Building a Hive

by Strawberryjuice

Rating: mature
Tags: Fetish, Queen Chrysalis, Self Insert, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Romance, Porn, Second Person
Length: 3508

Queen Chrysalis has fun with a human she came upon. Second person clopfic.

You are lost in a land far from your own, with no friends in sight, and you have been captured by strange insect like equines, or ”changelings.” What will be your fate? Imprisonment? Life as a slave to these creatures? Execution maybe? Or maybe they see you as a source of nourishment and look forward to feasting on you? Their queen surely has plans for you but, as it turns out, they're much more terrible and much much more pleasurable than you could have ever imagined.

Second person clopfic starring you and Queen Chrysalis. Written in two chapters so people who aren't into the subject material in the second chapter can enjoy the first on it's own.

Trigger warnings: Non-consensual, femdom and impregnation. Second chapter adds: Futa, pegging, large insertions, oviposition, humiliation (specifically by name calling) and a happy ending.

Published 2015-06-30 17:40:04 UTC
Last updated 2015-06-30 17:40:04 UTC

Chapter 1

“Well, well, well, aren't you an interesting looking piece of meat.”

The changeling queens words make a shiver run up your spine. She circles slowly around your bound form as she chuckles in that eerie, echoing voice of hers.

You don't know how you ended up here, or where here exactly is. Some days ago you woke up somewhere in a forest. Trying to find you're way home, or at least civilization, you picked a direction and started wandering. Only to soon be captured by these flying insect like creatures. They took you to their hive, where you lost track of time, as you were held in captivity until their queen had time to meet you.

Queen Chrysalis is taller than her subjects by far. She still comes short of you, the horn on her forehead only coming up to your eye level, but she is still an intimidating sight. Especially with you on the floor naked, bound with green slime that prevents you from moving more than an inch.

Suddenly she pushes her face right next to yours, inspecting you closer. You notice the sweet musky scent that fills the room is coming off her, before your train of thought comes to a stop as she runs her tongue up the side of your neck.

“Mmmm... You are a delectable treat aren't you?”

As far as you're concerned, she just confirmed your suspicions that she does in fact intend to eat you. You start pathetically pulling on your bonds, begging for your life. You'll do anything, just as long she doesn't eat you.

“Eat you? Oh no, my dear, I have such big plans for you,” she chuckles.

Her horn glows an eerie green and the gloop surrounding you shifts, pulling you on your back to lay on the ground. She stands above you.

“You see, you just so happened to grace me with your presence during my heat, and after that fiasco in Canterlot, my hive could use some more soldiers.”

Canterlot? What's that? And by heat she doesn't mean-

“Of course you see I couldn't possibly mate with my own children, which makes your appearance more than fortunate.”

She does. She means exactly that. You start squirming again, hoping to find some weak spot in the substance keeping you still. The queen only chuckles and slowly lowers her rear on your loins, grinding against you. The area between her hind legs is burning hot and soaking with her slimy essence.

Despite your resistance, you can feel your manhood slowly hardening. She hums as she licks your neck again.

“How do you feel about foreplay,” she suddenly asks. “I myself don't honestly much care for it. What do you say we jump straight to business?”

With that she sinks her fangs in to your neck. Your mouth opens in a silent scream as your entire body spasms in the slime. You can almost feel the burning venom forcing its way in to your veins.

She slowly lets go of your neck and stands up to watch as the venom takes hold of you. The aphrodisiac effect is fogging your mind, making it impossible to think of anything except rutting any and every mare in the vicinity. You're sporting the biggest, hardest erection of your life, as you let out animalistic grunts in your efforts to break free.

She lets out a throaty laugh as she lowers her lips on your neck and slowly starts kissing her way down. She kisses, licks and nibbles her way down to your chest, where she stops to give your nipple a light tug, making you whimper. She comes to a stop just short of your steel hard cock, and gives a hearty sniff.

“Mmm... You'll give me all of it, won't you?”

She stands back up, only to push herself back down, sinking your cock deep inside her wet pussy. A shuddering moan escapes her lips as you hilt inside her, your cockhead spearing through her cervix. You groan and your eyes roll back from the intense pleasure. Nothing in the world could possibly feel this amazing. Her insides are actually moving, tugging and rubbing on the intruding flesh, effectively milking you. While it does feel creepy, it is also incredibly pleasurable.

