My List Of Ideas

by GarfieldThePony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance
Length: 4819

Ideas

Ideas

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-12-27 18:02:51 UTC

IWAM 1-4 + TSC + OTT Ideas

IWAM 1 - "It Was A Misunderstanding"

Main Character

Name: Fluttershy

Element of Kindness

1-Falls in the Discord

2-Has to change Discord back to stone

3-Protects Discord's statue

Main Character

Name: Discord

Lord of Chaos

1-Already in Love with Fluttershy

2-Gets turned to stone for majority of the story

Main Villain

Name: Eris

Ex-Apprentice of Discord

Personality: Evil, Manipulative, Misunderstood

1-Tricks Mane 6 into changing Discord into stone

2-Has blue cotton candy clouds that rain root beer

Chapter List

1-Surprise

2-Melancholy Win

3-What Now?

4-Canterlot

5-Stoned Perspective

6-Dream

7-News

8-Battle

9-United

10-Confrontation

11-Question

Quotes

Discord

"Say hello to my little pony!”

The draconequss gasped dramatically, "Pinkie, how could you! Drinking root beer with my enemy, that's despicable."

"Blue cotton candy clouds...? Have you ponies and Fluttershy forgotten that I have pink cotton candy clouds that rain chocolate milk not root beer? I'm ashamed in you all."

IWAM 2 - "Til Death Do You Part"

Main Character

Name: Discord

The Lord of Chaos

1-Gets mind-controlled

2-Gets shown his fears - Fluttershy getting hurt

3-Blasts Fluttershy when mind-controlled

Needed Ideas

1-Reference BoD

2-Cadence pregnant with Flurry Heart

Main Villain Parts

Name: Drocsid

Reverse Discord

Personality: Mischievous, Cunning, And Remorseful

Reason: Getting Revenge for Getting Rid of Eris

1-A draconquss clone made from Eris

2.Uses Chrysalis

3-Makes a Changeling Invasion

Chapter List

1-Answer

2-Unexpected Guest

3-Checklist

4-Start Up

5-Bird Choir

6-Wedding Dress

7-Decorations

8-The Cake

9-Recheck

10-Disruption

11-Drocsid

12-Enraged Chaos

13-Til' Death Do You Part

Quotes

Discord

"C'mon, let me on!"

"That seems rather unfair."

"I'll blast this door open!"

"I'll teleport inside!"

"I'll use my X-ray vision!"

"Please?"

"You have everything planned already don't you?"

"Do not attempt to move or we'll be shooting ourselves."

"Now that's low. When I was evil I had standards!"

Twilight

"I've enchanted the room, so you won't be able to see through."

"Pinkie is guarding the other side."

"The spell also disables you from teleporting in here."

"IWAM 3:Love, The Most Chaotic Emotion"

Main Character

Name: Discord

The Lord of Chaos

Reason: Protecting Fluttershy While She's Pregnant

1-Getting Nightmares (and as illusions): Fluttershy dying, Him becoming evil again, and Fluttershy leaving him because she doesn't love him

2-Becoming overprotective

3-Thinks Fluttershy left him

4-Torments bullies that bullied Fluttershy

5-Tries to fed Fluttershy's animals

6-Uses Purple Hyacinth as apology

7-Works with Celestia

8-Has Guy's Night

9-Has an argument with Fluttershy about how weak she is

Main Character

Name: Fluttershy

Element of Kindness

1-Pregnant

2-Uses a frying pan on Discord when he misbehaves or she's mad, he blocks it with a pillow

3-Thinks Discord cheated on her, but it was just an Taraxippi illusion

Main Villains

Name/Type:  Taraxippi

Greek Mythology for ghosts that frighten horses)

Reason for ponynapping Fluttershy: They want to be more feared

1-Lives in a haunted mansion in Hayseed Swamp

Random Ideas

1-Flash and Twilight wedding mid-story

2-Married couple arguments

3-Discord's Flying Castle that runs on Chaos Magic

4-Shoulder Angel returns, gives advice to Discord, after an argument with Fluttershy

5-Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie's wedding: Cheese Sandwich makes a joke with his best men (Discord, Spike, and Flash) for Pinkie. When the ring needs to be presented, in order, the best men take out a number of small, empty boxes. Once they have no more boxes, Cheese presents with the real box with the ring in it, and says, "Is this what you're looking for?"

