This is my first published FanFiction, so kind, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

The ponies of the night were feared, once. They were considered monsters just for existing, and the power had driven several of them mad. Those who remained bore the full weight of the judgement of the Sun and those who lived under it. One day, though, they disappeared, but their existence remained in myths. When a descendant of these same beings appears, what kind of chaos could it create?

A fiction about vampires in My Little Pony, and how they're not so different from the rest of us. Also containing conspiracies, betrayals, relationships, and some action.