It was a Friday afternoon as the mane 6 of us headed back to Ponyville on a train. Apple Jack’s helping Twilight Sparkle carry both of their books back to Twilight’s library. Pinkie Pie and Rarity were giving each other gifts they bought that day. As Fluttershy’s going to say goodbye to me, I felt something bothering me. I almost trade one of my best friends for the final episode of Daring Do book this morning. It made me feel like I just messed up what I really am: Element of Loyalty. Just then, Fluttershy noticed about my worriedness, since she knows me because she’s my best friend.
“What’s wrong Rainbow Dash?” She asked in bewilderedness
“I felt unhappy for almost trading my best friend for a stupid book” I answered, feeling a bit worried
Fluttershy saw the look on my face. I almost cried for my life everytime I think about it. ”Don’t be worry about that. It was just an accident and you made the right choice before I got harmed” She looked at me blushing, or was she…
I’m still looking at my hooves trying to forget about what I just did. “But I think I need a punishment for doing so. I mean I’m the Element of Loyalty and I failed to do that.”
“Are you sure you’re good with the decision?”
“Sure, I need a punishment like for example when we we’re fillies and we get spanked everytime we didn’t listen to our mentor. What do you think?”
Her wings stiffened as I mentioned the word ‘spanked’. I don’t know why she was shocked as I said that word. Maybe she remembers of her parents spanking her or something like that. I shrugged it off because she’s really shy. But I saw her particularly different than the original Fluttershy I met every day. She seems braver but awkward and she always says things without even had to pause for a freaking second. My mind just goes blank when she answered finally:
“Well…Alright. I do it because you asked”
I was actually really shocked when I heard she said yes to my idea. Fluttershy was pretty shy and she always says no if I said that. I mean, she’s the Element of Kindness. I know all of the others, too. Twilight is Element of Magic, Applejack is Element of Honesty, Rarity is Element of Generosity, and Pinkie Pie is Element of Laughter. Wait, why am I talking out of the topic? Back to where I just said. I think she was just caring for me so she did it.
We went back to Fluttershy’s cottage and get prepared for my punishment. For the whole time flying, I refuse to look straight or even look at Fluttershy. When we get there, Fluttershy told Angel, her pet rabbit, about what we’re going to do.
”Angel, Project 7864746368” Angel looked confused but just nodded and jumped to the storage to get stuff for my punishment.
“How could you know all the numbers?” I asked when Angel got into the storage.
“You’ll understand” Fluttershy answered my question
I think it’s like a secret code covered by telephone numbers. I just forgot about the idea. I sat on the couch stomach down watching Fluttershy’s magazine and then something grabbed my wings and covered it up. When I look up, Angel was putting my wings into heavy wing gloves that were used to stop Pegasus and Alicorns from flying away. I tried to break free to my wings but it’s too heavy, I can’t fly away. Just then, Fluttershy came back from the kitchen.
“Fluttershy, can you get my wings out of here?” Just then I saw her with a lot of weapons like a wooden shovel, iron shovel, bamboo, wooden stick, samurai sword, etc. Then another thing I saw was Fluttershy wearing black and the only thing she didn’t cover was her cutie mark and her face. She looks like a ninja or samurai going to war. I had a tingly feeling that made me think that it was terrible and something was getting really hard.
“Wow, what’s with the costume and why did you put my wings on with these gloves for?” I asked looking at her curiously and worried.
She looked down sheepishly, “You asked for a punishment so I give you one. The gloves stop you from flying away and Rarity said that the costume gives you the mood and here I am in these clothes”.
“But what are we doing here?” I asked her again
“You’ll see for yourself” A geeky smile appeared on her face, replacing the sheepish one. Then something hit my head and everything went dark. After I got a chance to brace myself and everything went into full color again, my hooves are all tied up and I’m hanging upside down. All the animals got their weapons like if…their fighting me? I was terrified.
“Welcome to your doom, Rainbow Dash” A voice beamed through the crowd of animals. It sounds like…Fluttershy? Just then I saw her in the costume I asked earlier. Her evil grin made me feel pretty scared and prayed for Celestia that she isn’t trying to kill me. The look on her face made me feel that my wish would never happen.
