Best remedy: Remastered edition

by Theorangefox

Rating: mature
Tags: Anthro, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Fluttershy, Original Character, Sex
Length: 5071

A remake of an old generic clopfic I wrote that needed touching up!

Revamp of an old clop:

ANTHRO

Firestorm wakes up in the ponyville hospital wounded, and with no idea how he got there, however his temptation is soon tested as he's seen to by a certain nurse.

Published 2012-05-25 12:44:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-25 12:44:01 UTC

Chapter 1

Slowly the room came into focus as the patient lifted his head and waited for his vision to go clear. He shook his head slightly, and felt a little nagging headache which made him stop. He tried moving a little more, but felt a sharp shooting pain in his chest making him look down.

He realised his chest had been bandaged up, and now he was noticing a little blood staining the pure white dressing. He looked around and that’s when he found out where he was, bedridden inside the local ponyville hospital. The flame haired stallion tried to think as he blinked the blurring vision away.

“How the hell did I get here?” he questioned looking at the door he was supposedly brought into from. He could hear noises outside as his hearing came into focus, and the usual sounds of a slightly busy hospital filled the ambience of the room. He turned his head back and sat up in bed wondering what would happen next.

That was answered sooner than expected when he heard footsteps approaching, they were light footsteps as if someone were approaching the room calmly and quietly. The orange stallion sat back and waited to be seen, but as the nurse walked in he got quite a shock.

In stepped the most innocent looking, slightly timid and quiet mare he had ever seen. She looked over at him, and smiled warmly perhaps the best she could do to make him feel more welcome after suddenly waking up here. She walked towards him and picked up the clipboard at the bottom of his bed rail.

“Um hello Firestorm, my name is Fluttershy, and I’ll be looking after you today.” she said relaying her usual greeting that she gave to others without trying to sound nervous, something she wasn’t very good at. Firestorm still hadn’t said hello, he was too busy glaring at her face noticing how her long pink hair elegantly flowed down past her cheeks. She blushed and turned slightly making Firestorm apologise, and feel awkward.

“Um is everything okay?” she asked as he leaned forward.

“Not really, how did I get here?” he questioned putting his hand on his chest.

“I-I was told that you tried to stop a robber from snatching an old mare’s saddlebag. But he injured you really badly.” she said.

“No waaay! Man I’m a loser can’t even save the defenceless!” he moaned hiding his head in his face.

“Not really, I think you’re a hero.” she spoke.

“I’m an idiot!” he replied. Fluttershy came a little closer, and when he raised his head he came face to face with a happy smile.
“You were trying to do good for others, so even if you did get hurt you did the right thing!” her soft comforting voice waded through his ears as she held her hands together.

“I almost got killed being a failure of a hero, what’s the point in my cutie mark if I can’t even live up to it?” Fluttershy decided the best thing right now would be a hug. She came closer and hugged him, but it was quite awkward.

“Cheer up you’re still alive aren’t you? And you’re a very good person!” she gave him a slight squeeze but Firestorm felt her soft bosom pushing against his face, not to mention her soft delicate arms wrapped cosily around his neck. “See? You’re smiling! Everypony loves it when I hug them!” Fluttershy chirped letting go.

I can see why Firestorm thought still feeling the warmth of her chest on his face. Uh oh no, no way you can’t do that storm boy He tried not to think about it as Fluttershy slid a piece of card from a holder at the top of the bed. He tried to relax but happened to look up, and his eyes expanded as he caught sight of her cleavage exposed slightly from her uniform.

She struggled to reach it and ended up making moaning sounds which sounded a little awkward.

Bloody hell is that necessary? Firestorm thought as she moaned again before grabbing it, however it slipped and fell on his head.

“I’m so sorry, are you alright?” Fluttershy asked gently rubbing his forehead with her soft hand. Firestorm felt her delicate touch as she gave him a look of concern, he felt his body relax as she continued to see if he was okay, but soon enough she got the message. “Um I’ll go get you a drink.” she said leaving and feeling a little clumsy.

