A "Scratch" of Ozone

by A.J. 541

Rating: mature
Tags: Human, Romance
Length: 3266

First story, probably horrible, ill upload piece by piece, maybe not even full chapters at once :P

Story in which a HiE (Human in Equestria) in which the human is turned into a pony (nicknamed Ozone in this story for his ability to not be affected by smoke, and other gasses :P) and he falls in love with Vinyl Scratch (D.J. Pon-3) and they do some stuff…

(also, i probably wont make use of his 'cutie mark' in this story)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-26 09:14:19 UTC

Chapter 2: Vinyl's Tour

Vinyl showing him around her house

   "And this is my house" Vinyl said after a few minutes of walking, or i guess clopping, since they're horses...

   "Cool" replied Ozone, "let's go in"

   "No... (you don't say) I was just gonna let you wait here, no sh*t sherlock" was her reply.

   "Whatever" Ozone then said, chuckling.

   "Okay, well this is my kitchen, I live with Octavia, and she likes to cook, not as much as she plays a cello though..." Vinyl said, then chuckling.

   "It's organized, I like organized" was Ozone only thought.

   "Well, the whole house is organized, Octavia kind of has a slight OCD problem" Vinyl replied.

   "So like, everyone in Minecraft?" Ozone asked.

   "What's Minecraft?" Vinyl asked with an intent for an answer.

   "It's a game everypony plays, where I come from...far away" Ozone said, intending to not possibly scare her, saying he was from another planet.

   "Oh, OK" Vinyl replied, content with his answer.

   Trying to change the subject, he attempted to think of something, nothing came to mind, so he began to look at her, she looked back at him sheepishly, wondering what he was looking at.

   "Hey, Ozone, watcha lookin' at?" She finally asked.

   Thinking for something he stammered "Uhh, your glasses, I like them"

   "Yeah I do too," she said, removing them to reveal the sexiest scarlet eyes ever created "would you like to see them?" she asked.

   "Okay." you say, still looking at her scarlet red eyes.

   You then see a grey pony, with a black mane come down he steps just outside the kitchen.

   "Did you bring another already?" she asked Vinyl, bringing a chill down your spine.

   "Not this time, Octavia" she said slowly after sighing, calming you, she then said "Well, maybe." , putting you back on edge.

   Octavia then spoke up, noticing your tensation "It's okay, we wont hurt you" in a calming voice, obviously calming you, she then said "So Vinyl, who's your friend?"

   "This is Ozone" Vinyl replied. "I found him walking along, and we talked for a while,by the way, Ozone do you have a home, you said you came from for away?"

   "No, I don't have anywhere to stay." you say, truithfully.

   "It's OK buddy, you can say in my room!" said Vinyl after some thought...

   "VINYL!!!" snapped Octavia, you wondered why for a moment, then realized what Vinyl meant, and didn't want to intrude...

   "What?!" Vinyl asked back

   "Why not give him the guest bedroom?" Octavia said quickly.

   "The bed is uncomfortable" Vinyl defended.

   "Can't argue with that," she said, beat "but Ozone," she looked at you "be careful" she said, with a playful grin.

   You didn't know what to think...

Chapter 3: The First Night

   That night you went to Vinyl's room, you lay in the bed, on the left side, she takes the right, and silently scoots over closer to you...

   "Hi" you say, when she gets close enough for you to notice.

   "Oh hi.", she says, obviously nervous. "what's on your mind?"

   "Home" you say honestly, not about to lie to a sexy pony, who on top of that, just gave you a house.

   "oh, well, this is your new house now!" she said, trying to sound upbeat.

   She leans on you, making you feel all warm and fuzzy with her fur, she kisses you gently.

   "It'll be OK baby" she says, making you repel, but you sense a romantic intent, and it soothes you.

   "Uhh, Vinyl?" you want to ask her if she has a colt-friend, but you don't know how to ask.

   "What is it Ozone?" she asks.

   "Do you have a... a coltfriend?"

   "No, I've been saving an open spot for when i find that one pony."

She's open!!! you realize.

   "Well, Goodnight Ozone!" she says happily.

   "Goodnight Vinyl" you say back, feeling a slight release now that you know she's single.

Chapter 5: In Bed (Old Meme)

   After there 'expressed feelings' they went back downstairs and Octavia asked what was going on...