That, along with the burning heat, somehow makes you unload almost immediately. As the first spurt hits her insides, the mouth of her womb immediately closes tight around your head, preventing any of the precious semen escaping her. Your orgasm is significantly larger, and lasts longer than should be humanely possible, but once it's over you don't feel an ounce of satisfaction. You're still hard as steel and sex is still the only thing in your mind.

“Aren't we quick today,” the queen teases. “Don't worry, we're far from done. After all, we have to make sure to fertilize as many as possible.”

Before you can question her words, she starts rocking up and down on you. Your penis repeatedly exit so only the head stays inside and then thrusts back deep inside her. The inside of her cunt keeps milking you as she moves, while the deepest part of her is still holding tight to your glans, moving along with you.

You feel hot. Waves of burning pleasure flow through you starting from your pelvis. It has to be because of her venom. You have never felt such immense pleasure. It's so overpowering you can’t even moan. You gasp and your breathing grows heavier. Your head is swimming.

Slowly going in and out of her, her insides milking your shaft, her moans echoing in the room, the sweet musky scent of her arousal growing stronger with each passing second. It's so hard to decide whether this is heaven or hell. You feel like you're being enveloped in to a warm fuzzy cloud of pure pleasure. It feels like you're about to fall asleep.

Suddenly she slams herself on you and squeals loudly. She's done being gentle. She starts jumping up and down on you, your wet pelvises slapping together loudly. Suddenly you realize how beautiful this creature looks with her face distorted in pleasure.

Barely a minute passes before your dam breaks again. Chrysalis squeals in delight as you pump even more of your hot cum inside her womb. This time she doesn't stop to wait until you are done. She keeps jumping on your length throughout your orgasm, prolonging it even more than her venom alone.

And once it's over, you are immediately pulled back in to the depths of ecstasy. Your monstrous lover keeps moving for several minutes as you ejaculate inside her again and again. She, however, doesn't seem to achieve her climax. Whether she's unable to or she somehow chooses not to is a mystery. She just keeps bouncing on top of you while squealing and moaning in obvious pleasure.

Many orgasms and about a dozen minutes later, without warning, she presses her lips against yours and pushes her tongue in your open mouth. The sudden loving gesture pushes you over the edge once more. You can almost hear the snap of your mind breaking, and giving over fully to the monster queen.

Chrysalis breaks the kiss with a loud moan and falls back. She moans louder and louder until finally, she lets out a loud, long, shuddering scream. Her insides tighten around you, hard enough to make you fear she'll pull your member off. Her entire body twitches and a short stream of greenish clear liquid sprays from her vagina as she shudders above you.

She slowly closes her eyes and collapses on top of you, the inside of her cunt still keeping a tight hold on your penis. She slowly pushes herself up high enough to look you in the eye.

“That was incredible,” she sighs. “Rarely do I have the pleasure of enjoying such an intense climax. Haah. You do realize this is far from over, right? Just one time isn't nearly enough to satisfy me.”

Your eyes widen in fear as the queen pushes herself back up and starts jumping on top of you once more. You lost count on how many times you ejaculated earlier, but still it takes no longer than 30 seconds until yet another mind wracking orgasm ravages your tired body.

After nearly an hour, several very loud orgasms from Chrysalis and almost a hundred ejaculations, she finally collapses on top of you, slipping in to unconsciousness. Her insides still keep a tight hold on you and you can feel the cum from several ejaculations sloshing inside of her. It feels unpleasant but you're so tired that you don't even care. Your eyes shudder close as your mind wonders fearfully what awaits you once you wake.

Chapter 2

You wake up slowly, wandering about your whereabouts. It feels like your floating in water. Did you fall asleep in the bath? You try to sit up, only to realize you can't move. You're wide awake immediately, struggling futilely in the green goop holding you.

“Finally awake?” an eerie voice says. “Just in time, I was getting bored of waiting.”

Your eyes fall upon the ebony creature talking, and immediately you remember what had happened. Chrysalis approaches you and gently kisses your neck. Interestingly enough, she seems several months pregnant already.

“I do hope you enjoyed yourself,” she hums. “Oh, who am I kidding, I know you did. Your love is quite tasty. Your lust is almost tastier.”

She licks up your neck all the way to your ear and purrs. Somehow she still seems unsatisfied. You inform her that you're completely spent. You doubt any amount of her cursed venom can get your motor running right now.

“Oh, don't worry,” she smirks. “Your stamina is no longer needed. Just relax and enjoy yourself.”