That was close Firestorm thought as he lay there. It’s not fair, always the hot ones that have jobs or something! He continued to think about his experience with her so far, when suddenly she entered the room again with his drink.

“Um here you go.” she said nervously handing the drink to him, he took it but their hands briefly touched, and they looked into each others eyes in awkward silence. Again Fluttershy blushed and averted her gaze trying not to come across as rude. Firestorm took a long swig of the drink, it was a refreshing, healthy lemon juice drink mixed with mint. He drank it all and felt quite refreshed afterwards enjoying the aftertaste.

Fluttershy fanned her face a little feeling the temperature rise slightly, she tugged on her coat and slightly pulled it off realising how warm the room had become, the sun outside was blasting heat waves into the room, and it was rather compact meaning heat got around much faster.

She carefully took it off without Firestorm knowing so as he continued to find a comfortable position to lie down in.
“Oh my.” Fluttershy said as her jacket fell to the ground, along with her cardigan which she forgot she was wearing. She alerted Firestorm who turned and looked at her realising she was only wearing a bra holding back her large breasts.

what the fuck? he tried to avert his gaze, but he couldn’t help but stare at her soft looking breasts, and they were rather large for someone like her. Firestorm panicked as she picked up her garments and sat back down, he looked up at the ceiling but Fluttershy turned and noticed he was shaking.

“Are you okay?” she asked getting up and coming closer

Put your clothes back on first! he thought realising just how clumsy she could be. She leaned over and placed her hand on his forehead obviously measuring his temperature, but not realising Firestorm was getting a faceful of her cleavage in his face.

“Oh no y-you’re warming up.” she said sounding worried. As if things couldn’t get anymore awkward for him she held his hand in hers and squeezed gently. “Don’t worry you’ll be okay.” she said in her reassuring voice, however Firestorm wasn’t okay the combination of awkward events had caused a reaction down below. He prayed she wouldn’t see it, but of course she had to give him a check over. Her eyes ran down his chest, past his waist and down to his feet, but suddenly she gasped and traced her eyes back up to a bulge between his legs.

“H-huh? There’s something between your legs here!” she said pointing at it. Firestorm’s palm hit his face, and rubbed down slowly.

“Game over.” he muttered as Fluttershy continued to look confused. Firestorm was expecting security to be called already, but suddenly he felt the sheets move.

“Hey what are you doing?” he gasped as Fluttershy pulled the sheets off him.

“It looks bad, what is it?” she asked as it pressed through his boxers. Are you kidding me? thought Firestorm as Fluttershy suddenly pulled his boxers down and gasped again.

“Just kill me already.” he said discreetly feeling the shame burning his soul.

“This is really bad, it’s swollen!” she spoke sounding even more worried. “I think I can make it better.” she added.

Firestorm watched in shock as her hand neared his member, his eyes then bulged as he felt her delicate hand suddenly touching against it.

“It’s burning up!” Fluttershy gasped making Firestorm feel a thousand times more awkward. “D-does it hurt?” she asked suddenly starting to stroke it slowly.
Before he passed out Firestorm felt her soft hand stroking up and down his shaft. He couldn’t even react let alone utter a phrase as Fluttershy continued rubbing her hand gently up and down. She looked up at him, and noticed he was sweating like crazy.

“What’s the matter? Isn’t it helping?” Fluttershy asked, but then she felt a throb and noticed it had slightly grown. “It’s gone worse. Oh I’m so sorry, what should I do?” she said sounding apologetic.

“What should I do?”

The question rang in his mind bouncing off of various options, he knew he was going to be in trouble eventually, but on the other foot she barely even knew what was going on. He took another brief look at her beautiful cream coloured body, and he knew this was something he couldn’t miss, even if it meant destroying someone’s innocence. Firestorm was prepared to take this with him to the grave, so he winged it.

“What should I do Firestorm? Do you know how to make it feel better?” she said sounding worried, and feeling like a let down that despite being a nurse she couldn’t see what was wrong.

“Your mouth.” Firestorm stuttered. A quick glance checked to see if the door was locked, and it was. “You have to use your mouth to cool it down.” he hesitated wondering if she’d catch on.