   "Nothing." they both said in unison.

   "Whatever I don't  have much time until my cello practice today, so see you later." she replied.

   Vinyl then added "Hey Ozone, you make music?"

   "As a matter of fact i do!" was his answer.

   "Awesome, what kind" she then asked.

   "I rap really fast!"

   "Cool, how fast are you?"

   "About 100 words in 13 seconds" (Busta Rhymes - Why Stop Now)

   "Oh my god, that is fast!"

   "It gets easier, so, what's going on"

   "Dunno, you wanna come with me to Sugar Cube Corner?" Vinyl asked

   "Sure, why not?"

   "okay"

   On their way, Vinyl talked to Ozone about how they want to live their life (Strange I know but whatever, I'm cheesy like that)

   "One step at a time" Ozone said after some thought.

   "Okay we're here"

   While they were their they ordered a cupcake each and some wine.

"I didn't know ponies drank..." Ozone thought

   You ate the cupcake, then with sips of wine in between, you talk to Vinyl about what she likes to do.

   "I make dubstep!" she replies.

   "Nice, I wonder what a dubstep song would be like, if i rapped over it?"

   "At your speed, a rap would sound like dubstep" she grinned as she said that.

   After they were done talking, it was getting dark, so they decided to go back to their house, When they got there, Octavia was sleeping, so they went up to the bedroom, and lay down as well.

   After getting in bed, hey kissed each other goodnight, but laid there, unable to sleep, after about 30 minutes, Vinyl scooted over and laid on top of Ozone, since he was a pony, he didn't have clothes on, when Ozone felt his crotch around something wet, he gasped, Vinyl  then kissed him again, his erection growing and eventually slipping inside her.

   Vinyl Gasped as he entered her fully, breaking her hymen, blood trickling out of her wet vagina.

   Ozone, enveloped in heat and wetness, feeling the undulating pleasure as she did as well, started moving in and out, making her moan.

   They then kissed, and their tongues invaded each others mouths, feeling sweet from the wine they'd drank earlier, as they fucked, Vinyl pressed up against him, her rump sliding in unison with Ozone's to be more fully inside her.

The best moment in Ozone's life, it would forever be etched into his memory.

   As he placed one hoof on her hip, and the other one on her back, he felt a strange pleasure in his wet cock, and he knew he was about to come.

   Their lips parted as Ozone said "Vinyl, I'm gonna, I'm gonna..."

   He couldn't finish his sentence before the first wave of liquid fire spilled into her, she moaned loudly, and after a few more bursts he was sweating, and as he pulled his cock in and out of her, small bits of his semen fell onto the bed, and after lying there for a few more minutes, they fell asleep.

Well, now i've done it, and i"m proud

lol, but still, tell me what you thought in the comments below

Chapter 7: Making It Work

   After getting back from the hospital, Ozone sat down and tried to think of something to get them more money. He settled on working for Big Mac and Applejack on the farm, so he headed over, when he got there, he saw a small pool of blood, he followed it into the house, up the steps, and into a bedroom, Big Mac was laying on a bed, his leg bleeding, obviously broken, he looked a Ozone, and said...

   "Help!"

   "Coming!" he said. "Is nopony else here?"

   "Just me, until now, could you put pressure on this wound, it's too painful, and could you bandage it for me?" he asked.

   "Sure, I came to see if I could help work on the farm, guess it's a good thing I came..." Ozone replied.

   "Yeah, well, without me, we'll need you here, so, will you help us?" Big Mac then said.

   "No problem, I just need some money to support another pony around the house." Ozone said.

   "ANOTHER PONY!, who else is coming to stay."

   With a grin he says, "My new foal."

   Big Mac's eyes widen "Wow Ozone, nice."

   "Yeah..." he realized that he was all bandaged up correctly. "Is that better?"

   "Outstanding, thanks Ozone" he said.

   "What happened?" Ozone asked.

   "Well, I guess that tree didn't wanna be kicked, i kicked it, the tree didn't budge, forcing my bone into my leg..."

   "Ouch..." he said, he couldn't think of anything else to say.

   "Well, you could start workin' now, I'll pay you 2 'buck's for every tree" Big Mac told Ozone.

get it BUCKs :P

   "Thanks Big Mac." Ozone said.

