
Can Sins Be Forgiven?
"I was a tyrant who brought nothing but pain and misery upon my home world Terra, and for the last 487 years I have waged war against humanity because I was a fool to listen to the darkness within my heart, to allow him to take control. Even in death I can't be forgiven for my mistake. I would have been better off rotting in hell but even fate shows no mercy to my miserably life. Even now in a new world in a new body I can never forgive myself and I fear what the others of this world might think of me. I just hope they can see past my sins but I doubt that… Who would forgive me for my sins?"
Hello everypony This is the Commander and I would like to introduce you to the new and improved Can Sins Be Forgiven? With a new storyline and new characters. I intend to not fail you with this new one guys. Please leave comments it helps me if you guys give me your opinion on what I should fix or add. Also it might be sloppy for a little while until I find a new editor or when my old one comes back so forgive me for that.
Takes place during Season Two
1 Chapter:
- Chapter One 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1897