Guys Night Suggestions

1-Discord's Club With Zoot Suits and Jazz Music

2-Discord's Draconquss-Cave Movie Night

3-Spike and Big Mac's Ogres & Oubliettes Game

4-Cheese Sandwich's Bowling Night

5-Cheese Sandwich's Go-Kart Night

6-Flash's Camping Night

7-Flash's Fishing

8-Soarin's Poker Night

9 -Fancy Pants' Golf

Place they went during their honeymoon

1-Prance, Maris - Discord and Fluttershy at the Eiffel Tower

2-Germineigh - Discord wearing Lederhosen

3-Italhay, Venice - Discord and gondola ride for Fluttershy

4-Anugypt - Awkward Dinner Party with Discord, Fluttershy, and Baast

5-Haywaii - Discord being forced into a volcano by pony natives

Chapter List

1-Nightmare (Discord awakens from his nightmare and tries to hid it from Fluttershy, Discord and Fluttershy have a conversation on his dreams)

2-Morning (Fluttershy awakes to find feed the animals, only to find Discord trying to feed them without his magic, Fluttershy gets called by the Cutie Map and leaves a saddened Discord behind, Fluttershy and Twilght head toward the GriffonStone)

3-Surprise (Discord and Spike run away from changelings after getting back phoenix eggs, Discord gets a message that Fluttershy is in the hospital and soon figuring that she's pregnant)

4-Pregnant (Aftermath after the hospital, Discord comes home after settling tensions between Griffons and Dragons, Fluttershy's craving kick in)

5-Affects (Fluttershy's pregnancy starts to show)

6-Activities (Discord teaches Fluttershy golf (Fluttershy beats Discord), Discord and Fluttershy go to the spa (Discord chooses Deep Tissue Massage) to experience each other's likes)

Quotes

Discord

"Where is she?! Is she okay?! How long does she have left to live?!"

"I have a vacuum cleaner and I'm not afraid to use it!"

"I did not just fall for that."

"Ow! What's with you and that frying pan?"

"Curse you and the baby."

"What's the point?"

"She...she left me..."

"Her ring."

"No, no, no."

"Curse you, genetics!"

"You know, I can't help it, your so cute when your flustered."

"Not the bees, not the bees!"

"It's my day off, which means, we have the whole day to ourselves." She giggled as he pulled her into a passionate kiss.

"Any day I spend with you is my favorite day. So, today is my new favorite day."

"I didn't know what it was, I saw in you," he flashed her a mischievous grin. "Maybe it was because of your soft pink mane, your soft buttermilk fur, your enchanting teal eyes when it was glistening in the moonlight, or how cute you are when you're trying to hide your blush like you're doing right now."

"Pull the lever!"

"Wrong lever!"

"The problem was that the dragons were stealing from the griffins valuables, and then the griffins were stealing the dragons valuables. So basically it was a whole childish argument over how stole the valuables first."

"I may or may not have encased her in hot fudge."

"She does deserve it, my dear. After all she did hurt your feelings."

"They took Fluttershy." His eyes flashed crimson as he bared his sharp teeth. "Where?"

"Alright, who's the inferior, rotten, self-centered ghost that stole my Fluttershy?!"

"Maybe you haven't heard of me, or maybe you don't know what your ghostly boss has taken from me. But to be honest, I don't care. I'm in a rotten mood, and holding a bit of a grudge. Where's my wife?"

"IWAM 4: My Little Screwball"

Main Character

Name: Screwball

The Princess of Chaos, Discord and Fluttershy's Daughter

Reason: Unknown

Personality: Bubbly, Chaotic, Kind, and Sweet

1-Powers: Chaos Powers (Unable To Control At Times)

2-Helps Puparium

3-Main Friend to Puparium

4-Losing control by Chrysalis Making Her Evil

5-Tries to stop Puparium from taking her magic by turning herself to stone

6-Helps Teach Real Love To Puparium

7-Uses Chaosville For training

8-Has A Shoulder Angel And Devil Screwball

9-Has a nightmare about losing control of her magic

10-Kisses Puparium and getting rid of the chaos magic in his system and replacing it with love magic

Main Character

Name: Discord

The Lord of Chaos

Reason: Doesn't trust Puparium, because he's a Changeling and he had a bad experience with them

1-Tries to convince Puparium to leave

2-Waking up from a dream and writing his will - Mandatory!

