In the open fields of the Sweet Apple Acres six cars sat in neutral a girl leaning on each one. The first car a 2015 Chevy Camaro, blue, and with a rainbow stripe through the middle had an engine cap sticking up from the hood about three inches. The was in nuteral as a rainbow haired girl in a blue jumpsuit with yellow lightning linings down the middle. The girl was bragging about how she finally got into the Wonderbolts.
"Well it may just be in the reserves but I hear that a lot of the reserves get to do the end of the year show, and we get our own jets." Rainbow Dash contined to brag as she reached into her car to get a framed photo.
The next car a 2015 Porsche 911 in bright white, had a pale girl holding a tablet as she chatted with the girl next to her. That next girl leaned on a small Mazda Miata 1999 in a light purple color with a spoiler 1 foot tall. The fourth girl sat on the hood of a 84 trans am in a light pink tone and balloons tied to the back stock spoiler. The fifth girl stood on the hood of her 88 camaro with two engine caps sticking out as she shook it to the tune of Colt Brian and his hit song "that's my kinda night". The finale girl sat inside a small mini two door with two double exhaust pipes sticking out the back and bent up the back of the car. The girl sat there... talking to her self.
"Come on Fluttershy! You can do this, you did not buy this brand new sports car for nothing! You're gonna show them you can win!" She said to herself as she left the car to join the others. They all shared greetings as applejack descended from the hood and switched of her radio to talk with the girls. They all hushed as applejack began to speak.
"Alright now, y'all know the rules I hope. We're gonna have a fair race, no cheatin. we don't wanna break a lamp post like last time at crystle prep high. You Know, or that time at the Canterlot lake do we" she explained glaring at rainbow dash.
"Hey you never said that we couldn't bump vehicles, you're just angry because I caused you to blow out a tire. You just let by gones be by gones, it would be 20% cooler. I mean, I can't believe you would hold a grudge against me. Seriously you're worse than Lightning dust." Rainbow yelled back at applejack.
"And caused me to almost go into the canterlot river system. I told you we were in a more dangerous track but no. You just couldn't control yourself."She yelled back at the rainbow haired girl. Before the two girls could continue to throw insults at each other the roar of six vehicles drowned out the girls squabbles as the cars drifted into the field of Sweet Apple Acres. The cars slowed to a stop as they came close to hitting the girl's cars. The six drivers left their cars high and low fiving each other as they walked toward the girls.
"So, are we gonna sit here and twiddle or are we gonna race?" The leading guy proclaimed to the main six as he removed his sunglasses.
"Woah, who in the hey do you think you are comin' on ma' farm! I don't think you are gonna run this race." the cow girl yelled back at the red headed boy.
"Oh please, If you don't think you can beat me and my crew you can just say so. You don't have to sugarcoat it we all know you six aren't real racers. You just ride a trail and maybe... just maybe something interesting, you know the truth is that you six don't have the guts to take my crew on!" The red headed boy spat back at the cowgirl. The six all scowled at the... other six.
They exchanged insults when a loud guitar strum erupted from the light blue car. "If you mothers want to take us on go right ahead but be prepared for a but kicking the size of canterlot!" The rainbow haired girl yelled to the six boys.
"Hey if you girls wanna take on the crystal six you can go right ahead but I'd suggest bringing scrapign equipnet so you arent sitting crushed into an apple tree when we're done. " the boy yelled back at the rainbow haired girl.
The two shared glares as the boy snapped his fingers and the six returned to their cars.
"So, are we gonna start this or what, we have a schedule to keep?" The main boy yelled to the six as he ducked into his LaFerrari XX and started the engine. The second boy a rich pink color and wearing a dark grey track suit with light grey stylings on the shoulders and down the back ducked into his Lamborghini 2015 Egoista. The tertiary boy a tan boy in a red suit with fire decals and red suit pants, He ducked in as well into his 2015 Aston Martin Vanquish. The fourth a tall boy wearing a long sleeve hooded shirt with dark jeans, he hopped over the door into his tan camo Ford Mustang convertible GT shelby and revved the engine. The fifth, a boy in a black track suit and black bandana slid into his black Jaguar XJ-S coupe and blared the horn for the last boy to hurry up. The final boy ducked into his fiat 500 hatchback and flipped a switch. in the blink of an eye giant speakers came out of the sides and back. As the speakers booted up the boy took out a CB and began to speak.
