Jurassic Equestria

by Dracosaurian

Chapter 3

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We immediately went to Canterlot. The trip took a day but we finally made it. We got off the train and went straight to Canterlot with the nobles staring at me like I crawled out of a dumpster and muttering something on the lines of 'hairless ape' and 'filthy creature'. Which of course I got angry and changed into a Triceratops and shouted "Charge" I went over to some of them "Hows this for a hairless ape"

"Aaaahhhh demon, guaaarrrdddsss" a noble with a blonde mane said running to the castle.

"You just scared Prince Blueblood the most pompous noble here" Twilight said.

"Well then he got what he deserved. Just ride on me the whole way" I said.

They got on and we went to the castle, we chatted on the way with them asking stuff about Earth. We got to the castle then they got off while the guards pointed their spears at me and said "Hold it who are you"

I changed back and said "I'm with them" pointing to the girls "I'm the special guest"

"Oh sorry sir"

We went inside where Princess Celestia was pacing around

"We came as fast as we could Princess and we brought Owen" Twilight said.

"Thank you Twilight" Celestia said.

"What's going on why isn't my magic working why are there cotton candy clouds and the animals are weird"

"I'm afraid an old enemy has arisen. A draconequus named Discord, we must get the Elements of Harmony to stop Discord"

We quickly ran/galloped to a vault. When Celestia opened it she was shocked to see no Elements of Harmony. "This doesn't make sense" said Celestia.

Then we heard laughter coming from everywhere that said "What fun is there in making sense"

"Discord show yourself" Celestia said.

"Why hello my little ponies and hello Owen" Discord said.

"How do you know my name?" I asked.

"Well of course I had to catch up on things that happened in the last thousand years. And I see your child in the bag how about I see her." he said grabbing my bag and snatching Blue out.

"No Blue!" I said.

I tired to grab him but he removed his arm away too quickly.

"Give me back my daughter now" I screamed while changing into a Pterodactyl "Ptero" I said in a spanish accent.

I flew up and chased him around the room but I kept missing.

"Ah ah ah you will be with her soon" he said snapping his fingers changing me back.

"Where are the Elements of Harmony Discord" Celestia said.

"Oh always so boring Celestia fine I'll tell you but my way. To retrieve your missing elements you must first make sense to these change of events. Twists and turns of my master plan, then find the elements back where you began." he said disappearing.

"Hmm twists and turns and end up back where we began. The maze" Twilight exclaimed

We went to the maze while Rainbow tried to fly up to get a better look but her wings disappeared, then Fluttershy's and Twilight's and Rarity's horn disappeared.

"Your horn my horn aaaaahhhhhhh" they screamed.

Then Discord appeared and said "Ah ah ah no wings, no magic and no Owen rule."

He trapped me in a cube. I tried to change into I-Rex but I couldn't break it instead I just turned back.

"Don't bother you can only turn into a raptor there and other dinos that aren't big" he said

"Give him back Discord" Rainbow shouted.

"How about DENIED" he said.

We disappeared and got back to Ponyville with Blue in another one.

"How about I merge you together" he said.

He pushed both our cubes together and I ran to hug Blue.

"Daddy I'm scared." she said.

"Shh shh it's okay daddy's here" I comforted her."What kind of villain are you you just make cotton candy clouds, chocolate rain, magic apples and turn buildings upside down. The people of my worlds history will make you look like an insect in comparison"

"This is just the tip of the iceberg my friend and if you'll excuse me I'm gonna mess with your friends"

He opened a portal and went inside to mess with the ponies and we had to watch through it.

He kept messing with their minds and made them forget what were their elements were with Twilight being the only one not Discorded.

"Blue I'm gonna change keep me hidden in your mouth and when he opens the cage you spit me out" I said.

"Okay daddy"

I changed into a Zalambdalestes and shouted in a squeaky Brazilian voice "Samba"

I hopped into Blue's mouth and when Discord came back he asked "Where did your father go?".

She just stood there.

"Well I just can't force a baby to talk. Oh well I guess I can let you run around a bit" he said.

He opened the cube and Blue hopped out and I jumped out of her mouth and changed into I-Rex and shouted "Untamed" then bit Discord's head off.

His head just reshaped back together and he said "Well I didn't expect that" he blasted me away into a building and I changed back and got knocked out


I woke up to Blue shouting "Daddy"

I got and Blue jumped on me and I said " We'll be back Discord"

We saw Twilight outside the library and went to her.

