Just Us OCs

Chapter One

“The train will be arriving in Ponyville shortly”

Those words… Who knew that they were to mean something amazing to me?

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I stepped off the train, carrying my one bag with me. The rest of my bags had been sent ahead to my new house...well, new to me, that is. I was never the one to make friends.

I had lived in Canterlot my whole life, and the only people I really talked to were my parents. With the exception being Shining Armor. I had worked at the Canterlot Castle as a guard, and in my time there, I got to know him. He told me about Ponyville, the place where his sister made many friends. So, when I was discharged from service; this seemed like a good place to go.

As I walked through the small town, I noticed that it seemed...nice. I saw many friendly ponies throughout…

Then she bumped into me. A young mare, that looked to be around the same age as me. She had a light blue and pink mane, and a light blue body.

“Oh, I’m sorry...I didn’t see you there. My name is Phoenix, and I’m new here. I was just taking a look around this lovely town” I spat out. You could tell that I was nervous back then, It was SO obvious.

“Yeah, well watch where you’re going next time… Dumb bird” She said, casually, almost as if being called a ‘Dumb bird’ wasn’t an insult. Before my bird-brain could think of a response, she’d disappeared.

“Stupid Phoenix. You made a fool out of yourself to the first pony you met…” I said, angry at myself. I’d had enough looking around. Strangely, I felt hungry for some cotton candy at that moment. But I shrugged it off.

It was late, and I still hadn’t even been to my house. So that was the next place to go.

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As I stepped through the door to my house, I couldn’t help but be pleased. I had seen pictures, but they didn’t show how much space the house had. It had two bedrooms, two bathrooms, and a very spacious kitchen. No upstairs or downstairs, but I liked that. My bed hadn’t been moved into my room yet. Heck, the mattress was just laying there on the floor. But I was too tired to do anything. It had been a long train ride, and I was tired. Without another word, or even a shower; I dropped on my bed, and drifted into sweet sleep…

Editor's notes:

Hello! I am Phoenix. This fanfiction, consisting of several chapters, is the story of one OC moving to a new town and making friends.

You: But Phoenix! This isn't original!

Yes, I know. This isn't an original idea, and I don't think it has to be. It will be a fun way for me to improve my writing skills, while at the same time; including my OC, and a few of my friend's OCs in the future of this story. One was already present ;)

So if you have any suggestions, then comment them down below...if that's where the comments are. Sorry, I've never commented on Fimfiction before XD

Suggestions are always appreciated, but don't be mean or hateful, plz.

So, until next time; Phoenix, out!

BROHOOF /)