"Hey! Are you girls gonna get ready to see six cars blast off at 482 km h or are you gonna start this race." The boy boomed from the giant speakers.
The six girls grabbed their cars are revved their engines to signal the six boys that they were ready to rumble. In minutes Applebloom ran in front of the line of cars and razed her arm to get there attention. In the other arm she held a blow horn and began to raise the arm. Over the roar of the 12 cars the blow horn blared a loud a sound as the cars spun their wheel as they crammed the gas pedal to the floor. The cars all dodged Applebloom as they left the open field into the apple orchards.
Author's Note
This is just a quick little polight question to the people at FIMfiction who accept and don't accept the stories. Is this better? I would really hope so because I would like to continue the story? Please as a man just trying to get his ideas out there I really hope this version will be acceptable.
I have tried to add in as many conections to the show as possible as to help the fact be know that this story is a fanfiction of the MLP: FIM universe.
II: Daring them to do something crazy
Author's Note
Boys' names:
sereous Gamier- red lambo
mr. pink- pink ferrari
tanner- mustang in camo
cole- black jaguar XJ-S
Ryan- white Aston martin
recardo- light blue fiat 500
II: Daring them to do something crazy
The twelve cars all sped through the narrow paths of the orchards as the neon under them shined upon all the trees. The two leads traded paint as they were trying to run the other of the road.
"Hey every-bro, the path splits up ahead. I say we split the team and divide and crush these gals!" The lead boy yelled into the mic of his car.
The MANE six were split in between the boys as they tried to pass through the narrow passes of Sweet Apple Acres. Rainbowdash, being the one closest to the front took the lead as she saw the fork in the path of SWEET APPLE ACRES.
"Hey the path splits. I'm taking the left fork, I say we split up and show these crystal prep newbs how the CANTERLOT WONDERCOLTS do!" she yelled into her com.
"Got it, me, PINKIE PIE, and TWILIGHT will take this here right fork. Ya' with me partners?" The cow girl told the book worm and party girl.
"Alright then, me, RARITY, and FLUTTERSHY will take feft and own these fools!" RAINBOWDASH planned out to the other five.
"Lets do this!!" The group all yelled proudly.
"Yo, all bros. The path splits up ahead I say we take both. I'll take the left one. Hey pink, you, me, and Recardo should take left and Cole, Rane, and Tanner can take right!"
"Totally, lets crush these girls!" Pink yelled into the the mic as he split to join Sereous and Tanner.
"Bros before hoes!" they all yelled together as they took each path to take down these girls.
The twelve cars all split as they took their planned path, the boys and girls entered the more open rows of the fields with their cars kicking up dust in their speed. On the left path the boys and girls bashed their cars as they reached SONIC RAINBOOM speeds as they rammed on their breaks as they entered the many S-turns of the apple mountain route. The girls gritted their teeth all together as the three entered the thin paths above the flat lands of the orchard.
"Hey, all on this channel, we're on a tricky road here, I don't think these boys are up to the task, what do you say we mess with um' a little?" RAINBOW asked into the CB. The girls knew the route and knew how to manipulate it their advantage. The girls began to swerve and take long drifts through the corners as they taunted the boys taking the corners with as much care as a fast street race through mountain passes could be.
"Urr, hey we got some cocky senoritas over here, my amigos! I say we do something about it." Sereous yelled into the mic as a glow of yellow appeared apon his eyes.
"Woah, woah, woah! Sereous slow those horses my bro-hamm! I feel like you're crack, you need to keep cool senior. their just daring you to do something crazy! Don't you remember, WONDERBOLT flight school man, Wonderbolt flight school." the pink boy calmed him through the CB.
"eh man, We gotta do somethin' about these spicy halapenias ombreys!" recardo yelled back through the mic. As the red Ferrari sped up and Sereous put his peddle to the metal. The super car caught up to the blue Camero as he began to swap his paint with the rainbow haired girl.
"Oh, little boy wants to grow some stones, well here's some pestaside for those nuts and zucinie!" The girl said to herself as she sped up and rammed sereous.
"Hey, girls! I got myself a boy lookin' for a chalenge and I'm looking to abliege. I'm taking the short cut you girls keep with the other saps and I'll take this wanna be me!"