Prototype-Equestrian visitor

by Viper9172

Kind of a new start, I guess

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Alex, in pony form, quickly made his way towards Canterlot medical. He went from full sprint, to glide, to sprint again. He made it to Canterlot within ten minutes, not stopping for anything.

"Where is the hospital?" He asked a nearby guard.

"Uh, turn the corner, go down two blocks, and turn right."

"Thanks!" Alex followed his directions and found the hospital quickly. "Where is my daughter?! I need to see her, now!"

"Who is you're daughter?" A slow, uninterested voice responded.

"Scootaloo!"

"Who is Scootaloo? We have three names with Scoot in them."

"Orange filly, purple mane, tiny wings."

"Oh, her. She is in room three twenty-five. For emergency reconstructive surgery." Alex cursed, then ran up the stairs to where the room would be. He found it and walked into the surgical viewing area.

"Filly, name Scootaloo, severe burn damage on back right leg, amputation is recommended." The intercom chimed.

"No! I can help her! I can fix her leg." Alex shouted.

"How, prey tell, could you fix scorched bone that hardly isn't there."

"I can do it, just leave the room and do NOT observe."

"I trust you, be warned, if it kills the filly, you will be charged with murder."

"Don't care, leave now." Alex walks into the actual surgery area and the doctors leave, he uses a hunter's pulse and sees two doctors in the observatory. "I said leave you two!" He shouts. They hang their heads and leave, he checks again, sees nothing, and continues.

"D-dad?"

"Yes, I'm here, and I'm going to fix this."

"Why did C-celestia do this to me?"

"It wasn't meant for you, don't be mad at her, she meant to hit me."

"What are you going to do?"

"I'm going to fix this, in a very special way."

"How?"

"Do you trust me?"

"Of course, but how are you going to help?"

"I'm going to make you like me. Only if you accept it though, it will make you stronger, faster, and you will be able to fly."

"Of course! I want to be just like you, Dad!"

"Okay...this may hurt...a lot." Alex produces a single claw and stabs it into Scootaloo's chest, she screamed, as to be expected. It hurt Alex to hear her in pain, he removed the claw and observed as her leg regrew and little tendrils flowed over her body.

"Dad! What's happening?!"

"Ssshh, it will be better soon. I gave you weaker versions of my abilities, so you don't over use them so early on."

"Wow. I'll be able make those claws, and the blade, whip-fist, hammerfist, and the muscle mass thing?"

"You will, in time. I started with just my claws, and collected the others through experience. As well as consuming...consuming!"

"Huh?"

"I need one doctor in here, stat!" A doctor immediately burst through the door, closing and locking it behind him.

"What do you need...what is happening here?" He looked with a shocked expression at the two ponies, one looking menacing, and the other covered in small tendrils.

"You sir, are taking part in the greatest medical discovery to have ever existed." Alex grabbed the doctor and shoved a hoof in his mouth to silence him.

"Dad! I can stand again!"

"Can you buck?" She bucked experimentally, it was lightning fast.

"Yeah, what do I need to buck?"

"Him."

"Huh? Why would I buck him?"

"To consume him, make you stronger."

"I don't know, won't it hurt him?"

"Of course it won't, it instantly kills him, he won't feel a thing."

"O-okay, Dad. I trust you." She walked reluctantly towards her father and the captive.

"Good, now all you have to do is buck him." She turned around slowly, lining up the kick.

"Peas ser! Din't du tis!" The doctor pleaded. Scootaloo let out a small squeak before bucking, putting her back legs into the doctor's chest. His body was enveloped in tendrils and pulled in Scootaloo's body.

"I...I feel...better, and-" Her sentence was interrupted by a low rumbling. "What happening now?!"

"You're getting your first power, what will it be?" Her forelegs shoot into the air, leaving her on her rump. After another minute or two it stopped and one of her fore legs morphed into a rope-like tendril with claws and points at the end and running up the side.

"Isn't this whip-fist?"

"In your case, whip-hoof. Try kicking it towards the wall over there." She kicked towards the wall like she would kick a soccer ball, the clawed end shot forward into said wall, embedding itself deep into the stone.

"That's so cool! You said I would be able to fly too, right?"

"Well, it's more of a glide, but since you have wings, maybe continuous flight is possible. Now focus on what your hoof looked like before."

"Okay." She closed her eyes and her whip-hoof turned to normal again. "I can't wait to show everyone at school!"

"No! You'll only wind up being hated. For being different, for being better."

"Oh."

"Right. Let's go to the castle now."

"Alright. Hey Dad, when I first got to the hospital I heard a huge explosion, like something really heavy hit the ground. Do you know what it was?"

"Oh yeah, Luna sent me to the moon and I jumped back, nothing special."

"Really?"

"Yes, really. Now, double time." Alex went into a half-full sprint, letting Scootaloo keep up. They ran out of the hospital and towards the castle at speeds that matched that of a car going ninety. They made it to the castle within twenty minutes, the sun was rising, so Celestia was awake.

"What are we doing at the castle anyways?"

"Getting rich."

"Are we robbing it?!"

"No, after the fight, which I won by the way, I made Celestia sign to wavers, one stating that she would give me an unlimited supply of money, the other saying she would give me a new body."

"Oh, that's cool." They walked into the main corridor, and saw Celestia finish setting the sun in motion.

"Celestia!" Alex called. Celestia jumped nearly ten feet in the air.

"Huh? What are you doing here at this hour, the castle is open to the public at seven, its six."

"I have two wavers, signed by you, that you should read." Alex hoofed the papers to Celestia and she read them, jaw dropping.

"These must be fake!"

"No," Alex morphed into his human form, "It's real. Remember me now?"

"I...I remember. Scootaloo? How did your leg heal so fast? And...sorry."

"It's fine, Alex made me like him!" Celestia's jaw hit the ground, literally, a solid clunk rang through the empty hall.

"Now there's two of them, that's just dandy. Alex, follow me to get your new form. Scootaloo, wait here."

"Okay ma'am." Scootaloo found a soft pillow and laid down on it, quickly falling asleep.

"Now, I can't give you a new form, but I can alter the pony you disguise yourself as, make him bigger, a pegasus, unicorn, change genders. You understand right?"

"Yeah yeah, I get it."

"Okay, what needs to be changed?"

"Make me a pegasus, midnight black, with a large, muscular build."

"Okay...turn to the pony, and wait for a minute." Alex complies. Celestia pulls out a book with her magic and turns it to a transformation spell. Her horn glows again and Alex starts to change to what he requested.

"Good, that's much better. Now, about the money." Celestia sighed.

"The largest amount we can offer is seven billion bits."

"That's fine, just as long as Scootaloo doesn't have to live on the street."

"For someone as gruesome as you, you make a good father."

"You'd be like me if you knew what made me like this."

"What could make a person act the way you do?"

"Well..." Alex continued to tell Celestia the story of New York Zero, not leaving any details out, just to mess with her. "That's why I'm like this, act like this, have power like this."

"Well, you haven't abused it, so I'm not worried about you becoming an enemy. Since this will be like a new start, how about I introduce you to the elements, since you will be in Ponyville."

"I guess we have time, go ahead." Celestia started to write an invitation letter when Alex left the room.

"Scootaloo? We're going to be here for a while."

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