Stories of A Mary Sue

by Just A Random Pegasus

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 3422

Bizarre, strange, and horrible backstories that could make an OC be considered a Mary/Gary Sue

Have you ever wondered how many bizarre Mary Sue/ Gary Sue stories I can come up with?

No?

Well, if you were, look no further. Here are some REALLY bad, bizarre, and strange OC stories I came up with at the top of my head.

Sorry if you are offended in any way. I do not copy backstories from other people onto this. This is completely my imagination.

Published 2015-07-07 18:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-08-04 01:21:28 UTC

FREEDOM!

Princess Liberty was abused as a young alicorn. Her parents hated her. She lived in a land where there were no princess'. Everypony thought she was trying to be one, so they all got mad at her.

Liberty traveled to Equestria one day. She was tired of being attacked.

When she got off the train in Canterlot, she saw many ponies greeting her with warm welcomes.

Here and there, many ponies bowed to her along the streets. She soon got to the Canterlot castle, and saw Princess Celestia.

Celestia felt bad for Liberty's past, so she made her a princess.

Somehow, Tirek escaped again and captured all of Equestria. Princess Liberty was the only one not captured, so she attacked Tirek. Tirek was no match for her, since she was as strong as Celestia and Luna combined.

When she defeated Tirek and saved Equestria, she was known as the Princess of Freedom.

Princess Celestia and Princess Luna let her keep the Canterlot castle to herself, since she was much more powerful than them.

Princess Liberty became the most respected princess in all the land.

Famous

A unicorn stallion named Fabu was famous throughout the land. He was a good singer, dancer, and had really good looks. Anything to brighten a mare's day, right?

One day, he traveled to Ponyville. The train was rented out for him only, since he was so amazing.

When he got to Ponyville, a red carpet was unfolded as he stepped off the train.

All different types of ponies wanted his autograph. A lot of the mares also flirted with him; but it's not like that was uncommon.

He soon saw the mane six. By just glancing at him, all six of them fell in love. Even Rainbow Dash.

The six were chasing him around all day, buying him everything he wanted from Ponyville.

In that time, he found a spark. He started to fall in love with Twilight Sparkle. And she liked him back.

Later that night, he asked Twilight out. All of her friends were upset, so they tried to attack Twilight. Fabu, with his amazing charm, stopped them from attacking.

Their first date was amazing. Twilight took them to the Crystal Empire, where he met Cadance and Shining Armor.

Years flew by, and he and Twilight were getting married.

A huge royal wedding was held, with possibly everypony in Equestria coming. Of course, it's not everyday a famous superstar gets married to a princess.

The night after the wedding, Fabu looked out the balcony on Twilight's castle, since that's where he lived now.

I'm a prince now... he thought. He now realized he was one of the most powerful beings in all the land, and he was happy with that.

He looked inside to see Twilight reading, and decided to blast some of his music.

"You're such a good singer..." Twilight said dreamily as the two talked some more into the evening.

Author's Note

Fabulous: Take out the "lous" and you get... Fabu! Pretty creative, huh?

No... not really. But that's the point. :derpytongue2:

Royal Love

A Pegasus stallion named Cloud Wing was very sad. He couldn't fly because of a disorder, and everypony he met turned out to be liars. He was beaten up many times; which was shown by the few scars he had on his body. He guessed they were permanent.

He didn't understand why everypony was so rude to him. He never did anything wrong. His parents even told him that he was practically flawless; and that his great personality made up for his lack of flight.

His life changed one day when he went to Canterlot. He thought that he could try living there; and hoped that somepony would be nice to him for once.

The streets were crowded with high-class ponies, and he felt like he didn't fit in. He ran into the Canterlot castle, hoping to be alone. That was when his life changed.

He turned to find Princess Luna, who seemed to be avoiding his glance. He always heard that princesses were beautiful, but man, she was gorgeous.

He walked up to her, not dropping eye contact.

"Hello. I am Princess Luna." Luna greeted, a blush fairly noticeable on her cheeks.

"I am Cloud Wing, a Pegasus who can't fly and is abused by others."

"Oh, I'm sorry!" Luna responded, her eyes fully meeting his now. "I won't be rude to you. Do you want to... go out for lunch?"

"Certainty." He replied.

Turns out, Princess Luna had developed a crush on him. That's when he realized how attractive he must really be. I mean, to get a princess' attention, you must be pretty good-looking.

