Cover Image

Pony Predators of Equestria

by Pentarctagon
What is a pony? After the Changeling invasion, debates rage across Equestria over that simple question. There is a follow up that nopony thinks to ask, however: what if they weren't the only ones hiding?

Story is currently on Hiatus, pending a partial rewrite due to me becoming a better writer of the course of the almost three years it's been since I first started writing this story.

What is a pony? If asked that question the average citizen of Equestria would probably respond with a confused look and a mention of the three pony tribes. A particularly astute pony might reply with four tribes, remembering to include the Thestrals. A pony of a scholarly disposition may also add a list of characteristics as well - manes, cutie marks, some form of innate magic, hooves, vegetarian diet, etc. This is the answer that would have been received for thousands of years, from before the unification of the three tribes until very recently. Until the failed Changeling invasion. With the reveal of something so foreign, yet at the same time so familiar, what it means to be a pony is no longer quite so clear and obvious. And while professors and philosophers argue, another question is forgotten in the uproar: What if the Changelings weren't the only ones who were hiding?

* Takes place between Equestria Games and Twilight's Kingdom.

* Added Dark tag for certain parts, though this is intended to mainly be a Comedy/Slice of Life.

* Map of Ponyville I use when figuring out where stuff is.
* Map of Equestria (obviously not scale-accurate)

* Always looking for proofreaders if anyone's interested!
Proofreader(s): Icarus_Con_Queso

All feedback/corrections welcome!

Unpublished chapters are not canon, they are simply earlier drafts of finished chapters that I kept around and decided to upload on the off chance someone might find them useful. Links to chapters here.

Teen
On Hiatus
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Comedy
 
TPOBC

185852 words: Estimated about 15 hours to read

38 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 Uninvited Guests 2015-07-14 04:33:15 UTC
    2982
  2. Chapter 2 Mystery Illness 2015-07-14 06:50:11 UTC
    3876
  3. Chapter 3 Sunshine 2015-07-14 06:54:04 UTC
    2925
  4. Chapter 4 Entering the Shadows 2015-07-14 06:57:27 UTC
    3617
  5. Chapter 5 Hunters 2015-07-14 06:58:15 UTC
    3179
  6. Chapter 6 Apples 2015-07-14 06:59:02 UTC
    2445
  7. Chapter 7 Dawn 2015-07-14 06:59:44 UTC
    2890
  8. Chapter 7.5 Teacher's Day Off 2015-12-28 18:52:29 UTC
    5863
  9. Chapter 8 Sister 2015-07-14 07:00:21 UTC
    2868
  10. Chapter 9 Reunion 2015-07-14 07:00:53 UTC
    3174
  11. Chapter 10 Accidents 2015-07-14 07:01:37 UTC
    3813
  12. Chapter 10.5 Meeting Zecora [slight gore] 2015-08-11 06:23:10 UTC
    3583
  13. Chapter 11 Darkness Contained 2015-09-27 10:32:14 UTC
    8215
  14. Chapter 12 Cleansing Corruption 2015-10-19 07:05:40 UTC
    3672
  15. Chapter 13 Solve One Problem 2015-11-05 07:51:30 UTC
    4324
  16. Chapter 14 ...and two more take its place 2015-12-01 05:55:28 UTC
    4641
  17. Chapter 14.25 Would It Matter If I Wrote This Chapter? 2016-01-15 09:03:45 UTC
    3877
  18. Chapter 14.50 Trust 2016-02-01 06:34:49 UTC
    2649
  19. Chapter 14.75 Overeating 2016-02-22 06:23:13 UTC
    5302
  20. Chapter 15 Interlude of Food 2016-03-14 04:57:07 UTC
    4126
  21. Chapter 16 Information and Revelation 2016-04-28 07:00:35 UTC
    11076
  22. Chapter 17 Waking Up and Heading Out 2016-05-29 08:07:37 UTC
    4178
  23. Chapter 18 Meeting the Parents 2016-06-19 04:16:34 UTC
    5889
  24. Chapter 19 Meeting the Neighbors, Meeting a Queen 2016-07-19 00:33:40 UTC
    6576
  25. Chapter 20 Meeting the Town 2016-08-22 22:42:00 UTC
    7202
  26. Chapter 20.5 Clearing the Air 2016-09-19 08:05:35 UTC
    5343
  27. Chapter 21 The Plan 2016-10-23 18:29:02 UTC
    7445
  28. Chapter 21.5 Caramel's Cloudsdale Adventure 2017-01-11 08:20:47 UTC
    6070
  29. Chapter 22 False Start 2017-02-08 06:50:14 UTC
    5304
  30. Chapter 23 Gaining Perspective 2017-03-12 15:32:47 UTC
    4576
  31. Chapter 24 First Step, Second Time 2017-04-20 06:48:16 UTC
    5945
  32. Chapter 24.33 Digging a Hole 2017-05-26 00:14:29 UTC
    6637
  33. Chapter 24.66 Order, Chaos, and a Changeling 2017-06-19 07:05:31 UTC
    2758
  34. Chapter 24.99 Punishment 2017-07-04 19:41:23 UTC
    1705
  35. Chapter 25 History Lesson 2017-08-27 16:09:14 UTC
    11915
  36. Chapter 26 Writing A Letter 2017-10-01 20:14:48 UTC
    6984
  37. Chapter 27 Princesses of Ponyville 2017-11-17 23:30:22 UTC
    4908
  38. Chapter 27.33 A Book's Cover 2017-12-08 16:45:45 UTC
    3320