My name is Swiftsword when I was about three her village was destroyed by a man named Redclaw, I was hidden for two weeks when I came out everyone I knew was gone except for three girls and two boys who hidden with me, the girls' names were, Treeseed, she was 11, Moonlight, she was 17, and Waterlily, she was 21. The boys' names were, Shadow, he was 23 and Waterlily's husband, and Leafblade, he was 4 and Treeseed's brother. We all made a promise now matter how long it takes we would one day find Redclaw and kill him.
Then 13 years passed I was 16, Treeseed was... You know what you do the math I want to get back to the story, so a lot has changed since then we have a permanent base to train, Waterlily and Shadow had a child who is now 12, her name is Waterfall, and Leafblade is my BF, and guess what... Two months ago we found an old man who told us that I am the chosen one to defeat Redclaw and that dude was a shaman for a village, so now I am here today right in front of his castle defeating monsters like a boss! Then came out Redclaw. We had and epic battle, sparks flying every time our swords clashed, but something horrible happened.
When I had him at his knees right when I was about to finish him off, he quickly swung his foot as I tripped and knocked me right out, I woke up in a strange place when I looked up Redclaw was standing right before me smiling.
"When am I?!" I yelled at him...
"We are in your mind..." He circled around me "right now I am controlling you, your friends know that to..." He snapped his fingers and there appeared a screen showing what is happening outside... Somehow in third person.
It's me but not me I am talking in Redclaw's voice, I am shaking so much I can't hear anything, my face is blank I see all my friends, Leafblade is being held back by Shadow, Treeseed looks like she just saw a ghost, and don't ask me why we brought her, but Waterfall is standing behind Waterlily looking like she is about to cry, but then When I finally snap back to attention all I hear is the word
"Goodbye" the I see Leafblade escape Shadow's grasp and the minute he touches me a white flash appears almost blinding me then I wake up in and strange land Leafblade on top of me but there is on thing we are both ponys!!!!