He asked the Princess out, who agreed. The two spent a lot of time together from then on.

Princess Luna soon made an announcement; that everypony had to treat Cloud Wing like a royal. Soon, Cloud was invited to the most amazing parties all around Equestria. He was bowed to, and everypony respected him. He then was told by one of the ponies that attacked him that they were just jealous. They envied his looks, and wanted his personality.

A few months later, he proposed to Luna, and with excitement, Luna made him an alicorn prince.

Now, he was a ruler. Turns out, he was really good with magic. Better than Celestia herself.

Soon, Princess Luna and Prince Cloud Wing started a happy life and family together.

Crossbreed

There was once a pony that was part dog, part changeling, part unicorn, and part tiger. Her name was Magic Sear.

She never knew her parents, since they abandoned her when she was young. She guessed that one of her parents was a changeling and the other was a dog or tiger of some kind, but she wasn't sure. She just knew that she was the most bizarre creature in Equestria.

One day, she was walking in Ponyville and bumped into a very strange creature. He was tall and slender, with strange features like Magic Sear herself.

She talked to him, and found out his name was Discord. She then started to feel attracted to Discord.

She changed into everything she could, showing off her changeling powers. Discord was very impressed. He was so impressed, that he let her stay in his chaotic home. He treated her like a queen.

He even called her Queen Magic Sear, since she was so amazing.

Magic Sear spent the rest of her happy days living with Discord.

Author's Note

I really don't know what her parents could be... :pinkiegasp:

Well, that's the point, right? :derpytongue2:

I H8 Diamond Tiara

Some bullies just need to be put in their place. And to a certain, strong, earth pony stallion, that bully is Diamond Tiara. He had always heard about her bullying ponies, and had always hated her. He was surprised she even had a friend.

Silver Muscle is the strongest pony in all of Equestria. He helps defeat monsters and rounds up criminals. He is one of the most famous ponies in Equestria.

One day, Silver was walking by the Ponyville Elementary. He happened to notice the very pony he dislikes. Her purple and white mane, blue eyes, and pink coat. She also had a crown adorning her head. It was Diamond Tiara herself.

He charged right on over and attacked the young filly. The fillies that were being bullied chanted his name, "Silver Muscle! Silver Muscle!"

After about two minutes of beating, Diamond Tiara had learned her lesson. She ran to her rich house, and vowed to never run into Silver Muscle again.

Now, everypony in the school congratulated Silver. Miss Cheerilee even made him the new principal.

He loved his new job. The fillies loved him. Life was good.

Author's Note

Thanks TheFanficFanPony for the idea for this chapter!

I don't actually hate Diamond this much. I honestly think she would be a great character if she was taught the importance of being nice to others by somepony like Twilight or Rainbow Dash. (Hey, that's a pretty good FanFic idea! :pinkiegasp:)

Well, I hope you don't feel like erasing your memory yet! :rainbowlaugh:

Flashy

Rainbow Spark, an alicorn who has a neon coat with rainbow mane and tail, looked out over her glorious kingdom of Equestria. She was the main ruler; considering she was more powerful than every pony combined. I mean, she was the one who defeated Tirek. Everypony except her was helpless. Princess Celestia considered giving their magic to Princess Twilight during that incident, but Rainbow Spark suggested that she would defeat him herself.

She did, and was praised for it. Actually, she was originally a unicorn. With her magic alone, she was able to defeat Tirek. That's when the princesses of Equestria gave their rule to her. She now raises the sun, moon, and stars. She was also given beautiful, neon wings, to make herself an alicorn princess.

Rainbow Spark looked at her now flowing mane. It was very bright; it looked like a rainbow itself was thrown into her mane. Which was kind of the case, actually.

Her talent was making rainbows and riding them. The weather ponies of Cloudsdale never had to make many rainbows, since she would use her magic to create them.

Now, she still makes rainbows, even though she has princess responsibilities. She has gained the favor of everypony in Equestria, and is friends with almost every one of them. Especially Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash was jealous of her rainbow, neon coat, in fact.

Rainbow Spark lives a perfect life. She wouldn't trade her current circumstance for the world.

7th Element

Pink Heart, a pink unicorn with a purple mane, looked around Ponyville. It was a very nice night, but she felt like it needed something. Love. Sure, there were couples and families, but she felt like love was a great part of friendship that more ponies should know about.

