Cutie Map Remake

by MaskedPony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1468

After a visit from her future self and seeing a horrible future in her nightmares, Nyx and her family journey to a utopia town, only to find that the events were caused there. Can Nyx prevent the future?

After a visit from her future self. Nyx begins to have nightmares of the horrible future that is upon. To make matters worse, she is Equestrias only hope to stopping this future.

When the mane 6, Nyx, and Dark Nyx are summoned to a utopia town, Nyx learns that the events happened in the town. But, slowly, the events begin to happen slowly. Can Nyx, and Dark Nyx stop the mare, or will Equestria fall.

This is NOT an offical sequel/Side story to past sins, it's a fan story
Nyx belongs to Pen Stroke.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-06-30 02:58:36 UTC

Prolouge horrid future

10 days in future

post Equestrias end

Equestria, a once beautiful land, home to the Royal Pony sisters, peace, and harmony. A Land where ponies call it home. But now, nothing is the same. All around Equestria were flags, flags poorly made with an Equal sign on themem, flying in the wind. Ponies, who were dull color were walking around. Not only that, but they all had an Equal Sign as a Cutie Mark and smiles that are creepy and can send shivers down others spines.

On the ground were newspaper articles. On it, was talking about how Equestria has fallen. When Equestria fell as ponies one by one became "Equalized" by some Psychopathic mare, while some ponies went to hiding, some fled the country, and even went far as mentioning Princess Cadence went into hiding to an unknown area.

In Ponyville, Eight Ponies and a space dragon were walking. They were searching for somepony. As they were searching, they were calling out their targets name. As they were looking, one of em growned. “Ugh, mom, this is just a waste, Sis must of went into hiding.” The alicorn filly whined.

“We have to keep looking, Prince Plaided and our new Princess want Nyx, Dark Nyx; So she can be one of us. When we find her, she’ll be grounded big time.”

As the continued to their search, another Alicorn filly was looking from the Shadows. A look, of being heartbroken, fear, and even, failure. As she saw them disappear, she headed to what was her formal home that she lived in before the fall of Equestria happened, Twilight's castle. The once home of the Princess of Friendship, whom is now the Princess of Equality. While she walked through the ghostly halls, she began to remember her life, she was happy, and even loved by her friends, aunts, her sister, and even, her mother Twilight, and her father, Lunar.

She then went into the library, where all the books were, even, a smashed mirror leading to the human world. At that moment, she grabbed a paper with a spell on it, not just an ordinary spell, a time travel spell, the exact one that Twilight used to warn her past self about what was going to happen, which was her own doing. She looked at it and then looked outside at what used to be the wonderful land of Equestria that now fell into Sameness, and nothingness. “I need to do it, I need to warn my past self about this future, Past Nyx must stop this.” The pony, whom is a future Nyx said to herself.

Wasting no time, Future Nyx begin to charge her magic, as she charged it, she began to think that this was the only solution. With her magic all ready, she casted the spell, and went to the past, to inform her past self about the future.

10 days earlier

4 days before the trigger date

In the fields of Ponyville, a group of Ponies were hanging out. Three Fillies were playing around, while the other two were laying next to one another, while Eight Ponies were hanging out. Seven of em were mares, while one was a stallion. While the were Two fillies were hanging out, they looked at one another and smiled. "This is the life sis, Sunshine and not a worry in Equestria." said one of the fillies.

"You said it Nyx, Not a single evil thing happened these past months."

Hearing this made Nyx smile, Over the course of last year, chains of threats were happening, from Lunars blesser threatening Equestria, to Spikes uncle, to even a insane Ipotane, even Tirek, and the sirens. Peace has been going on for eight months.

Just then, there was a mysterious bright light appearing. Everypony looked. The Bright light look like it was forming a figure of what seemed to be a filly. Twilight then noticed the spell, it was the time travelers spell. As the spell completed, the filly was shown to be looking exactly like Nyx. Nyx even walked up and looked at it. "Y-y-you're me. But....How is this...." Nyx said before getting interrupted

"No time, past me. I don't have time for idle talk, you're the only hope to stop the horrific future I'm from. A future, where Celestia and Luna fall and the mare that trigger the events becomes ruler."

