The Sun's Retribution

by Dracosaurian

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Original Character, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Human, Anthro, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 2435

I am The Hunter. A being Celestia has imprisoned in stone for a thousand years for rebelling against her tyranny. I seek to end her rule and make a better world for all who live in Equestria.

The land of Equestria but a husk of its former happy self. Celestia rules with an iron hoof, Luna is in the sun and the elements of harmony never existed. In the Canterlot Mines, a statue of a human clad in the armor made from the scales of a great beast sits there. What Celestia doesn't know is that the being inside is still alive biding his time. That being is me, Krieger von Gerechtigkeit, I will soon break out and Celestia shall pay for all the crimes she has done. For I am her RETRIBUTION!

Co-written withSolphestus.
If you'd like to suggest anything just say it in the comments or PM me. Krieger von Gerechtigkeit translates to Warrior of Justice. If anybody wants their OC in this PM me.

Published 2015-07-11 06:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-18 01:43:43 UTC

Intro

Break Free

Another day of standing around. Maybe someone will visit me. I thought.

Nah I don't think so.

Quiet.

You can't keep me quiet I'm you.

I sighed to myself. Hi my name is Wolf. I am a Hunter turned into stone for something I don't remember. I am a brony and an MH fan. All I remember is me coming here.

Flashback...

"Hey you ready yet?" my brother called from downstairs.

"Hold your horses. I'm just putting my chestplate on." I called.

"Hurry up we're gonna be late."

I clicked the last strap of my Dire Miralis Armor and walked downstairs. My brother was dressed up as Steve from Minecraft.

"Finally." my brother said.

"Still I can't believe the mail lost my Insect Glaive." I said depressed.

"Its fine you can just by one at Comic Con."

"I just hope no one disappears."

"Yeah its weird."

We drove to the con and got there early but there were still a lot of people. We went inside and split up to do our own thing and meet back at the food court. I went around looking at some merchandise and people were complementing about my costume and asking for pictures.

I was looking for merchandise and spotted a stall with a guy dressed up as the merchant from Resident Evil. I went over and was shocked at what I saw. An Insect Glaive that looks exactly like mine and I swore the Kinsect looked deathly real.

"Ah I see you like this no." he said in a Middle Eastern accent.

"Yeah I would like it. How much?" I asked.

"$ 115."

"Deal."

He gave it to me and said "As a special offer take this gift bag. I think that you will like it very much" he handed me a gift bag.

"Thanks" I said.

I went back to the food court to show my brother, but fate had other plans. A bright flash of light enveloped me and blacked out

End of Flashback

Memories

I heard hoofsteps approach me and I saw Cheerilee and the kids. As a Brony I would've squealed in delight but I just keep a straight face.

"And this one represents Bravery. This is The Hunter" Cheerilee

"He just looks like a big monkey to me" Diamond Tiara said.

You did not just say that

"I dunno he does look like he represents Bravery" Applebloom said.

They moved on. When they were far enough as if on cue my statue cracked and exploded. I stretched my limbs after 1001 years. I quickly hid after hearing a patrol. I heard one of them say "Hurry tell the Princesses The Hunter has escaped"

After hearing them go away I went back out and decided to go back home. I changed into a Remobra (Yeah I can change thanks to the gift bag) and flew to the Everfree. I arrived an hour later and changed back and went inside. It was just a simple shack like the one from the game. I put my armor in the box and lay down on the bed and went to my first sleep in 1001 years.

I woke up to a sound outside and a call that made my skin run cold. I put on my armor and ran outside. I saw a large Great Jaggi with other Jaggi and Jaggia.

How can they be here. I thought.

The Great Jaggi noticed me and charged. I equipped my Insect Glaive and sent out my Kinsect. It came back with an attack boost. I smirked. I slashed at it , but it dodged and sent out 2 Jaggi which I disposed of quickly in 2 slashes with blood splattering my armor and them going limp while walking to the Alpha not losing my stride. I vaulted onto its back which it began shaking me off. I stabbed and stabbed with my carving knife until it shook me off. The others charged at me. I shot at them with the energy balls and they dropped dead. The Alpha got back up and side-charged me and hit me making me roll. I got back up and slashed at its face making its frill break. It went into rage mode and tried to bite me but I dodged and smacked it with the side of my blade and killed it. I dug a grave in honor of them a ways away and buried them in it. After 1001 years of being a Hunter killing still filled me with guilt. I changed my armor and got my bowgun and prepared a 21-gun salute.