She decided to visit Princess Twilight; one of her friends. Pink had been feeling a particularly strong connection to the Elements of Harmony recently, and felt like Twilight would like to hear about that.

After she told Twilight, the alicorn led Pink Heart to the Everfree Forest, not speaking a word. Pink went along with Twilight, a little nervous her closest friend wasn't speaking to her.

They soon reached the Tree of Harmony, which was shining very brightly. Twilight then uncovered an extra branch on the tree, revealing a holder for the seventh element.

"I believe you are the 7th element, Pink Heart."

"What?!" She asked, her eyes widening.

"Yes." Twilight nodded her head. "You are the Element of Love."

She was too shocked to speak.

"Try spreading love magic to me. That might conjure up the element." Twilight said as Pink Heart charged up her horn. She felt a nice, refreshing aura, as she released it. Twilight was soon wrapped in the warm aura, sensing love. Suddenly a necklace appeared on Pink's neck, showing off a bright pink heart.

Twilight levitated it onto the tree, proudly smiling.

Pink Heart was allowed to go on all the adventures with the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony, and even helped defeat the toughest villain they've ever faced.

Princess Childcare

Princess Celestia and King Sombra had a daughter.

An alicorn daughter given the name Princess Childcare.

Childcare is pink with a rainbow mane that looks like Celestia's. She also has a green glow around her eyes like Sombra, but that doesn't mean she's evil.

In the years growing up, the young Princess showed that she had compassion for everyone, especially young fillies.

One day, she got on Sombra's bad side. When Princess Celestia wasn't looking, Sombra beat up Childcare and threw her into the streets.

After that, she walked to a orphanage. She didn't want to face her father anytime soon.

Princess Celestia soon found out that her daughter went missing, and had a talk with Sombra. After finding out what happened, she divorced him and went to find her daughter. She thought Princess Childcare was much more special and important to this world than King Sombra.

When she got to the orphanage, she saw Childcare had a cutie mark, which represented taking care of fillies.

Celestia got an idea. When she arrived at the castle, she created a day-care for children.

Now, Princess Childcare had a job, and she was also well praised.

The newspapers were adorned with titles saying, "Most Compassionate Princess!" and, "I would trust no one else with my children except Princess Childcare."

Soon, Princess Celestia saw her daughter's rule was going much better than her own. She then made Childcare the Queen of Equestria.

Queen Childcare was chased by many stallions. Many.

She fell in love with an amazing royal guard. She loved him so much, they had a child before getting married.

Everypony still looked up to them, since Childcare was the most powerful being in all the land.

They finally married when their child was two. The three lived a happy live together as King, Queen, and Princess of Equestria.

Author's Note

This is fun to write so far :rainbowlaugh:

This is not well written for a reason. These backstories are supposed to have no detail but make the OC's seem super powerful.

Sorry if any of these backstories sound exactly like your own. If they do, I strongly suggest changing your OC. I'm creating these backstories at the top of my head. :derpytongue2:

I hope you enjoyed!

TWIDASH IS BEST!

Twilight and Rainbow Dash combined their DNA, creating a new foal. They name it Twidash.

Twidash is an alicorn mare. She is the best flyer in all the land, even better than Rainbow Dash, and the best magician in all the land, even better than Twilight.

Of course, since Twidash is an alicorn, she is automatically a princess.

Princess Twidash can create a Double Sonic Rainboom, which is two times as fast as a regular Sonic Rainboom.

She also comes up with spells not even heard of. One spell enabled her to create her own country and all the buildings in it. She launched the spell, and named her new country Twidash-Ville. She lived in her own castle, with making Rainbow Dash and Twilight be her servants.

It was hard for Twilight to give up her castle in Ponyville, along with her role as a Princess, but she knew that her daughter was much more important.

As time went on, Rainbow Dash and Twilight's friends found themselves better friends with Twidash than them. The two got mad, and made Twidash get rid of her castle, along with her royal rights. When she did, ponies from all over Equestria demanded for them to let Twidash have her own castle and rights again. Twilight and Rainbow Dash gave into the demands, and gave Twidash her castle back.

The Princess lived happily ever after, still keeping Twilight and Rainbow Dash her servants.

Author's Note

I actually don't ship Twidash; I just thought of a random shipping and went with it.