3-Jumps in pictures to spy

4-Does Stand-Up Comedy Does Bob Newhart's King Kong - King Kong, a rookie security guard at the Empire State Building seeks guidance as to how to deal with an ape who is "18 to 19 stories high, depending on whether we have a 13th floor or not". He assures his boss he has looked in the guards manual "under 'ape' and 'ape's toes

5-Chases after Pupuriam when he accidentally takes some of Screwball's powers with armys of Discord

Screwball's Love Interest

Name: Puparium or (Pupar for short)

Chrysalis' Son, Prince of Changelings

Reason: Meeting Screwball after getting injured from battling a Manticore

Personality: Sweet, Generous, Good Intentions, Curious

1-Powers: Transforms Into anything or anyone Strong magic user

2-Falls in love with Screwball

3-Lives with Screwball and her Family

4-Scared of Discord

5-Gets help from Screwball

6-Tries to take Screwball's magic while she's out of control

7-Almost dies due to the chaos magic in his system

8-Kisses Screwball and replacing the chaos magic with love magic

Main Villain

Name: Chrysalis

Queen of Changelings

Reason: Wants to take over Equestria

A master manipulator and sets up situations that benefit her

1-Uses Pupar to make Screwball lose control of her magic

2-Makes Pupar get Screwball in trouble

3-Finds out Puparium is helping Discord

4-Knows Puparium likes Screwball and takes advantage of it

Needed Ideas

1-Diamond Tiara referencing Gold Digger

2-Gala With Treehugger And Smoozie

3-Inside Out Reference For Discord and Fluttershy

4-Apple Bloom and TenderTaps Wedding

5-Screwball's punishments are not using his magic for a certain time

6-Screwball's Magical Outbursts gets built up, and it gets out of control

Pranks War

Discord's Pranks

1-Make Puparium's room upside down

2-Massive Water Balloons

3-Turn Puparium Into Stone

4-Make the food in the fridge animated

5-Make Everything Big

6-Wax The Floors

7-Force Puparium In The Chaos Dimension

8-Flood The Castle

9-Replace Shower Water With Ice Cubes

10-Give Puparium Ghost Pepper Sauce

11-Change Puparium Into Cheese

12-Add creepy, smiling dolls that turn their heads around in the castle

Screwball and Puparium's Pranks

1-Fake Make Fluttershy To Stone And Break It

2-Pie Fight

3-Water Balloons

4-Persuade Flying Badgers To Hide Discord's Hands

5-Make Fluttershy Angry At Discord Multiple Times

6-Super Sour Apple covered in caramel

7-Add lots Of Lemons To His Chocolate Milk

8-Have business ponies chase after Discord

9-Turns Discord into a chicken

Describing Discord's Castle

Exterior-Red Blocks, Different Shaped Windows, Different Pattern Curtains, Garden with Cotton Candy Trees and Chocolate Milk Rivers, and Animals

Interior-Ceiling is made out of a black and white checkerboard, Endless Hallways of Rooms, Upside Stairs To Upside Doors, floor is made from green curly carpet that's made out of grass, donut-shaped tables, soft, cushiony, unsymmetrical chairs

Nightmare Night Ideas

1-Disord invades Puparium's dreams with various slasher horror movie characters

2-Discord leaves Puparium in the Everfree forest

3-Multiple popular culture references with costumes (Discord and Fluttershy; Beauty and the Beast, The Joker and Harley Quinn, Vampires, Captain Goodguy and Saddle Ranger. Screwball and Puparium; Lions, Zombie and Ghost, Mouse and Cheese,)

Mane 6 Children

Shining Sentry

The fifteen-year-old son of Flash Sentry and Twilight Sparkle. He looks like is a alicorn, but actually he's a pegasus with a useless horn as an result of a birth defect. He has blue eyes, a taupe coat and, and a blue mane. His cutie mark is shiny shield. His personality is; brave, bashful, helpful, and smart,

Cheesy Pie

The eight-year-old daughter of Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie. She is a earth just like her parents, however she's more energetic then three fillies combined, in actuality, she has ADHD. She has cyan eyes, a beige coat, and a brown curly mane. Her cutie mark is a pink, smiling balloon. She's friendly, energetic, and ready to give ponies a smile.

