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Can Sins Be Forgiven?

by Commander Shadowblade
Can sins be forgiven? No matter what you have done in the past. Can you forgive yourself for them? The answer to that is a mystery.

"I was a tyrant who brought nothing but pain and misery upon my home world Terra, and for the last 487 years I have waged war against humanity because I was a fool to listen to the darkness within my heart, to allow him to take control. Even in death I can't be forgiven for my mistake. I would have been better off rotting in hell but even fate shows no mercy to my miserably life. Even now in a new world in a new body I can never forgive myself and I fear what the others of this world might think of me. I just hope they can see past my sins but I doubt that… Who would forgive me for my sins?"

Hello everypony This is the Commander and I would like to introduce you to the new and improved Can Sins Be Forgiven? With a new storyline and new characters. I intend to not fail you with this new one guys. Please leave comments it helps me if you guys give me your opinion on what I should fix or add. Also it might be sloppy for a little while until I find a new editor or when my old one comes back so forgive me for that.
Takes place during Season Two

Teen
Incomplete
Comedy
Adventure
Tragedy
Dark
Human
Romance
 

1897 words: Estimated 9 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter One 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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