"I honor you for fighting bravely against me today." I said firing 3 shots "You will not be remembered as monsters." another 3 shots "But you will be remembered as honorable warriors." I said shooting until I reached the 21 mark.

I gathered branches and tied them together to form a cross and hammered them down on the graves. I walked back to the house and slept.

3rd person

A green burst of flames shot out of a baby dragon and a letter materialized which was grabbed by Twiligth and read it. When she was done she said "Spike get the girls there is a new villain on the loose."

The dragon ran out the door and came back 30 minutes later with 5 mares, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, Applejack and Pinkie Pie and Rarity. Twilight informed them about the situation and set out for the Everfree Forest. They were walking through until they came across a clearing with patches of dirt with crosses sticking out of them and metal things on the ground. Pinkie went to taste one but just spat it out.

"Yuck it tastes like metal and dirt." Pinkie said.

"Pinkie why did you do that it could've been poisonous." Twilight said.

"Who c-c-could have done this." Fluttershy said.

"I bet its The Hunter." Rainbow said.

"Then why would he put crosses on them." Twilight said.

"I don't know?!"

"Lets just continue."

They continued until they saw a house and sneaked inside. Inside they saw a bookshelf, a chest, a kitchen, but the bedroom had a figure on it.

"Lets get 'im." Rainbow whispered.

"No lets keep quiet. When he wakes up we attack him." Twilight whispered back.

They waited and waited, but he still didn't wake up. Eventually they fell asleep themselves.

Savior

New Companion and The Hunters Bane

I woke up to see the Mane 6 sleeping on the floor. I tried to stifle a laugh cause they were so cute dog-piled on each other. I looked outside to see it was afternoon. I went out to get some apples for dinner. I came back a few minutes later to see them still sleeping. I went to the kitchen to roast the fruits ,but I heard a yawn and quickly put on my Dire armor. I hid in the kitchen and the door creaked open revealing Pinkie looking for food. I hid behind the door and when she went in I sneaked out and the door closed behind me. Bad idea, they all woke up looking for Pinkie and spotted me. Rainbow charged at me with the force of a Rhenopholos if you have no armor and knocked me into the kitchen. I landed on the table with Rainbow pinning me down and crashing the plates on the floor breaking them.

"You will pay for your crimes Hunter." Twilight said running into the room.

"Do you even know what I did?" I said

"Well no but I'm sure it's bad."

"Sunbutt never told you did she."

Twilight glared at me for insulting the princess. "Well what did you do?" she asked.

"I just killed a dragon in front of them in self-defense." I said.

"Twi he's tellin' ta truth." AJ said.

"Wha-what." Twilight said.

"I still don't trust him. I mean look at the graves." Rainbow said.

"I put them there to remind of who I am. I am a Hunter, I have to kill things to survive. I had to kill them to protect myself. I honored them by giving them a proper burial." I shouted, tears falling down my eyes.

Rainbow got off me and everypony was crying. I got off the table and took off my armor putting it back in the box. Everypony stopped crying.

"We won't tell Princess Celestia. We Pinkie Promise. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye." Twilight said doing the gestures.

They were about to go home but I stopped them. "You can't go out stay here if what I saw earlier you won't survive without proper gear. Stay here for the night." I said.

They slept on the bed while I was on the floor. It was raining hard outside with thunder clashing and I heard a lot of calls but fortunately only Aptonoths. I went to sleep with my armor on which was surprisingly warm due to it made out of Dire Miralis scales and comfortable.

I awoke to a *thud* outside. I ran out to see an young Rathalos stuck under a tree. I lifted the tree up and he lunged at me pinning me to a rock and prepared a fireball, but stopped and just roared at me and struggled to fly away with a broken wing but just crashed into a tree. I rushed to help him. When I got there he was knocked out. I carried him back to my house hoping Fluttershy could help him. I set him down gently on the ground. I called for her and she came out with a shocked look on her face.

