Darker ending for Season 5 premiere

by PonyStory

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Sad
Length: 850

That equal village is more terrible than our heros might have expected.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-08-27 15:12:00 UTC

Chapter 1

Twilight, Pinkie, Rainbow, Applejack, Rarity and Fluttershy were put into that little house, where they should accept theory that 'everypony is happier, when they're equal.' what was made by Starlight Glimmer. They had been in that little house for 3 days now and they only got glass of water on every meal turn. And on every morning Starlight asked them if some of them, have wanted to join with already joined ponies.

"Please come out." said Starlight Glimmer to mane 6.

They came out and waited Starlight to speak.

"Now you 6. Have any of you decided to join us finally?" asked Starlight Glimmer curiously.

"No!" said all 6 in choir.

"What a pity. I didn't wanted to tell you that, what I'm going to tell, because I wanted to be sure that you really want to join. But as things are like that, I'll tell you what is coming next. When somebody hasn't accepted our theory, they...die. Some days of starving and you'll find your end. I'll come tomorrow and give some versions to die." said Starlight like that would have been everyday thing.

"Wait! That isn't fair. First you take our Cutie Marks without our premission, then you kill us, only because we don't wanna be talentless zombies." yelled Rainbow Dash at top of her lungs.

"Now that's a insulting." said Double Diamond.

"Oh, Rainbow Dash, you really have to learn how to keep your mouth shut." said Starlight Glimmer with her usual calm voice, but that gave sign that won't last long anymore.

"Maybe I do. But not today. I have much thing say to you. First of, that community sucks. And for second, what life it is when you can't do what you like, because some stupid equal mark is stuck on your flank. For third, removing Cutie Marks is much painful and nopony should get to know that. And without real Cutie Marks nopony smiles right, like Pinkie said when we first got here." said Rainbow to Starlight.

"And I'm sure you won't want to live under her hoof. She's a murderer what makes you a murderer. Do you really like it?" asked Rainbow from 'Zombies' what she liked to call them.

"SHUT UP!" yelled Starlight, losing her niceness. She just slapped Rainbow's cheek as hard as she could. Rainbow cringed in pain and stepped back a little.

"Now if you would be so nice, go back to your house." said Double Diamond and lead them to their house. Starlight looked like she would explode soon. Same story was with Rainbow Dash.

They had been locked in when they heard Starlight Glimmer saying.

"Sorry no friends in long time."

Rainbow had gone on a rampage. She broke those 2 bookcases what were on the wall. When these were destroyed, she took books and teared them apart. After that was curtains turn.

At the same time other 5 just watched that. They couldn't do anything. That was clear even to foal, that Rainbow Dash in a rampage is same dangerous as hungry lion. There was only one pony who could calm her down, that was her mother.

When everything was destroyed, Rainbow landed on a ground, and just started sobbing. Applejack came to her and took Rainbow into her hug.

"It's okay, Sugarcube, it's okay." Applejack tried to convince herself and others.

"NO, it's NOT! We're going to DIE here and you're saying it's OKAY!? D-don't try to fool yourself." said Rainbow through tears.

"It's not what Ah meant...alright it was. But if we are goin' to die, we're goin' to do it proudly." said Applejack.

"You meant awesomely." Rainbow corrected.

"Yeah. That's what Ah meant." Applejack said.

Rainbow had stopped crying and let out quiet yawn.

"Somepony's sleepy?"

"Yeah always when I have cried, I want to sleep after it."

Like she said Rainbow fell asleep. Only pony who hadn't noticed what happened around her was Twilight, Princess of Friendship. She was pacing around and panicking.

"If only Spike would have wanted to come with us. I could have send letter to Celestia and everything here would have been avoided. We shouldn't have stormed right here, when that stupid map said something. HOW in the wide world of Equestria, we even fell into their trap. If we wouldn't go into that cave, we would be alright. If I wouldn't be equal, I could blast that door away. Everything is that map's fault. But maybe it isn't. Maybe our fate is to die here. Or could we have done something to avoid this situation. What have we missed? Was there something more? What if-" Twilight's discussion was cut of by Rarity.

"Calm down, Darling. You couldn't do anything to stop this. We were meant to die here." Rarity said quietly.

"Oh, Rarity, I-I don't now what t-to do or feel. Like my brains were taken. B-begging wouldn't help nor would polite asking. Rainbow a-already tried yelling and convincing. We can't just die here. We c-can't just give up. But we can't do something either." Twilight said. Then she hugged Rarity and started sobbing.