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The Cutie Remark

by Tachyon Xenophile
Starlight and Twilight go back in time and change the past.

Starlight Glimmer asks a question of Twilight: If Rainbow Dash had never done the sonic rainboom, would Equestria be better or worse than it is now, on the whole? Twilight, always interested in the hypothetical, agrees to find out.



This is essentially a write-up of the Season 5 finale, inspired by its animatic, as I was deeply inspired by it. Given that the season is on hiatus, I decided to do the unthinkable and actually write a serious pony fic. There will be spoilers from the animatic.
I hope you enjoy this fanfic! Rated T for caution, would rate E10+ if I could. I doubt anything T will happen, but it might get a bit bleak in some later chapters.
Pre-reading by someone who asked me to refer to them as TidepoolSW, as well as the excellent DragonDance, which I am very grateful for. Edited by a wonderful user who wishes to remain anonymous. Thank you very much!

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
 
ST

2467 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2015-07-25 17:47:31 UTC
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  2. Chapter 1 2015-07-28 20:23:33 UTC