated staying with Spike. She complained so much that even Sweetie Belle got annoyed, and Apple Bloom had to do something quickly before Scootaloo attracted some unwanted guests. Apple Bloom turned to Scootaloo.

"Scootaloo, if you don't keep it down, I'm going to slap you into next week! Don't you know timberwolves are out here?" Apple Bloom asked quietly. She then turned back around and continued to walk.

"Gee, I'm sorry, but it's not my fault that your BOYFRIEND's a bad babysitter," Scootaloo said with a smirk.

Apple Bloom closed her eyes, sighing heavily. She remembered what her sister AJ had said: be the bigger person, walk away, and don't say anything.

"Too bad he likes Rarity," Scootaloo said, with an even bigger smirk.

Sweetie Belle couldn't help facehoof. "Oh man, Scootaloo, did you have to--"

But just as Sweetie Belle was about to finish her sentence, Apple Bloom jumped on Scootaloo and they began rolling on the ground, fighting.

"HEY GUYS, STOP!" Sweetie Belle yelled.

Apple Bloom and Scootaloo looked at each other and then at Sweetie Belle, their eyes wide. They had never heard Sweetie Belle yell before.

"You know, I knew this was going be hard for us three to get used to having no adults around, but I didn't think it was going to get this out of hand! We aren't even supposed to be out here! What were you thinking, Apple Bloom? We need to head home right now!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed.

Scootaloo and Apple Bloom got up and dusted themselves off. "Sorry," they both said, looking ashamed.

"Come on, let's go home. And shut up, but first say you're both sorry and then hug," Sweetie Belle said, still a little upset.

"Sorry, Apple Bloom."

"Sorry, Scootaloo."

They both hugged and smiled.

"Great, now come on," Sweetie Belle said, regaining the smile on her face.

--

Spike sat on the couch, a cup a water in his hand, watching tv. He took a sip of his water and looked at clock. "Huh, seven o'clock. I wonder when the girls are coming back... But then again, I don't really care," Spike muttered forlornly and he took another sip of his water.

The front door opened and Sweetie Belle popped her head in to check the place out. She looked around ans saw Spike slouching on the couch. "Um, hi Spike," Sweetie Belle said, smiling.

Spike heard her and looked at her for a brief moment, but then looked back at the tv. Sweetie Belle noticed this and her smile disappeared.

She closed the door. "Ok guys, he's still upset, so just act natural," she said.

Sweetie Belle opened the door and was first one to walk in, followed by Scootaloo and Apple Bloom.

All three wandered in the living room, but Spike didn't even pay attention to them and kept watching tv.

There was a awkward silence and the girls looked at each other, using body language to talk. Eventually Apple Bloom spoke up. "Um... Spike, are you ok?"

Spike said nothing and took a sip of water.

"Hey Spike, why aren't you listening?" Scootaloo asked.

"Spike!" the three girls exclaimed, concern etched on their faces.

Spike sighed heavily and looked at the girls. "What do you guys want?" he asked, annoyedly.

"Well, we're sorry for destroying the lab and we want to make it up to you," Sweetie Belle said with a smile.

"What can possibly make up for that?" Spike asked.

"Well, it's a surprise, so you're going to have to wait. And don't go into the kitchen!" Apple Bloom replied.

Spike stared at the three girls. "Whatever, I don't care," Spike said, and he turned around and looked at the tv.

The three girls looked at each other and walked into the kitchen, getting ready to make their "surprise."

7 minutes later

"Hi there, it's Billy Mays with another exciting product! Do you hate it when kids break stuff?" the voice from the tv asked.

Spike paid more attention to the advertisement. "Well, get Magic Stick! This spray puts a magical force field around anything you spray: couches, glass, even your hand! But wait, there's more--" Spike turned the tv off and smiled.

He jumped of the couch and headed into the kitchen. When he walked in, his heart jumped at the sight of Sweetie levitating a lit match over the gas stove.

Lit match + Gas stove=

"SWEETIE BELLE, NO, NO, NO!" Spike panicked. He ran over to turn off the stove but was stopped by Apple Bloom.

"No Spike, you'll ruin the surprise!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

"Yeah, if I could just get this stove heated up," Sweetie Belle said. Spike saw her levitate the match closer to the stove.

He pushed Apple Bloom out the way ran and jumped. He snatched the match out of Sweetie's stream of magic and landed.

"Oh shit, that was close! What the hell were you thinking, Sweetie Belle!?" Spike shouted angrily.

"I-I was just--" Sweetie stuttered, only to be cut off by Spike.

"I don't care, just stay Twilight's room! I want all of you to go to sleep!" Spike snapped irritatedly.

The three girls walked out with their heads hung, and Spike sat down to catch his breath.

"One day of hell down, twenty to go," Spike sighed as he laid back.