“Um how?” she asked him making a spark go off in his mind. Firestorm sat up on the bed with his feet touching the floor.

“Use your tongue to cool it down.” she listened and brought her head closer between his legs, she neared his phallus and with her tongue out she gave it a gentle lick right on the tip.

Holy Celestia! he cringed squeezing the edge of the bed with his hands.

“Like this?” Fluttershy asked giving it another lick, he felt her soft, warm wet tongue sliding over his tip again exciting the nerves.

“That’s -gah- much better.” he said sighing loudly as Fluttershy continued to use her tongue. She ran gentle circles around and just under his tip causing him to flinch again. He watched her pink organ delicately dance around his member, and from looking at her in that position he was turned on even more. Fluttershy sat with her hands on her knees, and continued trying to ‘make it feel better’ but she only noticed he was throbbing even more.

“Isn’t it helping?” she asked realising nothing much had changed.

Stop it Firestorm he thought, but it felt way too good to pass.

“Put it in your mouth next,” he suggested making her give him a blank confused look. “Like a -dear Celestia how do I say this?- um kinda like a-”

“Like this?” she asked sliding it inside her mouth causing him to groan as he felt her wet tongue sliding and rubbing on the base of his erection.

“Yes.” he moaned as Fluttershy let it slip from her mouth before doing it again. She noticed him smiling before his expression changed to one of arousal, so following her instinct Fluttershy unknowingly sucked back and forth on his length. Firestorm became hornier as he looked down at her head going back and forth, as his shaft disappeared repeatedly inside her mouth.

He continued to feel her soft tongue slightly teasing the base of his member as her mouth slid and rubbed on his maleness. The repeating sensation caused his wings to flex a little, but they were tied down for safety reasons. The wet pleasing feeling continued to stimulate his body and mind as his eyes rolled back into his skull.

What am I doing? either way he didn’t care. He looked back down at her as she continued to fellate him with no questions asked, her breasts continued to jiggle with each movement as his phallus became wetter inside her. He felt a pulsation, and she felt it too but continued doing it. The sounds her mouth made as she sucked on it rang in his ears as he felt the tension increase.

To make things better she began using her tongue to lick around the head, he felt it swirling around his shaft and he began to feel even more infatuated with her. He stroked her hair running his fingers through feeling how soft it was as he stroked the back of her head. She noticed he was enjoying it, so she sucked a little harder doing better than before. She heard him moan and saw his eyes were closed as he gritted his teeth. She felt it throbbing again and thought maybe this was working and soon he’d be feeling okay.

Her sealed lips continued to rub up and down his wet rod as he began to fidget uncontrollably. He felt a pulse followed by another as the tension reached its limit.

“Oh man.” Firestorm moaned and then he grunted as the intensely pleasing orgasm caused him to cum in her mouth, his muscles spasmed as he bucked his hips slightly as he filled her with his seed.

Fluttershy felt the hot fluid gushing into her mouth, she panicked and took it out but then it squirted on her face also. When Firestorm’s orgasm passed he caught his breath, and looked down to see a trail of cum hanging from his tip to her tongue as she breathed lightly also.

“What happened? Is it okay?” she asked still tasting the thick gooey substance on her tongue. She cleaned him up but Firestorm felt a slight pang of guilt for ejaculating on her face. The remaining seed inside her mouth was swallowed, and for some reason the taste felt rather salty to her.
“Oh my.” she panicked. “It’s still swollen are you sure I did it right?” she asked looking worried again.

“You did fine.” Firestorm said. “But since you made me feel good, I should return the favour.”

“You don’t have to be modest.” she smiled, but then a look of confusion came over her face as he stood her up holding her waist, she looked down as his erection pressed against her skirt, but Firestorm’s hands slid up her waist nearing her chest.

Stop already, what’s gotten into you? He ignored the thoughts as his hands neared her breasts, barely able to ignore his temptations. His hands slid under her bra and he cupped them both gently.

Fluttershy squeaked loudly and closed her eyes, she didn’t suddenly expect him to grab her like that. She watched his hands as he continued to feel her soft boobs squashing under his fingers.