Hearing this made Everypony gasp, even, Rarity being the drama queen she is, faint. "But that's impossible, how can Celestia and Luna fail? They could stop this." Twilight said.

"They couldn't. The Perp is VERY powerful for a unicorn, and she overthrown the princesses and her "Leader" Became prince of Equestria. Some ponies went into hiding, some fled the country,  Aunt Cadence went into hiding, Equestrias name changed, and worse.....your title was removed."

At that point, Sonata Spoke up. "So, who is this pony, and.....what does this future look like? I mean it can't be horrible, right?"

Future Nyx shook her head. "It is horrible. But.....since I believe past me can stop this future, I am going to let her see the future, but she will be able to see the future in one way."

Just then, Future Nyx casted a spell and hit Nyx. After that Future Nyx looked at Nyx with pleaing eyes. "Please, save us. Save your future." Future Nyx said in a begging tone.

"Why should I? I mean my mom saved Equestria before?"

At that point, Future Nyx came close to Nyx and whispered. "Because you're mom lost to the mare, got brainwashed, and is after me to.....make me one of em."

Hearing this made Nyx feel scared, but, knowing this is serious, Nyx agreed to do it, but for her future self.

While the mane 6 had some unanswered questions, Future Nyx had to return to her present, to avoid suspicion from "her" ruler. Wasting no time, Future Nyx disappeared and went back to the future. After she disappeared, the mane 6, Lunar, and Sonata, even the CMC, and Dark Nyx were wondering what she meant. From the look of Future Nyx, they saw that she was really heartbroken, sad, and afraid. Wasting no time, Applejack decided to take Applebloom and Scootaloo home,  and Rarity took Sweetie Belle home due to this. But they didn't expect, that the events were bound to happen, and were only days away.

11PM

?????????

In an unknown town, it was quiet. Such silence that ponies and passersby can say it could be a ghost town. Except, two ponies were walking, One white as winter in the Crystal Empire, while another one wore a hood, and a mask. As they approach the door, the pony knocked politely. "Starlight, you have a visitor." The Pony said.

As they waited they heard hoofsteps coming from inside. With that, the door open, and a pony, who looked like Twilight, but different, opened up the door and looked sleepy and groan irritatedly. "Double, why this late, I'm trying to get my Beauty......Plaided?" the pony named Starlight said as Plaided walked in as Double left.

"Starlight, we have a job for you. Remember that I promise you I would grant you Equestria?" Plaided asked as Starlight began to look at him curiously.

"Yes, why?"

"It seems that.....it is time. But, to know the time is right, 8 certain ponies need to come here. eight that interfered with my plans before."

Starlight looked at him. Few months ago, she met him who had asked if she wanted to join the Psycho Ponies, due to her evil intentions and her "Philosophy" she believes in. During the time, she made a promise deal that she would continue to do what she is doing, and is promised to grant her Equestria once Celestia and Luna fall if she does a simple job when assigned. Starlight looked at him "Who are the six?" Starlight asked.

"You will know when you meet em. Do you accept your mission?"

Starlight then looked at Plaided sinisterly. A look, that bought a smile to Plaided's face "Yes, but on one conclusion if my mission is a success."

"What is it?"

"If it succeeds, I want you, and the League of Insanity to surrender your Cutie Marks to join my believes so we can make Equestria all equal."

Plaided then nods. "Very well, deal. Now, I will have Rez monitor your progress. But, IF YOU FAIL, YOU WILL MEET A TERRIBLE FATE!"

With that, their meeting came to an end. Plaided left Starlights house and went to the cliffs. As he went to the cliffs, a tall purple dragon waited for him. As Plaided came to view, Plaided gave him his orders and left. The dragon smile evily. "Time for "her" to see, that Rez, has returned."