--

The girls were in Twilight's room. They still pretty pretty down about the situation. 'I guess I won't get that hug or kiss,' Apple Bloom thought sadly.

"Good night, guys. Let's get some sleep-- I have a feeling it's going to be a rough day tomorrow," Scootaloo sighed.

Sorry

Spike slowly rose from his bed, rubbing his eyes gently and let a soft cough. When he looked out the window and noticed that it was still dark out, he puts his head down on the pillow.

After ten minutes of tossing and turning Spike couldn't go back to sleep. He yawned and rolled off his bed, falling face first but picking himself back again.
He stumbled across his room to the door, twisted the nob and pushed the door open. He walked down the hallway to the living room and then to kitchen, nearly jumping out of his scales when he saw Apple Bloom drinking water.
"Jeez AB, you scared me!" Spike said, still a little jumpy.
"Oh! Sorry Spike . . . I couldn't go to sleep," Apple Bloom said.

Spike took notice at her tone of voice and the sad look on her face he already knew the problem with her.

"Look AB, I know I've been hard on you girls and it's not fair. I'm just really mad that Twilight is always leaving me here and never spending time with me . . . I-i-i'm sorry," Spike said, lowering his head.

"Spike . . . I should be saying sorry not you. You're just trying your hardest to keep peace," Apple Bloom said.

"AB it's been one day and look what happened. Maybe the reason Twilight doesn't bring me with her because she knows I can take care of myself," Spike said.

Apple Bloom saw a tear roll down Spikes left check and her heart beat faster and faster as she worked up the nerves.

"Well, would it make you feel better if I said . . . I like you a lot?" Apple Bloom said with a smile.

Spike looked up at Apple Bloom, blushing a little but it faded quickly. "Look, I have to go back to bed . . . Good night, AB,"

Spike walked away leaving Apple Bloom alone.

Morning time

Sweetie Belle walked down the hallway of the castle, ready to make a bowl of oats. She stepped in the living room to see Apple Bloom on the couch, sleeping. She didn't even notice she left the hallway as she walked over to her slowly.

"AB . . . Wake up, wake up," Sweetie said.
Apple Bloom groan and rolled on her back.

"APPLE BLOOM, WAKE UP!" a voice yelled behind Sweetie Belle. Sweetie whipped head around to see Scootaloo laughing quietly.
Scootaloo what the hell?" Sweetie Belle hissed.

"Hey what's going on here?" Spike said as he walked behind Scootaloo.

"Nothing, just Scootaloo being a jerk," Sweetie Belle said, and Scootaloo rolled her eyes in reply.
"Look, just let AB sleep. Go make a bowl of oats or something," Spike said, pointing to the kitchen.

The girls walked in the kitchen and Spike looked at Apple Bloom and a small smile came on his face.

Mabye she not all bad as i think so Spike thought to himself

Twilight

When the six of them walked off the train to see a small forest town full of wandering ponys and shops, it reminded the girls of their own small town.

"Well, darn. This place looks beautiful!" Applejack said smiling.

"Yeah, but too beautiful..." Pinkie Pie said, narrowing her eyes and looking around slowly.

"Oh Pinkie. It's a town that needs our help so let's do what we do best," Twilight said.

"Make enemies that wants us dead then make them our friends?" Rainbow Dash quipped.

"No," Twilight sighed.

"Come on, let's just get moving, someone probably needs our expertise," Rarity smiled.

The girls walked through the town receiving dirty looks from the ponies around. They waved at them but the townsponies just looked away.

"Does any one else notice the looks they're giving us?" Fluttershy whispered.

"Well let's just keep up and you will be OK," Twilight said.

"OR WILL YOU!" A deep voice boomed.

A pony in black and white masked with a white cape and a red gem on his forehead looked at the girls. The pony jumped in front of them Breathing heavily.

"Who are you?" Pinkie asked, awestruck.

"They call me Riser, and if you don't leave this town you will die!" the pony roared

"What a dumb name. Now move out the way before you taste the power of the mane six!"Rainbow Dash said hovering over her friends

"So be it," the pony said, his gem beginning to glow as beams of lights hit the towns ponies, making their eyes glow red. They ran towards the girls, one tackling Fluttershy and three jumped up and took down Rainbow Dash.

Twilight, Applejack ,Pinkie Pie and Rarity were surrounded and taken down.

Why me?

Some days you feel like doing nothing, others you feel like you can take on the world, but today was not one of those days. You can't call me lazy as it's a Monday morning and Twilight let me sleep in all weekend and even eat in my own bed. And I really don't fee-

"SPIKE, GET DOWN HERE WE HAVE WORK TO DO!" Twilight's voice boomed through the castle.

"......speak of devil....COMING!" Spike yelled back, still resting in his bed. Spike slowly got out of bed, throwing his blanket in the corner of his room. He began to pull himself through the castle hallways.