   "Eeyup!" Big Mac said, Ozone then walked out he door, to begin working.

So, what'd you think, let me know, only one chapter, then an epilogue left, sorry for short story, me next one will be longer!!!!

Chapter 8: The Arrival

THIS CHAPTER WILL PROBABLY BE EXTREMELY SHORT

   After Ozone got out on the farm, he started kicking trees, getting accustom to it, kicking harder, then lighter, until he got it down, He had kicked about 30 trees, by hat time he had the rhythm, speed, and power down, so he kicked, and kicked, and kicked some more, and all the while he counted how many 'buck's he'd get for it, when he got to 50 trees, he realized he'd  already made 100 bucks, but that wasn't enough, he would also give some extra to Octavia, for throwing her out the window like he thought he did, so he did almost all the trees, he'd counted 572 (2,144 bucks) but he wanted to go to 600, so he did, and his legs hurt like hell, but when he was done, he managed to lug all the apples down, and collect from Big Mac's stash,h e had just earned 1,200 bucks, and all it took was a few hours, and some sore legs, even so, he felt amazing, he'd give 600 bucks to Octavia, 200 to Vinyl, and 400 for the young (colt), he'd gotten enough to support them all!

   (At the hospital they told them it was a male pony)

   When he got back to the house, he saw Vinyl, Octavia, and running around the room, a baby colt, brown, with a purple mane, for Ozone, and Vinyl to forever love...

THE END

Tell me if you thought the ending sucked, there will be an epilogue soon... so be ready for it, maybe tomorrow, or sunday...

Chapter : Epilogue

   A male pony named Ozone wakes up next to his wife mare Vinyl, he shakes her to wake her up.

   "Good morning honey." Ozone says to her.

   "Good morning." is her reply.

   They go downstairs, to see their grey coated coltsitter, Octavia, making breakfast for the young colt. You and Vinyl trot up to the colt and both say "Good morning Tavi (he named his colt after ocTAVIa)."

   "Good morning mommy, good morning daddy!" he said, jumping exitedly.

   "Morning, you all..." Octavia cut in.

   "You too Octavia!" they both said in unison, as Tavi laughed, and Octavia giggled.

   "Well Tavi, It's your first day of pony-kindergarten are you ready?"

   "Yes I'm ready!" Tavi said, exitedly.

   "Alright then... eat your breakfast.!!!" they both said, again in unison.

Sorry about the singular clop scene in he middle, and not any more for he rest of the story, but i wanted to start over, so i tried to get it over with, probably making it horrible, sorry!!!

Chapter 1: The Portal

Intro

   Kevin had a good life, at age 19 he had: a girl to love, a house to live in, and good money from saving burger king for a few years, leeching off his parents money, he had $3,000.00 from his saving, the date was: Nov. 28, 2007 he was a brony as well, his girlfriend was fine with it, she had been a pegasister for a few years as well.

   At about 12:00, after playing Call Of Duty: WaW he decided to get some sleep. So, he went up to his bed and slept with his girlfriend, he dreams about strange things, and, well, they usually happened, somehow, this time, he dreamed he was a pony, it was a short dream though, when he had awoke at about 2:45 A.M. he didnt want to go back to sleep, so he just got up, and went downstairs to get some cereal, he ate cereal with chocolate milk, and he usually ate it with mt. Dew, which his girlfriend found strange, he started eating when he saw a light come on, he went out into the room, expecting to see his girlfriend, when something large, maybe the TV or a bookshelf fell on him, he fell unconscious.

   He awoke in a very bright world, in the soft grass, feeling fuzzy, looking at the sky, taking a minute, then realizing where he was, he didn't know whether to be happy, to be in Equestria, or sad, for his girlfriend, and family?

"Well since i'm here, i guess i should go meet some people..." Kevin thought

   As he walked he realized, he was on all fours!!! he was a blue stallion with a cyan and scarlet mane!!!, good because he liked blue and red, but cyan was his favorite color.

   He walked around untill he saw a pony of which he saw as the most beautiful of them all, he asked her for a, name, she then said     "Hi, I'm Vinyl, and you are?",      Kevin quickly said     "I'm Ozone, hi!!!"