Party Pie

The eight-year-old son of Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie. He is a earth pony just like his sister, however he is less energetic then his sister and more energetic then his parents. He has green eyes, a brown curly mane, and a orange coat. He does not have a cutie mark. He's cheerful, energetic, and ready to throw a party.

Applefang

The fifteen-year-old son of Applejack and Spike. He is a Drag-Pony; part dragon and pony. He is able to breath green fire like his father, and buck trees like his mother. He has green lizard eyes, a brown coat, and orange spines. He has a green flame for his cutie mark. He's helpful, cranky, sometimes stubborn, and ready to lend a hoof.

Cumulus Dash

The fourteen-year-old daughter of Rainbow Dash and Soarin. She is a pegasus, that has inherited most of her speed from her parents, making her a fast flyer. She has a light blue coat, magenta eyes, and a blue mane. Her cutie mark is a lightning cloud. She's just like her mother; competitive, often times cocky, and unknowingly outshines Storm Dash.

Storm Dash

The nine-year-old son of Rainbow Dash and Soarin. He is a pegasus that is a very weak flyer, he is considered a late bloomer on his flying, even though he comes from a family of Wonderbolts, he is not made fun of due to his lack of flying, most of the time.  He has a blue coat, blue eyes, and dark blue mane. He has no cutie mark. He's often unsure about himself, most of the time happy, and easygoing.

Sapphire

The fifteen-year-old daughter of Rarity and Fancy Pants. She is a gifted unicorn like her parents and goes to the same school as Shining Sentry, though she was born into the elite society, she doesn't mind being in it as long as she gets to spend time in Ponyville with her friends. She has a pure white coat, blue eyes, and a blue mane. She has a sapphire cutie mark. She's sweet, kind, and a caring pony.

Puparium's Name:

Puparium wasn't my first choose for a name for him. He was actually called Llabthom as a little joke of DF's Mothball which is Llabthom backwards. The word Chrysalis means the first pupal stage in the making of a butterfly, in which the chrysalis becomes a cocoon, then the Puparium is the final form of the the Chrysalis stage. Pupar is a form of his mother, metaphorically growing from a chrysalis to a cocoon then to puparium.

List of Rooms

1-Main Entrance

2-Ball-Pit Room

3-Pool Room

4-Living Room

5-Zero Gravity Room

6-Space Room

7-Disembodied Hands Opera Room

8-Storage Room

9-Bounce House Room

10-Dining Room

11-Savannah Room

12-Room of Nothing

13-Arcade Room

14-Room With The Weird Baby Head

15-Room To Different Places

16-Candy-land Room

17-Ocean Room

18-Ballroom

19-Art Room

20-Upside Down room

21-Theater Room

22-Library

23-Bowling Alley room

24-Theme Park Room - ChaosLand

Quotes

Discord

"If you hurt my daughter or my wife, you will be sent to the Chaos Dimension and fed to the flying badgers!"

"There's a Changeling in my house. How do you expect me to feel?!"

"I'm keeping my eyes on you," he growled. "All eighteen pairs of them."

"Don't worry, It's not poison unfortunately."

"Hey! What's that over there?!"

"I'm Captain Goodguy,"

"Sing my Captain Goodguy theme song."

The draconquss coughed a cloud of smoke. "You...are despicable." He said dryly before he collapsed on the floor.

"Yeah, Uncle Spike had a shotgun wedding."

"I have the perfect room for the little insect," he said, rubbing Puparium's head roughly. "in the dungeon."

"A-And what I mean by dungeon, I mean newly-furnished guest room."

He wagged his claw mockingly. "Ah, ah, ah, we need set some boundaries first, First rule; Twelve inches away from each other."

"My fatherly instincts kicked in."

"You will address me as "Sir" or "Mr. Chaos" or "Mr. Lord of Chaos"."

"You can't expect me to let a Changeling live with us now!"

"It has six months and only six to show me that it's different!"

"Being a role model is overrated."

"If you hurt any of her friends or their families, I swear I'll teleport you to Tartarus and leave you behind in Lord Tirek's Cell!"

"I left him in the Everfree Forest."

"I'm sure you don't want to mess with me."

"I don't trust the way he looks at my daughter."

"He goes back with his own insect kind."

"Topical."

"And that door over there with the cotton candy clouds is Screwball's room," He blinked for a moment. "Under no circumstances you enter her room!"

"I was just merely...observing the picture from the inside, totally not spying."

