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by GreyCapstan
Roseluck doesn't like to admit her crush to most ponies; the few she's told were too busy laughing to hear her explain herself.

Roseluck doesn't like to admit her crush to most ponies; the few she's told were too busy laughing to hear her explain herself. She's ready to give up on the notion of confessing her love, until the town jeweler offers his encouragement and even his assistance in helping her secure her "special somepony". Would he have been so enthusiastic in helping if he knew the "special somepony" is a "special somegriffon", she wonders?

UPDATE 03/31/13: This story is not dead. My current plan is to do one last minor revision to these chapters, then finish and publish Chapter 3. I know that there are a lot of people waiting for more of this story, and my last intent is to disappoint them. I will try my hardest to make it worth the wait.

Credit (and lots of thanks) where they are due:

Exuno: Editor
Lung and LyRarity: Pre-readers
Hawkysu: Kind words and support

Everyone
Incomplete
Romance
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
 
OGR

7207 words: Estimated 36 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. 01: No Present Like The Time 2012-07-09 10:01:44 UTC
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  2. 02: Griffon It Your Best 2012-07-09 10:01:05 UTC
    4700