"Oh m-my what happened?" she asked.

"He got trapped under a tree in the storm." I said.

"I need my med-kit but I left it back at my house."

Suddenly Pinkie handed us a med-kit and said "I have med-kits stashed all over Equestria. In-case of med-kit emergencies." then disappeared.

Fluttershy grabbed a long stick and set it over the broken wing wrapping it in cloth.

"There he just needs to lay off that wing for a few days." she said.

"Thank you." I said putting him on the ground near my porch.

A few minutes later he woke up and tried to run away when he saw me, but just succeeded in tripping on a rock and face-planting. I started giggling and walked to help him up. I picked him up and set him back on the ground. He backed up and fell over again.

"Hey its okay I wont hurt you." I said comforting him.

He tried to open his wings, but just roared in pain.

"Your wing got pretty banged up in the storm last night." I said.

"Druv dreh hi ulaak ah?" he said in Dovah.

"You speak Dovah?!"

"Do rahlo."

"Zu'u tinvaak Dovah ol pruzah."

"Tol los peh kiinoot."

"Its a gift."

"Nox hi fah saving dii laas. Zu'u los indebted wah hi."

"I have no need debts, but I need a companion."

"Rinik pruzah."

We went back inside to wake up the Mane 6.

"Hey I have and idea. Lets prank them. You roar and then we hide."

"Dar fen kos moor."

He roared with all his might and ran to hide with me outside. They woke up crashing through the door and dog-piling.

"What happened?!" Rainbow said.

We burst from the trees laughing our butts off.

"What in the hay was that for?!" AJ said.

"We had to wake you up somehow. I mean with Rainbow's and Twilight's reputation for being heavy sleepers." at that moment I covered my mouth.

"How do you know about that?" Twilight asked.

"I guess the cat's out of the bag. I come from a world where you guys are entertainment for my people. We watch you everyday. You guys even have fans and I am dressed up as a character from a game from my world"

"Two things. One, that is creepy. Two, that's impossible."

"Look at me I am a bipedal being in a land inhabited by ponies."

"I see your point."

"Alright since you're up lets have breakfast and I'll take you home."

We went inside to eat. I had Kirin Rice and Plumpkin, while they had apples and Wrath (I decided to name him that since he doesn't have a name) had some scalefish.

"Wrath stay here." he nodded.

After we were done I went to bring them home. On the way we encountered some Aptonoth and Twilight wanted to study them, but warned her about them attacking if anypony touches them. She got sad at that part.

"Don't worry I might be able to tame one for you." I comforted her.

"Really!" she said her eyes sparkling.

"Sure just give me a week."

We continued on until we reached the edge of the forest. They went back to their homes and I waved to them, but I heard a roar that sent shivers up my spine. I turned to see a Deviljho running out of the woods and crashing into a house.

I hope nopony was in there.

I equipped My Insect Glaive and sent out Mauldrone. It came back with a Defense boost. I vaulted on top of it and stabbed it with my carving knife. I hopped off and started slashing and shooting its legs trying to make it trip. It swiped me away and I crashed through a tree. I got back up and attacked its left leg where it hurt the most. It fell down and I proceeded to slash at its belly. It got back up and went into rage mode. It ran willy nilly into town and I ran to town square and ponies were running everywhere. It swallowed Celestia's statue. I shot at it from a building and it charged at me. I ran outside and it ran into the building. It dazed itself.

"Hey ugly over here." I said in front of a building taunting it "Your mother was a hamster and your father smelt of elderberries" It charged at me again and dazed itself again.

I vaulted on it and stabbed it until it collapsed dead.

"Well glad that's over with." I said.

Ponies went to town square to see me on the dead Deviljho.

"Monster." Berry Punch shouted.

Everypony ran back inside their homes or what was left of them.

"Oh come on I just saved your lives and I thought friendship was magic." I shouted.

I walked back to the forest and into my house and slept 'till the next day.