Huricán's Hell

by Frisk Ramirez

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Dark, Romance
Length: 1975

Huricán's journey through sex, drugs, and gangs in Ponyville and Manehatten.

Huricán a senior in High School he's is number one in his class and…he tried to kill himself. After a eerier warning from Luna about a mystery mare he soon is drawn into a world full of sex, drugs, and gangs due to that mare Midnight Pleasure but Luna also said the one he knew all of his life will save him from this: Floral Drizzle. Will her escape and find sanctuary in heaven with Floral or will he burn and crumble in hell.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-06-26 04:30:01 UTC

The Decent

"Huricán! Wake up!" My mom yells at me from our apartment in downtown Ponyville. I open my eyes to feel the warm air from the fan in my room which felt oddly comfortable. I sit up and slide to the edge of the bed and my mane covered my eyes. I finally made my resolution to end all my pain...all my sorrows...I'm going to kill myself.

"And so my sun sets on this day." I sigh and get up to comb my mane and I look in the mirror.

"Celestia I look horrible." I go over to my desk and grab my stuff. Today is the last day of school the last day I will see my friends. I grab all the notes I made six to be exact and one for my mom she doesn't need me she'll do better without me seeing my dad is dead and I was an only child.

"Huricán! Get your ass down here you still have school!"

"Shut it mom! I'm coming!"

"What was that Mr?!"

"I'm coming mom!" I fly downstairs into the kitchen and grab my lunch.

"What did I tell you about fl-" I didn't catch the rest of her nagging because I was already out the door I left the note on the table where my lunch was.

It took me a while but I finally made it to school...Hell basically.

"Hey Huricán!" It was one of my friends Fresh Dew.

"Hey Dewy." She hits me.

"Don't call me that." I give a fake laugh that sounded real.

"Okay...wait here don't read it until the last block okay?" I give her the note she warily took it.

"Okay?" She walks off confused I sigh.

"Never understands." I walk around and give my notes to all my friends but one I saved this one for last for my best friend...Floral Drizzle.

“Hey Floral.” I give her a smile to make a facade of my true feelings.

“Hi Huricán how are you?”

“Fine here read this.” I give it to her and walk away never looking back and I hear her cry and I feel each one of her teardrops hit the ground I start to feel sick.

“I’m sorry.” I say quietly as I walk out the school to the bridge.

My life wasn’t all sunshines and rainbows like they thought it was. I lost my father in a fire when I was 2 I still have nightmares about it...the smell of burning wood and flesh just goes through my snout. I wasn’t that popular sure everyone knew me but they only knew me as the “mistake” because I did almost nothing in class...I was the best in my class but I didn’t hang out with the cool kids I hung out with the rejects the outcast. I’ve been beaten everyday it wasn’t a rare occurrence to see a pony pass by and not do a thing faculty or student didn’t matter...the only one who would actually help me was Floral but she ended up getting beat as well.

I arrive at the bridge and I sigh.

“My time has come to an end.” I get on to the edge and look down I started to feel sick and I threw up it splattering all over the ground like blood splattering all over a wall.

“Huricán! Please don’t do this! I don’t want you to go!” I look back to see her tears flowing down her face and spilling onto the ground.

“Life without me will be better Floral.” She starts to cry harder.

“No it won’t! It never will be Huricán! Never!” I feel a tear go down my cheek.

“I’m sorry…” I jump off and don’t open my wings. I feel the wind fly around me as I fall to the ground.

“No!” I hear Floral yell as I fall I keep falling and falling until...I blackout.

I look around It’s bright I see three ponies One looks like Floral the other looks like she’s shrouded in mystery. A blue mare walks up to me and I instantly knew who it was...It was Princess Luna.

“P-Princess Luna!?”

“Yes...you aren’t dead but I must warn you about your future.”

“What my life can’t get any worse then it is.”

“That’s what I’m warning you about listen here: Beware the mare shrouded in mystery she brings your downfall and if you go too deep you may not come out alive.”

“She sounds interesting.” She gives me a glare like my mother.

“But the one you known all your life.” she points to Floral. “May save you from the thought you have and the mare shrouded in mystery.”

“Right...just wake me up.” She sighs and shakes her head.

“You have been warned.” She flaps her wings.

I wake up gasping for air.

“He’s awake!” I look around it seemed unfamiliar I start to freak out.

“Where am I!” I sit up but the push me down and a voice told me.

“Calm down you are in the hospital.”

“Hospital!? So I’m not dead!?” I try to process it but I can’t...so I just lie down and calm I see my mom looking at me her eyes red and face looking twenty years older.

“Huricán calm down honey...just calm down.”

“How long have I’ve been out?” I look at what seems to be the head doctor.

“You’ve been out for...three weeks.” I scoff at him.

“Really? Ha! You must be joking...Right?” I see my mom tear up and put her face into her hooves.

“Son...you have been out for three weeks.”