These stories are painful to read. And I'm the one who wrote them :rainbowlaugh:

I'm just happy no OC has these terrible backstories... right?

Red and Black Are My Favorite Colors

One day, a boy opened up his eyes to find that he had been magically teleported to Equestria somehow.

He stood up and saw that he was red with a black mane.

"These are my favorite colors!" The boy who was now a stallion said.

He looked in a mirror to find that he was an alicorn. He also had dark red eyes.

I'm a royal! He thought. He then took a closer look at his colors.

I'm red and black... that must mean I am bad! He ran outside to the area with most ponies.

"Hey, m8's!" He yelled, causing ponies to turn around. He then cast a spell on them, making them slaves.

With his slaves, he raided the Canterlot castle and painted everything red and black. He then kicked Celestia and Luna out into the streets.

With his new kingdom, he made everyone serve him and call him "King Rack" (King Red and Black).

Soon, Princess Celestia came up to him and reformed him. She just did, because she is overpowered.

When he realized how wrong he was being, he changed the castle back to normal. Princess Celestia made him a prince, because he was an alicorn.

Months flew by, and he found himself attracted to Princess Cadance. Even though she was married, he asked her out.

She said said, "Yes! Shining Armor is getting too weird. I will happily go out with you!"

So, in secret, Prince Rack was dating Princess Cadance. Not even Celestia knew, even though she was practically Rack's parent.

Soon, Cadance divorced Shining Armor and made him live with Twilight. She then re-married Rack.

Rack lived happily ever after, forever loving his colors.

Author's Note

A red and black Gary Sue OC. There are so many of them out there. :derpytongue2:

My best friend, Midnight, helped me with some of the ideas. :rainbowwild:

I Can Make Anything For You

A young unicorn named Mystery Appearance loved magic. She studied it 24/7, and even was accepted into Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.

With all the magic practice she had, it's no mystery why she learned that amazing spell that changed all of Equestria forever.

She got her cutie mark when she was studying with Celestia one day. The Princess needed coffee, so with a poof of magic, she created it for her. Mystery's special talent is creating anything someone wants.

Celestia took notice of her special talent, and sent her off, all around Equestria, to help ponies in need.

Mystery Appearance helped ponies in need by creating food for them. The young unicorn soon went to Ponyville, where she met the mane six.

They all automatically wanted to be friends with her, since she was one of the most famous ponies in all the land.

With her new friendships, Mystery became even more famous. Well, if you're friends with the bearers of the Elements of Harmony and the Princess of Friendship, you would probably be known by quite a bit of ponies.

She soon realized that she was better at magic than Twilight. She soon started to become better friends with the rest of the mane six than Twilight herself.

Twilight soon explained her struggles to Mystery, who understood, of course.

The unicorn traveled back to Canterlot, where she received many warm welcomes.

She went back to see Princess Celestia again, who congratulated her for her work.

Mystery Appearance still created everything ponies wanted/needed, and still was one of the highest members of Equestrian society for years to come.

Ruler of Another Universe

There was a majestic alicorn stallion who ruled a whole other universe; much different from Equestria. Everypony could levitate, use telekinesis, and were all strong. The alicorn was named King Shadow Dash. He felt a strong connection to Equestria, but he didn't understand why.

One day, he decided to travel there. He wasn't sure why, he just thought that he would discover something amazing.

He landed on a dirt path and saw a rainbow blur dash through the sky. Something was telling him to follow it. He easily caught up with the blur, since he was much faster. Turns out, that blur was a mare.

"Can I help you?" She asked as she sat on a cloud. Shadow sat down on the cloud with her.

"I am King Shadow Dash, the ruler of a different universe.

Rainbow sat there with her mouth hanging open. "I remember you! You're my long lost brother!"

"What?!" Shadow stammered as Rainbow nodded her head.

"Mom and dad had to send you to another universe because you were the fastest flyer, best magician, and strongest pony in the world. You were also an alicorn for some reason."

"Oh, I lost memory."

"Yeah, Princess Celestia put a memory loss spell on you." Rainbow nudged him. "I advise you go back to your own universe, your highness. Your power is too strong for anypony here."

"Alright." Shadow Dash then rocketed out of Equestria, and found his way to his planet.

He was shocked that he actually had a family. He was also happy that he was considered the most powerful pony to ever step foot in Equestria.