"Uh, honey? Can you put me back together?"

"He has to earn my respect and my trust."

"I think I used a tub full of wax or a boatload of wax, I might have over waxed just a bit."

"I fear he has contracted Ostrich Fever, he's unable to fly for a whole day."

"All you Changelings look the same."

"You said and I quote. "AnyPONY isn't allowed to have anti-gravity rooms." But dear Pupar here isn't a pony he's a Changeling, so your rule doesn't count."

"I'm just feeding the mice some cheese."

"Is it just me or has everything become big?"

"It's Flutterzilla!"

"You can't beat the KING of prank wars!"

"Not the frying pans!"

"The manual doesn't say anything about babies with chaos magic!"

"I told you! I don't have my parents anymore because of the...."

"Oh, sure. I'll go back to school and take child parenting classes."

"Can't we send him to Princess Cadence?"

"You always were the one on your mother's side on family matters."

"Oooo, is that your naughty side talking?"

"I missed my naughty Fluttershy."

"Besides I'm all out of chocolate milk."

"I will kill him with this rusty spatula."

"What? It doesn't have to be rusty."

"If you hurt a single hair on her head, I will personally feed you to the flying badgers."

"I am NOT going soft!"

"Oh, I'm not mad...I'm furious!"

"D-Don't w-worry. I'm not mad." Discord said through his teeth.

Puparium

"I-I-I'm Pupar."

"I faked my death."

"I'm here t-to see Screwball."

"Mother only told me lullabies about how to crush your enemies."

"Can I find that costume offensive?"

"Royal Changelings can sense other Changelings in disguise."

"It's short for Puparium."

"It's like those swirling eyes of hers put me in a trance."

"I'll just sleep on the floor...the n-non-existing floor?"

Screwball

"Pupar? That's a funny name."

"I had a nightmare..."

Fluttershy

"Captain Goodguy will be sleeping on the couch for the rest of his life, if he doesn't find Llabthom."

"DISCORD!" - multiples times.

"Be nice to our guest."

"Do you really think Princess Cadence would want a changeling living with her after what happened at her wedding?"

"Oh, don't worry! He's not dangerous..."

"If you can't control your anger, I will make you sleep on the couch."

IWAM: The Shipping Chronicles

"IWAM: Our Time Together

IWAM: Spinoff Mini-Stories

A series of one-shots detailing the mischievous adventures of B.C, Before Cratomar, and A.D, After Cratomar. Follow

Ideas

1-Uncle Spike wants to visit his comic world, so he asks Discord with the all of the kids and Pinkie Pie on taking them to the comic world. Discord is hesitant about it, but agrees. An adventure goes out when Spike, Discord, and Pinkie Pie, and the kids go into the comic where they go to Trothem.

Superheros

Spike - HumDrum/Robin

Discord - The Disorder/The Joker

Pinkie Pie - Filli-Second/The Flash

Party Pie - Filly-Second/The Third Flash

Cheesy Pie - Fille-Second/The Four Flash

Sentry Light - Flying Arrow/Green Arrow

Storm Dash - Thunder/Weather Wizard

AppleFang - Killer Dragon/Killer Croc

Cumulus Dash - Captain Lightening/Storm

Sapphire - Blue Radiance/Blue Lantern

Side Characters

Mane/Bane

Madame Mysterious/Clayface

Doctor Order/Doctor Fate

Applejack - Mistress Mare-velous/WonderWoman

Twilight - Masked Matterhorn/Cyclops X-Men

Rainbow Dash - Zapp/Storm

Fluttershy - Saddle Ranger/Hulk

Rarity - Violet Radiance/Violet Lantern

2-Button Mash asks Discord to make his zombie apocalypse game in real life.

3-Game show hosted by Discord, in reference of the Looney Tunes short, The Ducksters

4-Opposite Discord - Accord

5-Flash feels like Twilight doesn't care for him that much when she directs all her attention to Spike recently.

Quotes

Twilight

"Oh, Flash. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make you think that. Spike has been with me since I was a filly, and seeing him all grown up and leaving hurts my heart. Spike may be my number one assistant, but you're my number one husband."

Spike

"Make sure you have a scroll and quill on ya at all times."