“What?” I start to sit up but I feel an instant jolt of pain in my chest I see a small scar on it.

“We had to do open heart surgery it was necessary to save your life.” He explained.

“Son I enrolled you in a mental help group you start tomorrow.”

“What! I don’t need help!”

“Then why did you try killing yourself!” I stop and I didn’t say anything.

“Fine I’ll go.”

“No tell m-”

“Shut the fuck up mom!” She looked at me hurt and cried again.

“Huricán! you shouldn’t speak to your mother like that!”

“You shut up doc! You aren’t my fucking dad!”

“Young man! Shut it and sleep!” I see the nurse put some liquid in my IV and I start to fall asleep.

“You fucking bastard…” I black out again.

I got the same dream from last time with Luna I just ignored her and I woke up my mom wasn’t there or the Doctor I look over to see a note from her.

“Huricán please go please I want you to have a better life I don’t want you to end up like your father.” I sigh and shake my head.

“Fine I’ll go.” I get up and try to walk but fall I wince from the pain I start to get up and walk again taking in all the pain and I slowly walk to the building that the help group was at.

I arrive and look at the all brick building in downtown Manehatten the area was rough I saw a pony get shot and his brain splattered all over the floor. I look at the door and sigh.

“Room B254” I open the the door and took the stairs up and I immediately saw the room the door was open. I make one more sigh and walk in the room and I saw ten ponies one seemed...familiar her seats were open so I took the one next to her and she smelt like perfume. She looks at me curious and I looked at her then she blushed.

“H-hi…” she said

“Hey...m-my name is Huricán what’s your’s?”

“My name is Midnight Pleasure.” her voice sounded smooth and graceful she looked beautiful already.

“Umm...why are you here?”

“I’m dealing with depression.” My eyes widened.

“Me too!” she perked up.

“But I don’t want to be here my mom forced me to go here.”

“Same my mom forced me too.” She looked excited now.

“You wanna get out of here and have some fun?” I started to get excited myself.

“Yeah absolutely!” we both get up and run out the building. “So what do you have planned?” She grabbed my hoof and took me to a bar.

“You ready?”

“But don’t we need IDs?” she scoffs.

“We in Manehatten baby! we don’t need IDs.” she calls over the bartender.

“Yeah?”

“Two Applejack Daniel’s.”

“Okay.” He gives us two mugs full of it. “Drink up!”

“Have you tried alcohol before?”

“No.” I say feeling guilty.

“We it may seem strong but it’ll get better I promise you that.”

“Okay.” I look into the full mug and I took a sip...whoa! it felt weird and fuzzy...I love it I started to chug the whole thing down and I was finally finished.

“Wow that was awesome!” she chugged her’s and she called for more and we keep drinking and drinking soon I couldn’t think at all everything felt tipsy.

“Now I was like ‘Fuck you man! you aren’t my father!’ And I laughed so hard.” She leaned on me and rubbed my upper leg.

“You wanna head to a hotel to have some real fun.” she said drunk and I was more than happy to go with her.

“Sure! I’m always up for fun baby!” I said still drunk and she grabbed my hoof and rushed me to a hotel.

We both got into the room and she pushed me on the bed and kissed me deeply and passionately and I gave her back more I started to get hot and she started to grind on me.

“Ooh baby…” I flip her over and she giggled.

“Mmm I like my stallions controlling.” I smiled and moved down to her legs and started licking getting closer and closer to her clint she shivered in pleasure. I stop and smile then I licked her pussy and licked deeper in her and she moaned and moved closer to my tongue. I stop and lick her clint she gets up and pushes me back on the bed and rubbed my cock.

“It’s so big and hard...I love it.” she licked me and sucked my as I moan in complete pleasure.

“Yeah like that baby.” I moan more and I  couldn’t handle it anymore I pick her up and throw her on the bed and rub my cock on her clint.

“Wait.” she goes into her bag and pulls out a condom and puts it on my cock. “There now fuck me like no tomorrow.” I feel a rush of adrenalin go through my body.

“Okay.” I put it in her and felt her squeeze me as I lose my stallionhood and she groaned as she lost her marehood.

“Oh fuck!” I start moving in and out and went faster and faster. “Harder! Harder Huricán! Show me that pegasus speed!” I move as fast as I could the bed was shaking very fast. “Oh yeah! that’s fucking perfect!” And then I felt something rush through my body and I came she moaned very loud as she came too I layed on her and looked at her her tongue was sticking out.

“How are you?” I ask feeling tired.

“Great...you-you ready for round two?”

“Round two?” I looked at her confused she goes into her bag and pulls out some white powder.

“Here sniff this.” she pulls out a small amount and puts it under my nose. I sniff it an HOLY SHIT! I instantly get back up and start fucking her harder.

“Ooh! that feels good!”  she groans and smiles.

“Yeah it does!” I keep fucking her harder and harder until we both came again and we both fell asleep both from our mating session and the powder it was an amazing night.