The Banished Prince

by Fanged Doom

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 1540

Fanged Doom - the third original alicorn that was banished many moons ago - has returned, and he is seeking vengeance for the wrongs his sisters have committed against him.

In the beginning, there were three alicorns - Celestia, Luna, and Fanged Doom.

Fanged Doom was... interesting. He was unique. So unique that his mother didn't even care about properly naming him and therefore gave him a stupid name. Because of his uniqueness, he was banished. Nopony expected him to return - or they wouldn't have, anyway, if they'd known of his existence. He was kept a secret from the general population.

Now, he has returned, and he wants revenge.

Published 2015-07-25 16:40:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-27 02:25:54 UTC

Chapter 1

Thousands of moons ago, long before the banishment of the Lunar Princess, there were three alicorns: Celestia, Luna, and Fanged Doom.

All alicorns have two sides to them: a light side and a dark side. For example, Nightmare moon was Luna's dark side.

But Fanged Doom was different from the other two: instead of corrupting into his dark side, he was born with his dark side showing. The other two alicorns did all they could to reform him, but they gave up and were forced to banish him.

He was also really ugly. Although probably not the main reason for his banishment, it was a contributing factor. His coat was unevenly patterned and a horrible colour - as black as coal. And his mane, although not horrible, clashed with his coat's colour. Whilst the two other alicorns were admired for their beauty, he was shunned and left to mope in the darkness.

He was ugly, and he knew it. The only thing he was actually proud of were his wings - colourful and smooth, resembling a bat's wing more than a pony's. Unfortunately, he couldn't fly very well, as he was born with holes in his wings. Awesome, star-shaped holes, but they were still holes and greatly affected his flight in a negative way.

Anyway, he was banished.

Just a baby, he was forced to wander around, alone and confused. It is not of pony nature to be isolated from others - that's why ponies were often banished to places like the moon or Tartarus. Being alone is really torturous.

To save himself from solitude, Fanged Doom befriended a dragon that he came across one day. It tried to kill him at first, but then he overpowered the dragon and used his powers to enslave it.

He named the dragon "Shadow" because of his dark colouring. His scales were of a deep navy blue and his eyes were blood-red.

He taught Shadow to help fight alongside himself, and was even training him up to help Fanged overthrow the regal sisters.

They trained for many moons. Fighting tactics, stealth, devising multiple different plans in case one were to fail. Soon it was time. Fanged, alongside Shadow, were going to get revenge on Celesta and Luna.

Canterlot. It looked so beautiful this night. But things were about to stir as Fanged Doom and Shadow made their way to the capital. Front gate, guarded by multiple Pegasi guards. A simply flyby from Shadow and then a swoop in by Fanged and they were all unconscious.

Making their way though the heart of the city, more guards were coming out of the castle, Probably by orders of Celestia and Luna. Someone had to've seen the knocked out guards by now. Fanged wanted to keep going through, but Shadow dragged him into the back alleys, hiding in the shadows to get to the castle door.

The castle door was the doorway to his vengeance. The castle door, constructed of the finest oak, barring the entrence to the building. Just inside that building there lived the other two alicorns (Fanged Doom didn't know about Twilight and Cadance).

Fanged Doom roared and used his powerful magic to blow up the door. BOOM! It exploded then flew off of its hinges and into a nearby pit of lava that Fanged Doom had also conjured with his magic, just for the special effects.

Shadow grumbled, putting a claw to his forehead. "The whole point of hiding in the shadows was to stay hidden!" he hissed angrily.

"Stay hidden?" Fanged Doom laughed. "Please. I want Celestia Luna to feel dread as they realize who has come for them. I want them to hear my voice and be filled with fear, knowing that the only fate awaiting them is a horrible one."

"Yes, master. Now RUN!" Faanged Doom heeded his reptilian slave's advice and ran - but not away from the guards. He ran straight into the throng of angry soldiers, not even batting an eye at the sharp weapons. With a few swift punches and the aid of a spell, he quickly disarmed them and chucked any bodies into the lava pit until only one pony remained.

"You will not get away with this!" Shining Armor shouted, waving his spear around in the air. Fanged Doom rolled his eyes and turned him into a stick of deodorant, which he then used on himself. Of course, he wasn't getting sweaty from the fighting - lava is really hot, you know.

"Was that really necessary?" Shadow questioned.