6-

Chapter List

New Writing Method

        She choked, rubbing her eyes -- the crying ceased, Discord broke into tears, he buried his face in her fur and sobbed, Discord exclaimed, throwing up his paw and claw in exasperation, throwing up his/her hooves in exasperation

He gazed up at her and reached out his claw. She held it as she allowed him to caress her face and wipe away her tears.

Covering her face, she rushed to her bed and sobbed. In the distance, she could hear Discord roaring like a wounded animal.

He/She Continued, called, started to say, murmured, protested, demanded, explained, pressed, huffed, pipped, hollered, croaked, breathed, gulped, finished, started, urged, cringed, questioned, hissed, blinked, hesitated, snorted, advised, chirped, smirked, frowned, inquired, blushed, cocked an eyebrow, exclaimed, cleared his\her throat, cried, shrieked,  panting in relief, heaved, shrugged, said, squeaked in panic, whispered, yelped, grunted in frustration, winced, snapped around and narrowed his gaze at her, rolled his/her eyes, scoffed, was silent for a moment, shook her/his head, groaned, froze, snapped angrily, choked, barked desperately, cocking her head, agreed, patted his/her head, swallowed, his/her eyes shimmered, teased, laughed,

Stomp his/hoove

Describe how are they feeling in long details,

Say they're species name ex: The yellow pegasus, the draconequss, the earth pony, the lavender unicorn

said in a melodic voice

said in a deep, mesmerizing voice

said in a hypnotic voice

said excitedly

said sadly

said aloud

said with a shrug

said with a wink

said with a smirk

said with fake seriousness

said firmly

said suavely

said with a gulp

said quickly

said nothing

gasped suddenly

gasped in horror

gasped in disgust

moaned blissfully

moaned in response

gave her/him a look of sympathy

She put her hoof to her mouth in horror.

faced him/her in shock

Stared at her/him

glared at her/him in determination

sighed

sighed sadly

sighed wearily

sighed longingly

sighed in defeat

sighed in satisfaction

sighed heavily

WAKES UPS -- Discord/Fluttershy sat up in bed with a gasp. Fluttershy woke up with a jolt

smiled coyly

smiled proudly

smiled sweetly

smiled slightly

forced a small

smiled hopefully

smiled determined

EXPRESS ANNOYANCE

narrowed eyes and grumbled

EXPRESS ANGER

frowned brow, clenched fist, gritted/clenched teeth

Eyes burning red, with fury and rage

italics

EXPRESS SADNESS

sighing, doubting themselves, hung their head, isolating

Woolly's Critique

Actually I think you've improved a lot! This story has some really original ideas I've not seen before.

Some things I noticed though. A few misspellings: The plural should be spelt "draconequui" and the singular is "draconequus".

Also a suggestion: the chocolate milk and candy cotton clouds thing is something a lot of authors mention and it's kind of overdone, especially since Discord is a creature of unpredictability. Maybe change it to different smells and sights? :)

Is there a reason Discord's father got angry when little Discord said he wanted to be the Lord of Chaos? I'm asking because it seems like all the draconequui have really disharmonious names. Maybe if they were called something that was the opposite of chaotic and disharmonic?

Lastly, there's a lot of "tell" instead of "show." For example, this line:

However, something was different: He wasn't alive, he was dead.

Rather than telling the reader straight away that Discord is now dead, describe his confusion more, and how Fluttershy and Screwball can't see him. Maybe have Fluttershy say at the end of it: "I...I think he's dead!" Or something like that. Also an introduction to Screwball might be good, as readers might not know she's their daughter right away.

But on the whole, I think it's very original and intriguing! And I want to know more about the mare and the villians. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but that's nothing that can't be fixed with a proofreader or editor. x

Hope this helps!

Story Ideas

"Stoned Love"

An old enemy gets revenge on Discord by turning Fluttershy into stone. Since she's an Element, she can't be freed, and Discord can't use his magic to free her.

Main Character

Name: Discord

Lord of Chaos

1-Protects and Comforts Fluttershy statue

2-Talk With Her Statue

Main Character

Name: Fluttershy

Stoneshy

1-Trapped in Limbo

Main Villain

Name: Chrysalis

Queen of Changelings

Reason for attacking: Get revenge on Discord for killing her mother, Food

Quotes

Discord

"You don't know how it feels! How it feels to be trapped in stone unable to do a thing!"

"Glue! I need Glue!"

"Chrysalis, you have hurt us for the last time!"

"She's in Limbo!"