“Are you going to spank me with those animals and their weapons?” I asked, frightened
“We’re not going to spank you” She answered after I calmed down
“Wow, so funny. You guys are doing this trick which is actually really stupid now that I think of it” I teased Fluttershy back, still a bit worried
“We’re not spanking you, we’re going to hit you, to your doom Rainbow Dash” Her smile became more evil and…awkward. She’s wearing something on her forehead which looks like an animatronic robot moving around her head. My eye pupils shrank as I saw the thing.
Then a noise came from my flank and it hurts badly. Fluttershy used the bamboo and hit into my flank right near my cutie mark. I screamed begging for her to stop. But then all the animals came and hit me with whatever they have. One hit into my back. Fluttershy focused on my cutie mark. Angel hit on my stomach and my chest. All the rest tried to hit me, making the scene as chaotic as meeting Cristiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi and trying to have autograph or pictures with them. I took a lot of pain and I cried like a foal. I cried and begged for Fluttershy that she’s going to forgive me and stop doing this torture. But she remains silent and hit me more intense. I cried and cried until all I can only do then was sob. I closed my eyes and took the punishment. I’ve never felt the same way about Fluttershy for everything she did to me, which feels like in a perfect and the most brutal torture chamber in the world, at least in Equestria though. It’s crazier than Rarity’s dare challenge by running around her house for 2 hours and then drink my own sweat. Finally after a few minutes which to me were like an hour, she stopped. The smell of rotten flesh flew through the air and my whole body aches, cuts and bruises appeared a lot of it. Then Fluttershy got into the kitchen and got a bucket of boiling water.
“Are you sorry for what you did?” She asked. I just shook my head because she was way TOO evil and I want to see what she was up to next.
She smiled and answered, “Well good, we’re not done yet” Then she pours the bucket into me. The boiling water almost burnt me for good and I cringed in pain because it was really brutal. After that she brought another bucket of rubbing alcohol and uses her towel and rubs it on my body, making me scream and cried because she has far too much potential for killing ponies and it hurts so badly. I then become tired and a blackout happened to me. I woke up unconscious and she was trying to make me become a pet by giving me a leash. It’s even more painful than the time Pinkie Pie give me a treatment of death which cut my stomach in half with a chainsaw, turn it back to normal with a big, sharp, toxic needle, drug me and then try to rape me while I’m really unconscious. Then the door opened and something stabbed Fluttershy in the back. She died after that. A shadow which looks really familiar with two yellow eyes appeared near the door. It was Zecora.
“Fluttershy said she would not hurt anypony. But after I saw you got tortured by Fluttershy, I’m definitely sure this is a clone. Let’s investigate this problem.” Zecora smiled and look at the clone’s dead body. We investigated the clone. First, we found out the animatronic thing it wore on its head was a neuron transmitter which controls the animals action and thought. Second, it has eye contacts to make me thought she was the real Fluttershy. Third, it was actually from…King Sombra. And finally, the clone is made out of metal. Just as we found out all 4 things that the clone was different from the real Fluttershy, the rest of the mane 6 came and the clone disappeared, leaving a Ponypad on the floor.
“What just happened? Why are you so red and purple like if you’re being hit so badly?” Twilight asked as I grabbed on the Ponypad
“Actually, the Fluttershy that we met today was actually King Sombra’s clone” I answered her question
Applejack tried to disagree, “But that doesn’t explain why you are beaten so badly like that”
Zecora spoke up for me, “Rainbow asked the clone for a punishment because she almost traded a book for her and while she was busy talking to you guys about what she did, King Sombra must have ponynapped Fluttershy and trade her with a clone. The clone did Rainbow’s punishment by beating her badly and controls the animals using a neuron transmitter to hit her more. Then it pours hot boiling water into her and then cleans her with freaking rubbing alcohol. If I didn’t went in in time and kill it, she might become Fluttershy’s pet or even her own slave or King Sombra’s. Then it evaporates and we found this Ponypad”
“You must hurt really badly, right Dashie?” Pinkie Pie asked me
“It still sores right now, duh” I answered. It actually still hurts even though it’s like an hour already since the punishment was all over.
“Let’s just see what it has to do with now” Rarity ended the conversation and we finally get to the Ponypad. It only has album so we checked it out. It had recorded 1 video, which was named to the mane 6 and especially you Rainbow Dash. We opened it and saw Fluttershy’s picture.
