The Door: Dark Mist

by ponypony2323

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Luna, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Mystery, Tragedy, Horror, Scootaloo, Alternate Universe, Twilight Sparkle, Sad
Length: 1336

Scootaloo inherits a cursed house from her long lost dad

scootaloo gets a strange call over her Phone from her long lost dad that is dying a few days after the death of the pony that she looked up to, but the house that she inherited is cursed by a dark mist curse........
( based on a game idea I came up with)

Published 2015-09-12 04:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-09-12 04:00:01 UTC

Chapter two: On Arrivel

Chapter two: On Arrivel

As I trot out from my house in to Ponyville I saw Fluttreshy looking up, just staring with a tear drop running throw her bright yellow coat.
She is talking to Tank (Rainbow dash's pet before she died), but when I went to talk to her everything froze and turned gray and white and the ponies around me froze. It is like as somepony froze time itself. For a brief few minuets I hear a eerie voice saying, "Go to the house Scoot, save me from this terrier." Then time resumed and I stud there motionless, and thought to myself out loud, "Is that rainbow dash calling to me for help?" The voice sead in a soft errie and terrifyed voice.

Then I muttered some strange words out loud uncontrollably. Then I felt a tap on the back and I turned around and saw Twilight behind me and I jumped.

She said, "Scootaloo are you alright!?" in a worring voice.

I said, "Yes I'm fine" in a normal voice.

Twilight, " Then why were you all parinoid like that about Rainbow Dash?" She sead in a questioning voice.

I said, "Waite I don't remember any of that psycho nonsense?" I say in a disbelieving voice.

I was surprised that I maybe going crazy.

Then Twilight sensed some sort of dark magic admitting from me. She told me that there is some sort of dark magic that is trying to lure me to some house. then I told Twilight about the house that I inherited from my long lost dad and the warning that he was about to tell me before he died.

The part about the warning got her suspicious, then she asked if she could come with me to investigate this house.

I decided that it wold be best if she went with me, so I agreed to her coming with me.

about three minuets later we were at the entrance of the Everfree Forest. as we entered the dark musty, dirty and creepy forest, it happened agen. Time froze and everything turned white and gray then the voice of rainbow dash started whispering in my ear.

Rainbow Dash, " Scoot please help me , Hurry!"

then I yell to twilight, "Twilight come here it happened agen!" I yell in a shaken up voice

Twilight came sprinting as soon a I called her name because she knew that it had to do with the dark magic. when she got to me I told her about having that strange occurrence happen to me agen.

Twilight asked me, "Hay, Scootaloo where is this house that you inherited from your father? I want to examine this dark magic that it is giving off." Then as we walked throw some old building that had to be abandon since the 40's I see the house, but it was not a normal house it was built out of concrete and looked like it took a million bits to build.

I yell to Twilight, "Hay, I found my house-thing it looks more like a fortress than a house!" Then Twilight flew over to investigate. I trot a little closer to the strange building, Then I hear some psychotic laughter coming from a small cellar like hole about thirty feet from my house.

when I entered the shack that lead to this external cellar I seen a horrifying sight. I can see some poor Pony's mutilated corpse, and blood splatter allover the walls. I scream, "COME HERE I NEED YOU TWILIGHT!" I say in a sickly voice.

Then a voice of some mental stallion echoed, "If somepony is there I will rip out your heart and eat it so that the dark mist gods will except me in to their realm! HEE! HEHE! HEHEHE!" says in a Demented voice.

I ran out of that fucking psycho's hole that was on my property.

I bashed in to Twilight as I sprinted out of of the shack. I fell face first into a bush and suffered miner scraps a bruises. then I feel a magical barrier form around me picking me up. By the purple glow I could tell that it is Twilight. A few seconds later I was back on my hooves. Then Twilight asks me what was wrong.

I tell her, "There is some insane stallion in that shack butchering other Ponies in order to worship some dark mist beings." I tell twilight in a terrified voice

then a strange pure black mist figure resembling Rainbow Dash appeared in front of the House. It looked like she is being chased by something trying to kill her. Then the doors open and a dark mist sprung out and snatched Twilight's hind leg and pulls her in quickly. Then It comes back for me and gets hold of my left wing and drags me in!

Prologue

Prologue

Hey, It's me Scootaloo. I am 21 now, and I came a long way with my two Best friends Sweetie Bell and And Apple Bloom.

About 3 days my Friend and role model died in an mishap in a ariel stunt with the wonderbolts. Rainbow Dash Lost control while doing her Rainboom stunt for the finally, but she crashed into the stadium Bleachers and died instantly. She had to be going about a Hundred miles per hour when it happened.

I've been crying for three days straight, but did not eat or sleep for those three days.
I did go to her funeral and told her every thing that she did for me. At the end of my final goodbyes I gave her a kiss and gave her medal back that she gave me after seeing me crying after school. I paced the metal around her neck and say “ Goodbye Rainbow dash."Thank you good times we had.” then a tear falls from my eye onto her chest.

After the funeral twilight came to me with tears in her eyes and asked I wanted to talk. I declined the offer to talk, so I left and went home.

Chapter one: Strange calls

The morning after the funeral I woke up feeling very Depressed. I decided that I wanted to kill my self, but when I got up to get the Box cutter the Phone Rings.

RING! RING! RING! I pick up the phone with my hooves, and say Hello. I here some sickly sounding stallion over the phone.

The stallion says, "Scootaloo I am sorry for not being there for you all these years, I am your father Scootaloo."

I reply, "What the fuck you bastard; you come right out of the blue and tell me that your my father, but why are you calling anyways?"

My father, "I understand why *cough* you are *cough* mad at me, but anypony wold be mad at their parent if they left them and has not see them since they were a fol, but Scootaloo I am very sorry for leaving you with your asshole mother whom abandoned you."

I reply, "Are you all right, you sound very sick?" I say worryingly.

" The doctor said that I have some sort of unidentifiable disease that was eating me from the inside out. I only have Roughly three*cough* *hack* and a half hours to live." My dad said weekly.

My hart sank ever deeper, and a tear ran down the side of my face. I felt worried and sick, but that erg to kill myself blow over.

I yell " Where are you? what hospital?" I respond worried.

"I cant tell you that Because I have very bad Ponies after me, but Scootaloo in my will I left you my house *Cough* deep in the Ever Free forest, I need *COUGH* *GARGLE* COUGH* *VOMIT* Uuuuuuu......................... My father said .

He died before he could tell me about what was up with the house. I start shading tears all throw my bright orange coat. I then went to the front door and opened it with a creek.