"She's not leaving my sight!"

"Don't worry, Stoneshy. I'm here."

"No, I'm perfectly fine carrying the pony of my dreams statue, thank you very much!

"Her wings! They're broken!"

Fluttershy

"I feel so cold."

"Help."

Chrysalis

"You took somepony from me and I take somepony from you. Fair deal right?"

"Look at all these wimpy pegasus statues."

"Love and War"- Beauty and the Beast approach

Draconquui and ponies hate each other, and are fighting in a cold war. During this tragic event, a yellow pegasus learns that her stallion fiancé is cheating on her. Heartbroken, the pegasus runs into the woods, where she is captured by the draconquui and taken to their ruler.

7) The ponies (important) in Celestia's kingdom are:

Sunset Shimmer

Spike

Trenderhoof

Blueblood

Mane Shadowbolt Six

Flash Sentry

Twilight Sparkle

The ponies trapped in Discord's kingdom are:

Applejack

Rarity

Pinkie Pie

Rainbow Dash

Cheese Sandwhich

Main Character

Name: Discord

Lord of Chaos

1-King of all Draconqui

2-Falls in love with Fluttershy and realizes that the war is stupid

3-Carries on the war for his father, King Disorder and grandfather, King Chaos because it started from a love triangle with his grandpa, Sombra, and Celestia. Queen Celestia beat King Chaos, but King Chaos refused to the peace treaty, so he killed Sombra and continued the war

4-Feels guilty about leaving Fluttershy in the dungeon

5-Thinks Fluttershy is a spy and leaves her in the dungeon

6-Keeps Fluttershy in the castle, so he could use her against Celestia

7-Crown has an silent animated Discord on it, providing comic relief

Main Character

Name: Fluttershy

1-Runs away with Angel Bunny because she's afraid of the consequences if she cancels the wedding

2-Falls for Discord (Over Time) because he made her feel safe and treated her like an individual.

3-Thought Discord would execute her

4-Related with Queen Celestia

5-Has Sunset Shimmer, Spike, and Flash Sentry try to save her

Ideas

1-Changelings are neutral during the war

2-Thorax is a spy for the ponies

Main Villain

Name: Trenderhoof

Reason: Fame and Glory

1-Cheats on Fluttershy with Sunny Flare

2-Engaged with Fluttershy

3-Cares about himself

4-Used Fluttershy to make Sunny Flare jealous

Quotes

Discord

"What was his name?! I'll drown him in hot fudge!"

"He did that to you?"

"Oh...Fluttershy, about that stallion that cheated on you, well, he's dead."

"Eris! Drocsid! Get in here!"

"Hot fudge is the 'least' lethal thing I could do. I could throw him into the sun, feed him to the Flying Badgers, or turn him to stone, if you'd like?"

"Yeah, the guards never feed the prisoners. I banished them to the moon for a week because of it. I, myself find it cruel to make prisoners suffer."

"That's the barbarian best in life, not the draconquui, Drocsid."

"I can't seem to put my talon on it on what makes me feel this way."

"She's so...so alluring when she's asleep."

"I'm so sorry, but I just couldn't help myself."

"What makes you think I'd hurt such an innocent soul like you?"

"What? Isn't saying 'I love you' the first step in a relationship?"

"Oh, well excuse me for not being informed!"

"I'm glad he broke your heart, I'm glad he is with someone else, I'm glad he...he...didn't take you away from me..."

Fluttershy

"Were you watching me sleep?"

"It's okay...it felt...g-good."

Drocsid

"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentation of their mares."

"Discord's Love"

Chapter List

1-Discovery (Celestia finds out about Discord's crush on Fluttershy)

2-Plans (Celestia plans out how to help Discord)

3-Mission (Discord goes out on mission, but fails)

4-Failure

5-Feeling

Cratomar Song

Cratomar Song: “Forever Nightmare” - After Mane 5 try to stop Cratomar - Stand In

Lyrics:

Do you really think you can really beat me?

Do you really think I'll just disappear?

I pull the strings here

And I think it's time to play

Don't even think of running away from me,

I'm everywhere

Don't shut your eyes from the madness

What good will that do if I'm in your mind?

Don't turn your back on me

There is no escape from the

Torment that comes within me

Your fear; I can smell.

Listen. Listen to me for that you'll ever do.

Let's see what fears you hold.