Gosh they’re big! his mind continued to waver as he fondled her more. Fluttershy blushed and felt an unusual tingle in her chest, at first she wanted him to stop, but now she wanted him to continue. As he played around more she uttered a slight moan of arousal. He squeezed harder and rubbed his hands around more causing Fluttershy to make arousing noises. She had no idea why this felt so good, but she didn’t want it to stop.

She noticed him struggling to move his hands under her bra, so she undone it from the back and let it fall to the ground giving Firestorm a full view. She noticed he had stopped also as he stared.

“Please,” Fluttershy spoke timidly holding his hands against her breasts. He got the idea and squeezed them hard again making her utter another cry of arousal. Firestorm loved every single moan that passed her lips, and he noticed precum dripping from his member. He looked down but noticed something else also. A clear liquid was dripping onto the floor coming from under her skirt. Firestorm was quite shocked not expecting that to happen, but she did sound quite aroused.

He continued squishing her large, soft boobs and her face flushed red as she encouraged him more. She panted slightly and Firestorm glared into her eyes as they glowed with satisfaction. He took another chance and leaned closer to her face, and without warning he kissed her. He moved back and she resumed breathing, so he kissed her again.

His hands kneaded her more as he kept the kiss for longer. Her tongue brushed against his own, and he tried again to find it. She felt his tongue also and wanted the same thing, she didn’t know why but she did. Before he knew it they were kissing with tongues influencing them both with sexual vibes. She began to feel the sensation in her crotch area becoming more intense and hard to ignore, whatever Firestorm was doing to her she loved it. The strange new feeling perplexed her mind as he continued to fondle her.

He gave her pink nipple a gentle pinch causing her to squeal loudly. Firestorm prayed they wouldn’t be heard as he began to suck on her nipple swirling his tongue around her areola. She moaned again feeling a sharper tingle between her legs, the confusion grew in her mind as she began to feel more aroused.

Firestorm pinched it with his teeth before letting go, and watching it jiggle. They kissed again and by now Fluttershy’s face was red all over. His member prodded up her skirt against her panties, and he felt how soaked she was.

“Firestorm c-can you help me?” she asked crossing her hands over her skirt. “It’s warm, really warm, what do I do?” He felt at this moment he was going to lose his mind.

“Take your skirt off first.” he said. no way she’s gonna do this, she must have figured out by now! but he was wrong, once again Fluttershy unwarily stripped down to her panties leaving her skirt on the floor.

“What do I do now?” she asked giving him that same desperate look as he swore under his breath in disbelief. He sat her down, but then his wound opened causing him to clutch his chest in pain.

“I’m okay.” he said trying his best to ignore it, nothing was going to take this moment away from him. Fluttershy continued to sit, but then Firestorm came close and ran his hands down her waist, she for some reason liked what he was doing feeling his warm hands stroking down her elegant soft body. He slowly gripped her panties and pulled them down gently, she lay down on her back so they would come unstuck. Fluttershy was obviously familiar with undressing, but she didn’t realise it would involve going stark naked.

“Oh I understand,” she spoke softly. “With all those clothes on I must have been burning up right?” she asked smiling at him. “Why didn’t I think that before?” Firestorm cringed and parted her legs making her look down curiously, but then she caught him looking there.

“Don’t please, it’s a little embarrassing.” she said crossing her hands over.

Stop Firestorm, quit while you’re ahead. But he was so close, and he’d never seen a mare like this before, so gentle and kind. Once again he decided to wing it as he felt his erection throbbing again. She eventually moved her hands giving his member a curious stare wondering what he was going to do with it as Firestorm prepared to take the plunge.

“This will help us both cool down!” he said trying to restrain his excitement. He came closer as his tip aligned with her flower, he noticed how wet she had become from their previous experience, so much that the sheets were wet a little. His hand shook nervously as he leaned over her prepared to penetrate.
“Wait, y-you’re going to have sex with me?” Fluttershy questioned making him freeze on the spot.