She kisses your lips, as you try to keep your mouth tightly shut, not wanting to give in any more than you have already.

“I can feel your love no matter how much you struggle,” she laughs. “I must admit, you are one of the greatest lovers I've had. Perhaps even the greatest. Of course, I never had the chance to sample Shining Armor for myself. I have a feeling he might have outranked you.”

She smirks, obviously trying to hurt your pride as a man. You refuse to let it get to you, and with as much sarcasm as you can muster, you tell her how happy you are for the silver medal in 'getting raped by a disgusting monster'. She just laughs.

“But we simply must get you ready.”

Her horn glows again, and for a second it seems nothing is happening. The smug smile on her face hints at something though. And suddenly you feel the slime shift under you. That alone might not be enough to freak you out, but then it starts prodding against your defenceless anus.

Your eyes widen in fear as a thin tendril slips inside you. You beg, and plead, and even threaten, but only manage to make the queens smile wider. Suddenly the long tendril inside you gathers together in to a large clump, stretching you and pushing against a very magical spot inside you.

Your eyes roll back as you can't help but moan in pleasure. Chrysalis gives a loud barking laugh and even more slime forces it's way inside your rectum. It keeps stretching you wider and wider, until it feels like you have an entire arm inside you. While you feel pain, the inconceivably satisfying feeling of being stretched, as well as the pressure against your prostate is more than pleasurable. Enough to make you erect again, something you thought would be impossible for a good long while.

Once you get more used to the feeling and manage to calm down, you start paying more attention to your surroundings. You notice something about Chrysalis she definitely didn't have earlier. Under her stomach hangs a jet black, slick, veiny, throbbing horsecock.

Chrysalis gives you a predatory smile and the slime around you starts moving again, rolling you on your hands and knees. You feel her hovering above you, and then the slime still inside you slowly pours out, giving way to something much more solid.

A slick, throbbing you-know-exactly-what pushes against your still gaping rectum and you panic. You start rambling, not even knowing what you're saying as you try your hardest clench yourself shut.

“Relax yourself,” she whispers as she nibbles on your ear with her sharp teeth. “Or this will be much more painful than it needs to be.”

Being told to relax makes you clench even harder. But as the head of that gigantic shaft starts slowly but surely pushing inside you, something in your subconscious accepts that this is happening, whether you want it or not.

As you relax, your mind becomes more hazy. You expected much more pain, but you actually feel mostly numb all over. You hear Chrysalis grunting above you as she forces more and more inside you. Her forelegs wrap around your thighs, pulling your ass closer to her loins, as her upper body pushes your head farther down.

Finally she hilts inside you. You see her long tongue hang down in front of your eyes as she pants above you. She gyrates her hips, grinding herself inside you, and you're surprised to hear a whorish moan come out of your mouth. Chrysalis chuckles.

“I didn't forget to mention the very pleasurable effect my natural lubricants have on your mind, did I?” she asks, sounding very out of breath.

She indeed did. She pulls out about an inch, before pushing forcefully back inside. As you let out another lewd moan, you think yourself to be lucky she didn't pull out more. You were just about to resort to begging her not to pull out.

Suddenly something happens. Something you should probably panic about, but find yourself unable to in your drugged state. You feel surprisingly clearly, as the head of her cock bulges and then opens inside you, spraying more of her aphrodisiac pre inside you.

“Here it comes. The first of many,” she groans, sounding almost as if she's in pain.

You feel the base of her member bulge, as if something is forcing it's way through the shaft. The ring of your anus stretches even wider as it accepts the even larger intrusion. Your eyes roll back and a heavy moan escapes you, as the bulge passes over your prostate.

After what feels like minutes, it finally comes to her head which spits out the round object, deep inside your intestines. You groan, and before you can even begin to think what she could have just forced inside you, another one forces you to stretch.

Chrysalis groans and gives your behind a single hump. Once again, when the bulge crosses over your prostate, your mouth opens in to a pleasurable moan. As her cock deposits the second round object deep inside you, your lover lets out a loud high moan.

She quickly pulls her shaft half way out of you before slamming back inside. You squeal as you feel a third bulge, this one feeling bigger than the first two, forcing itself inside you. Your eyes roll back and your tongue lolls out as the bulge kneads your prostate, forcing a rather powerful orgasm out of you.

“Already cumming after only three eggs?” Chrysalis laughs. “You little whore.”