"HURRY UP, FOR CHRIST'S SAKE!" Twilight yelled again.

He tried to walk faster but tripped on his own feet and fell face first. "I knew I should stayed in bed," Spike said, in a annoyed tone.

He stayed lying down until he heard hooves coming his way and stopped in front of him. "Spike... you alright?" Twilight asked.

"Twilight...why today? Why? work today? " Spike asked, still with his face in the floor. Twilight said nothing and elevated him onto her back.

"Oh God, not this aga- whoo, Twilight stop!"Spike yelled. Twilight was doing her thing; she like the call GET the hell up and what she was acting like a wild bull.

"Are you awake or do you want round two?" Twilight asked with a smile.

"I'm awake," Spike said.

"Great, the girls and I have little something to give you," Twilight said with a smile.

We were sitting at that big table the Mane 6 called the Table of Harmony.

Twilight let me sit in her chair and in front of me was a big red and yellow striped box.

"Well, open it," Rainbow Dash said with a smirk.

I had been about to place my hands over the box's lid to see what they got me, but I started to think. Why were they giving me present? It wasn't Christmas or my birthday, but then I put two and two together: they wanted me to do something for them.

"The answer is no! I am not going DO it!" I said angrily. They all looked at each other in confusion.

"What are you talking about, darling?" Rarity asked confusedly.

"You guys always do this when you want me to do something, and then you six run off to an adventure! It's annoying when you guys get to go on the crazy adventures while I am doing your taxes!" I yelled.

"Look, Spike, it is very important that we you stay here in Ponyville while we go on a very important mission that the Table of Harmony gave to us," Twilight said, calmly.

"What is you need me to do? Clean-up? It's a table, Twi, you pay more attention to it more than me?" I said.

The girls looked at each other and Pinkie Pie spoke: "Well, Applejack wants you look after Apple Bloom, Rarity wants you to do the same for Sweetie Belle, and Rainbow Dash wants the same for Scootaloo."

Once Pinkie Pie said that, I snapped. I hated those three. They were annoying, and I thought Apple Bloom had a crush on me, which is creepy. Twilight already knew this and she chose ME to watch after them? Why not the Cakes; they love kids. There's a retarded gray horse out there, eating muffins, and she loves kids and they go and choose ME. But I already knew they wouldn't let me come on the the adventure, so what the point of fighting?

"Fine, I'll watch them," I said as I getting down from the chair

"Great the girls and I-" Twilight was cut off to see me already out of the room.

"He didn't even open his present" Fluttershy said, sadly.

"I better go talk to him," Twilight said

"Sugarcube, wait. We should probably leave him alone," Applejack said.

"You're right. We're already running late; we should get the girls ready," Twilight said, with a little sadness in her voice.

The girls walked out and Spike was in his bed sleeping.

It was white all around me and in front of me was Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie.

"Twilight!" I yelled, joyfully. I tried running but couldn't move.

"Ha, look at you! You're useless!" Twilight laughed, while the others joined in.

"What!?" Spike exclaimed, shocked.

"You think we care about you?" Rainbow Dash yelled.

"Why do you think we leave you at home while we go have adventures?" Fluttershy said.

"We all use you-- Well, mostly me," Rarity laughed.

"What an idiot," Pinkie Pie said.

"Face it, Spike you're useless to us," Applejack said.

They all began to walk off leaving me in tears. I looked up to see them disappear.

"Spike, Spike, Spike...... Wake up!" a voice yelled.

I woke up to see Twilight and the three fillies I wasn't too happy to see.

"Yeah, what do you want?" I asked, sullenly.

Twilight was taken aback by his tone of voice. Was he mad? she thought to herself, but she quickly focused on girls.

"Girls, be good to Spike and I promise he will be good to you," Twilight said with a smile.

"I can't promise that, but I will try," Scootaloo said, but Sweetie Belle quickly nudged her in the arm.

"We got ya, Twilight," Apple Bloom said with a smile. Twilight smiled back and walked closer to my bed.

"Spike, I promise we will hang out when I get back. Just you and me. Does that sound good?" Twilight asked, but I didn't answer. "I love you and I left some bits on the counter," Twilight said. She hugged me and gave me a kiss on the forehead.

Twilight walked out the room, looking back at the angry dragon.

"What the hell was that all about?" Scootaloo laughed.

"Shut up, Scootaloo! Can't you tell he's going through some stuff!" Sweetie Belle yelled.

I said nothing and put my head back down to catch some sleep.

"Spike, you ok?" Apple Bloom asked.

I put my head up and looked at the girls. "Look, we will do something when I wake up. In the meantime, watch tv or play outside and there's food in the fridge," I said, annoyed.

"Ok," Apple Bloom responded, and the girls walked out the room, shutting the door.

Author's Note

Thank you Inkplot for the cover page and thank you for reading good bye and see you soon.