“Hi girls, I’m stuck in King Sombra’s palace” the real Fluttershy in the Ponypad talked to us in fear, “I’m so dead right now. Tonight at my cottage, you guys need to save me. Step on a pressure plate near the entrance and you’ll be teleported to his palace. The only person who could battle King Sombra is Rainbow Dash, since she’s my best friend. The rest can only spectate. There will be a time limit, if you can’t kill King Sombra in 5 minutes; I’m going to be drowned to death. I asked Celestia to turn Rainbow Dash from a Pegasi to an Alicorn just as they fight each other. The magic can only be held in 5 minutes and you’ll become a Pegasi back to normal after that. Rainbow Dash, my life is on your hooves. Please help me” Then the screen flashed and the Ponypad evaporated in the air. So she needs me and I had to save her. After a few minutes of silence, Zecora finally said something:
“Well, we shouldn’t let her down or dead. We should save her because-“
Ram!
Just then, the CMC, including Button Mash, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Babs Seed smashed through the door, making all of us surprised.
“Why are you guys here?” Button asked in awe
“We are discussing about saving Fluttershy” Rarity answered, “She is captured in King Sombra’s palace and tonight we need to save her. And guess what, the only person who can rescue her was Rainbow Dash. She will become an Alicorn while she was fighting King Sombra”
The CMC then just stared at me awkwardly. Babs Seed looked away with shivers in her brown skin. Scootaloo shook her head. Button raised his head. Sweetie Belle just opened her mouth. Applebloom just nodded. They had to face the truth that I’m going to be an Alicorn. I don’t know how I look like if I’m an Alicorn. It would be really weird to tell. Let’s fast forward a few hours.
So here we are at King Sombra’s palace at the edge of the Everfree forest where he decided to set his palace after we stepped on the pressure plate. But he didn’t keep his promise because after we went in. The others were trapped in a sealed one-way-glass which I could see in but Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie can’t see out. They also had to fight changelings who were at first, I thought have poor performance. My friends were beaten hard and I knew he really wants to get us destroyed. The only person who had kept the promise was Celestia. After King Sombra was about to say something, I found out that I had a small horn appear sticking out of my forehead. I knew this isn’t going to be easy. We fought each other 5 minutes and I lost my horn. I am really exhausted. I still haven’t got out of my habit for rushing too much. I was going to faint but then King Sombra threw me up in the air about 2 km. Just then, I remembered when I got my cutie mark when I did the Super Sonic Rainboom, which was smashing into the ground at sound speed and made a rainbow and then fly up before hitting the ground. I’m a Pegasi, not an Alicorn. I flew really high and smash down to the ground trying to use all my energy I have left. I used the Super Sonic Rainboom to destroy King Sombra. I smashed down into him. The motivation of killing him was to help my friends. That’s why friendship is magic, that’s what makes the Elements of Harmony. After the smash, my vision started to blur. The last thing I saw were Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie was set free, Fluttershy stepped out of a tank full of water, and King Sombra’s body desynchronized into the air. I was then fainted. I can’t seem to feel anything strange. I fainted with a smile of happiness saving my friends.
I woke up the next day in the hospital. Turns out everyone’s okay, except for me of course. The first person I saw were the rest of the mane 6 of us, including the real Fluttershy. I need a rest so I asked everyone to go out. I’m still really weak. There’s only Fluttershy who had refused to go out. She just smiled at me and then, out of the blue, leaned close and she kissed me. I tried to protest but I’m way too weak to do it. I was soon melted with it and I kissed her back. Her tongue then explored my mouth and I didn’t even care about it. It tastes like strawberries. She then pulled away to catch her breath and my lips were covered with her saliva. I tried to wipe it off because it was way too disgusting now that I had chance to brace myself. When I started to focus, I found out that she kissed me like if she means it. I was shocked to see her kissing me. I suddenly felt a chill swept through me. She was actually kissing me! I didn’t think she was going to do that. I felt awkward to see what she did to me.
“I…I…I” I was almost speechless. It took me forever to finally said something
”Why did…you do that?”
Fluttershy smiled at me and answered “That was a kiss I give you for saving me”
I was then in love with her. I think she was pretty shy to do that. 'That was not going to be good' is what my mind thought as she stepped away from the room.
Author's Note
I reccomend not doing this story again because even though it's what I tried to do, it was just trying to fix capfal's Fluttershy punishes Rainbow Dash story becauuse in some ponies'eyes, their buck.
Remember, I reccomend not doing it again even if it's good or not.
Also I wanted to tell you that a Big Hero 6 reference was here.