"Owen you escaped" Twilight exclaimed.

"Yeah but lets get the elements and defeat him" I said.

"Yeah we have a problem we tried that before but we just failed and they went in other directions, but I have a spell that will change them back"

"Alright then" I said giving Blue to her "Keep her safe"

"I will, but where will you go?" Twilight asked.

"I'm gonna distract Discord"

They ran off finding the other elements.

"Omnitrix, Untamed" I said shifting into an I-Rex and ran to Discord.

"Discord!" I shouted.

"Well well well back for more I see" he said.

"You bet I am" I said biting his lion paw.

It just reformed back and slapped me on the face. I growled in anger. He tried to slap me again but I dodged returning with a slap of my tail sending him back to his throne. He fired a beam of chaos at me and blasted me into a house. I changed back with cuts on my face but I got up and changed into Foxtrot and jumped on his head biting his deer antler off.

"That was a bad idea" he said.

"Why?" I asked.

"'Cause you just swallowed a bit of chaos essence"

"What does that do?"

He didn't need to answer 'cause I felt a pain in my head and fell to the ground writhing in pain.

"Well what do you want a quick or painful death?" he asked.

I remembered everything that happened in Equestria since I got here saving Birch, Blue's hatching and scaring that pompous noble off. I couldn't just let them down. I hit the dial on the Dinotrix without any consent and felt sails growing on my back, a frill on my head, two giant wings, bony plates on my back, my neck growing longer, three horns sprouting from my head, gills, spikes on my tail, teeth that could cut through diamond and claws of pure steel.

"Ultimate Untamed!" I roared with primal rage.

"Uh oh" Discord deadpanned.

I stared at him with blood red eyes  slammed him into town hall and rammed him into three houses. I threw him up into the air and followed after him and pushed him back down with my legs and stomped him flat with every bit of primal rage from every part of my body.

"What in Equestria is that?!" I heard Rainbow say.

I turned around with everypony looking at me with fear shock and confusion, but Blue looked like she was going to cry.

"Blue...no..." I said with my eyes going normal again.

I changed back and fainted.


I woke up hearing the sound of a heart monitor and looked around me and saw I was in a hospital.

"Ah you're awake mister Grady" a feminine voice said.

I looked over and saw a white mare with pink hair tied in a bun.

"Ugh what happened?" I asked.

"You blacked out with your battle with Discord and lost a lot of blood in the process. You've been out for two days"

"What happened to Discord?"

"He's back in the Canterlot Gardens. The Element bearers took care of him"

I sighed happily knowing Blue was safe.

"You have some visitors. Would you like to see them"

"Yes... I would like that"

She opened the door revealing the girls and Blue and came in.

"Are you okay daddy?" Blue asked.

"Yes I'm fine" I said.

"So you turned into that thing we saw?" Rainbow asked.

"Yeah it was activated by the chaos magic I swallowed" I said.

"Can I study the Dinotrix sometime?" Twilight asked her eyes glimmering.

"No. But I could make up for it by splicing all your DNA's with something" I said.

"Really?!" they all shouted.

"Sure just gimme a moment but they will change your appearance"

"Omnitrix splice Twilight's DNA with Galvan and Cerebrocrustacean DNA, Rainbow Dash with Fastrack's, Fluttershy's with Wildvine's, Pinkie's with Upchuck's and Ballweevil's, Rarity's with Diamonhead's and Chromastone's and Applejack's with Waterhazard's and Armodrillo's.

Twilight just looked normal, but with a line separating her head, Rainbow Dash got cat eyes and a cat tail, Fluttershy got a third eye and spores on her back, Pinkie got four tongues and a spit she could make into a ball which she was just rolling around right now, Rarity got crystal armor and Applejack has an exoskeleton.

"Okay so Twilight should be smarter than ever before and shoot lightning from her brain, Rainbow dash is the fastest pony on land and air and strong too, Fluttershy can see in the dark and produce plants, Pinkie should be able to eat anything and spit explosive balls of plasma, Rarity can make diamonds and other gems and fire energy beams from her hooves and Applejack can shoot water from her hooves and drill any rocks in the orchard"

They were all admiring their new powers  but Fluttershy was cowering in the corner.

"This calls for a 'We defeated Discord and Got New Powers Party'!" Pinkie shouted.

We all laughed at this.


I got released from the hospital early and Pinkie threw her party at nighttime and we partied into the night.

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