Luna sighs in irritation, once again she had to spend hours on end doing nothing. Most ponies are asleep during the night, making the court boring. Only a few ponies came in, and only with small problems, the most pressing issue she encountered that night was trying not to fall asleep. She continues to make her way down the halls of the castle, wanting to do nothing more than to find a bed and take a nap, to satisfy her body's growing need for rest. However, the architects seem to have spared no expense in the intricate mazes they call hallways. Not wanting to spend 30 minutes finding her own room, she ducks into the closest room to the throne, which happens to be her sister's. She opens the door and makes her way across the room as silently as she can, carefully placing a hoof on the velvety fabric covering Celestia's bed. She carefully makes her way up the bed but can't help glancing to her sister, watching as her barrel slowly rises and falls with each slow, relaxed breath. Her eyes inevitably end up trailing down the silky smooth curves of her sister's body before stopping at her voluptuous butt. She gently places a hoof on the surprisingly soft plot, electing a quiet, sleepy moan from her sister. The flesh is easily softer than the hoof made pillows that adorn the bed. She giggles to herself a bit before curling up near the bottom of the bed and resting her head on her sister's cloud-like royal tush before closing her eyes and dozing off.
Luna snuggles her head into Celestia's pillow soft pure white flank, letting out small snores and occasionally adjusting in her sleep. After her misadventure in the castle halls, Luna made her way to Celestia's bed and passed out on her sister's posterior, pretending to mistake it for a pillow. As Luna adjusts her head again Celestia moans in her sleep, her tail twitching slightly when Luna's hair brushes against her plot, her motions in turn causing Luna to stir in her sleep. Luna shifts around as she begins to awaken, dragging her mane across Celestia's marehood in the process. Celestia jolts awake from the sudden sensation and shifts a bit with a moan, waking Luna as well. As the smell of Celestia's sudden arousal reaches her nose she feels her eyelids droop and she licks her lips, deciding her pillow could use some fluffing...
Celestia glances back at her sister, confused and curious as to what she's doing in her room "Luna? What are you doing here? ...Luna?"
Rather than respond, Luna nuzzles her sister's supple tush, nibbling her cutie mark softly and bringing a quiet moan from her. Luna gets to work kneading the soft flesh around Celestia's cutie mark, intentionally avoiding the sensitive flesh underneath the bright orange fur. Her sister wiggles under Luna's ministrations and moaning eagerly every time she gets close to the sensitive star. Tired of teasing, Luna bares the tip of her hoof into the edge of Celestia's mark, causing her eyes to open wide and electing a sharp "Eeep!" from her as she tries to escape the sudden intense pleasure. Luna giggles and lifts her hoof. Celestia lets out a relaxed sigh and soft moan as the intense feeling subsides.
Celestia feels her sister start to roughly 'fluff' her cutie mark with curt, playful jabs to the sensitive flesh under the bright orange fur. Stunned momentarily from her sister's work, she starts to squirm and gasp from the assault on her cutie mark, barely able to contain herself as she bites down on her hoof and tries to move away from the overwhelming sensation. A powerful scent erupts into the air as Celestia's tail starts to lift due to the powerful jolts of pleasure surging up her spine, she can't help but moan loudly as the sensation starts to numb all but her most sensitive spots. Celestia relaxes slightly as she feels the quick jabs at her star dissolve into gentle rubbing and kneading, now sending a steady wave of pleasure to wash over her body. Being tender from the earlier treatment, the soft tissue under her mark is even more sensitive, making her hips involuntarily buck against her sister's movements as her marehood twitches and winks, demanding attention.
Luna places a gentle kiss on her sister's tense body, which is quickly relaxing without the continued attention. Celestia deflates a bit with a long moan which dissolves into panting from her exertion.
Luna giggles from her sister's response "Don't relax yet sister~ We're far from being done..."
Celestia simply giggles nervously as Luna goes back down on her, licking the luscious orange fur of her cutie mark, earning a moan and a slight shiver from her. Luna now works on kneading the flesh around her sister's marehood, causing Celestia to bite her lower lip and shiver in pleasure every time Luna's hoof brushes against her lips -now lightly spread from arousal and winking frequently.- Luna starts to roughly fluff the flesh here now, causing Celestia's eyes to again peel open from the rough bursts of pleasure rushing up her spine and causing her head to spin.
Luna alternates between fluffing and kneading as Celestia buries her head in the velvety pink blankets of the bed, while not enough to send her over the edge, the pleasure from Luna's ministrations makes her head rush and her nethers to ache almost unbearably.
Pausing her assault, Luna looks to her sister's marehood almost longingly as it lightly drools her arousal... She has to force her eyes away from the enticing sight before she can speak up "Looks like someone is getting eager..."
Celestia looks back at Luna in faux confusion, knowing what she means but not wanting to admit it... Luna disabuse her of that notion by brushing her hoof over the delicate flesh which is unmistakably engorged with arousal, causing her body to shiver in need and tense up as her tail lifts high out of the way, forcing a long, lewd moan from her lips. Celestia looks back at her sister needily, drooping her eyelids and silently begging Luna to stop teasing her, she continues to silently plead with her sister even as a grin spreads across Luna's lips. Her gleeful sister places a small kiss on her tight ponut, causing her to blush as Luna continues rubbing and kneading the velvety fur of her plot while kissing and lightly licking her tailhole, the unusual sensation sending shivers and occasional jolts of pleasure up her body. Her eyes go wide as Luna's tongue slips in. She tries to pull away but is held in place as Luna forcefully explores her hole, causing her blush to deepen as the odd sensation causes her to moan again and her tail to twitch. Her marehood winks even faster as her... Other hole is assaulted, it continues to desperately beg for attention, drooling more and more of her sweet juices.