Game over dude. Firestorm thought as he moved away too shy and embarrassed to say anything.

“Huh? But doesn’t it hurt? I thought you wanted to make it feel better, w-will it feel better if it you put it inside?” she asked making his eyes bulge. “You’re supposed to feel better before you go home right?” she said making him turn around.

“U-um alright.” he replied hardly able to take in the sudden turn of events.

“It’s okay.” she replied with a warm smile. He didn’t know but deep inside she’d always been curious about it, of course she had no idea how it felt, or that she couldn’t just go around trying it with whoever, and to say yes to it so easily. Firestorm came close again and his maleness gently pressed up against her unexplored entrance, already he could feel the heat and wetness radiating from her.

He gave a gentle push forwards and Fluttershy gasped a little. He felt it sinking in as the tip pushed against her hymen. She let out a little squeal which he didn’t hear, but as soon as he penetrated her she let out a sharp cry of pain. Firestorm immediately felt it slide inside her, and her flesh went tight around his phallus.

“Are you okay?” Firestorm asked as she blushed red and smiled at him.

“It feels warm.” she said. “But it’s a nice warm feeling.” she added looking down between her legs. As for Firestorm he could barely believe how tight she was. He noticed a little blood on both their sexes, but he ignored it and leaned further over her as he began to penetrate her slowly.

Her juices lubricated his shaft as it continued to travel in and out of her tight femness, with each stroke her flesh continued to rub all around his sensitive area giving him an omnipotent sexual feeling down below. When it slid deep inside her, her insides constricted him preventing it from sliding out, he could only barely thrust it inside of her whilst feeling the heat from the friction increase.

Fluttershy was gasping loudly feeling the heat of his bulk going in and out of her. Again that confusing yet pleasing feeling returned to her body, the more he thrusted her the shorter her breaths became. Eventually she moaned sexually at him turning him on even more.

Firestorm placed his hands either side of her on the bed, and she held onto them gently as she continued to receive his loving pleasure. She noticed the pain had given way to a new sensual feeling that she could hardly describe but already it was feeling good inside her.

Firestorm grunted as her tightness continued to squeeze and rub his organ within her wet, warm crevice. The combination of feelings caused him to sweat and pant as his body was rewarded by hers for each thrust. The blood had cleared up, and now he could see how wet she was below. Their sexes made loud squelching sounds as he continued to plunge into her feeling the heavenly sensation swim through his muscles.

Fluttershy looked up at him and smiled also.

“You’re smiling again, does that mean you feel better now?” she asked as he continued to thrust her.

“Mmm much better, and ahh I’ll be feeling even better in a bit!” she smiled again and gave him another hug feeling his warm chest against hers, she uttered another moan as she felt him going in deeper. His waist came closer and bucked between her legs as they hugged around him. He felt the tightness increase around his tip as her warm insides compressed around his shaft.

Fluttershy continued to smile at him like an angel, their noses briefly touched until she started moaning and gasping again. Her eyes squinted as she felt a contraction making her nethers go tight around him again just as he penetrated her, causing him to feel her loving flesh massage his thickness all around inside her.

Holy celestia at this rate I won’t hold out much longer! he felt his own breaths getting short as she continued to receive him. And now she could feel a tingle down below. Her clit began to throb sending pulse after pulse of pleasuring vibes down her lower region.

She moaned and panted louder as Firestorm looked into her eyes becoming lost in her aroused gaze. Her body and that moaning enticed him even more, he wanted to stop but he couldn’t. She was getting tighter, warmer and wetter, who knew someone of such innocence could be so amazing in a situation like this? Overall it began to overwhelm him as she let out another cry of pleasure.

“Firestorm I-I feel weird, like I’m about to explode!” she said trying her best to explain the uprising climax. He felt it too and at the rate he was going he’d unload any second now, but he wanted it to last. He managed to stop and it slipped out of her entrance soaked in her juices and still feeling tense from the sex.

“Um what now?” Fluttershy asked as she lay on the bed. He sat next to her and hoisted her up, then stood her between his legs. She knelt down slightly remembering what she done before, but Firestorm held his member and came close before sliding it between her cleavage. He held her breasts together as she watched him curiously. He told her what to do, and she listened then began rubbing her breasts up and down his throbbing phallus.