So, what'd you think for a beginning, let me know in the comments section

Chapter 4: Expessing Feelings

   Ozone woke up around 5:40 in a bed with a pony right next to him sleeping so softly... Ozone liked this, he would thank Vinyl and Octavia when they woke up. He decided to go downstairs he saw that Octavia was awake and eating a flower sandwich, and a glass of orange juice. You walk by and grab one of the two plates on the table and heading to sit down you thank Octavia, and as she said a few 'no problems' you ate it happily, about two hours later, Vinyl woke up and came down with a raggedy mane, as she used her magic to take a brush and comb her mane, she sits down (after grabbing a plate of course) and starts eating as well, you thank them both for their hospitality, and ask how long you can stay...

   "As long as you want! You don't have to leave you know" Octavia said

   "Yeah, I dont mind" Vinyl added.

   "Thank you both again."  you repeated.

   After you all finished eating, you asked if you could talk to Vinyl in private, She didn't mind, so she went into the bedroom and closed the door.

   "OK, what's up Ozone?" she said calmly and kindly.

   "Uhh, well, you see I..." you couldn't quite get it out.

   "What is it?" she pushed, in an attempt to help you.

   "I think I love you Vinyl..." you say, expecting her to hate you.

   "Oh, well, uhh, i don't really know what to say, but, i guess I did too, that's why i helped you out you know?" she stutters back.

   "You're not mad...?"

   "Why would I be?"

   "I didn't tell you earlier"

   "So, it's normal to get those feelings, and its normal to be embarrassed about is, so I don't mind."

   "Bu..." you start to say before you feel a set of lips against yours,

Shes kissing me!!!, you think in complete happiness

   "I love you Ozone" she says.

   "I love you too Vinyl" you reply proud and happy that you'd done it!

Chapter 6: A Foal On The Way

   After last night, hey awoke, Ozone, still inside her, she woke up as well, she felt amazing with his cock inside her...

   "Mornin'." Ozone said.

   "How'd you sleep?" Vinyl asked.

   "Amazing, you made it all the better!" Ozone replied.

   After that, Vinyl started moving up and down, Ozone wondered what she was doing, then noticed, she was f*cking him. He started moving up and down in unison to her, to f*ck her more, pretty soon, you got that feeling in your cock...

   ":Vinyl!"

   "I know." she replied instantly with a smirk.

   As his burst of liquid fire spilled into her, she put her head back in pure ecstasy, they then got up, and went into the bathroom to wash up, when they were done, they went down for breakfast, Octavia wondered why Vinyl looked so... hungover...

   "Vinyl, you don't look to good." was what she managed to say.

   "I'm just a little tired is..." she then fell too the floor.

   "Should we get her to the hospital?" Ozone asked immediately.

   "Yup." Octavia replied, getting up to lift her.

   Octavia had no clue what was going on, she thought Ozone might know, she also knew he wouldn't lie...

   "Hey Ozone, you got any ideas on what happened?"

   "NO." was his quick response.

   "Why so tense?" she asked, knowing he had done something.

   "Well, we got real... snuggly last night, and..."

   "YOU WHAT!" Octavia asked with a horrified face.

   "We had sex okay!?" Ozone asked.

   "Well, that's why, she acts really hungover when she's pleasured like that." was what she said next.

   At that point they were at the hospital, they dragged her to a bench, set her down, and told the doctor it was an emergency, he said he'd be right there, after a few short minutes, he took her into a room and did some tests, when the doctor came out, he looked... happy, but sad too, hard to explain.

   "We've ran some tests, and there is one thing we've found..."

   "WHAT IS IT!" yelled Octavia.

   "Well, she's uhh, pregnant." the doctor replied.

   "WHAT!" Ozone, and Octavia said in unison.

   "She's got a foal on he way." the doctor replied.

   "Okay, stay calm, stay calm..." Octavia whispered to herself.

   "What's the problem?" Ozone asked.

   "If you got her pregnant, shes gonna have a foal, and you'll have o take care of her, there's only enough money to support three people, you cant kill he baby, and you cant shut off one of the parents, or the baby will be depressed, so you'd have to throw me out." she stuttered out.

   "We'll buy a new house..." Ozone attempted to say, the Octavia cut in.

   "I told you, we don't have the money for it!" she screamed at you.

HORRIBLE ATTEMPT AT AN AWESOME CLIFFHANGER