Celestia feels her sister's tongue slowly recede from her nethers, causing her to let out a surprisingly conflicted sigh -both relieved and disappointed.- Luna giggles at this, and since her sister seems to enjoy it so much, she presses the flat of her tongue against it, causing Celestia's back to arch as she slowly drags it up to the base of her tail before playing with the puffy flesh again. Her tongue dances across it while placing kisses on it every so often, coaxing out gasps, moans and twitches from Celestia as she tries to grind against her muzzle, tired of being denied release. Luna finally gives her sister's sex some attention, though not the kind she was hoping for as Luna nibbles lightly on the soft, frail lips of her marehood, making her jolt away with a surprised yelp. Celestia uses her magic to swat Luna's flank, electing a mirthful giggle from her before she gets back to work, Celestia grumbling to herself a bit before being interrupted by a moan as Luna's tongue parts her supple lips.
After all the teasing Celestia is far more sensitive than usual, her deep relieved moans being a testament to that fact. Luna's tongue dips deep into her, scooping out some of Celestia's love juices into her waiting maw, she takes a moment to savor the flavor as her sister pants below her before diving back in, her tongue dancing across her sister's inner walls.
Celestia lets out a long pleasure filled moan as the cooling relief washes over her nethers. "Finally... I thought you would never let me finish..."
Luna smiles, pinching Celestia's clit lightly with her lips to which she responds by biting her own lower lip as the pleasure surges up her and numbs her mind. Celestia continues moaning loudly, almost yelling in pleasure as Luna plays with her button with her lips, sucking, kissing and licking it. She finally gives her sister a break by returning her attention to Celestia's love hole, slipping her tongue deep inside and drinking the fresh juices leaking out onto the bed while Celestia simply tries to think through the sound of her own breathing and the numbing pleasure flooding her mind, making her feel as though she is under water.
Luna takes a long lick from the base of Celestia's marehood all the way to her tight tailhole before returning to her clit, swirling her tongue around it and giving it a kiss, electing a deep moan from Celestia as her head swims in pleasure, the rush from Luna's ministrations sending chills up her spine and leaving her hooves tingling each time Luna starts over. She can hardly think with the pleasure coursing through her, bringing her to the edge each time Luna's tongue brushes against her clit and keeping her there as it makes its way to her tailhole, only for her to calm down as Luna pulls away and waits before doing it again, this process causes her to drool her love juices all over Luna's chin and the bed below. She squirms as Luna drags her tongue up through her velvety folds, stopping at her pillowy ponut once again before placing a kiss on it, keeping her on the edge as she desperately grinds against Luna's face, biting down on the blankets as she is overwhelmed with the sensation while her body tries desperately to reach release, only for Luna to pull away again, earning a dissatisfied grunt from Celestia. Luna places her hoof on her sister's cutie mark and gently rubs it to once again put her sister on the edge while she peppers the supple flesh around her marehood with kisses, causing Celestia to whimper in desperation.
Celestia's tail flicks and twitches as she squirms desperately for release until Luna finally places a rough kiss right on her clit, pulling back and licking it before placing her mouth in front of her marehood to catch her love juices just moments before the pleasure surges through her. She blacks out as the sensation washes over her brain, her heart pounding in her chest as wave after wave of pleasure numbs her body while making it unbearably sensitive at the same time. Surge after surge of euphoria exploding down her nerves, lighting them up with too many sensations to comprehend only to be followed by the next explosion of unrelenting bliss, she loses track of time as each wave crashes over her body, she finds herself unsure if she's still breathing. Several moments later she slowly starts to come to her senses as her marehood quivers in pleasure, sending out a few more bursts of marecum before her body collapses and her blissful afterglow washes over her. She can only relax and lay her head down as she pants, unable to form full thoughts through the buzzing of ecstasy clouds her mind.
Luna finally places a small kiss on her sister's clit before running her tongue up from it to her love hole and opening her mouth, Celestia's reaction is immediate, her body tenses up and she screams out in pleasure, seemingly unaware of her own voice as waves of pleasure wash over her body again again. Each wave of pleasure is marked by a shudder and a large spurt of marecum as she tears up a bit in bliss, crying out each time her body is slammed with another wave of pleasure. Luna continues to lap up her sister's juices indulging in the taste of sweet nectar. Each time her tongue connects with Celestia's marehood another shudder runs down her body, followed shortly by another spurt of marecum. While her sister is hit by wave after wave of orgasmic bliss she continues rubbing her cutie mark soothingly, feeling the muscles underneath tense and relax slightly, only to tense again an unknown number of times before she finally collapses onto the bed, her tired muscles relaxing completely as her afterglow takes over instantly. Celestia pants on the bed, her face slowly relaxing as the blissful expression slowly melts into a tired one. Luna scoots up in front of her sister, pulling her close to comfort her as she rests while she lightly nibbles her ear, causing it to flick a bit.
She giggles as Celestia slowly drifts off to sleep "Rest well sister, its my turn when you wake up~" Her horn lights up as she lowers the moon and pulls the sun up over the horizon, ending the night and beginning the day.
Author's Note
I hope you enjoyed my first fic I've ever written. Given that it is my first fic critique would be much appreciated. 