At once he felt the softness of her bosom around him. His warm meat continued to rub against her flesh mounds becoming buried within her large chest. She continued to hold them, just barely as she slid them up and down sandwiching his member inside. The resulting pleasure made him arch his back as she massaged him further.

Fluttershy felt the warmth as it throbbed harder, her own juices acted as a lubricant allowing his shaft to slide freely up and down. As she held her breasts that same feeling returned to her body.

Firestorm didn’t care anymore, he was enjoying himself and that wasn’t about to change. He felt no regret towards taking advantage as he’d felt so guiltily before. Everything about her was beautifully stunning, and he could barely take his eyes off her, he wouldn’t have liked her to be any other way, right now her personality was one that he approved wholesomely.

Again the tension mounted as he began to feel the rising urges within. Fluttershy gently squeezed her breasts to pleasure herself, and he felt them engulfing his phallus as they rubbed him hard making him grunt. He pulled it out and she stopped, wondering why he did that.

“I’m almost better now, you’ve been a great nurse!” Firestorm said making her giggle at the compliment. He picked her up and despite the pain returning to his chest. He sat her on the nearby desk standing between her legs. They hugged each other and Fluttershy gave him a quick kiss smiling shyly at him. She felt his rod probing between her legs as he positioned himself before entering her again.

Another moan escaped her lips as she felt the pleasure return as he penetrated her again. The loving warm feeling returned to their bodies as he slowly began to thrust her.

Firestorm noticed the difference immediately, she’d become a little more soaked after feeling the pleasure from that short titfuck, not to mention how tight she was now. He felt her flesh all around his maleness as it rubbed against her, being engulfed within.

Her sexual moaning returned sounding higher pitched than before. They hugged each other closer feeling their bodies touch, and her breasts squashing against his chest.

“Fluttershy you’re the best nurse ever!” he gasped barely able to speak making her blush again.

“I didn’t know this felt that good.” she said quietly as she hugged him wrapping her arms around his waist. He pulled her closer to the edge and her legs opened slightly wider granting him more access inside her.

She felt him going in deep causing her to moan desperately as she felt the same throbbing pulse again. She felt minor contractions in her body and nether region as it squeezed his shaft inside her.

“Firestorm it’s happening again.” she gasped.

“It’s okay.” he replied feeling his orgasm reaching ever closer. He leaned further against her hearing her moans in his ear as her femness seized up around him now milking his member hard.

“F-Fluttershy.” he moaned but she was moaning to the point where she could barely respond. The overall tension increase as she desperately felt more and more good each second.

“Firestorm!” she gasped before moaning about three more times, and then an even longer one as she came all over him.

Firestorm felt the tingling sensation as her insides contracted and sucked his hardness causing him to cum in her. He felt his member pulsing and squirting as the heavenly pleasure blew his mind away, it slid in and out squirting more and more cum as her insides continued to contract along with her moaning.

Eventually when they calmed down feeling the aftermath of the orgasm rippling through their bodies, he pulled out and watched as his own seed made a mess on the floor. Both of them gasped and panted tiredly as she got down from the desk barely able to walk.

“T-that was amazing! I feel a lot better now. Do you?” Fluttershy asked with a permanent smile on her face, which was the same case for him.

“I’m glad I was brought here.” he sighed before collapsing on the bed, his wound leaked a little blood, but still he felt nothing, he just put his boxers back on and climbed into the bed again as Fluttershy cleaned up, and dressed herself.

“Is there anything else you need?” she asked stroking his forehead.

“I have everything now, I’ll be in top shape in no time!” he said barely noticing the wound had opened up again.

“If you need anything I’ll be here!” she said reminding him as her face glowed.

“Thanks Fluttershy.” he said making her giggle and kiss him on the forehead, as she walked off he felt the tiredness kick in and decided to sleep for the rest of the evening. Still though he felt a little guilty, but nothing compared to what they had just experienced.