You can only moan in response. Needily, aplogizingly, affirmatively. As the third egg is spit out inside you, she decides to have some fun with your slutty body. She starts fucking you. Pulling out until only the head of her thick ovipositor stays inside you, while you clench your ass in a desperate attempt to keep her inside. Slamming back in, stirring the eggs inside you, making the room echo with the wet slaps of loins against ass, and your loud pleasured screams.

You cum again, but she keeps pounding you. It's getting harder to breath and your vision starts to fade as your screaming lowers down to a weak murmur. Suddenly she slams inside one last time before grinding inside you.

“It's not over yet, slut,” she groans.

Another egg slowly passes through her shaft and rests inside you. Then another, and another, and another, and another, until you lose count. As she keeps impregnating you with her fertile eggs, you keep moaning and groaning and occasionally squealing, begging her to fuck you more. To fuck her little slut more.

She doesn't comply, as she stubbornly keeps herself from moving. She keeps calling you names, further degrading you. Slut, whore, bitch, broodmare, slave, pet. And what little is left of your mind helplessly agrees with every humiliating word she spouts.

Until finally she drives you over your limit. As the last of who-knows-how-many eggs pushes past your gaping hole and your sensitive prostate, you let out your last, pathetically weak scream, as you orgasm once more, your dick desperately trying to shoot out ejaculate that just isn't there anymore.

Your body gives up, falling limp in to the goo holding you. You feel Chrysalis pull herself out of your loose anus, leaving behind a bulging stomach full of eggs. The last thing you hear is your queens soft content humming, lulling you softly to sleep.

Again you wake, this time with a pressure in your stomach, a goofy smile creeping it's way on your face and feeling content. The slime no longer surrounds your body, instead you're bound by entirely different shackles, those of your queens legs possessively holding you. You raise your head to look over the side of the ginormous bed, and see the remnants of the green slime on the floor where she had taken you.
Your movement alerts Chrysalis, who slowly stirs to wakefulness.

“Mmm... That was wonderful my love,” she hums. One of her forehooves drifts down to gently rub your swollen stomach.

You sigh at the feeling, and turn your head to lay a gentle kiss on your lovers lips. You profess your love for her, chuckling as Chrysalis burps.

“Oh, please, my love. I'm already so full.” A thoughtful look crosses her face. “Never did I think my hunger could be satiated before I met you. I really am the luckiest mare in Equestria.”

She nuzzles your neck for a while before continuing: “If only our siege of Canterlot would have been successful. Could you imagine how perfect our life would be?”

You shush her with a kiss before she can continue her lamentation. You refuse to talk about Canterlot right now. You can discuss new strategies later, preferably after your pregnancy.

Chrysalis smiles and kisses you again. “Make yourself presentable dear.”

You pull the blankets over your lower body and egg filled stomach before she calls out to her maid.

One of her many changelings enters the room. The poor little thing immediately gets intoxicated by the amount of love and lust still in the air.

“Darling,” Chrysalis says. “Could you please fetch our children.”

The changeling nods with a sloppy smile on her face. She turns to leave the room and gives you a shake of her behind, trying to entice you. Uselessly, of course, your love is directed solely to your queen and your children. Besides, she's technically your stepdaughter.

Few moments of snuggling pass before the doors burst open, all 23 of your younglings flooding inside. The youngest of them sprouted their wings only few weeks ago, and you watch with a happy smile as your sons and daughters whir around the room.

Your eldest daughter flies straight to you, giving you a deep hug.

“Daddy, are we really going to get more sisters again soon?”

And brothers, you confirm, hugging her back. And by the feel of it, this batch might be even larger than the previous two.

With your queen by your side, your daughter nuzzling to your chest, purring and your many children happily playing around you, you can't help but feel a small twinge of anger. They deserve better than this, a cave in the middle of nowhere, living in fear of being hunted by those blasted ponies. Next time, you think. Next time Canterlot will fall.

Author's Note

So I finally wrote my first clopfic. I'm sorry/you're welcome. Not a surprise, as I've written pony fanfiction and erotic fiction before, it was only a matter of time before the two crossed over. Not only did I write my first clopfic, it's also my first fetishfic. And boy is it my fetish. This story is so much my fetish, I could have probably written it in half the time it took if I didn't have to take fap breaks. This is so much my fetish, I've jerked off more in the week I wrote this than in the past month. Though, that might be information I should have kept to myself... Also, confession time: I cried while writing that last part.