Prologue: Discovery (rewritten)
Author's Note
This is my first ever MLP story. I do hope that everyone of the fandom does enjoy my story.
This sotry was inspired by a few things. Mostly due to my own head cannon for my OCs and I decided to hell with it lets write a story about them centered around it. So here is the prologue enjoy and give me feed back about how I should Improve, or mistakes I have made.
Prologue: Origins
1,000 years ago-1 year before Nightmare moon’s rise and banishment
War....War always brought pain, suffering, sadness and horror. But some times very unnecessary too keep evil from ruining the peace. Celestia knew these this very well and looked down to her younger sister Luna. Both ponies were dressed for battle, celestia picked up her Spear with her horn as Luna drew her sword. “Sister, this must be done.” Luna comments making the older sibling sigh sadly.
“I know Luna...doesn’t make it any easier.” Tia replied before thrusting her spear forward. A horn blew signaling the attack and forward marched the armies of Equistria, bearing down on the Fortress of Frost Crown.
The Army of Frost crown gave a battle cry and launched their siege defenses into the opposing ranks trying to halt the advance. Frost’s army was all unicorns, so with siege defense weapons they fired magic at the army. Nothing slowed it down. Archers would fire their arrows into the sky to prevent the equistrian pegasai from swooping down behind their defenses. That was not what they should have worried about. Celetia hovered over the battle and blasted a massive ray of magic tearing into the gate and the wall. The spell destroyed the gate blasting the defenders behind it away and off the wall. Some ponies were injured or killed from the results of the spell.
Deep within the Fortress a pair of ponies climbed down a stair case towards the fortress’ most guarded secret. “My Lord frost, we must leave....the princesses will be here soon!” Neighed Frost’s Major Domo and his war adviser Iron Bastion.
“Silence Bastion....we needn’t worry about those puffed up children who attack us.” He says with a dark chuckle. Frost stood tall far taller than a normal Unicorn. He was four inches shorter of celestia herself. He was a giant among them, and a powerful mage. In front of him held in the grip of his horn were two foals. A red filly, and a Colt who had the same Fur pattern of his father except for one thing. A black under belly, under jaw, throat, and most of his back, head and neck were plack as well. Other than that he had the icey blue fur on his legs and sides. Frost had a white streak down his back making him chuckle at how oppositely colored his colt was.
“Sir we must go! We’ll be trapped down here the princesses will kill you and your foals!” Bastion shouts only to be bucked in the face head bouncing off the wall harshly as Frost glared at his second in command.
“the princesses are soft....they’ll never hurt foals. But I don’t want them in their hands either. Sealing them away for a 1,000 years is the best plan for them.” Frost says and walked deeper soon the four of them would reach a large door.
It held Luna’s cutie mark before them, “what is this place?” Bastion asked making frost chuckle darkly.
“Luna’s vault. It’s where she keeps her secrets, and keeps safe the ponies of the world everyone casts out or wants to kill until it’s safe for them to come out.” Frost explained opening the door before them with a spell. “my children will be safe here. Just as Sombra told me they would be...before those murderers took our king away from us.” Frost hissed looking down to his foals as he set them within two stone cradles. His horn glowing he worked the spell of time sealing, and endless sleep.
Panting heavily Frost looked at his two foals sealed for a thousand years safe from all including time. Smiling at them being safe frost turned to leave only to se Bastion on the ground dead, but that wasn’t what scared him. Nightmare Moon stood before him, “you’ve disturbed my sanctuary. And the peace of Equestria. You have been sentanced to death for these crimes!” The monstrous pony hissed before Frost cried out.
their shadows bearing over the foals he sealed away. Red blood splattered them as the shadowed shape of Frost's head flew from his body. But as his head hit the ground Frost left a haunting grin on his face, before his death he made sure he had won the war. As his head flew from his shoulder's two pairs of eyes had peeked open before the magic had set in. They had saw what the Nightmare had done to their father.
In the year after the battle peace reigned, until Nightmare Moon and Luna were banished to the moon. Upon the banishing of her sister Celestia had went to her sister’s vault and moved everything from it to canterlot castle’s vault including frost’s off spring, and a young bat pony.
With the three foals that were sealed away for their protection Tia waited until the magic either faded or until the follies of the past were forgotten. Five years before the birth of Twilight Sparkle, Tia finally freed the foals. Both were raised by nobles of canterlot so that Tia could keep her eyes on the trio. The two unicorns were given to a valiant Unicorn mage/knight within her guard. He raised them with his own son, born of his pegasai wife. Celestia was sure Alura, and Freeze had a good home. Unkown too Tia that those foal’s father had cast hidden magic into their bodies, magic that could destroy the peace she had work so hard to build.