The Knock

by Nocturnal Vision

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Tragedy, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 1021

A Dark Stormy night, and a blind, strange stallion seems to pay a " friendly visit" to Twilights house... My very First FanFic! i know its small but its my first try so dont hate!!!

Twilight is lucky with friendship we all know, even the princesses once gave her all of their magic, but, is she really lucky with unknown stangers? Read this and you will have your answer.

Published 2015-09-09 00:00:04 UTC
Last updated 2015-09-09 00:00:04 UTC

Strange Stallion on the Loose! Prt 1

It was a Dark night, loaded with terrifying storms that maybe even Rainbow Dash would NOT like to be involved in. Twilight, looked out the

window as she read a book about proper dragon care, when she spotted a stallion with a black jacket that, at this weather, could very well

hide him if he tried to. He walked up to her door and she heard a knock on the door. At first, she thought it was best to not let him in but, she

was a kind respectfull pony so her mind said otherwise. She lazily trotted to the door and opened it and the stallion from the window was

there, barelly visible because of the darkness and his jacket.

" H - hello? what do you need? " She asked in confusion.

No reply, the stallion just looked at her with rather frightening looks.

After a few seconds he finally spoke.

" Do not read it... please dont... " He did nothing, he just left into the darkness again.

Twilight just shut the door and looked at her mirror with a strange feeling, she thought it was anger at a random stranger just telling her that

but no, she was scared, the awkward entrance to her home... the darkness and the random comment seemed to confuse her, and scare her.

" Haha!!! " Twilight chuckled to chear her self up. " He was probably on drugs! Weirdo... "

She decided to go to bed.

2 hours later she hears a knock again.

" Who is it!? " She yells, exhausted.

" Dont read it... Please dont... " Was the only response heard.

She was at this pointed scared to death, she dared to look out the window to see a dead rat hanged on it. stomach half visible.

" AAAH!!! " She screams but then inmediatly stuffs her hoof in her mouth  she didnt want to wake Spike and have to explain this to him, he

was too young. She took a broom and used it to carefully remove the rat and put it outside.

The next hour a knock is heard, and this time she doesnt answer and just tries to sleep, but hears noises coming in from the bottom of her

bed, she opens her eyes just to see a knife and the strange man holding it, about to stab her and she yells NEVER! and punches him in the

face. Her eyes open widely and she realises that she wasnt in bed, she was in a hospital and she had actually punched AJ.

" Oh my gosh! im sorry Applejack! i had a horrible dream and...! why am i here...?  "  She asked.

" Twi, that was no dream, that stallion has been known by authorities as an organ snatcher. He drugs you in your sleep to have creepy

nightmares and then steals one of your organs... " replies AJ after sighing.

" WH- WHAAAAT!!!???? HE DIDNT DO NOTHING TO ME RIGHT?! RIGHT?! " She yelled.

" Im sorry Twi, but, he took one of yer lungs... " replies AJ in a sad tone.

Twilight lays in her hospital bed, staring at the roof with a jaw wide open of what just happened, and cries...

Strange Stallion on the Loose! Prt 2

Twilight remained looking at the roof for a few seconds,

" Celestia... Why... " She whimpered.

" Why... Im so sorry for ye but, dont worry, he be put to justice as soon as we find em! " Replied Applejack in Anger and Passion.

But Twilight just cut her off " I know but, what use is there now? MY BUCKING LUNG IS GONE!!" Shouted Twilight in sadness and frustrashion.

" Well, yea, bu- " replied Applejack but was cut off by a doctor that just entered the room.

" Miss Twilight, we have good news, we can replace your missing lung, but you will have to stay in the hospital for about 3 weeks, its for the

best " Intorrupted the doctor with a rather happy tone that faded when he said the weeks she would have to stay here for.

" Okay, well thats good, Applejack i need some rest sooo... if you wouldnt mind... " Said Twilight.

" Oh yes, ill leave, sleep well okay! " Replied AJ as she got ready to leave.

" Thanks and sorry for kicking you out, i promise well hang out wen i leave this hospital, sorry... " Spoke Twilight, depressed.

" No-Problemo! Its all right Twi, ill seen you then! " Replies Applejack in a Pleased tone.

They said theyre goodbyes and Applejack and the Doctor left.

4 hours later...

Twilight is uncomfortable, she feels like HE will return again,She feels like HE is watching her. But she keeps reminding her self that shes safe

here and should not worry.

But then she thought of what he said,

" Please dont read it? Read what? " She whispered to herself.

She then found a book on a table on the left side of her bed that was called Devil Cage.

She was intches from opening the book when she heard it again.

" Dont Read it... Please dont "

Twilight was scared, but she was sick of it and yelled,

" BUCK YOU!!! BUCK YOU BUCK YOU BUCK YOU!!! YOU WILL NOT DO THIS TO ME AGA- " She was interrupted by the strange stallion entering

her room.

" AAAAHHH!!! " She screamed.

" Dont read it... please dont " he said as he got closer.

" NO NEVEEER " she picked up the book and opened it, inraging the stallion and make him go faster towards her.

The book had only 7 words in the entire book.

" Devils Cage Sealed by the Great Sage " she chanted and the mysterious pony slowly evaporated as he was sealed away for hopefuly eternity.

She Spoke her final words before collapsing to her bed in shock of what she just went through,

"  A Devil huh? Nothing i cant handle " Said Twilight in relief.

" Its all over "