A "Scratch" of Ozone

Intro

   Kevin had a good life, at age 19 he had: a girl to love, a house to live in, and good money from saving burger king for a few years, leeching off his parents money, he had $3,000.00 from his saving, the date was: Nov. 28, 2007 he was a brony as well, his girlfriend was fine with it, she had been a pegasister for a few years as well.

   At about 12:00, after playing Call Of Duty: WaW he decided to get some sleep. So, he went up to his bed and slept with his girlfriend, he dreams about strange things, and, well, they usually happened, somehow, this time, he dreamed he was a pony, it was a short dream though, when he had awoke at about 2:45 A.M. he didnt want to go back to sleep, so he just got up, and went downstairs to get some cereal, he ate cereal with chocolate milk, and he usually ate it with mt. Dew, which his girlfriend found strange, he started eating when he saw a light come on, he went out into the room, expecting to see his girlfriend, when something large, maybe the TV or a bookshelf fell on him, he fell unconscious.

   He awoke in a very bright world, in the soft grass, feeling fuzzy, looking at the sky, taking a minute, then realizing where he was, he didn't know whether to be happy, to be in Equestria, or sad, for his girlfriend, and family?

"Well since i'm here, i guess i should go meet some people..." Kevin thought

   As he walked he realized, he was on all fours!!! he was a blue stallion with a cyan and scarlet mane!!!, good because he liked blue and red, but cyan was his favorite color.

   He walked around untill he saw a pony of which he saw as the most beautiful of them all, he asked her for a, name, she then said     "Hi, I'm Vinyl, and you are?",      Kevin quickly said     "I'm Ozone, hi!!!"

So, what'd you think for a beginning, let me know in the comments section