"Yes. Now shut up," the tall alicorn commanded, whacking him with one of his multi-coloured bat wings.

"Ow!" Shadow complained loudly. "I'm much larger than you," he reminded the black pony. "I could kill you if I wanted to."

"Try that and I'll have to remove another one of your claws," Fanged Doom warned him. Shadow winced, trying very hard not to think about the last time he had dared disobey his master.

"Understood," he mumbled.

"Good. Now seriously, shut up so that I can continue with this thing. Follow close behind - I didn't shrink you to my size so that you could trail far behind and get both of us caught."

Fanged Doom took a deep breath, tensed up his muscles, and then charged into the castle, running at full speed towards the throne room. Shadow did as he was told and flew by his master's side, knocking away guards who were stupid enough not to flee with his powerful tail, occasionally setting them on fire with his fiery breath.

Shadow giggled with delight as the guards screamed, earning a whack from his master.

"Stop acting like a sadistic little filly," he scolded him as he disabled the last few guards standing between him and the doors to the throne room.

"Are you sure you want to go through with this?" Shadow asked nervously as they stood in front of the door.

"We've already started, so we might as well," Fanged Doom declared. "Let's go!"

Author's Note

Yes, Fanged Doom is a black-and-red alicorn OC. We made him to prove that not all black-and-red OC's are bad. Don't judge a book by its cover, k?

~Shadow

Chapter 2

"PREPARE TO DIE, CELESTIA!" Fanged Doom roared as he crashed through the doors of the throne room. Shadow cackled gleefully and flew circles around the room. The guards standing inside peed themselves and fainted on the spot.

"Shut the fuck up," Celestia complained. "I'm eating dinner."

Luna, on the other hoof, immediately rose to action. "Halt!" she commanded. Fanged Doom did not halt. Instead, he leaped forwards and planted a kiss on Luna's lips.

"U-umph!" she protested. Her knees grew weak and she fell to the floor, shocked. A trickle of blood ran down her chin from one of Fanged Doom's fangs.

"You're hot when you're unable to prevent me from taking over," Fanged Doom told her with a smile.

"No, you can't microwave toast, uncle Scootaloo," Luna muttered, delirious.

Suddenly, a loud noise sounded from behind Fanged Doom. He whirled around to see Celestia standing behind him in a battle stance, a tiny dot of ketchup on her nose. "I'm finished eating," she growled menacingly.

Celetia kicked Fanged Doom in the face! "You little mother pheasent plucker consuming mother fucker!" Fanged Doom yelled. Obviously, he did not enjoy a hoof to his face.

"Watch your mouth," Celestia snapped. She did not tolerate nonsense in matters as grave as this one.

"Watch your mom! Oh wait, YOU'RE A PRINCESS!" Fang doom quietly whispered in her ear as he used his magic to throw her into the ceiling.

Celestia screamed as her body hit the high ceiling, partially from the pain and partially from the horror as she heard her bones snap. She slammed back onto the cold tile floor and lay there, whimpering like a kicked puppy.

"lel get rekt" Fanged Doom said, looming over his fallen opponent.

"Master, snap out of it!" Shadow yelled, snapping a claw in front of his face. Fanged Doom blinked and realized that he was still standing outside of the throne room and had, in fact, imagined the whole scene.

"Every damn time!" he yelled in frustration. Shadow was very confused.

"But this didn't happen last time," he told the alicorn.

"Whatever." Fanged Doom walked in the room for real this time, only to be immediately shot down by snipers positioned in every window of the large room. Which was a total of 2 windows. Sunlight is for the weak. (aka Celestia)

Of course, being the powerful being that he was, Fanged Doom did not fall. No - he exploded, and his soul went straight to Tartarus. "DAMN IT!" he screamed in rage.

"I SWEAR EVERY FUCKING TIME I DIE I'M GONNA GO TO TARTURUS AREN'T I?!?!?!?!?!?!"

"Last time you went to Granny Smith's toilet," Shadow grumpily reminded him.

"It's basically the same thing." Fanged Doom replied.

"Yeah, I guess so. Time to escape?" Shadow asked, preparing his muscles.

Fanged Doom nodded.

Author's Note

666 cannot take things seriously, apparently. And he wouldn't let me edit! :raritydespair:

~Shadow

LELELEL get rekt MLG gamer 360 no-scope #$weg #yolo #Shadow-just-can't-handle-meh

-666