The wrench chronicles (bioshock)

A/N: sorry about the stupidly long wait ... This is the end, I didn’t write this story to last very long it's lasted longer than I wanted and well to be honest not the best ending, bit dark but It's this or nothing tbh.

Jack, *twenty minutes later*

"I'm really sorry Jack, I jumped to conclusions" Twi was looking at her feet, while Celestia was grinning like a Cheshire cat ... The little minx.
"that's fine Twi, to be honest it was kinda fun, I forgive you." as I looked around I noticed something strange, one of the pillars flickered between the normal white marble and a rusty metal he knew so well. I rubbed his eyes and it was white marble 'weird'

"What’s up Jack?" Luna was looking at me her head turned slightly at an angle.

"Oh nothing just saw something weird, it was nothing though," AJ and the rest of the mane six walked in through the door, they had either guessed that the conversation was over or they would've walked in anyway.

"Guys that last train leaves in a few minutes, we will have to run to catch it, goodbye princesses" the six small ponies galloped bounced and Flew away all in the same direction.

"Hey wait up! Bye princesses!" I sprinted off after them, while they had a head start I knew I could catch all of them, except Dash and maybe Pinkie but that depends on her mood, if she wanted to be I bet she could be faster than Rainbow Dash.
The train station loomed closer as we ran towards it, as we skidded to a stop outside the ticket station and was given seven free tickets ... Apparently free of charge, played for by the princess.

I walked down the train with Jass and Night in hand when a dripping of water was heard, a puddle was located on the floor a steady stream of water trickled down from the corner of a window. I put a hand out and felt the water it was cold ... Icy cold, I tasted the water only to find out it was salty ... Sea water. I shook it off and continued to my seat, the leather was red and cracked slightly but comfy either way.

The trip back was neither eventful nor packed with adventure; I for one was tired but refused to fall asleep despite a certain ponies promise. While AJ and Rainbow Dash were talking about apple cider, Pinkie, Jass, Night and Fluttershy were playing a game of poker, Pinkie had found a dealers outfit somewhere and was busy throwing cards out. What really baffled me was how Jass and Night knew how to play. Meanwhile Twi and Rarity were gossiping about something but I couldn't quite make out what. 'Now to the mystery involving the mirages, maybe it's an illness? No I'm not feeling ill, maybe it's some kind mind trick devised by twilight as punishment? Nah, she seemed genuinely sorry.' "Oh god I know what's causing this it's ..."

We were in Ponyville in what seemed like no time at all, 'whoa that was weird,' it is if time jumped, the sun had moved a considerable amount and the amount of chips everyone had was different. 'What was I thinking about' "last thing I remember was saying something about..." I blinked and suddenly I was stood in front of Twi in the library "so what is it you wanted to speak to me about?" she looked at me expectantly.

I decided to go with it and just explain the anomalies I has seen "well first things first, ever since our trip to Canterlot I ... Well I have been seeing things, marble turning into a rusty metal and sea water seeping out of a window and just recently I have missing bits of memory, it's every time I mention an evil man from back home"
"Hmm are you sure you’re not ill"

"Well no but..."

"Well then you need to visit the doctor" it was unlike Twi to just dismiss an opportunity to study something unknown, unless it isn't unknown.

"You know what is wrong with me don't you?" she looked at me as she flickered in and out of existence "HEY! what is this!" my hand started to warm up as the fire engulfed it.

A voice that was not entirely Twilight's boomed out, it reminded me of someone but I couldn't say their name out loud "you couldn't be happy with the world I hand crafted for you could? I chose not to kill you but now the debt is repaid and you will die!" the whole world started to flicker, a red stain was spreading from my chest but no pain was felt"
"Oh come on" a darkness started to creep through my vision, it was one I had seen before many a time.

Atlas:

I stood over the drugged fool, blood seeping out of his chest, "I tried to repay you for your help and you repay me by trying to break free? Stupid boy" my blacked muscle bound hands barely holding the tiny revolver. To think the perfect world with everything he could possibly want, and he doubts it and tries to fight my creation.
Atlas shrugged it off and walked into the crumbling city known as rapture.

A/N: can i just say sorry for this crappy chapter, but I've been finding it impossible to write anything, every time i try this is at the back of my mind niggling away. i could not get myself to write more than this, the unusual writing style i had used (1st person) was both annoying, that and i just wanted to end it, this chapter took me 13 weeks to write (on and off) and if i ever feel like coming back to this i will add a bit of a change and continue it. if you read that chapter and hated it, well i understand i hate it. But thats the only way i could think of to end it without it going on for another 3 chapters which knowing me will never get done. and as you can probably tell from the grammar in this last author notes has declined so much that i cant write anything for a while.